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Hii everyone! i am preethi234 and this is my first ff on Raj- Naina. i am a great fan of their jodi.Hope u all like it. It's a romantic lovestory of Raj-naina.please comment about this.
i will continue the ff from rajveer's trial&naina proving him innocent.
Prologue: After 4 years, naina was able to prove raj innocent and he was set free and promoted as Major. naina was a Captain now. pooja & ali and aalekh & neelu were engaged.All of them including Huda & udi are working in KMA now. Now raj was posted back to KMA.
Part1:
Raj couldn't believe his own destiny.He was a Major now. Hislost fame,self-respect,career everything was now returned.And it was all possible bcoz of her.Her strong determination made the impossible possible. He would be thankful to her for ever.
After the ceremony,he went to meet naina. He saw aalekh on the way & enquired about her."wo kaha gayi apun ko nahin pata lekin itna to pata hai ki shyaam tak waapas aajeyigi. aap phikar mat keejiye".
only if aalekh could know how his heart ached to see her. he ached for a glimpse of her&she was nowhere to be seen.
The rest of the afternoon went very quickly.Everybody congratulating him &old friends came to meet him,. But the one person whom his eyes were longing to see did not appear.He was allowed to stay back in his previous quarters.Although he had a seperate house, he preferred to stay there for the sake of protecting the triggers. But inside his heart, he knew that the other reason is to stay near naina.
After settling in his room, he took a short nap & went for a walk in the evening. He was touring all tha places of KMA where he& naina once spent. when he caught the glimpse of 1857 point, it reminded him of moments spend with naina there. she was so serene and was looking like an angel in that white chudidar.Her face was lit by the moonlight and the smile on her lips- for him it was one of the most beautiful sights in world. How much he wished to hold her but controlled with a great effort.
And now he wondered what were her feelings for him? Did she do all this just because he was trapped in trying to prove her brother innocent or was it friendship or----?
He did not dare to complete the thought. May be he was expecting too much. Atleast he would be able to live by just seeing & talking to her. He returned to his room and opened the door. It was dark inside. Suddenly the lights were on followed by loud cheers" Happy Birthday Rajveer sir"and there were all his favourite cadets smiling.
Part 2 :
He was startled. then it came into his memory that today was his birthday. He remembered how Navin had once thrown a surprise birthday party for him.As he was lost in his thoughts, the lights were gone again & somebody placed a cake with candle lit on it before him. In the candle light, he saw the person who hold the cake infront of him. His heart seemed to stop for a moment. It was naina , smiling.He blew the candle & fed the cake to everyone. when it was her turn, as his fingers touched her lips, it was hard for him to not let go control of his mind infront of all of them.
Later the rest of the time was spent everybody enjoying, cracking jokes & telling about their experiences in these years. Although Raj was enjoying with them , his heart wished to be alone with naina for some time. It seemed to be his lucky day. His wish was fulfilled soon.Everyone was leaving one-by-one& she was the last. "Naina. i want to talk to u." she stopped .Her heart was full of nervousness. How much she wished to hold him,she could not do so.she was not able to meet his eyes. All these days he sufferd bcoz of her. He lost everything bcoz of her. she did not desreve him. Her love would only destroy him.She could not bear the thought of losing him again.concealing her emotions, she turned back to face him. For a moment they could not speak anything. there were many emotions hidden in them,so much to tell but words did not come out.Finally he broke the silence" Naina, I am proud of u.I am also very grateful to u. Whatever u did for me and stood for me, it means a lot to me." That words hurt her. what she did was nothing compared to the loss occured to him by her. He was ruined in order to prove her brother innocent.Tears formed in her eyes. All the feelings she had suppressed with a lot of self-control, all the barriers broke down. she hugged him tightly as she broke into sobs.
For a moment, Raj was shocked.He was not able to think of anything.Then slowly he placed his arms around her& tried to comfort her."can u forgive me sir? it was all bcoz of me"
"sssh naina. there is no fault of yours.so, there is no question of forgiving. Now will u please stop crying cadet Naina Ah Singh?
She hugged him more tightly feeling the warmth of his embrace. she felt so happy& safe in his arms. she wanted this moment to last forever.For some time, neither of them moved. Time stopped still. " i am very happy that u r back sir. i missed u so much. i hope u need some rest now. i will leave now . good night sir". she was afraid that if she stayed here for some more time, she would do things that she would regret later.
" just a sec naina. now as we are fellow officers, could u please stop me calling sir? u can't reject my request on my birthday".
" alright sir, sorry Raj, goodnight"and she left. The pronounciation of his name from her lips felt wonderful for him. Thinking about the moments, spend with her , he slowly drifted to sleep.
please comment on this guys. If u like it, then i will continue. I promise there will be more romantic scenes from now . please comment on it guys.
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