Love will find a way - Epilogue - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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ur fic is xcellent 👏 👏 pl continue soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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so cool
plz conti........... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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@preethi 234 : hey,yaar don't be angry.I said that it is amazing.I am sying it is really nice.As I read it today again,I've noticed some things.I am telling u about dat
1)As Raj is now major & Naina is now captain,u've wrotw that they are fellow officer and in the Raj's conversation U wrote that being a fellow officer Naina shouls call him Raj.
But friend,main janti hoon ki the major post is higher rank than captain.in the army it's the rule for a officer to call his/her senior officer by saying 'sir'
Now Raj & Naina may call them each other sying their name,but in duty Naina can't call him with his name.
main thoda confused,plz mujhe ye batao ki ye dono unki nam lekdar personally call karegi??
1 thing more,that whaen Naina is crying,RAj ne kanha"Will u plz stop crying cadet Naina Ah Singh?"why cadet????Is it a tune of joke??
plz reply
plz make me clear
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi guys! Thanks a lot for ur comments and somebody asked me a doubt. yes, major is higher than captain. But they will call by name only personally not at work, r u happy now? here is ur next part.

part 3:
It was morning .after many days, he had a sound sleep.

As he opened his eyes, he saw naina infront of him

smiling. "good morning Raj". "naina ! how r u here?how

did u came into my room? suddenly she disappeared. He

rubbed his eyes and understood that it was an illusion.

she was so close yet so far from him. would he ever be

able to reach her? would he be lucky enough to win her

love?he could wait for her. no matter how much time it

took.

He freshened up and put on his uniform. it reminded

him that he was an major now. He rememberd the horrible

life spent in the prison, the humiliation, the hurt

everything. Now everything he was now was possible bcoz

of her.His life would be perfect only if she wasin it.

would he ever be able to live without thinking of her

for a moment?
shaking his head, he went to BC'S office &

greeted him."i am sorry for the humiliation u have faced all these years.but now we r very happy that u r back to KMA as a major. All the Best for u Major Rajveer"
" thank u very much sir" he replied politely and left

the office.
In the lunch time,he went to canteen and his

favourite cadets were present there already.
"How u would i go to the ball without a date?"yudi

groaned.
"huda ko aisa koyi problem nahin hai. lot of girls r

waiting for me. what about u ali? whom u r going with?
"chief! why r u asking? obviously he will go with

pooja& aalekh will go with neelu. think about me. do

something."
"Then go with dr.shalini. we all know what is there

b/w both of u"replied aalekh.udi was about to protest,

as soon they saw raj, they stopped arguments& came to

him. "By the way, who is ur date sir?"
Rajveer had no idea what they r talking about. "date?"
pooja came forward " aapka signal main clear karta

hoon.Tommorow we r celebrating freshers ball for 1st

year cadets. so, we r asking who is ur date?"

Just then naina entered. The others left the table

giving some privacy to both of them. By now all of them

understood what is going on b/w raj& naina.
"Mmm naina . would u be my date for freshers

ball?" naina hesitated for a moment. if she was close to him, she couldn't control her heart.Her brain was

thinking to make up an excuse but before she could thing about anything,the words came out from her mouth" of course sir"

later in the night, she selected dress after dress

keeping them aside. she was worried, excited, nervous at the same time. pooja who was watching her absolutely

crazy behaviour finally spoke."don't worry. i did

shopping for u also. this is for u and handed her a

packet.

naina opened the packet and exclaimed with happiness. "

u r selection is damn good. u r the best " &hugged her

friend.


pooja grinned & said " tommorow, when u wear this ,our

sharukh will go to silent mode by seeing u.i am very

happy for both of u naina.naina didn't bother to correct her. she was so excited for tommorow.


At the freshers ball, the first pair to arrive was ali&

pooja. then came Aalekh & neelu. Yudi came with Dr.

shalini & Huda came with a final year girl.

Rajveer was waiting impatiently infront of naina's

room since half-an -hour, but there was no sign of her.

God knows how much time she will take.He was about to

knock the door when it opened suddenly.
His heart stopped beating for a moment. He was

sppechless and just stared at her without blinking his

eyes. There she stood most beautiful than ever in an

peach coloured saree with silver embroidery done on it

with matching bangles. Her hair was in soft waves upto

her waist. Her dazzling earrings were kissing her neck.

she smiled at him remembering pooja's words. she snapped her fingers infront of him & said" chale"

He came out from the trance & followed her. They

were the last couple to enter thehall. As soon as they

entered , they were greeted with loud cheers. They

looked perfect with each other. They r the most

beautiful couple ever seen.
They descended the steps holding each others

hands. Raj wanted to hold her hand like this forever.
The party begun & everybody were dancing.He offered an hand to her which she accepted smiling.As they were

swaying to the music, her hand on his shoulder , his

arond her waist and their fingers entwined , they felt

as if they were secluded from the world , listening

to each other's heartbeats, silence speaking lots of

volumes. Suddenly they broke out from the trance with the announcement of BC.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow..how romantic... 😳 😳 😳 ..post soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi there...

it was lovely.......waiting for more...

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz hurry....

Thank you...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey too good preeti

pl continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 4:

Everybody turned their attention to the announcement of BC."This is an announcement for all the cadets and faculty members. There is a pleasant surprise for u people.This weekend we want u people to have a little break from the academy routine and as well as to refresh the cadets preparing for their exams, a tour has been organised to the nearby place which is a surprise for u people. Tommorow at sharp 18.00 hours, all the cadets and faculty members must report at the grounds."
Everybody were delighted and were discussing about the tour."well, it's a wonderful idea. i wanted to take a break since a long time. i can't wait for the tour" said naina with a excited expression on her face. "we can have lots of fun . In these type of tours, we gain lot of precious moments spend with our friends".
"And to me, they r with u" mumbled Raj. " did u say something?" asked naina.
"me !nothing" and he spun her so that she was in his arms and contiuned to dance with her. As they were dancing ,looking lost in each others eyes, their friends who were discussing about the tour saw them.

" oh god! they love each other. But when will they admit to each other?i am dying to see them as a couple" said pooja.

"it looks like they r not going to admit soon. we must plan something to unite them" said udi.
"Apun aap logo ke saath hai" said aalekh.
" I think it's their personal matter. we must not interfere in it and" before ali could continue ,pooja protested "why r ur settings always permanent? why don't u catch our signal always? we r going to unite them and that's it".

Ali finally agreed not daring to get pooja angry on him." so, punjabein has wrapped u under her finger even before marriage" joked Huda and Ali was embarassed.
" okay guys . Now think of some plan. We must do something in the tour such that they must confess to each other."
All joined hands with each other and planned something

Raj-naina who were lost in some other world suddenly realised that all the people have left and they were still dancing.
They bid goodbye to each other and left with embarassed faces but smiling secretly.
That night both couldn't sleep each other thinking about each other and their friends also couldn't sleep trying to think the possible ways of executing their plan.
Next morning all of them woke up and started their respective packings and arrangements for the tour as they will be having no time to pack after the academy routine upto evening.
The rest of the day went so soon . In the evening, they boarded the bus. Ali and rajveer sat in the last row and pooja and naina sat in the middle row and their friends were in the beside rows.
After sometime , many people were dozzing off to sleep and pooja thought that it's the best way to execute her first phase. "naina , could u please go and sit in ali's place so nthat he can come here and we can have some talktime.please" she said making a cute face.
" Naina couldn't reject her friend's request " she went to ali and they exchanged their places.
"well done pooja" said udi who was sitting in her backseat. " and u have double benefits . I mean the other bebefit is u can spend time with ali" said huda.
Pooja grinned and turned back to look at raj-naina. But just the lights were off in the bus and she could not see them she turned sighing.
Meanwhile raj was so lost in his own thoughts that he did not see naina sitting beside him. The bus turned suddenly causing naina to lose balance and fall on him.
This made raj to come to his senses.
next part will be by tommorow.hope u like it.

Edited by preethi234 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey too good

pl continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi..

Thanks for letting this part of LRL continue focusing on the RN jodi.. m enjoyin your write ups... plz keep continuing your good job...

waiting for the next part... boy!! you are getting it really interesting and impatient for us to read the next part... wish we could see all this on video...

I think the LRL Team should take into consideration your write ups... hope some miracle happens that they get raj back and give a wonderful twist to RN's love story thats left incompelete and in a mess...

Happy writing!!

Cheers!!



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