Right Left Right (upd on 17-03 pg 24) - Page 11

itna bhi intezaar mat karwa yaar 😔 plz jaldi update karo.

yaar plzzz tell us if u have stopped updating this ff or u are going to put it on hold for some tome kyonki 19th october toh kya december aa chuka hain and plz tell us wat are u planning to do with this ff of urs so thaty atleast we dont check this topic with hope and return dissapointed

update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz asap now only with long part asap.

After a long period of hiatu , I am starting this fic again.



Early next morning Naina woke up hearing the chirping of the birds. She yawned and stretched her hands . The rays of very early sunlight fell on her face,caressing her cheeks.

Naina recalled the events of yester-evening and immediately her soul was filled upto brim with happiness. Happiness of being loved by the person one loves.

She got up from her bed and walked towaard the window. As she threw open the shutters, the morning freah air along with the fragrance of a nearby mustard field evaded the room and her her nostrils.
She could see Rajveers cottage right from there. The desire to run all the way and jump into rajveers arms was so strong taht she could not wait.
She hurriedly went downstairs and quikly completing her morning wash-ups , ran towards Rajveers cottage, BAhbijees shouted behind her " Raj ko le kar naste pe a jaana ..."
"Zaroor,,,,,,,,,,," Naina retorted.
Panting, she pushed open the entrance door of the cottage, Rajveer was nowhere to be seen. Naina entered the room and found the bed till unmade, She sat onthe bed and moved her hands over the sheet.
"oh , Sir- Raj where are you ?"
Naina pondered for a moment and ran towards the field.
There - rajveer was busy chopping some logs. His back was turned towards her.

su,it's a gr8 update still short...koi baat nehi waiting 4 next part
and hope I am the 1st 1

Thank you so much......tumhe kam se kam yaad toh aaya!!!

It was short but good!!!

Rajveer's back glistened in the early morning sun. The yellowish orange color of the sunlight created a wave of color on the layer of sweat over his skin.
Naina stood astounded by the male beauty - the ripple of the muscles of his back and arms with every movement of the hands bringing down the primitive axe on the logs, the strength of the muscles of legs and hips covered by the body hugging jeans, the slight movement of the head at every hit on the log and the expression of determination on his profile!!

A man's beauty is at it glorified best when he is at work, when the beat of his body and breathing fall in steps with his hard labor and movement of ancient tools. After all a man has become a man because of his work.
Beauty of women has always been an object of adulation , praise and glorification in all works of art and literature. But male beauty has often gone unnoticed , except may be in the hands of Greek sculptors ane renaissance painters.
Naina, a young and inexperienced girl stood speechless, watching this great work of nature and civilization.
After few minutes she stepped towards Rajveer and put one of her hand on his back .
Rajveer's axe stopped midway in the air. For a moment he stood still as if to savour every second her hand touching his back. Then he turned around , threw the axe on the ground and stretched out his arms for Naina.

its awesome too good waiting for next asap with long part asap.

Hi SUNAINA,
It is nice to see you here again 👏 you are too good plzzzzzzzzz update soon & loooooooooooooooooooooong also . Don't stop your writting again 😳 😳
plzzzzzzzz write page no. of upd. pg. so we easily checked it out plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz