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Sunaina Mitra

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Posted: 17 years ago

#111

Naina literally threw herself agaist Rajveers bare chest and hugged him tightly rubbing her cheeks against his body. Rajveer planted several kiss on her hair, head and shoulder. Tears of joy filled their eyes.

In that early morning , they got lost into each others covered with tears, sweat and spit. They laughed , they cried, they ran and jumped and rolled on the ground. They did not want to waste any moment of that lovely day.

At last after an hour or so, Rajveer, sitting on a hay stack declares
"Main bhukha hoon"

"Jab main aap ke pas hoon, aap kaise bhukha ho sakte"

"Accha main abhi dikhata hoom kaise " - Raj said with a naughty smile on his face , just like a child about to take part in a prank.

Will be editing shortly.

Edited by sunaina02 - 17 years ago

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Usha Rani

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Posted: 17 years ago

#112

short but sweet and full of romance.thanks alot dear.

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friend forever

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Posted: 17 years ago

#113

bhat khub su..........................har sabdo ka sahi istamal.............................the male beauty..........uff superb!!!!!!

go ahead my jaan

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

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Posted: 17 years ago

#114

I don't want to say anything!!!Just one thing....

Have you considered taking up writing as a career....then I would say think about it now!!!

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Sunaina Mitra

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Posted: 17 years ago

#115

Rajveer, laughing, quickly picked her up in his arms and brought her near the logs and dropped her on the ground.
Naina lost her balance a little bit and looked quizzically at Rajveer.
"Ok, kaam karo, lekri kat ke dikhao , tab malum padega, bhukh kaisa hota hai?"
"Accha to yeh baat hai, ok -dekh lo"

She picked up the heavy axe. Naina is a strong girl with the experience of continuous army drill and training . So to pick up the axe was no problem for her. She raised it high and brought it down on a piece of log.
But her power ended there.
The axe got stuck in the log and she couldnt pull it out. She tried with all her might. Drops of sweat appeared on her forehead. Her dupatta fell on the ground but the axe was still where it was.
Rajveer was standing behind her grinning .
Naina looked back at him and tears nearly filled her eyes.
At that moment Rajveer came from behind her and encircled his arms around her and softly said ," Ab bhukh laga ?". He gently took the axe from naina's hand and pulled it out of the log. Rubbing the tears from NAina's eyes he said Ab chalo, Bhabijee zaroor naste mehe ghar pe bheja".

So they walked back to his cottage and there on the table two "Nasta thalis" were ready.

Edited by sunaina02 - 17 years ago

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

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Posted: 17 years ago

#116

dis was awesome part...........

gr8 fic........ 👏 👏 👏

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daisy_luvs_ ff

@daisy_luvs_ ff

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Posted: 17 years ago

#117

wowwwwwwww
wowwwwwwww
wowwwwwwwww
awesome su, just amazing..........
now that i gone thru these updates, i truly realise how much i missed this ff.........
doooooooo plzzzzzzzzzz update soon!!!!!

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yazh

@yazh

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Posted: 17 years ago

#118

sunaina,we all have imaginations and fantasies, but translating them into words and making so many feel the magic is something else. 👏 👏 👏
u r indeed blessed with this talent. keep honing this skill of urs.

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

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Posted: 17 years ago

#119

You really can translate imagination into words and that too beautiful words!!!

But isn't Naina living with Raj in his cottage???I thought they would!!

Waise looking forward to more romantic scenes of RN!!!