Ek Gharelu Kahani! AK ff! Epilogue pg 196 - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
#31

wow that was an amazing part

loved it 😳 oh and in this ff too damini is kind of evil umm.. may be for her daughter mishty

but it's of no use coz angad would only make kripa his wife 😳
once again it was an awesome part

plzz cont soon




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Edited by iamsmart - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
Part :2


Around 5 in the evening Gayatri delivered a girl baby and the whole family celebrated it by congratulating each other. Devyani was in seventh heaven and carried the cute little bundle.

"Toh abb samay mila humarey paas aney ki? Kyon, meri Angad sey shadi karney ki irada hai ki nahin?" She asked the little baby who was not even opened her eyes properly. Gayatri laughed "maa! Aap bhi na, wo abhi sey baat karney lagegi kya? Aur Angad se shadi na karney ki sawal hi nahin uth thi. Wo toh issi liye hi paida huyi thi."

Damini and Avantika moved their lips sideways "Oh, yuh Angad already has two wives; your daughter is no exception." Devyani warned them with eyes "kaun jaaney kissko kaun miley?"

Naina carried the baby and kissed her stomach "very cute baby, Gayatri!"

Devyani looked at Surya "Surya! Tumhara pariwar ko aur doston ko khabar bhejo." And she turned to Dilip too "Dilip! Surya ki behen Satyavati (imagine bua of kyph) ko khabar karo aur ussey naam karan mein hazir honey ki nyunata bhi bhejna. Meri yeh ladli poti ki naamkaran bahut dhoom dhaam sey karengey. Aakhir humara Angad ki honey wali theesri biwi hai" She laughed proudly for her own wit.

All other women exchanged looks to read one another expressions.

After two days Gayatri and baby were brought home. Devyani arranged the separate labor room for her for ten days. All three kids came running to them to see the little baby.

Angad, Kanan, Misthy tried to touch the little girl's cheeks but Devyani warned them "abhi nahin, naam karan din sab ussey god mein lelengey."

Angad folded his hands and yelled with pouted lips "mein abhi dekoonga, mujhey abhi dekhna hai." Devyani laughed affectionately at him and caressed his cheeks "haan, jaroor dekhna, haat nahin lagana; kyon ussey shadi karega?"

Angad nodded his head and pulled the baby's cheeks harshly with his two hands and kissed his own hands when he noticed Devyani was not attentive. The baby started crying hard. Everyone warned Angad and Naina tried to hold his hand but he ran out of the room.

Everyone laughed at Angad and felt sorry for the baby at the same time. Devyani took Kanan and Misthy closer and showed the baby. She didn't allow them to touch the baby.

On 11th day Devyani arranged a big celebration. She invited many relatives from her daughters' in-laws families, Naina's parent's family, and many others.
Surya's sister Satyavati came with her son, Prithvi, 7 years old

Avantika's nanad, Nandini (imagine mother of pratham in kutumb) came with her son, Nishant, 8 years old.

Naina's sister Netra came with her only daughter, Anittah,1 year old.

Damini and Avantika's husbands also reached by the morning of the ceremony.
Pundits started havan in the early morning. Gayatri and the baby had a big bath for an hour at early morning. Gayatri was given turmeric and herbal powder bath. Devyani put shikakai (Acacia Concinna) on Gayatri's long black silky hair. She was given new clothes and Surya wore new silk dhoti and kurta.

All men wore dhoti's and colorful kurtas; women dressed up in colorful silk saris and jewelry; boys wore nice kurta pajamas; girls wore silk long skirts with matching blouses.

Both Surya and Gayatri performed many pujas as per ritual and took the baby to name her. They asked Devyani for the suggestion. Devyani only suggested all kids' names so far.

"Maa ji! Aap hi aaj tak sabka naam karan karvaya. Isski naam bhi aapko hi chunna padegi." Satyavati asked affectionately. Devyani patted her affectionately and looked at the couple "bhagwan ki kripa sey itni saalon ki puja ke baad paida huyi thi. Iski naam 'kripa' rakhengey."

Everyone yelled in joy. The ceremony went well and followed by 'cradle ceremony' too. All guests blessed both parents and Kripa. Devyani fed the whole village and the neighbouring villages too. It took evening by the time the whole house came back into normalcy. All servants cleaned the whole place.

The entire family relatives gathered an hour before dinner in the central hall and Kids were playing outside. Devyani sat in a wooden easy chair. Gayatri put the baby in beautiful teakwood cradle presented by Satyavati for Kripa. Everyone started commenting about the ceremony, guests, saris and all other general topics.

Satyavati entered the hall with her son. Devyani affectionately welcomed her "aao Satya! Yahan meri paas baitho. Yeh tumhara beta Prithvi hai na." Satyavati smiled "haan, Maa ji!" She got used to call Devyani 'maa ji' along with her brother Surya from the time he got married to Gayatri.

Devyani took Prithvi in her lap. She turned to Avantika "Avantika! Tumhari nanad, Nandini kahan hai?" Nandini came forward who was behind Swami "main yahan hoon, maassi ji!" Devyani smiled at her "tumhara beta kahan hai?" Nandini smiled and called Nishant who was playing with Angad and other kids outside. He came running and Devyani took him into her other side of lap.

Angad noticed it from far and ran into hall along with other kids. Angad stood in front of Devyani fuming to see Prithvi and Nishant sharing his grandmother's lap. Misthy and Kanan in their silk skirts stood on either side of Angad as supporting him. They didn't like someone outsiders sharing their grandmother's lap.

Devyani didn't notice them and smiled at the two kids in her lap. She stared at Prithvi "kyon Prithvi! Kripa kaisi lagi? Shadi karega uss sey?" Angad couldn't control his tears and climbed the easy chair. He leaned back of Devyani and tied hands in front over her shoulders. Devyani caressed his hands with affection.

He whispered in her ears "Kripa meri hai, why are you asking Prithvi?" Devyani couldn't stop laughing loudly "suna, Gayatri, Naina! Angad ney kya kaha?" They quizzically looked at her. She kissed Angad's cheeks "yeh keh raha hai ki Kripa uska hai aur mein kyon Prithvi sey poochrahi hoon." Everyone joined Devyani in enjoying Angad's possessiveness. Damini and Avantika exchanged looks envying Gayatri as if Angad already decided to marry Kripa.

"Prithvi ka bhi haq hai, angad! wo bhi toh Kripa ki cousin hai, barabar ristedar hai." Surya spelled out affectionately pulling Angad's cheeks. Angad couldn't stop rolling his tears "No, wo pehli meri hai."

He turned to Prithvi and pulled him from Devyani's lap "you go back to your Bombay." Naina warned him "Angad! aisa nahin kehtey, beta! He is also your cousin and kripa's too. He won't take away your Kripa, okey?" Angad shook his head and kissed her cheeks "thanQ" and ran out as if he got secured promise from his mother. Everyone laughed at him once again.

"Maa, aap aisey baat kum keejiye bachon badey horahey hai." Avantika told Devyani before leaving the room.

Naina changed into night gown before bed time and lay on the bed. Dilip took her into arms "tired? You did lot of work? Thanks for taking care of everything." Naina smiled with tired eyes "it's my duty as a daughter-in-law of this family. After all Gayatri had a child after long waiting." Dilip agreed with a smile.

Naina continued "I felt Surya was not happy for Maa ji saying Kripa and Angad names together."

Dilip agreed "I too noticed, he must be interested in his own nephew, Prithvi. After all he is his sister's son. Who wants to give his only child in this village? One day Angad has to settle here only. I'm lucky to have you. Thanks for marrying me though you were born and brought up in Delhi. I'm proud of you for settling here with me and respecting my family."

Naina caressed his cheeks "Our time the custom was different. My grandfather and your grandfather worked together in freedom fight. Your grandfather settled here in his village and my grandfather retired in Indian regiment. They both promised to tie relationship one day and for their dreams we got into relation. And overall I loved you, Dilip! I love city life, western style of living but I cannot live even a day without you."

Dilip kissed her forehead "I love you, Naina!"

Devyani feared initially for accepting Naina into her family because of her city brought up, but soon she respected and loved her obedient behavior towards her and her family.

After three months Gayatri left with Kripa promising to visit her mother and brother frequently. Avantika, Damini also stayed till then and left at the same day promising each other to meet frequently.

Angad became alone after everyone left. Naina concentrated on his studies now as she got a big leisure time. Devyani never interfered in Naina's bringing up Angad in her own style as she trust Naina was capable of taking enough care of everyone.
For next six years three daughters visited Devyani for every important occasion, festivals, Angad's birthday, and their father's death anniversaries.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: iamsmart

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will reply after i read the 1st part 😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part: 3

It's the occasion for Angad's 13th birthday. Dilip arranged Janeau for her son and invited many people in and around the village. All three sisters with their relatives attended the function.

The janeu is also called the Upanayana ceremony. The object of this ceremony is to prepare the young man to shoulder the burden of the elders. He is initiated into the Gayatri mantra and will hence forth be called A 'Dwija' or a 'twice born'. The three strands that the young man is made to wear represent the three gunas (qualities) ie Satya (Truth) Rajas (action) and tamas (inertia). The twist of the thread must be upwards to ensure that the Sattwaguna or the good quality of truth predominates. The three strands also remind the wearer that he has to pay off his debt to the ancient seers, his ancestors and the gods. He is to honour his parents and elders and is now in a position to participate in the family rituals and prayers.

Kanan was now 11, Misthy 9, Kripa 6, Nishant 15, and Prithvi 13. All sisters gave nice big gifts to Angad and blessed the boy. This time Angad learnt to tolerate his rivals Prithvi and Nishant. He made good friends with Misthy and Kanan all these years. The two cousins always move around Angad while Kripa was still introvert and hung around Gayatri most of the time. She observed everyone playing from far of them by holding Gayatri's sari pallu. She smiled at them, played imaginary sports, games with all other kids by holding her mother all the time. Gayatri tried hard to push her into crowd especially with Angad but she became stiffer seeing the entire crowd in the function. Devyani managed to pamper her in her lap in no time. She covered herself into Devyani's sari whenever Angad and other kids tried to take her into play.

The function went well and Angad performed all rituals religiously and learnt many things that he supposed to in the ceremony. He felt that he became 'man' suddenly and showed attitude to Prithvi and Nishant. She behaved elderly with Kanan and Misthy ordering them to work for him, like bringing his books, folding his clothes, arranging his play things. They did everything according to his orders as they also felt he became big and special after the ceremony. Elders proudly enjoyed their innocent behavior.

Two days before Surya, Swami, Yashwant, Satyavati, Netra and Nandini with their families were leaving; all sat outside in front yard chatting among them while Teddy supplied some snacks and sweets. They were watching kids playing in front of them.

Suddenly Kripa ran into Devyani's lap "kyon rey, Kripa! Kya badmaashi ki thi?" Kripa always ran into her lap whenever she did mischief either with her parents or cousins. Kripa hid her face into her pallu when she saw Angad, Misthy, Kanan, Nishant, Anittah and Prithvi were running towards them.

Angad tried to pull Kripa out of Devyani's lap. Dilip warned everyone and asked for the reason "Kyon lad rahey hai? Kya huva?"

Angad was panting in anger "yeh badmash ladki meri patthar churakey layi thi. Hum 'chaar pathar' khel rahey they. She spoilt our game, stupid."

Kripa peeped from the pallu and yelled "I'm not stupid. You are." Devyani warned her "kyon pathar churakey layi? Ussey khelney do. Aisa nahin kartey." Kripa lifted her face and looked into Devyani's eyes "then why did he say that?"

Devyani asked "what did he say?" All kids giggled and Angad blushed. Everyone expected some mischief from Angad's side. They looked at him for explanation. Angad stood silent caressing his neck.

Nishant stopped his laugh "Angad said that Kripa has to sleep with him."
Prithvi chuckled and girls shyly giggled. Elders became serious and Dilip demanded Angad to speak out. Naina walked to Angad and held his hand as demanding immediate explanation.

Prithvi took turn to explain now "Aunty! He said Kripa would marry him and would sleep with him." Naina angrily looked at Angad "why did you say that? Was this you all supposed to discuss at this age?"

Devyani noticed the tension in the air "Angad! yahan aajao." He walked to her giving his fearful looks at Naina. He was afraid of her if he would get punishment from her in the night privately.

Devyani chuckled and asked Angad "kyon tum iss sey shadi karega?" Angad nodded his head. Dilip warned his mother "Maa, aap bhi na, bachon ko kyon in baton mein encourage kar rahey hai." She stopped him with her looks.

She rolled her eyes at Angad and showed at Misthy and Kanan "toh in donon sey kaun shadi karega?" Angad immediately replied "mein!"

"Tum?" in teenon sey tuhi shadi karega?" Angad smiled shyly and shook his head "haan, dadi! Kanan takes good care of my room organisation, Misthy takes care of my food and Kripa would sleep with me."

Elders laughed as they didn't know how to react for his innocence. Naina controlled her smile "Angad! You are not child anymore, you shouldn't talk like this."

Angad looked at Devyani for support and saw humiliating Kripa. Kripa pushed Angad "I'm not sleeping with you. Gandha boy." Angad pushed back her "tum soyegi" Kripa got tears in her eyes "main nahin, tumhari maa soyegi tere saat" she pulled his hair and ran to Gayatri.

Everyone shocked and Gayatri instantly slapped on Kripa's mouth. Kripa shocked and started crying loudly. Angad felt sad and filled his eyes with tears. He circled his hands around Devyani's neck. Surya took Kripa in his arms and walked away from there. Everyone sighed and kept silent. All kids silently dispersed into their rooms as they shocked for Gayatri's slap on Kripa.

Surya was putting Kripa in bed when she came to call him for dinner. Surya asked Gayatri to pack her luggage also along with him. "Why did you take such sudden decisions? Why do you take kids' words seriously?" Gayatri tried to convince him.

Surya gave sharp looks at her "this is not child's act, Gayatri! All this was happened because of your mother. She always behind Angad's matches fixing with one of these kids. Why is she so desperate? Is it necessary to speak all the time? When kids grew up she could have speak out but now, unnecessarily bringing wrong thoughts in kids. I don't want Kripa to grow in this atmosphere at all. You are not coming here anymore. Angad has grown up and everyone else too is growing old. We should control this now." Gayatri couldn't say anything against him as he never listens to her in such topics.

She conveyed Surya's decision while everyone having dinner and everyone were startled. Avantika, Devyani, Dilip tried to convince Surya but he became stubborn "I don't like all this nonsense, Maa ji! Please forgive me. I can't tolerate Kripa talking such language. If we don't control now they grew up with such thoughts."

Devyani was worrying about Surya's sudden decision and Angad walked to her "dadi! I'm sorry." He thought he was the cause for Kripa's departure all of sudden. Devyani smiled and hugged him affectionately "nahin, beta! You are not wrong."

"Will poopa ji stop if I ask for apologies?" he was trying different ways to stop Kripa.

"koyi baat nahin wo phir ageley saal ajayengey." Devyani tried to give different reasonings.

"but this is summer, she can stay for some more time" he innocently gave ideas.
"who is she? Kripa?" Devyani surprised and Angad shyly nodded his head, "so, you are looking for stopping Kripa?" He looked innocently in her eyes. She smiled lovingly at him "do you really like her?" He shook his head "Can we stop her?" Devyani shook her head sideways.

Everyone touched Devyani's feet before leaving for their own places next evening after lunch. Angad apologised to Surya and Gayatri. They affectionately caressed him "it's not your fault. But we want to control the misbehavior now itself. You are a good boy, study well. Forget about this now."

But Angad remembered everything bit-by-bit forever in his life. Kripa, Misthy forgot everything and grew up in their lives. Kanan, Nishant vaguely remembered the incident and talked about this whenever they met in their own family gatherings. Prithvi too forgot as if such an incident never happened.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35

omg angad is so naughty at the age of 13😆

poor kripa pata nahi aage kya hoga😆

awesome part

cont soon


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Edited by iamsmart - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: vallanki

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lolzz di u really think that i'm funny 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hehe fab parttttttt hommii33333333333
luv yaaaaaaaaaa tuns
hehehehe weirdneszzzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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just read the whole ff........must say, its a great start and sooooooo cute...........i loved it, and i cant wait to read the rest of it.........just hope angad's love for kripa grows by each passing day..............and stupid prithvi, hope he doesnt come in the way...........but these parts have been soooooo cute...........waiting to read more.........continue asap!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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YaY!!!!! english! i took my medicine this morning so i could actually focus on wat u wrote.....i loved those parts, angad is so shaytaan...lol. he remembers this jank? dang, good memory....ak are so cute so far....i love them.

great part, cont soon!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome updates.
loved it.
I see their grandma plays am important role in their marriage....wow such thoughts from childhood itself...it serious thing 😆
WoW....Angad is one naughty and demanding kid
plz cont. soon

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