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Posted: 17 years ago
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sorry guys ill be updating this ff soon but not today...sorry!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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man i dont think u gonna continue!!!;(
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Part 9

Hospital:

Prem, Prerna and Mr. Bajaj...so do Adi, Maithili, Laksh and Kt.

they were all waiting outside the OT...half an hour later the doctor came out.
Prem: doctor how is Mukti??? she's fine na
Docor: hum abhi kuch nahi keh sakte...@ this time ill need her husband to choose on who sould we concentrate...Mukti or the kids?
Prerna: lekin Mukti ki shaadi...
Prem: plz save Mukti! ....plzzz
Doctor: who is the husband?
Prem: doctor..Mukti isn't married..but plz save her...
Doctor: toh inki maa baap...
Prerna: voh...mar gaye...lekin...mein uski maa jaisi hoon...plz Mukti ko bachaye!
The doctor nods and leaves.

and other half hour later. the doctor comes out again...but this time holding 2 babies.
Doctor: yeh hai inke bache...humne bohot koshish ki..aur humne dono ko bacha liya!
Prem: kya! lekin Mukti kaisi hai?
Doctor: voh thodi sithaki vi hai...abhi voh aram kar rahi hai...aap sab baadh mein milein.
Prerna: theek hai...chalo!
Prem: nahi mein rukoonga! jab thak mein use baath nahi kartha thab thak men nahi jaoonga...
Prerna: beta...aapna khayal rakhna....bbye
the family leave except for Prem..he goes in side and sits on a chair next to Mukti and the babies crib.

thats were ill ewnd it today1 sorry for such a short part...ill continue soon bye! hope u liked it and plz comment!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwwwww she had twins 😳 😳 how sweet. Hope Prem & Mukti get married now. Wait what did Mukti have; 2 girls, 2 boys or 1 boy 1 girl?
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awwwwwwwwwww shooooo shweeet1!!!twins!!!! thnx for continuing!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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continue soon with more laksh and kt parts 😳

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Part 10

7 years later

Maithili is 9 months pregnant and is soon to deliver, Mukti is 7 months and KT is 3 months pregnant.
Maithili and Adi: Arpita(4 years old)
KT and Laksh: Sharman ( 3 years old)
Mukti and Prem: Aman and Priya (7 years old)
a songs starts and there are 4 kids dancing.

Laksh: Ude Jab Jab Julfe Teri, Ude Jab Jab Julfe Teri
Kawaariyon Ka Dil Machale, Jind Meriye
Jab Aise Chikne Chehre
Toh Kaise Na Nazar Phisale, Jind Meriye

Kids dancing: it's Rocking, Yaara Kabhi Ishq Toh Karo
It's Rocking, Maro Tum Ishq Pe Maro
It's Rocking, Yaara Kabhi Ishq Toh Karo
It's Rocking, Maro Tum Ishq Pe Maro
Chaahe Agar Yeh Dil Toh Kya Roshan Jahaan Karde
Iski Inaayat Ho Toh Jarre Ko Khuda Karde
Main Sadke Jaanwaan, Main Sadke Jaanwaan
Ho Ishq Pe Yaara Main Sadke Jaanwaan
Main Sadke Jaanwaan, Main Sadke Jaanwaan
Ho Ishq Pe Yaara Main Sadke Jaanwaan

Kya Jamin Hai Kya Palak, Hai Duniya Jahaan Talak
Dekho Dekho Silsila Hai Ishq Ka
Chaahe Gum De Ya Khushi, Har Haal Mein Yuunhi
Karo Jara Shukriya Tum Ishq Ka
Jidd Pe Jo Aa Jaaye Toh Ik Pal Mein Fanaa Karde
Isaki Inaayat Ho Toh Jarre Ko Khuda Karde
Main Sadke Jaanwaan, Main Sadke Jaanwaan
Ho Ishq Pe Yaara Main Sadke Jaanwaan
Main Sadke Jaanwaan, Main Sadke Jaanwaan
Ho Ishq Pe Yaara Main Sadke Jaanwaan

Adi: Tujhe Chaand Ke Bahaane Dekhu, Tujhe Chaand Ke Bahaane Dekhu
Tu Chhat Par Aaja Goriye, Tu Chhat Par Aaja Goriye, Jind Meriye
Prem: Abb Chhedenge Gali Ke Sab Ladke, Abb Chhedenge Gali Ke Sab Ladke
Ke Chaand Bairi Chhip Jane De, Ke Chaand Bairi Chhip Jane De, Jind Meriye

Isse Jisne Na Kiya, Mehroom Woh Huva
Use Bhala Kya Pata Hai Ishq Kya
Yeh Isaki Saadagi Hai Ruhi Jindagi
Koi Ise De Pata Hai Ishq Kya
Ye Ishq Jo Chaahe Toh Puri Har Duva Karde
Isaki Inaayat Ho Toh Jarre Ko Khuda Karde
Main Sadke Jaanwaan, Main Sadke Jaanwaan
Ho Ishq Pe Yaara Main Sadke Jaanwaan
Main Sadke Jaanwaan, Main Sadke Jaanwaan
Ho Ishq Pe Yaara Main Sadke Jaanwaan

It's Rocking, Yaara Kabhi Ishq Toh Karo
It's Rocking, Maro Tum Ishq Pe Maro
It's Rocking, Yaara Kabhi Ishq Toh Karo
It's Rocking, Maro Tum Ishq Pe Maro
Chaahe Agar Yeh Dil Toh Kya Roshan Jahaan Karde
Isaki Inaayat Ho Toh Jarre Ko Khuda Karde
Main Sadke Jaanwaan, Main Sadke Jaanwaan
Ho Ishq Pe Yaara Main Sadke Jaanwaan
Main Sadke Jaanwaan, Main Sadke Jaanwaan
Ho Ishq Pe Yaara Main Sadke Jaanwaan
Main Sadke Jaanwaan

KT: Aman! Priya! Tum dono ko a very happy Birthday!
Aman: thanks bua wat did u get for me?
Priya: yea!
KT: these r my gifts open them! (she hands them 2 boxes)

Priya got:



Aman got:




Priya and Aman: WOW!
Priya: yeh churiyaa kitni pyaari hai aur yeh churidar! Thanks u
Aman: wow! I got bling! Just like daddy!
Mukti gives Prem a "hes going onto you!" kind of look.
Aman: thanks bua!
KT: no problem!
Aman and Priya: thanks chachu!(sorry I noe its wrong but I can't figure wat u'd call the brothers sister's husband!)
Laksh: no problem!
Adi: hey! Bacho! Ab mera gift! Yeh lo! Priya yeh tumhare liye! Aur Aman yeh tumhare liye!

Priya:

Aman:


Priya and Aman: OH MY GOD! Its soo cool!
Aman: daddy could u teach me how to use this!
Priya: mama same question! Could u!
Mukti was too shocked to say anything…these things were too expensive!
Mukti: Adi u didn't have to…
Adi: wat r u saying! They've always wanted these!
Mukti: Adi there too expensive!
Adi: so wat! I bought it cause I wanted to they have to take it!
Aman: plz mama! Plzzz can we keep our gifts!
Priya: plzzzzz
Prem: of course u can! Here Aman let me c that!
Aman passes his PSP to Prem.
Mukti: Prem!(she hits him on the arm) yeh tum kya kar rahe ho?
Prem: uhhh..haan tum dono yeh nahi le sakte ho (he passes Aman the PSP back)
Aman: mama! Plz
Priya: plzzz.
Mukti: tum dono yeh cheezein keep kar sakte ho lekin there is on condition!
Priya and Aman: kya?
Mukti: u have to keep the things safe and not let anyone use these at all okie!
Priya and Aman: YES! OKIE!
Prem: (moves his mouth only) yes!
Mukti turns to looks at Prem: kya?
Prem: nothing…nothing at all.
Aman and Priya laugh.
Aman: mama! Papa aap dono nache!
Priya: haan! Koi romantic number laga dein?
Mukti: chup! Kya batein karthe ho tum dono?
Aman: chalo romantic nahi lekin koi gana pe aap dno ko nachna parega!
Prem: nahi…Mukti ki halat bhi theeknahi hai…nahi hum nahi nacheinge…
Priya: theek hai! Mama nahi nacheingi lekin aap nacheinge!
Prem: wat! Me?
Priya: yes!
Prem: no…no…
Priya: chalo! Chalo!

ohhhh ohhhhh ohhhh

Prem: Thaare vaaste dedenge jaanve, Thaare vaaste Dil hai kurbaan ve
Thaare vaaste dedenge jaanve, Thaare vaaste Dil hai kurbaan ve
Love you i love you jana, Tu hi armaan ve
Love you i love you jana, Tu hi armaan ve

Mukti starts singing: Thaare vaaste dedenge jaanve, Thaare vaaste Dil hai kurbaan ve
Thaare vaaste dedenge jaanve, Thaare vaaste Dil hai kurbaan ve
Love you i love you jana, Tu hi armaan ve

Prem: Thaare vaaste dedenge jaanve
Mukti: Thaare vaaste Dil hai kurbaan ve

Adi: Mere dil kya hai kya hai, Tera pyaar hai, Tujhe milko hamesha bekraar hai
Maithili: Mere chain ki manzil jana tere paas hai, Meri dhadkan mein tere hi ehsaass hai

Adi: Door door nahi jana nahi jana nahi jana

Maithili: Na mujhe tadpaa tadpana tadpana

Adi: Love you I love you Jana, Tu hi armaan ve

Prem and Adi: Thaare vaaste dedenge jaanve, Thaare vaaste Dil hai kurbaan ve

Mukti and Maithili: Love you I love you Jana, Tu hi armaan ve

Maithili: Thaare vaaste dedenge jaanve

Adi: Thaare vaaste Dil hai kurbaan ve

KT: Tujhe paake miti hai meri tanhaiyan, Mere khwaabon mein rehti teri roobaiyan

Laksh: Meri aahon kya hai teri hi khawaahishe, Aa puri kar de karde meri farmaishien

KT: Tera Tera Tera charcha hai meri meri meri har baat mein

Laskh: Tu hi tu hi basti basti hai mere jazbaat mein

Mukti: Love you I love you jana, Tu hi armaan ve

Prem: Thaare vaaste dedenge jaanve, Thaare vaaste Dil hai kurbaan ve

KT: Love you I love you jana, Tu hi armaan ve

Laksh: Love you I love you jana, Tu hi armaan ve

Mukti, Maithili, KT: Thaare vaaste dedenge jaanve, Thaare vaaste Dil hai kurbaan ve
Thaare vaaste dedenge jaanve, Thaare vaaste Dil hai kurbaan ve

Prem, Adi, Laksh: Thaare vaaste dedenge jaanve, Thaare vaaste Dil hai kurbaan ve

Aman and Priya stand up and start clapping. Suddenly a kid comes up to them crying
Aman: kya hua Sharman? Were is bua?
Sharman: meri mama toh papa ke saath nach rahi thi…aur mujhe bilkul bhool gayi…mein unko doondh raha tha…aur voh…
Suddenly KT grabs Sharman from behind.
KT: kya hua Sharman?
Sharman just hugs her: aap mujhe bhool gayi! Mein dar gaya tha…
KT: Sharman tum ghar mein hi the toh tum kaise ghum gaye?
Sharman: mujhe nahi pata…ab mein aap ke paas rehna chata hoon…
Laksh: ao Sharman mein tumhe utha deta hoon…
Sharman: nahi mujhe mama ke paas rehna hai…
Laksh: Sharman mama bohut thaki hui hai…aap mere paas ao mein aapko ice cream khila tha hoon! Theek hai!
Sharman wipes his tears: really!
Laksh: haan haan baba! Chalo!
Sharman: aap uthaenge ya nahi…
Laksh: oh sorry…he picks up Sharman and goes to the kitchen.

Maithili: Adi! Adi!
Adi: kya hua???
Maithili: Arpita kahan gayi???
Adi: tumhare paas nahi thi???
Maithili: nahi! Hum dono nach rahe the!
Maithili: Arpita! Arpita!
Someone grabs her legs and hugs her…Matihili sits down.
Maithili: Arpita! Tum kahan chali gayi! Hun! Mein tumhe doondho doondh ke thak gayi!
Arpita: sorry mama…mein toh khel rahi thi doston ke saath.
Maithili: lekin tumhare dost yahan kaise ayi tum toh school jati hi nahi ho…
Arpita: yahan pe jo bache mein unke saath khel rahi thi!
Maithili: oh ok!
Adi: ao Arpita! Sab log ja rahe hain! (he picks up Arpita)

Soon everyone leaves.
Aman and Priya go to Prem and Mukti
Priya: mummy! Im tired can we go to bed!
Mukti: haan chalo
Mukti takes Priya to her room…
Priya: nahi mujhe aap ke saath sona hai…chale!
She runs to Mukti and Prems room.
Mukti goes aback and finds Aman and Prem already on the bed, sleeping.
Mukti: acha phir tum jake thaiyaar ho jao phir hum so jate hai…chalo hum dono tumhare kamre mein so jate hai!
Priya: yaaaay!
Priya runs back to her room, Mukti gets into a nighty and turns off the light then goes to priyas room with a pillow.

The Next Morning:

Everyone is at the breakfast table.
Prerna: toh Aman, Priya tum dono school ke liye thaiyaar ho?
Aman: school! Mein toh kabse keh raha tha ke mujhe school jana hai! Par papa kabse nahi kef rahe the…
Prerna: lekin now ur 5 u can go to school, but u'll start in kindergarten!
Aman: kindergarten…wat grade is that?
Priya: budhu! Kindergarten isn't a grade! Voh toh sirf bacho keliye hai jo 5 saal ke hai!
Aman: okie! Mujhe jana hai! Kab jana hoga!
Prerna: September mein…toh 1 mahina baadh
Adi: toh kya hai nashte keliye?
Maithili: haan! Mujheb bohot bhook lagi hai!
Adi: hona toh chaiye…tum kitni moti hogaye ho!
Maithili: Adi! Tum jante ve bhi mujhe thang kare ho!
Adi: okie sorry mein tumhe thang nahi karoongi!, chalo yeh khalo! Paratha!
Maithili: mmmm maa yeh parathe! Kitne ache hai…
Adi: haan toh aur lo…(he gives her like 6 more parathe!)
Maithili: maa! Keh do Adi she ke mein nahi kha rahi!
Maithili get sup and goes to her room, while no ones looking Sharman slowly grabs the parathe and starts eating them off Maithili's plate, and Laksh catches him.
Laksh: sharman! Wapas do…
Sharman: lekin mujhe bhi bhook lagi hai…
KT: khane do isse Laksh…!
Laksh: theek hai!( he raises his hand in surrender)
Adi: wait il go bring Maithili back down.
Prerna: aur agar aur thang kiya toh mein tumhare liya kabhi bhi nashta nahi banaoongi…
Adi: don't worry…he gets up to leave, when suddenly they hear a scream from upstairs.
Adi runs upstairs to his room and see's Maithili on the ground holding her stomach…
Adi quickly picks her up and takes her down stairs.
Prerna: kya hua???
Adi: hospital…

Hospital:

The doctors quickly take Maithili in, and start the operation.
Prem and Laksh were teasing Adi as he way more tensed then last time wen Arpita was born.
Suddenly the doctors come out.
Adi: Maithili kaisi hai?
Doctors: she is fine…and congrats ur have a new baby boy!
Adi smiled: thanks doctor!
They all go in…suddenly Arpita runs and jumps on the bed…
Arpita: so this is my new baby brother?
Maithili: haan dekho…bilkul aapke jaisa lagte hai! Lekin shhh so raha hai!
Arpita looks at the kid: aww he is adorable!....but why is he all wrinkly!?
Everyone giggles, Mukti looks at the kid and thinks how would her and Prems child look, Aman and Priya were that devil, Ajays children, then suddenly she is back at the forest she remembers the way he raped her, how she was trying to get away but he kept coming on top of her, they way she tried screaming, but he held a hand on her mouth, then he leaves away and she was crying, and suddenly she was out of her thoughts when arms were wrapped around her, she hadn't noticed that what she was thinking of was somewhat , what she was doing. She opened her eyes, they were red from crying. She saw that Prem had wrapped his arms around her trying to comfort her "who wapas agaya!"
Prem: kya? Mukti tum theek toh ho…
Mukti: voh…voh…wapas agaya!...Ajay! voh wapas agaya!
Laksh: kya…Ajay! Voh toh…kaise?
Mukti: Prem…plz mujhe ghar le chalo..plzzz
Prem nods: Maithili take care of ur sefl hum ja rahe hai…
Maithili nods and PM and AP leave(AP = Aman and Priya)

Basu house:
PM go to there room and Aman and Priya follow.
Mukti lays on the bed and Prem sits next to her.
Prem: tumhe kaise pata chala ke voh waas agaya!
Mukti: Prem…mujhe lagta hai ke voh wapas aya hai! Voh mere bache ko toh kuch nahi karenge! Na…agar Aman ya Priya ko kuch hogaye! Toh…
Prem: nahi voh kuch nahi karega! Don't worry!
Suddenly Prems phone rings.
Prem: hello?
?: tumhare bache kudhar hai?
Prem: kya?
?: guess karo ke main kahan hoon?
Prem: tum kaun ho??? Aur tum kya keh rahe ho mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha…
?: murd ke dekho…
Prem: ky…(he looked at Mukti and she was as a white as a ghost)
Then Prem turns around and see's Ajay standing at the door with Aman and Priya in each hand!
Aman and Priya: Mummy!..Papa!
Ajay: find it surprising to be living in happiness for 5 years then, me, the villain coming back…
Prem: unko chodo!
Priya: papa!
Ajay: eyy lardki tumhe pata hai ke voh tera baap nahi hai!...
Priya: mein aapki koi baath nahi sune wali papa! Plz! Is uncle ko keh diya keh humhe chod dein!
Prem: Ajay! Mein tuhe last time warning de raha hoon mujhe mere bache wapas do…
Ajay: tum kabse inke pita ban gaye…mein toh ji raha hoon…in bachon pe mera hak hai!
Mukti gets up and begs: plz mujhe mere bache wapas do…plzzz mein tumhare samne haath jodthi hoon…plz.
Ajay: ok fine, Mukti ne agar haath jod diya toh mujhe dena parega…lekin uske badle mein usko mere saath jana parega…
Mukti: pehle bache wapas do…
Ajay: u noe wat while they start walking towards ur guys then u starts walking towards me…ok…
Prem: nahi Mukti kahin nahi jaye gi…
Mukti: Prem…
Prem: Mukti…nahi…
Mukti nods and starts walking…then once the 2 and Mukti get to each other, Mukti bends down and hugs them.
Priya: mama!... plz nahi…
Aman: mama plz aap aisa nahi kariye…
Mukti: shhh abhi toh mein jaa rahi hoon..lekin wapas zuroor aongi…theek hai..
Ajay: omg! Kitni der lagati ho tum!...he grabbed her by the arm and dragged her downstairs
Prem ran after him and Aman and Priya ran after him.

Outside:

Ajay takes Mukti into his jeep and starts to drive away, Prem tries getting on it but doesn't make it, he turns around and c's Aman and Priya with the keys of his car
Prem tries to take it but aman backs his hand.
Aman: humhe bhi aap ke saath jana hai! …plzzzz
Prem: jaldi batho gadi mein!
Prem starts the car they all get in then he drives behind the jeeps as fast as he can.

He soon gets to a forest by following the jeep, the gunde walk into the forest with Mukti, Prem gets out of the car but before shutting the door he tells Aman and Priya to stay in the car and he'll lock the car…AP nod, Prem closes the door, but suddenly he hers a scream, he runs in to the forest.
Prem: MUKTI!
"hahahahahaha, tum toh paas gaye na…"
Prem turns around and see's Ajay standing behind him with a gun, and Mukti unconscious on the ground, then to the shock of his life, Aman and Priya , hands tied and mouth taped, sitting on the ground "oh shit! Mein gadi lock karna bhool gaya" "aur Mukti ko kya hua?" Prem thought.
Prem: dekho jo kuch bhi tumhe chaiye mein tumhe dene ke liye thayar hon…lekin mere bacho aur Mukti ko chodo! Plz.
Ajay: im sorry lekin yeh tumhare bache nahi…
Aman and Piya were crying, and trying to talk, but couldn't.
Mukti suddenly wakes up, but doesn't move, she notices Aman and Priya tied up, she slowly gets them untied, and tells them to run back to the car. The two start running but once Ajay turned and noticed he put his gun out at Mukti and shot 3 times…
Everything goes slow motion:
Prem: nahi…
He runs infront of Mukti, the bullet hit his arm,this one went right past him and so did this one, and suddenly they hear a deadly scream.
Mukti's heartbeat stops for a sec and she turns around, the bullets went right into both Priya and Aman's back.
She gets up and runs to them, Ajay drops the gun and just stares at his hands, Prem also runs to Aman and Priya.
Mukti: AMAN! (she grabs him as he was about to fall) PRIYA!
Prem hold Priya just before she lands on the ground.
Prem: jaldi uthao! Hospital chalte hai!

kk guys thats a long part i guess hope u like it! plz comment!
Edited by Umam_Paracha_13 - 17 years ago
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awww one comment??? i will try to make the next one better and when i update i want atleast 5 comments then im gonna update the next part! okie! 😊

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hey good update i liked it please continue soon 😛
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Part 11

Ajay had also followed Prem and Mukti to the hospital.
The doctors quickly took Aman and Priya in, while another doctor was cleaning Prem's arm, getting the bullet out.
Mukti was waiting worriedly outside the operation theater, soon Prem came and asked Mukti if the doctors said anything but the doctors hadn't came out yet. After an hour the doctor came out and said…
"We need more blood, our supply of the type of blood ur children have is finished, were going to call another hospital and get some from there, Priya is in Danger, and Aman is going into coma...I'm sorry we're trying out best"
Prem: Mukti, Priya ka blood group kya hai?
Mukti: B+
Prem: mera blood group bhi B+ hai mein khoon doon toh..
Mukti: Prem tumhara khoon abhi bohot beh chuka hai, nahi…
"Kya mein khoon de sakta hoon?"
They both look at Ajay, Mukti anger grew even more.
Mukti: nahi, Priya ko mein tumhara ghanda khoon nahi de sakti
Ajay: lekin Mukti, meri baath suno…
Mukti: NAHI! Tum jao yahan se!
Ajay looked down then walked a few chairs away and sat there.
Prem: suno Mukti, mein jake unhe khoon doonga, agar hum tab thak ruke toh shayad unke jaan jaye, tum yahin ruko mein ata hoon
Mukti tried to stop him, but he left.
Soon after another hour, Aman came to his conscious, and Mukti asked if she could meet him, the doctor let her go.

Mukti came in and saw Aman in tears hugging a pillow waiting for her, once he saw her he let go of the pillow and Mukti hugged him.
Mukti: beta! Aman! Tu theek hai!
Aman nods.
Mukti: beta kuch bol, tu kuch bolta kyon nahi…Doctor!
The Doctor and Prem come running in,
Doctor: kya hua Mrs. Basu?
Mukti: Doctor, mera beta, voh kuch bolta kyon nahi…
Doctor: mein abhi hi Mr. Prem se issi ke bare main baath kar raha tha, aapka beta, ab kuch bol nahi sakta…
Mukti: kya, yeh aap kya keh rahe hai…
Doctor: im sorry…soon a nurse comes running in
Nurse: were loosing the patient sir! Come quick!
Doctor leaves behind the nurse, Mukti then runs behind them, Prem walks to Aman.
Aman just hugged Prem and was crying.

Operation Theater:

Priya was in the room
Mukti: Doctor! Plz meri bachi ko bacha liye!
Doctor: hum poori koshish karenge…don't worry.
Mukti sat in the chair behind her, and started to weep. Both her children were in such conditions and yet she couldn't do anything.

In another room Aman was sleeping while Prem was sitting on the chair beside his bed, Prem's phone began to ring…
Prem: hello
"Hello! Prem beta! Tu kahan hai! Aur Mukti…?"
Prem understood it was his mother and also started to cry a bit on the phone.
Prem: maa, I don't know what's happening, Priya and Aman, they… (He told everything mute on the phone)
Prerna: beta! Tu kis hospital mein hai! Hum abhi aa rahe hai…
Prem: nahi, mein aapko nahi bata sakta…mujhe rakhna chaiye…bye.
Prem turned his phone off, touched Aman's head then walked out to Mukti.

Prem: Mukti, did the doctors come out yet?
Mukti: nahi, meri bachi zindagi aur moth ke beech lar rahi hai…mein yeh nahi dekh sakti…
Prem: Mukti, Priya ko kuch nahi hoga!
Mukti: phir bhi mujhe kyon lagta hai ke…voh humse kuch door hi chali gayi hai…
Prem was about to speak when the doctor came out.
Prem: doctor Priya, how is she?
Doctor: im sorry but…hum use bacha nahi sake, she is dead.
Prem stood up shocked, so did Mukti, but she fainted right away.

1 month later:

Aman was still in school, but every time he had to say something he'd just raise his hand and write it on paper. Mukti also stayed at the school all day with Aman where ever he went she would go. They would go home together too. Aman didn't want Mukti to be doing this, but when he wanted to talk to her, she never let him tell. Even Prem didn't want Mukti to be going out in such condition, but Mukti still wasn't through the fact that Priya was dead.

That night Aman came to Prem and Mukti's room like every night from the past month and started to get ready for bed. But it was a little bit too early so Prem asked him if he wanted to play his PSP, they started looking for it when they came by Priya's IPOD, that she got for her birthday that day. Aman suddenly wasn't in the mood of playing anymore he took Priya's IPOD and went to his room.
Prem was going to leave after him, when he saw Mukti enter Aman's room. He didn't go, because Mukti only talked to Aman, if he went there then she wouldn't talk at all. She didn't even talk to him, and neither did his son, he was starting to feel…lonely. Soon Mukti came back to her room, with Aman, and laid in bed and Aman laid next to her. Suddenly Prem remembered Mukti's medicine. He went downstairs grabbed a glass of water and then once he got back he saw Mukti waiting hold a tablet in her hand. Prem handed her the water, she took it and slowly took her medicine. Aman was still awake, but he held Priya's IPOD in his hand tight as ever. She put the glass down and was about to lay back in bed when Prem…
Prem: Mukti
Mukti just looked at Prem.
Prem: Mukti kuch bolo na, dekho Aman bhi kuch nahi bolta, I feel lonely, mujhe tumhari awaaz suni hai…
Mukti just lay back in bed.
Prem: Mukti, please, mujhe pata hai, ke tum voh raath nahi bhool payi ho, lekin tum dono…tum kya aise hi chup chap kuch nahi kahogi, mujhe dekho
Mukti sat up and just looked at Prem, Aman fell asleep.
Prem: Mukti bas sirf yeh kaho, ke tum abhi mujhse pyaar karthi ho, kyon ki mujhe shak hone laga hai ke…
Mukti just hugged him, she needed him, but because of Priya she totally forgot, and didn't understand how he was feeling.
Mukti: im sorry, I love you…
Mukti didn't talk to him since she fainted in the hospital, ever since then she'd always been upset that her daughter died.

The next day Mukti woke up, quickly took a shower, then woke Aman up, because he had school, and then she went downstairs to make lunch for him. Prerna was down there too, when she saw Mukti she quickly looked down.
Mukti: Choti Maa…um aap Aman ke liye lunch bana rahi hai?
Prerna: Mukti, beta! Tu…haan meine bana liya…yeh lo aur tumhara bhi, aur Prem ka bhi….lo Aman aa gaya, Mukti tumne Prem ko uthaya? Prem ko aaj Jaldi office jana hai…
Mukti: mujhe pata nahi tha, mein abhi jathi hoon.
Mukti quickly goes upstairs to wake Prem up but once she got there he was already awake and ready.
Mukti: oh uthgaye! Choti Maa tumhara intezaar rahi thi…aaj tum mujhe aur Aman ko school leke jao ge?
Prem: I guess chalo!
Mukti nods and both walk together downstairs, right when they get there Aman passes Prem a paper…Prem read it and starts laughing.
Prem: um, mein…kya kahoon…
Mukti: usne kya likha?
Prem: ke mein office kyon jata hoon…
Then Aman gives him another paper.
Prem: um, tu bhag ya mein tumhe baha nikal doon!
Aman makes a scared face and hugs Mukti.
Mukti: ye kya kar diya? Mere bete ko rula diya…!
Prem: sorry! Lekin dekho toh sahi ke usne kya likha!
Mukti: Aman! (After reading)
Suddenly Aman makes a cute puppy dog face, Mukti quickly forgives him, they all soon head out for a little play at the park, and a movie.

thats all for now, plz comment! i hope you all liked it! ill update soon!

Luv ya

Umam

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