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Posted: 17 years ago
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CHAPTER 8:
Days progressed, kripa was in more than perfect condition, angad didn't miss a chance to love her or take care of her. Angad was sitting bored in the living room, waiting for kripa to come down for their dinner date, but it had been 2 hours and she still hadnt come, uggghhhh, he sighed and got up to go and check on her. When he was walking towards the stairs kripa came down in a white dress with a pendant that said "AK" engraved on it and her hair loose in curls. Angad's mouth flew wide open, he couldn't do anything but stand there and gaze, "what who am I kidding she is my wife, I can do anything!" he laughed to himself, and went up to her, and gave her a heated gaze when suddenly he found himself in a powerful passionate lip lock, he explored every bit of her mouth and finally let go to get some air. He looked at her and went forward to kiss her again but she put her finger on his mouth and pushed him away, walking towards the car, when angad caught up and walked with her and said, "kripa I have a better idea how about we stay at home and have fun!" kripa turned around and smacked him on the head, and walked away. "owwwwwwwwwwwww, fine kripa I will get you for that tonight, hmpphhh." he opened the door and they drove off to the restaurant.
He pushed the chair out for her and told her to sit, and plopped a chair close to her, and put a protective arm around her shoulder, noticing all the gawking his wife was getting from UGLY men. Kripa looked around and smiled, the restaurant was beautiful it was covered with white flowers and the table covered with flowers, a card, cake and a gift. Kripa squealed with excitement and turned towards angad and said, "you remembered angad, oh my gosh I thought you would forget, lol, angad I love you and HAPPY ANNIVERSARY TO YOU SWEETY! …..yeah im first," she smiled big. Angad looked at her, she looked so innocent tonight, boy was he gonna have difficulty controlling his emotions tonight, he thought wickedly. "HAPPY ANNIVERSARY KRIPA, I LOVE YOU SWEETHEART, PLEASE DON'T EVER LEAVE ME, YOU MEAN THE WORLD TO ME!" kripa smiled and said "main tumhe kabhi chor ke nahin jaoongi, okay, how can I after all my heart is with you and I have yours!" angad smiled, and then suddenly an idea popped in his head, but he decided to use it later. They turned towards the cake, blew out the candle and cut the cake, kripa fed angad first, and then angad fed kripa, but then put some cream on her the side of her lips. Kripa frowned and was grabbing a napkin when angad went forward and licked off the entire cream and then gave her a passionate and heated kiss. Kripa broke the kiss and gave him a glare. An old age couple came by and smiled and said, "looks like you guys love each other dearly, and congratulations on your wedding anniversary, waise beta (to kripa), your husband loves you lot, you can tell by the cream." kripa blushed a deep shade of red when the old aged man said to his wife, "arey tum bhi toh asey thi!" angad and kripa laughed while the woman hit her husband and they walked off wishing them HAPPY ANNIVERSARY, and many kids, they way angad was kissing her passionately they had to say something. Angad grinned proudly and winked, he looked towards kripa and said, "so kripa should we get started!?" kripa hit him, got up and ran towards the car, blushing.
Edited by Mimi_Rani - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
thanx iamsmart dear for ur comment..... 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
aww angad is choo chweet and naughty


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~Sana~
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
Awwwww...such a beautiful part.
liked it...AK are so cute and sweet.
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
it was a cute part sorry i couldn't post a comment earlier don't think you are not good with romantic parts beacause you have the guts to try and here is me i try and i end up with nothing 😆 😆 anyways continue soon 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
hey princess,

i will count them as one part...you are not that bad at writing romatic parts...i m sure you are better than me...wait till i reach there...i m gonna suck at them...back to ff...lovely and cute part 👏 ...naughty naughty angad

cont soon and take care

love ya more than u



Asever 😳

Amneet 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys i have a problem, well like i had said i would be ending this ff in two parts, but it looks like that wont be happening because i rewent over the pages i wrote and well another idea popped in my head, so this ff will last a little longer but not too long hopefully....and thanx for all the comments 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
well i really really don't mind a long ff princess

love ya more than u



Asever 😳

Amneet 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
yay!!!! some more of this but one thing keep in mind plz i think you should give us regularely update 😳 plz i really enjoy reading this ff continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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of course i would love doing that...but since my skool has started im stuffed with hw....i will try and well guess what.....im making this a long ff.....i thought of why not writiting this ff with my amu didi....since im writing one with anam didi....so yeah this will be a long ff...this means that anjaana raasta will start later..... 😉

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