Main Tum aur meri Tanhai LAST PART p12

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hey guys,

im sukhi, and well i was bored so i thought about writing a short ff, this ff only has 5 - 6 parts and its about kripa's past. well here goes nothing, hope ya like, its going to be really sad though😳

Character Introduction:

The Sharma's:

    Suryaban: a good loving father to his kids, except kripa, he loves her less Gayatri: a good loving mother except gives less love and attention to kripa Josh: a wonderful brother but has one weakness which is anger kripa: a wonderful person who grew up with less love but was most mature and patient with life
  • Anjali: a bratty little sister, but cute at times, and damn annoying other times

Other Characters:

  • Angad Khanna: is married to kripa and loves her dearly

well guys thats it, this ff doesnt need many people but yah i will add more characters for cousins and uncles at each part, and yes this ff is all about kripa's past life, and how she dreads it. do tell if you enjoy the concept and i repeat guys this ff is only going to have five to six parts😳

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guys is it really that bad 😭 😭
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awww cute title! cant wait to read!
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gr8 intro...plzz continue sooon!! 👏
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thanx everyone for the wonderful comments i will reply after i post the first part 😉
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nice concept.waitin for u to start
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wow! itz great!
can't wait 4 it.
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Chapter 1:
She stood there standing in the balcony looking out far into the ocean, the sun was just setting, and yet it felt like darkness was overcoming her, no matter how much she enjoyed life and living for her husband and friends, her past never left her. Who knew a family that was supposed to bring joy and happiness would one day want to take the life of a young girl who learned the rules of life through Indian movies, and everyday life? A tear fell down her eye, she closed her eyes and stayed calm and until she felt a pair of hands on her waist. Her eyes opened in shock but then she recognized the touch, it was her husband, he had milk chocolate eyes, a French beard growing, black hair and the perfect heart; yes she was married, married off to her high school sweetheart, at first they used to hate each other but slowly and slowly fell in love. He gave her the reason to stay alive, and her friends. He turned her around and said, "what happened, are you thinking about me? You know im hot and all yours, kripa you awake." she dared not to look in his eyes, but she still looked up knowing she could never hide her feelings from him. you see her lips, her eyes and then her entire face, "ya im awake hun, just a bit tired, that's all!" "kripa don't lie to me, I know its your past, why do you think about it when you know it hurts?" she looked into his eyes, as another tear escaped her eyes, "angad, some things can never be forgotten no matter how much you want them too!" He quietly hugged her as she sobbed in his chest, when? when was this everlasting pain going to leave her side, no one knew!

FLASHBACK:
The nurse walked in holding a baby girl wrapped in a pink blanket. "congratulations ma'am, you had a daughter, she is so cute, and has the cutest smile ever!" The woman leaned forward and smiled indeed her little girl was an angel. A man walked in, and held the baby girl in his hands smiling, "thank you gayatri for this wonderful gift, I love her, how about we name her kripa?" gayatri smiled, "jaise aap ko teek laghe."

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A five year old girl ran around the house chasing her brother, they both fell on the bed and began tickling each other. "okay that's enough, kripa, leave your brother alone, your too old for tickling each other now." "but mom, it was me, kripa' was only playing because I was forcing her too." "that's enough josh, now kripa go to your room." the little girl walked into her room slowly and quietly, grabbed her teddy bear and began crying. "teddy I didn't do anything, then how come im blamed for everything."

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Guys I hope you liked this part, I paid a lot of attention to the first paragraph, I will continue soon, and thanx for all of the replies.

Edited by Mimi_Rani - 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sia_cutie01

just read its really good

thanx a bunchie hun😳

Originally posted by: Numera*

awww cute title! cant wait to read!

thanx hun, im glad you liked it...at first i was thinking of calling it main aur meri tanhai but then i added tum since shes married, lol....couldnt think of anything else, and thanx for commenting😃

Originally posted by: SujalkiDeewani

gr8 intro...plzz continue sooon!! 👏

thanx hun, and ya i will continue soon, promise😉

thanx a bunchie hun, and ya i havent forgotten my promise anjaana raasta will start soon😉

thanx a bunchie hun😃

Originally posted by: deeya123

nice concept.for u to start

thanx hun....just posted the first part, lol sorry for late reply😃

Originally posted by: pretuna

wow! itz great! can't wait 4 it.

thanx so much im glad you like it😳 i will continue asap😉

thanx hun, i personally thought it was pathetic, seriously no pictures or anything was too lazy to post pix😆 i already did and thanx again😉

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thanx everyone for the wonderful comments, it keeps me going, i will continue very soon, and thanx again

Edited by Mimi_Rani - 18 years ago
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Awesome Part Sukhi

Poor Kripa

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