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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow mimi dear gr8 ff just loved it...eager to know who is this person continue soooon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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next part will be up in a bit and sorry for the delay busy with school and all, i promise to post new part for this, pmh and for tanhai today....and will post every friday through sunday.... 😉 sorry again dears 😳
Edited by Mimi_Rani - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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CHAPTER 10:
kripa sat there crying her eyes out, she was now 4 months pregnant, she cried to herself continuously when was angad going to find her and help her out of his the living hell. kripa had cried herself to sleep many nights here, she had eaten only for her child, she had taken care of herself only for her child and she had protected her child from the cruel people, but how longer could she hold up pretty soon she would have people coming in here drugging her and .....tears ran down her eyes as she thought of what could happen to her anytime anyday.
Angad sat on his bed and dialed shabbir's number, "hey bro did you find anything out yet? i cant live without kripa please do something i will die without her man!" he said as tears ran down his eyes, shabbir smiled and said, "angad we have found some clues we will get to her soon!" angad immediately looked up and screamed, "what happened shabbir what did you find out?" "well we have some witnesses who saw what happened that night and where she was taken they had followed the car to the the place kripa will be home safely soon, why dont you come over to my house and will discuss these matters and save kripa as soon as possible!" angad quickly said thanx and bye, put his shirt on and ran out the door grabbing his keys and jumping into the car and drove off to shabbir's house. as soon as he got there, shabbir brought forth the witnesses they were none other then the old lady and her husband who had wished angad and kripa on their wedding anniversary. "aap, you guys how is kripa where is she?" they looked at angad and then sat down, as angad looked at them carefully he noticed the looked weaker and fragile as if they had been tortured for months.....! finally the lady spoke.....

FLASHBACK:
The man in black forcibly kissed kripa and then drugged her when she was about to scream. he picked her up and took her to a black BMW with the liscence plate no. KAB57BIR, he placed her quickly into the back seat and ran to the front and drove off, the old man and lady stood there shocked at what they had just seen they quickly got into their car and drove as fast as they could to keep up with the man. the car drove up to a dark place and very quiet house, opened the gates and drove in. he took her out and carried her into the house and then locked all the doors.
END OF FLASHBACK:

"we somehow managed to get out of their without being caught we had tried contacting you or finding you to let you know where and how your wife is, we would have let the police know but your wife was pregnant and if the police went after him he could have easily tortured your wife and killed your child! were sorry!" the old lady said. angad looked at her through tears and quietly hugged her consoling her and softly whispering thanx in her ear.

DOES ANGAD FIND KRIPA, WHO IS THE BAD GUY? IS IT A NEW ENTRY!
Edited by Mimi_Rani - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome Part Sukhi

I hope Angad finds Kripa
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Fab part.
hope now Angad finds Kripa soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow amazing so exciting and touching poor kripa jhad to go so much in her life just loved everything angads a sweetheart hope he finds her soon pls con asap
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey great part...i hope he finds her soon ... continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanx everyone for the comments will post a part soon 😉 this ff is ending soon, because im out of ideas and dont want to drag it....and im sorry didi will start a new ff with you thats much better 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was a nice part .lets see who is the villain out here
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Chapter 11: LAST PART:

Angad rushed into the mansion looking for kripa frantically here and there. When suddenly he heard someone clapping from upstairs, he turned around with fury clearly written on his face, his hands turned into fists as he saw who was trying to harm his kripa. "prithivi, what the **** you ****** ******, where the hell is my kripa, she is my wife and you cant do anything about you ****** *****! Kripaaaaaaaaaaaaa! where are you, main aa gaya hoon pareshaan maat ho, tumhara angad aa gaya hai!" prithivi looked at angad with the same fury, "shut up angad, kripa sirf meri hai, toh kya hua agar osihe ki shaadi tumse ho chuke hai kya farak padtha hai, lekin aaj tumhe maare ke main kripa se shaadi karoonga aur tumhare bache ko maar daaloonga!" Angad ran up the stairs with so much anger that he grabbed prithivi and knocked him in the face. prithivi reacted by hitting him back, and grabbed a knife cutting angad's arm. prithivi grabbed the knife again and rushed himself in stabbing angad when angad caught the knife from the blade, blood ran down his hand as he kicked prithivi in the face. After ten minutes of continuous fighting nishant ran through the doors with kripa, he told her to get into the jeep and stay there away from prithivi. nishant ran back in and stopped angad from killing prithivi. he broke them two apart when suddenly prithivi popped a gun out and shot......AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
Kripa ran back into the house as soon as she heard the gun shot, fear and panic took over her as she thought something had happened to her angad. her eyes closed in fear, and she opened them to find her angad in front of her covered in blood, in a ripped t-shirt and blood coming down his cheek. "angadd!" kripa hugged him crying her heart out as angad did the same. kripa let go of angad and said, "angad yeh sab, aur prithivi kahaa hai aur woh goli ki awaaz kahaa se aaye....?" angad put his finger on her lip and turned her around to find prithivi dead, and nishant standing next to him smiling. apparently when prithivi was about to shoot angad, nishant popped his gun out and shot him in the head before prithivi even pressed the trigger.

5 YEARS LATER:
"Angad, suhaan aur anu kahaa hai, yeh dhono bhi naa bilkul tum peh gaye hai, lekin dekh te meri thara....!" angad laughed, "true jaan, lekin yeh bache hum dhono ke hai, aur woh dekho so gaye hai bed peh ab chalo hum bhi thoraa sa kehlte hai!" he winked at her as she blushed furiously and hit him in the stomach walking off. She walked into the bedroom and was stepping into the washroom when Angad grabbed her arm and spun her around. He began kissing her down the side of her neck as she groaned with passion. angad looked at kripa with love and long in his eyes, he kissed her so passionately that kripa began replying by letting their tongues meet. angad carried her to the bed and made love to her. Slowly slowly the screen becames dark and rises to the moon reflecting their love for each other when.......! "knock knock knock knock, mama daddy hum aap dono ke saat sonha chaate hai!" angad groaned while kripa laughed and told him to let go. "actually kripa yeh bache bilkul tum peh gaye hai har baar kabab mein haddi baan jaate hai yeh bache bilkul tumhare hai!" kripa looked at him and hit him with the pillow, got up and opened the door letting the kids in. Kripa layed them to sleep and smiled at them when suddenly kripa felt dizzy and had the urge to throw up! kripa quickly got up and ran into the bathroom throwing up while angad stood shocked, and finally grinned. kripa came back and blushed when angad said to suhaan and anu, "guess what kids, tum dhono kiliye mama aur maine ek surprise rakha hai aur woh aapko 9 mahine baad mil le gha, lekin main advance mein bataa dehta hoon, baat yeh hai ke tum dhono bhai aur behen baane ne waale ho, ek chota suhaan ya anu aane waala hai" suhaan and anu looked at each other, then at angad and finally kripa and screamed, "yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaay, mama mujhe ek behen chaiyye," anu said, when suhaan said, "lekin mujhe ek chota bhai chaiyye!" angad smiled and said, "koi baat nahin kids daddy hai naa...woh sambhal legha!" kripa's mouth fell as the kids began laughing, she went towards angad and hit him with a few more pillow until he said, "ek aur yeah LIFE HO TO AISI....MAIN TUM AUR HUMARA PARIWAAR!"

THE END, ANGAD AND KRIPA LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER WITH THEIR KIDS SUHAAN, ANU, ANJALI AND ROHAN! IN THE END KRIPA ENDED UP HAVING FOUR KIDS...LIKE ANGAD SAID WOH HAI NAA.... 😆

HOPE YOU LIKED THIS SHORT FF😳 and thank you for all the comments you all gave me...it supported me a lot😳

Edited by Mimi_Rani - 17 years ago

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