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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey great part... i can't belive they could do something likethat she is there daughter....continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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such a sad part.... i hate kripa's parents... do continue soon 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey Sukhi. I really love this FF. It was a very emotional part. This iz a very touching FF. Plz cont soon. Waiting eagerly.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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such a nice part.i really feel bad for kripa
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Chapter 5:
Doctors rushed kripa into the theatre room, operation began on her, while angad walked back in forth with terror hitting him like a lightening bolt, his kripa was dying, he couldn't loose her not now or ever! "god please save my kripa, I will die without her, please save her!"

Suryaban and gayatri began walking through the corridors, when angad spotted them. "don't you dare, take another step towards the operation theatre, its all your fault, damn it you never gave her the happiness in life, and I had specifically told you not to come out until she crossed the road." surya broke out in tears, "I want my daughter back, I love her!" angad began yelling, "you love her, damn it, you're the worse father I have ever seen in the entire world, its because of you she is in this condition she stopped dead in her tracks when she saw you, her terrible memories began flashing in her mind, and you say you LOVE HER, you gayatri sharma, are a mother you are supposed to give love to your children, but you know what you are taint to the name of motherhood, your worse then a killer, you and your husband kept killing her, and she was left with nothing but a body, I brought love into her life, she began living again but then, then….you you!" the doctor walked out, and said to angad, "are you her husband?" "yes doctor I am, is everything alright, is my kripa fine will she be okay?" "sir, who are these people?" angad looked to gayatri and suryaban and said, "they are strangers!" "okay mr. angad, your wife has survived, but she is very critical, im sorry but we are trying!"

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Hours later kripa woke up, she was back to normal, weeks had gone by and finally she had began walking and using her hands and feet again. Angad had taken really good care of her, and she was fit again. He had given her a second life with all her love, until one day, suryaban and gayatri walked through the halls, and opened the door to her room walked in and went up to kripa.

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Guys I hope you liked this part, I will continue soon, and thanx for all of the replies. last part coming up soon😉

Edited by Mimi_Rani - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Awesome Part Sukhi
Poor Kripa


thanx di, glad you liked it

Originally posted by: abhikidiwani

aaawwww so sad man i hate those kind of parents who blame the innocent kid man continue soon


i agree they are bad parents, but in the end will learn there lesson, and thanx for replying

Originally posted by: sameira-90

hey nice part...but i wonder why they are horrible to her...continue soon


thanx hun, you will soon find out why they are so horrible with her

Originally posted by: eijaz-anita

nice again1!! and so sweet of u,..uluv u for ur promise too!!


thanx hun, and yeah will start anjaana raasta as soon as pkhh aka pmh ends

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Awesome Part Sukhi

Its so not fair when parents treat all the children different, but they will realise one day its just so sad


thanx di, glad you liked it and yeah not all parents treat their kids equally but will realize their mistake

Originally posted by: nihita

great..................


thanx hun

Originally posted by: nihita

great...................


thanx once again hun

Originally posted by: rima791

aawww so sad god i hate her parents it will be better if you just kill them man i really think kripa should just runaway i mean how old is she ???? anyway it really doesn't matter since angad will be there to take care of her so plz continue soon


im sorry hun that it is so sad, but it will be better, and yeah i also hate her parents, and im sorry but i cant kill them, that would just be plain evil, lol, and kripa cant runaway because this is her past...lots of flashbacks, she is married to angad now and lives with him in mumbai...and thanx for replying will continue soon

Originally posted by: sameira-90

hey great part... i can't belive they could do something likethat she is there daughter....continue soon


thanx hun, and yeah some parents are very mean as you can see in kripa's case, thanx for replying will continue soon

Originally posted by: laksh_ktfan

such a sad part.... i hate kripa's parents... do continue soon


yuppie hun i also hate kripa's parents, thanx for replying i will continue soon and thanx again

Originally posted by: aksksara

Hey Sukhi. I really love this FF. It was a very emotional part. This iz a very touching FF. Plz cont soon. Waiting eagerly.


thanx sara, im glad you like it, thanx again will continue soon

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Awesome Parts Sukhi very sad


glad you liked them di, will continue soon

thanx a lot hun

Originally posted by: deeya123

such a nice part.i really feel bad for kripa


thanx a lot hun and yeah i agree i also feel bad for kripa, but life will change for her soon

Originally posted by: kuthi

plzzz continueeeee soonnnnnnn


thanx hun, lol, that made my day

thanx hun will continue soon

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thanx guys for all the wonderful comments you all gave me, i just have one part left maybe two and then this ff will end....your comments kept me going and i am very thankful to all of you a standing obation to all of you, lots of love to all who replied, read and liked my ff.....
sukhi

Edited by Mimi_Rani - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome part.
liked it.
Kripa is fine...good....Angad is so sweet and caring.
Kripa's parent 😡 😡 😡
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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please continue soon. can't wait for the next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very good
continue soon
angad is vey nice and caring
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guys,

i will post the part 6 today, but you know what come to think of it i should have made this a long ff.....hmmm anyone for an idea....i could restart it changing it around in a while....and then see if you all like it....please reply...thanx again will post the part in a few hours 😉
Edited by Mimi_Rani - 18 years ago

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