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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: ridhijai
Awesome part.
liked it.
Kripa is fine...good....Angad is so sweet and caring.
Kripa's parent
plz cont. soon

thanx dear....im glad you liked it 😳

Originally posted by: Patel 1993
please continue soon. can't wait for the next part

thanx dear will continue soon 😃

Originally posted by: lovefaz
very good
continue soon
angad is vey nice and caring

thanx dear will continue soon 😳

Originally posted by: rima791
continue soon

will do and thanx 😳

Originally posted by: ridhijai
Great looking forward to it.

thank you 😃

Originally posted by: amneet89
i think i m the world's worst sister...sorry princess wasn't able to comment in last parts but i just caught up...this ff is going tooo well...your are improving with every part...keep up the good work and cont soon

sorry once again and love u more than u

Asever

Amneet

di you are not the world's worst sister infact ur one of the best...and thanx a bunchie di....i love you too😃

Originally posted by: rima791
wow!!!!!! ok i understand that they got loss in business but that doesn't mean they should blame their new born baby who just stepped in this worldi think its so sad

i agree but some people arent fair...thankfully this isnt a true story but in some places this is how children are treated😭

Originally posted by: Anam Ali
Awesome Part Sukhi

It was really sad finally the parents realize their mistakes

i agree di and thanx for liking 😳

Originally posted by: ridhijai
Awesome part.
liked it.
so this is the reason...business...for their material loss...they started to hate an innocent child...who was not even at fault...
plz cont. soon

i agree some parents are like that....will do and thanx 😃

Originally posted by: sameira-90
hey great part.....continue soon

thanx and will do 😃

Originally posted by: Anam Ali
Awesome Part Sukhi

It was cute and romantic

thanx di but i personally thought it was crap...lol😆

Originally posted by: iamsmart
really cute and romantic part

thank you😃

Originally posted by: ridhijai
great part.
liked it.

thank you 😳

Originally posted by: Anam Ali
Awesome Part Sukhi

thanx didi😃

Originally posted by: iamsmart
aww angad is choo chweet and naughty

lol i agree and thanx for replying 😃

Originally posted by: ridhijai
Awwwww...such a beautiful part.
liked it...AK are so cute and sweet.
plz cont. soon

thanx dear glad you liked it and will continue soon thanx a bunchie 😃

Originally posted by: rima791
it was a cute part sorry i couldn't post a comment earlier don't think you are not good with romantic parts beacause you have the guts to try and here is me i try and i end up with nothing anyways continue soon

thanx a lot and lol im sure u can rite them......thanx and will do😃

Originally posted by: amneet89
hey princess,

i will count them as one part...you are not that bad at writing romatic parts...i m sure you are better than me...wait till i reach there...i m gonna suck at them...back to ff...lovely and cute part ...naughty naughty angad

cont soon and take care

love ya more than u

Asever

Amneet

okey didi go ahead and count them as one because i know they were short....lol, i was to lazy to write long parts....lol di im sure u can rite them....and yeah naughty naughty angad...will continue soon and love you too didi

Originally posted by: sameira-90
hey great part.....continue soon

thanx dear and yeah will continue soon😃

Originally posted by: deeya123
sweet part

thanx dear😳

Originally posted by: amneet89
well i really really don't mind a long ff princess

love ya more than u

Asever

Amneet

yeah but u know ur helping lol...after all were 50/50 partners love you too didi

Originally posted by: Anam Ali
Thats Awesome Sukhi

not really lol....i was hoping to end but will continue soon with the help of amu didi😉

Originally posted by: rima791
yay!!!! some more of this but one thing keep in mind plz i think you should give us regularely update plz i really enjoy reading this ff continue soon

thanx dear...and will work on it...but im kinda busy but will always update on the weekends promise.....thanx again dear 😉

THANX EVERYONE...for the wonderful comments and sorry for not being able to reply....will post a new part soon and then will make amu didi do a few lol...she is a better writer then i am 😉

Edited by Mimi_Rani - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago

#52

I do believer there was a 50/50 partnership in that ;)

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eternal

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Posted: 17 years ago

#53

next parts up soon and then will make didi write the next three parts lol 😆

Edited by Mimi_Rani - 17 years ago

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eternal

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Posted: 17 years ago

#54

CHAPTER 9:
Angad ran after kripa, he searched in the parking lot but she was no where near, he looked around ten minutes passed and he still didn't see her, his heart began aching for her, his heart beat increased, he was scared he was scared, terrified he began screaming "kripa, kripa where are you?" he looked here and there but she was no where near. Fifteen minutes went by and she was gone, he went around running, screaming asking people where kripa was, but no one knew it was as though kripa had vanished. Days went by and kripa was now labeled as MISSING.

Angad had forgotten how to live, life without kripa was nothing, his life was gone, his heart had stopped beating, he had stopped breathing. We walk into a room and see angad in a drunken state, red eyes and dried tears on his cheeks continuously repeating "KRIPA…PLZ WAPAAS AA JAO…WHERE ARE YOU…KAHAA HO TUM?" and he passed out, life was like this continuously for angad ever since kripa left. Somewhere else we here, "nahin chodo mujhey, plz leave me, leave me, mujhe yahaan nahin rehna hai….mujhe jaane do!" you see the person's eyes, red from crying, her lips trembling with fear and her entire face its none other then kripa sitting with her legs and arms tied up, screaming to be let out of this place, she had to let angad know, she just had too, she had wanted to tell him that night but how could she have everything happened so fast...

FLASHBACK:

Kripa ran outside, she was breathing hard and trembling with excitement she was very happy, ANGAD WANTED KIDS…his wish would soon be granted, yes she was pregnant. She heard footsteps, she smiled it was her angad, his perfume gave him away, she smiled and began speaking, "angad main tumse pyaar nahin kaarti, koi hai jise main bohot pyaar kaarti hoon, he is so cute and I love him….(she continued as she didn't hear anything) ….okay baba mazaak kar rahiye thi main sirf tumse pyaar kaarti hoon lekin humara Aryan tumse cuter hai, hai main maa barne waali hoon aur tum baap…." she turned around when she didn't hear a thing from him, the minute she turned around she dreaded it, it was…..person was back, to ruin her life, not again, tears formed in her eyes and it went black.

END OF FLASHBACK

WHAT HAPPENED, WHO IS BACK😭

Edited by Mimi_Rani - 17 years ago