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very very nice
thanks alot
please continue
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Wow Great Start. It has my Fav TV Stars. Please Continue 😊

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Episode #2
Its 2 o'clock in a bright sunny friday afternoon. Bebo and Rohan are taking their afternoon nap.
All the older khanna siblings are bored including Mr. &Mrs. Khanna. Everyone his in the living room watching tv. Vedika goes n turns off the tv.
Prem, Purab & Arun: Why did you turn off the tv? little mad. Jassi, Dish, Karu, & Umaji are relived. All turn around look at Vedika

Vedika: since it di last afternoon with us n we have three hours before the henna cermony lets do
something.

Prem: Like what go to sleep? Making a face that he is about to go to sleep.

Vedika: hey guys have a idea lets play a game?

Purab : A Game? US?

Vedika: (jokes to her brother)Bhaiya are you saying we are old n we have no rights to play a game. 😆

Jassi: Excuse me hubsandji who are you calling old? folding her arms at looking at Purab half 😡 😡 n half 😆 😆

Purab: I didn't mean that! Forget whats the game?

Prem: Is it truth n dare?

Veds: No Bhaiya.

Disha: Is it playing cards game?
Ved: No Di>

Evryone looking at Vedika with curious eyes. 😕

Vedika: No! Its a Pyar Question Game!

Everyone shocked: what?

Ved: yes simply its like spinning the bottle. whoever
the cap part will land on they will be the person that is asked a question about love? the person that has the bottle bottom pointing at it will be the person who
asks the question. What do you say?

Disha, Jassi, Karu Daddyji: sound intersting

Purab: Fine suits me

Prem: mom do you want to play? making a face at her.

Uma: Who me no beta u guys play?

Purab: Are u scared of losing?

Uma: No u know what infact i will love to play this game. 😡

Disha: Whats the rule?

Niks: First everyone lets seat in the circle.
(Everyone gets cushion from the coach Purab n Prem moves the coach in a corner. Everyone sits in a circle. Karu, Dish, Niks, n Jassi gets something to eat. While Arunji gets a empty soda bottle. Vedika goes uptairs in her room n gets question and a hat to put the questions in and also carries her cd player. Ved goes downstairs n sits in her place next to jassi n dish)

Vedika: O.k guys are u ready?

Everyone: excited says "YES"

Ved: Rule #1 everyone has to ask& answer the question truthfully. If not u can sing or dance to the music in my cd player. If you donot have a question their is some questions about love in this hat. Does any one has a question?

Karu: Who will be the judge?

Vedika: the judge will be all the person that except the two person that the bottle lands on. If the majority loves the question they will clap n if they will not like the question they will not clap.

Prem: O.k lets start? He spins the bottle shocked it lands on him and Disha.

Disha: Bhaiya what do you think love is ?

Prem: Well i think love is a friend who is their in ur good n bad times without their selfish reason. Love is between a husband n a wife who trust each other n understand eachother good n bad times. 👏 👏

Everyone appluads n Karu smiles at her husband.

Prem spins the bottle again. It lands on niks n ved

Ved: Di what do u think of arrange marriage?

Niks: blushing i'dont know i think it is a old custom that has been in our culture since a long time. If mom & dad plan arrange marriage for me i will go for it because i know my parents made a right decision for me.
😳
Uma n Arun look happy at eachother n smile at Niks.
Next niks spins the bottle it lands on Purab n Karu.

Karu: Bhaiya what will u do if u forgot bhabis b-day n your wedding anniversay because of your meeting?

Purab smiling n looking at Jassi: i will have to sleep on the coach n their will be a world war three going on. (everyone laughs )

Jassi: that it? 😡

Uma: lets give one more chance.

Purab: thanks mom. Seriously i will make up the next day (looking at jassi) first in the morning i will have rooms filled with flowers. then i will present her choclate n teddy bear(how sweet) 😳 . then i will go n buy a nice sari, n necklace for her. Then i will take her out on a romantic candle light dinner. Then i will tell her to close her eyes n present the necklace in her hand. 😛 What do you say to that mrs. jassi khanna?(she gets up n gives him a hug n goes back to her spot)everyone applauds 👏 👏

Karu: lucky you bhabi you have a nice romantic hubsand like bhaiya? i wish i had one winks at prem laughing

Prem: (almost yelling) what are u saying i am not romantic. 😡
🤢
Karu: when did i say that? teasing everyone laughs at prem who is little 😡 .(karu spins the bottle lands on jassi n ved)

Jassi: Lets see vedika if u meant the guy who u gave the wrong directions to what will you do?

Vedika: Bhabi me i will say he is a loafer that he made a excuse to talk to a girl who he meant and if he is nice i will say sorry.😉

Prem: What thats mean?🤢

Vedika: Yeh not everyone easy to get? 😡(she spins the bottle n lands up on Niks n Jassi.)

Niks: Jassi Bhabi how will you act with bhaiya if u have something to tell or want something from him?

Jassi: Umms let me think smiling. Purabs looking. For the suprise i will take my husband to a candle light dinner n a boat ride under the hope stars have music playing where it will be the two of us and then i will whisper or tell something in the year. For me wanting something: thats not question because i already have what a girl dreams about a nice in laws, good husband and a wonderful son. purab goes n hugs jassi n kisses her on the forehead. everyone claps👏

Bye the way the kids are up and they are beside their grandparents watching n listing to the adults talk.

Prem: Disha & Karu u should learn something from ur jassi bhabi on how to be romantic to your husband. also dish gets some tips from jassi. 😉he laughs. He spins the bottle lands on Dish n dad

Dad: What will you do if you found that yours or d.k past was in your future n was trying to ruin your marriage life?

Disha: Simply i will aks be honest with d.k n tell him my past n about my ex boyfriends and i will ask him to be honest about his ex girlfriend also. if our past trys to ruin our marriage i will make sure that d.k and i have a good understanding and how love is strong that no misunderstanding is created between us and i hope we survive how marriage in good and bad time. 👏

Dad &Mom: Good answer beti (dad spins the bottle n lands on Karu & Mom)

Karu: mom how will you react if anyone kept a secret from u and its every important and you found out from a stranger. (everyone looks at her)

Mom: even though i found out from a stranger i will wait until any one of you guys come up and tell me by his or her self the truth then i will make a decision on what to do.👏 (everyone claps and her then she spins the bottle it lands on Jasi n Karu)

Jassi: What is marriage?

Karu: (loking at prem ) Marriage is not just about a husband or wife loving eachother. Marriage is commitment, understanding,communciting with eachother, respecting, loving, sharing sadness n happiness with ur spouse and also the reponsibilities of each other n taking care of ur family.(Prem goes n gives her hug) Every body claps

Disha: Good answer n good tip. (She spins the bottle n it lands on ved n dad)

Ved: Dad for your 4oth anniversay what will you do?

Dad: (joking looking at his wife )nothing smiling

Uma: What are u tired of me already? (she is stands up) 😡

Bebo n Rohan: Dada do something Dadi is mad?

Dad: Just kidding! (he laughs n then he goes to his wife and takes her hand) Mrs. Uma Arun Khanna will u do the honors n marry m again? (Uma shocked) For our 40th wedding anniversay i think u are a great mother n wonderful wife? (Uma spechless. Everyone one stands up and claps.)

Uma: How romantic? I will love to. 😳

Then suddenly dad sings:Sau saal pehle mujhe tumse pyaar tha
Mujhe tumse pyaar tha, aaj bhi hai, Aur kal bhi rahega, Sadiyon se tujhse milne jiya beqaraar tha, Jiya beqaraar tha, aaj bhi hai, Aur kal bhi rahega.... (everyone claps and dance in a circle. Uma hugs her husband)

Vedika: Oh my god! (Everyone looks at her)

Vedika: look how the time as past it almost four thirty we only have one hour n half to get ready since the henna cermony of di starts at 6.

Prem & Purab: aww it the game over it was getting intersted. oh well we can play it when ved n niks gets married 😉(but inside they are relived that the game as ended)

Disha (goest to ved n hugs her) thanks for planning this wonderful family game, u know how much everyone means to me in my family (she
gets little emotional)😭

Ved (touched n also emotional) Di it was nothing all i wanted was to play game with my sister and my whole family before u get married tomorrow. (she crys and hugs dish and they both start to cry now everyone get emotional)😭

Prem: (wiping his tears) come girls lets get ready u know its take girls for ages to get ready😃

Karu & Uma: what do you mean by that? accting as if angry😡

Prem: Nothing (he goes out with the dishes n cup n bebo helps him and they go in the kitchen).

( Vedika gets the game stuff n takes it to her room. Everyone goes up stairs to get ready for the cermony by taking a shower. Before that everyone went to the dinning room to eat n drink something. Karu n Jassi first get the kids ready by fedding them something n then giving them a bath n readying them. )

preview episode 3 will be about the cermony n sangeet. what character do you think is the guy who asked ved a the directions in episode 1.

please reply thanks for reading

ziddi

Edited by ziddi - 20 years ago
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Episode #3
The Mr. Khanna, Purab, n Prem are downstairs ready n it almost time for the guest to arrive.Purab is in a black sherwani w/gold scarf n pren is dressed in blue sherwani with white scarf. Bebo is wearing a lime green salwar kamez n rohan is wearing blue shirtwith black pants. they are playing rock paper siccsors with each other.)

Mr. Khanna: Purab n Prem beta

Purab n Prem ( both reply) yes dad

Mr. Khanna: Who will go to the door n greet the guest?

Prem: Bhaiya will? (looking at his brother)

Purab: Why me?

Prem: because u are the oldest.

Mr. Khanna: why don't both of you greet the guest.

Prem n Purab: yes dad (both looking disappointed)
When they are about to leave towards the front yard Uma comes in.

Rohan: wow dadi you are looking dashing! (rohan smiles n hugs her dadi who is wearing mustard color zari sari)

Uma: thanks beta

Purab: where are the girls?

Uma:they are almost done they will be down here in 10 mins.

Prem: these girls bhaiya takes a long time to get ready? 😡

Mr. Khanna: Prem go its 6'o clock go n greet the guest. (guest are starting to arrive)

Prem: Yes dad he leaves.

Mr. Khanna: (looking at his wife)did dev n kiran call to tell when they are coming? (dev sharma is arun best friend who he knew since preschool n kiran is his wife, they are great friends.)

Uma(looking at her husband)yes they did call they are in a meeting but they will make it to the wedding.

Purab: Mom, Dad look what the cat has brought in(they look at him n see a guy in blue suit has come in.)

Mr& Mrs. Khanna : Suraj beta tum? (Suraj is Mr& Mrs. Sharma only son who is good friend with the Khanna kids. the khanna kids treat suraj like a family member. In child hood Suraj was close to Vedika. Suraj was studying in New Zealand in business course for about six years n he didn't have the chance to come to Purab or Prem wedding but his parents came.)

Suraj: Namaste Aunty, Namaste Uncle(he goes their n takes their blessing)

Mr. Khanna: where are your parents?

Suraj: uncle they are at a business meeting at the hotel but they will come tomorrow.

Mrs. Khanna: Its ok we are happy that you came today. how was your journey?

Suraj it was great. expect?

Purab: expect what?

Suraj: expect today in the moring i had encounter with a girl who was in a hurry and bumped into me at kabira sweets n i asked her the direction to this house n she gave me the wrong direction that led me into the police station. (bye then prem come in)

Prem: wow suraj she made a poppat out of you? (they all laugh expect suraj who is little angry then he looks n notice two kids )

Suraj: Who are these cute kids? (Uma goes n by where Rohan n Bebo are n take them where suraj is standing)

Uma: Suraj beta this Rohan Purab n Jassi son. And this Bebo Kareena's n Prem daughter. (She looking at the kids) Kids this is your Suraj uncle.

Rohan n Bebo: Ram Ram Uncle(they go n hug him)

Suraj: Hello (looking at kids n hugs them) Wow both of u guys have wonderful children(looking at Purab n Prem) he hugs rohan n bebo

Purab n Prem: thanks yaar

Suraj: I am sure that your kids go the look from their moms.(joking n smiling at them) (Mr& Mrs. Khanna leave to greet the guest who have come. From the upstairs the girls start to come down who all were in disha's room getting dressed. Kareena is wearing a yellow n blue leghna, then Jassi is next who is wearing yellow n black sari, then its disha who is wearing a yellow sari, and then its niks who wearing a yellow n pink lega. All stop n look at suraj)

Prem n Purab look at their wives who are looking dead hot Both of the wives smile at their husband..

Niks n Disha: Who are you ?(Prefering to Suraj)

Purab: Disha n Niks this is our Suraj? Do you remember the chubby suraj who ved used to called moto. (he laughs)

Disha: Oh yeah i remember him(she goes n hugs) Suraj when did u get here.

Suraj: about ten minutes a go. (looking at niks) do you remember me or have u forgotten?

Niks: No of course i know u but i was waiting for my turn? (she also goes n hugs suraj)

Suraj: Who are you beautiful lovely ladies? (refering to Jassi n Karu)

Prem (getting jealous) Hey stop flirting with ur bhabis. This is Kareena my wife (goes next to her)

Purab(he also goes to jassi) and suraj this jassi my wife.


Suraj: Namaste Jassi n Kareena Bhabi nice to meet u.


Jassi n Kareena: reply same here (Uma comes in where the kids are)


Uma: come girls lets get ready for the cermony. (all the girls are about to leave then Ved walks in she is doesn't see him because he has his back to her n talking to her brothers. bebo goes n greet her. Vedika is wearing a yellow two piece suit)

Bebo: Excuse me Suraj uncle?

Suraj: Yes bebo.(he turn around n looks at ved is shocked n angry so is ved) what are you doing here?😡 (all the khanna children look around)

Vedika: Me? Excuse me this my house? And what are you doing here?😡

Uma: Suraj n Vedika do u know each other? have u meant? (she looks at them)

Vedika: who is angry? Yes mom i meant him at kabiras restranut. He is the one that asked me the direction. (Dish, Niks, Jassi, n Kareena look n think so Suraj is the guy ved made a fun of and called him a loafer)

Suraj: Excuse did you just call aunty Mom?


Uma: Suraj beta this is Vedika my youngest daughter. Vedika this your childhood friendSuraj Mr. & Mrs. Sharma's son who came from New Zealand.

Vedika: chubby its you (who is relaxed ) i am sorry for what happened today i thought you were a loafer who was trying to take advantage of girl who was in a hurry. i am also sorry for giving you the wrong direction n sending you to police station.

Suraj: Its o.k my sweetu friend. you owe me a favor (he goes they shake hands n hug)

Ved: o.k chubby as long as you are not mad at me.😃

Uma: i am glad this clear.(Everyone shakes their heads are relived that they solved the problem)

Prem: that my sister.

Uma: o.k kids lets go to the living room where the sangeet is about to star. all go to the living room n they sit dish on a chair n all the disha friends, her two sisters n her two bhabis start to put the turmeric powder on her.)

Prem tells DJ Pat to play music. He goes by to Kareena n takes her hand n they dance to shava shava. Purab n Jassi also comes. Tara comes with her mom n they go greet everyone. Tara introduces her mom to ved .

Tara: Mom this vedika my best friend.

Vedika: Namaste Aunty (takes her blessing)

Kavita: Namaste Beta(Uma goes to kavita)


Uma: Kavita i am glad u came to the sangeet? where your husband n sons?

Kavita: i came with tara to here n they went to d.ks house. uma u have a very pretty daughter.

Uma: Thanks (Uma n Kavita leave) Tara n Vedika also join the others n start to dance.

Purab n Jassi lip sing to the song Sona Sona Roop n then Prem n Karu also join in. (Vedika introduce tara to suraj they both greet each other and ved explains to tara everything and all laugh)

Vedika n Niks dance on the song from aaina n banno terii ankhiyaan suramedaani banno teraa mukhadaa laakh kaa re
banno teraa kangan hai hazaari banno teraa kangan ... which is deciated to disha. all the three sisters get emotional. Then prem n purab come and they start to hug their sisters😭 Mr. & Mrs. Khanna this n they also get tears in the eye. Suraj takes a picture of this n so does the photographer.

Tara tells Pat to play tote tote n all the siblings dance to this song.👏

Uma tells the guys to leave n go to the tenant because it is time for the henna cermony.

Prem n Purab: Mom does that me we have to leave(whinnig like a kid)

Uma:(folding her hands) Yes all the boys have to leave (hearing this tuffy leaves) see that a gentleman(looks at him who ran to tent with suraj) now it your two turns.

Vedika: sorry bhaiya no guys aloud. Purab n Prem unwilling leave the house to go to the tent set outside.

Its time for the henna cermony were the professional come n put it on disha n head n feet. they put a heart in middle of her left plam that says dk loves disha.

In the background the song: Yeh mehndi, yeh mehndi mehndi sagadaa di,
Mehndi lagaoongi main, sajnaa ke naam ki ,Kuch naa khabar mujhe ab subho shyaam ki, Main sun rahi hoon yeh kaisi sadaaye
and also the song Bandh Mutthi Mein Dil Ko Chupaye Baithe Hain
Hai Bahana Ke Mehndy Lagaye Baithe Hain, Mehndy Ha Ha Mehndy Mehndy Ha Ha Mehndy while the mehndi is put on disha hands.

Its 10:30 all the guest leaves n so does Suraj who goes to his hotel. All the Khannas are tired after they eat n talk for a while they go to their rooms. Since its disha last night disha, nik and ved sleep in disha room with her n they talk for a while.

Ved : Di i can't belive u are going to leave us?( looking sad at dish)😭

Disha: i know its so weird that for the rest of my life i have lived here than tomorrow i will be married and go to dks house.

Niks: yeh di its going to be weird n its going to be all the two of us.

Ved: i know we will miss u di.(All three of sisters go n guys together)😭

Disha: Hey you two i will com n visit you.

Vedika: smiling but you wont have time with looking after the family, jiju and the kids.

Disha: (wiping her tears smiling) hold on i am not married yet you are talking about my kids. (all laugh)

Disha: Soon it will be your turn also(looking at Ved n NIks)

Ved & NIks: Di (shocked) Its not funny.

Disha: O.k. sorry Good Night Ved n Niks

Ved: Goodnight Dis

Niks Good nigh Di n Ved

They all go to sleep.. Before Ved n Niks go to bed they plan how to steal the shoes n where to hide them and how to seat the groom brother n his friends on the papad.

Preview Epiosde#4: tommorrow is the wedding of disha n dk.


Edited by ziddi - 19 years ago
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Very nice Ziddi. It's getting interesting.Can't wait to read more. Pls hurry up.
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hummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm very nice plz keep posting
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that was very nice
plz cont soon 😆
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thanks for the comments
i will post the episode this afternoon
the reason for the delay is that i was having probelms with my computer
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Episode #4 The Wedding Day Part I
Readers this will be a boring part before the wedding that happens but Episode #4 will be continued.
(Disha, Niks, Jassi and Karu are singing the aarti in the Pooja room. Mr. &

Mrs. Khanna get emotional seeing Disha because today is the day of her bidaii. After the pooja everyone leaves and goes to see if the wedding preparations are going on o.k.)

Mrs. Khanna: Has anyone seen Vedika n the kids?

Jassi: Mom she has gone to the mandhir with them.

Tinu: kamchor Vedika

Karu: Prem teach the bird some respect.

Prem: (laughing) Tinu is right.

While in the mandhir……..
Vedika purchase flower n coconut. She is carrying a tali n so r Rohan and Bebo there is little smaller that has sweets. They take their shoes of n go inside the mandhir n Vedika rings the bell with her left hand. She gives the tali to the pandit n they pray. All 3 of them close their eyes n bow their in front of the god.

Vedika: (to herself) please gods keep my Di happy in her married life w/ D.K. I hope there is no obstacle in their happiness may she live happy with him for 7 lifetime.

Rohan: (to himself) please god can you give me a younger brother not a sister so I will have someone to bug Bebo.

Bebo (to her self): thanks god for the wonderful family. Please keep us happy.

(Vedika takes the tali n the kid takes the parsad from the pandit. They disturb the parsad to the people sitting on the stairs of the temple. They wear the shoes and leave Bebo waits for Rohan to tie his shoe. A guy wearing a white kurta bumps into Vedika.)

Guy: Sorry

Vedika: its o.k. next time be careful and watch were you going.(searching for the kids)

Guy: I will remember that. Are you looking for some body?

Vedika: No it o.k.

MOM (both of them turn around and she sees that Rohan and Bebo are standing in front of them Bebo winks her left eye to Ved and she understand. 😉

Vedika: Where were you to?

Bebo: Mom I was with Rohan Bhaiya you know how slow he his tying his shoe.

Guy: Are this two your kids? (Shocked) 😕

Vedika (trying not to laugh) Yes they are this is Rohan and Bebo.

Rohan n Bebo: Hello Uncle 😆

Guy: hello (to him self) wow she doesn't look like a mother of two children. She doesn't even look married.

Vedika, Rohan, and Bebo: Bye take care (they turn and leave laughing and walk towards the car) 😆

Vedika: thanks guys for saving my life. Let's go to the ice cream parlor for some ice cream. What do you say? 😛

Bebo and Rohan: (excite) yeah let's go

At the ice cream parlor

Vedika (to the cashier) I will have an ice cream sundae.

Bebo: I will have the rocky road ice cream.

Rohan: I will have the green mint ice cream. (After paying for the ice cream

Vedika leaves with the kids. They reach home.)

Prem: Where are Vedika and the kids? (He is mad because he is here helping with the chores while Vedika and kids are having fun) 🤢

Tuffy: Woof Woof (he runs to the door where Vedika and the kids are coming in one hand they are carrying the tali and in the other hand they are eating the ice cream)

Vedika and kids: Good morning everyone, Hi Tuffy (they give him the laddo from the tali and gives the tali to Karenna while the kids give their tali to their grandma)

Uma: Where were you? (Looking at Vedika)

Vedika: Mom we went to the mandhir to pray for Di happily married life with jiju and then we went to the ice cream parlor.

Prem: You went to the ice cream parlor n didn't bring me an ice cream. How mean. (making a face like a little kid) 😡

Bebo: come on dad we brought you some parsad.

(Sangeet is starting the music's are playing all the last arrangement are being made before the wedding that at six o'clock. Niks and Ved are frying the papad and they are setting the papad on the bench and covering with white cover for the bride's devar. Also the papad is crushed a little so it doesn't make some noise when the devar's sit on them. The telephone rings for Ved and she receives the call.)

Vedika: Hello may I know who is calling?

Suraj: Hello Ved its Suraj how are you?

Ved: Hi Suraj I'm fine.

Suraj; Remember you owe me favor from yesterday.

Ved Yes what do you need?

Suraj: See there is a girl I love for three years but I do not know how to propose to her and my parents don't know that I have a girlfriend.

Ved: Wow you have a girlfriend and we don't know about her. (Excited) What's her name?

Suraj: Her name is Malika Shegal.

Ved: Malika Shegal (hmm) I think I know her from somewhere.

Suraj: (confused/ shocked) what you know her?

Ved: Yeah she is the sister of D.K jiju.
Suraj (shocked) what?

Ved: it is a small world. I have an idea. (She tells something to Suraj)

Suraj: that's a great idea Ved thanks. (Both of them say bye) 😳

Thanks for reading ziddi.

Edited by ziddi - 19 years ago
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Episode # 4 continued
D.K Shegal weds Disha Khanna
The atmosphere in the khanna's house is filled with happiness and tears of joy. The two bhabis and Dish's sisters are getting her ready she is looking gorgeous in the bridal clothes. They here the groom procession and they go see from the terrace the groom who is on the horse. Suddenly Ved eyes fall on the guy in the blue sherwani. Jassi & Karu have not meant Dhruv & Vedant but they have seen their pictures with their husband and heard lots of good comments about them. During the wedding Tara will not introduce Ved &Niks to her two brothers n Purab n Prem will not also introduce them.

In the background: Aaj Meri Yaar Ki Shaadi Yeh

Ved: (shocked) bhabi do you know him (points to the guy in blue sherwani) 😕

Jassi: Yes he is Dhruv ur brothers know him. And the one is black is Anatrish and the one in red u know him is Vedant. Do you have a plan for stealing the shoe? (They leave for downstairs)

Niks: Yes Bhabi the kids are involved.

Ved: so is Suraj.

Karu: What is the plan? (Niks whispers the plan to her bhabis and Ved goes to Tinu she gives him a laddo and four crackers and also tells him what to do and he makes a deal with her)

Downstairs:
Mrs. Khanna does the aarti of the groom and they enter. Niks and the others are behind her watching. Ved is eyeing the shoes where he takes of. Vedika is with her brothers and Suraj telling the plan and they agree. Video cameras are around the house and the photographer is taking the pictures of the guest who have come. Vedant is also looking and he is telling something to Anatrish and Dhruv.

Bebo & Rohan: Hi Vedant uncle? How are you all? (Dhruv is shocked to see them.)

Vedant: Hi u look pretty.

Dhruv: Yeah what are you doing here? (Shocked) 🤢

Bebo: this is my house and this is my bua's wedding. Uncles have a sit.

Prem: Dhruv & Anatrish this is Bebo she is my daughter. And this is Rohan he is Purab Bhaiya's son. (He points to them)

Dhruv: (to himself how come they have one mom and two dads? What a strange family) 😕

Bebo: Fufa have a seat. (She sits him on the chair with flowers on it)

D.K where are Ved n Niks?

Purab: they are here some where.

Vedant: relief. Where are Malika and Tara?

Bebo: they are with bua.

Vedika: (talking to Malika and Tara ) I am so glad to see you. Malika I have a surprise for u but u have to wait until the ceremony is over.

Malika: O.k.

Tara: let's go where the groom and his guards are? Do you have something plan for them? (looking at Vedika)

Vedika: Yes you will see the plan #1 in few minutes. (They leave and go toward where D.K. is sitting and the guys are about to sit)

Rohan: have a sit. (All three of them sit down and they here a crack)

Dhruv, Vedant, n Anatrish: Thank you. (Bebo n Rohan takes them to the bench where the papad is hidden under the covers. Prem, Purab, Jassi, Karu, Malika n Tara, are watching) 😊

Everyone is laughing except Dhruv, Aant, & Vedant who get up from the seat and wipes their backs. Vedant picks the covers and everyone except Niks n Ved are shocked to see papads. 😆

Ved: (is behind of Purab): Namaste Jiju . Poor guys you didn't thought that I will let you go easily. Plan #1 accomplished.

D.K: (laughing) Namaste Ved.😆

Vedant :( little angry) you set us up. 😡

Niks (is behind Prem): Of course what did you expect? 😃

Vedant: This means war. 😡

Niks & Ved: We accept. (With Tara n Malika they leave to go upstairs)

Dhruv (to himself: I have heard this sweet voice somewhere but where then he remembers meant someone at the mandhir.)

Purab: Excuse me Dhruv& Anatrish you have meant my son this is my lovely wife Jassi.

Dhruv: (shocked) Namaste. 😕

Anatrish: Namaste

Jassi: nice to meet both of you

Prem: Dhruv and Anatrish this my wife Kareena.

Karenna: Namaste, nice to meet you both.

Dhruv & Anatrish: Same here.

Dhruv (talking to Rohan & Bebo) If these are your parents who was the lady with you today at the temple. 😕
(Prem, Jassi, Kareena, & Purab are confused like what he is talking about)
Rohan & Bebo: oh uncle she was our younger bua Ved. We thought you were a loafer that was trying to flirt with her so we called her Mom.

Prem (laughing) Sorry Dhruv we told our kids that if u c a stranger trying to flirt w/ur bua's then call her mom. 😆

Dhruv (relief) Wow what wonderful ideas u r teaching ur kids.

The guys take D. K to the mandap. Vedant is carrying a gift box with him. Tuffy sees this n so does Tinu n Ved understands n goes w/them. She winks her eye to Tara and she tries to distract Vedant.

Tara (shyly) Vedant what are u doing with the golden gift box in ur hand here let me put in the gift section.

Vedant: No Tara its o.k. (holding the box tightly)
Rohan: Uncle a guy is trying to flirt with Malika Aunty n he is bothering her. (Vedant get up n quickly leaves n gives the box to Tara)

Ved: goes there n takes the box n open it to see the shoe and she takes the shoe and puts it in the laddo box and in the gift box she puts laddo. Ved leaves n puts the laddo box in her closet in her room and locks her room. Then she goes to Disha's room.

Vedant: Thanks Tara for taking care of my parcel.

Tara (looking serious) U r welcome. Bye I have to go.

Jassi, Niks, Vedika, Karu, bring the bride to the mandap n sit her next to D.K. Ved n Niks faces are relived for the first time to the grooms side. Vedika is wearing a red n green lehga with a light jewelry n the jumka n she has her green duppta covering her head n her hair is tied in a choti. Niks is wearing a pink n green lehga with jewelry n her hair is curled and she also has a green duppta. Anatrish just stares at Niks and while Dhruv stares at Ved during the ceremony. The wedding rituals are done with the pheres n filling the sinndoor in the maang n the magalsuit. After the wedding Ved, Malika, & Niks take the bride n the groom to the stage where everyone can coagulate them n take pictures.

Ved (talking to Malika) Come with me I won't u to meet someone.(she takes Malika to Mr.& Mrs. Sharma)

Ved: Aunty & Uncle This is Malika Suraj 's girlfriend. Malika this is Suraj parents (she takes their blessing)

Aunty: so this Malika. Well Malika beta it is nice to meet u where r ur parents.

Niks: Aunty here they r. (they turn around to see Mr.& Mrs. Shegal w/Niks. Ved n Niks introduces them all n tell them that Suraj n Malika love each other for three years.)

Ved: Sumirta Aunty have u brought the engagement ring,

Malika: (shocked) Mummy Papa engagement ring?

Mr. Shegal: Yes beta Ved called us in the morning n told us everything. D.K. and Vedant know about this.(he gives the engagement ring to her)

Malika: thanks Ved n Niks. (She hugs her parents n Ved n Niks, they leave toward the stage)
The music turns on n Suraj comes n with other dancer towards the stage n sings nach nach ke…

Ved n Niks push Malika toward the dance floor n Suraj. Suraj takes out a engagement ring n puts it on Malika's finger n she is happy n she does the same thing. Everyone throws flowers at those two and claps at them. Vedant n D.K r happy for their little sister but sad that she
Anatrish to Niks sings Aaye Hum Barati n Dhruv sings Ladikwalo to Ved.
Its time for the bidaii (everyone is surrounded by the bride n groom)

Vedant (talking to Niks n Ved) So guys where is the shoe. (smiling) 😛

Niks: U won so u do not have to pay us anything. Please get the shoe.

Vedant: see our plan did work thanks Dhruv (he goes n gets the golden gift box n opens it n his shock to see) Laddo

Dhruv n Anatrish: Laddo? I thought we put the shoe in this box. How shoes did became laddo. 😡

Dhruv: Where are the shoes Vedant?😕

Vedant (shocked) I don't know

Niks n Ved: (looking serious enough not to laugh) Poor guy where r the shoes? 😃

Jassi (serious) If u had the shoes how did it become laddo? (looking at Vedant)

Vedant: I don't know bhabi. (scratching his head)

Vedant: Give us the shoe?

Ved: Pay us first?

Vedant: How much?

Niks: 2,000 rupees

Vedant: that cheating.

Tara: it not because?

Vedant: because what?

Purab: because Disha's is the oldest n everyone is close to her.

Purab: he is right.

Prem (looking at D.K) Niks n Ved u r asking them less asks them more.

Dhruv: Prem u r not helping.

Prem: What when I got married Jiya asked me $5,000 rupees. (Jiya is

Karenna's younger sister).

Purab: When I got married Jassi's cousin asked me $5,000 rupees also.

Anatrish: Purab u are also not helping.

Ved: Fine make it $4,000 rupees.

Niks: (looking at D.K)sorry Jiju I think u have to go bare foot.(Dhruv, Ved, Vedant n Niks start arguing)

D.K : (almost yelling everyone looks at him n quiets) Excuse me I will like to say something. I am the owner of Kanaka Empire n my salis r asking me just $4000 rupees that's cheap. I will pay them $10,000 rupees in cash since they are nice. We get this chance once in a life. Unless?

Ved (looking happy n relived) Thanks jiju how nice of u. unless what?

D.K (making a funny face) unless I get married again. (He laughs and so does the groom side)😆

Ved: Good one brother (laughing)

Niks & Ved (angry) Wow what a great husband u r. today is ur wedding n u r talking about another. We r telling Di.

D.K. (looking serious) sorry salis I was just joking.

Ved & Niks: we were also joking (they go n hug D.K.)

Dhruv: lets make a deal. Give us the shoe n take the money. (Looks at

Vedant n Anatrish) What do u say?

Anatrish, Vedant, n D.K : We agree.

Ved n Niks: (satisfied) we also agree (they leave n go to Disha' room n come back downstairs with the shoe but they give to Prem n he takes it.)
Dhruv , Vedant n Anatrish are singing Joote Dedo, Paise Lelo n Ved, Niks, n Tara join them. (after the song Ved n Niks give the shoe to D.K. n he gives them the money. Ved gives $1000 rupees to Tara, Niks, the kids, Prem, Purab, and her bhabis n keeps the 1,000 to her self.)
it is now time for the Bidaii

In the background the song playing is…….
All the family member take turns hugging Disha n everyone is crying she goes back n hugs Niks n Ved. Suraj n his parents r crying. Suraj Prem , Purab Ved, n Niks still crying put Disha in the car with D.K. finally the bride leaves with her groom to her new house. The groom procession leaves with the bride n the groom. All the guest leaves around 10:30p.m.
In the Khanna everyone is sad that Disha left. They go to the pooja room n pray that disha lives happy in her new home with her new family. Everyone remembers Disha's childhood days when she was young n times spent with her. Then they all go to sleep.

Hope u like it. For first wedding I was trying to do a filmi wedding episode like hum aapke hain koun..!
Hope u enjoy it.

Please make comments n suggestions.
Thanks for reading ziddi.



Edited by ziddi - 20 years ago

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