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Posted: 16 years ago
awsome parts, just finished reading whole parts i missed [:p]!
Hope Kripa will get her memory back soon i'm nt happy seeing Angad sad 😕 and that Ridz 😆 poor herr she is stuck in this shaadi funda with Angad who shes loves but he doesn't! Shabd i wonder whats wrong with him, something iis fishy with him and that girl😕. Ammy is in hospital so u better get him better or else i'll send u to hospital😆 my pooor baby 😳.
Keep it up and continue soon.
Love, Laiba
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Part 77

Angad- I dunno Laiba Ammy can tell us wen he wakes up hes still unconcious hes in da ICU

Laiba- Wah he hasnt regained concious (Laiba runs 2 da ICU)

Angad- Laiba!!!!!!!!!!

Ridz cms

Ridz- Angad yeh sab kaise hua I fought u were all cmin mandir 2geva

Angad- Ridz we were buh Ammy had 2 go smwer so we were waiting 4 him, and den we recieved a fone call frm da hospital tellin us bout da accident den we came ere I dunno hw all dis happened once Ammy regains concious hes in da ICU

Ridz- Angad dnt wori Ammy will be k

Angad- I hope so

Nw we c Laiba sittin in da ICU holding Ammy's hand and crying, Summit and Kumkum were outsyde they so all dis

Kumkum- Ammy ko abhi thak hosh nahiye aiyah itneh ghanteh hogeh shaam hogayi hai

Summit- Haan Kumkum mein jakar doctor seh baat kartha hoon

Kumkum- Tike hai mein jakar andhar dhekthi hoon

Summit goes 2 talk 2 da doctor and Kumkum goes in da ICU

Kumkum- Laiba beta go and eat smefing beta shaam hogayi tumneh subha seh kuch nahiye kaya, mein yahin hoon

Laiba- (Cryingly) Mama, Ammy ko abhi thak hush nahiye aiyah mein kaise ka sakthi hoon

Kumkum- Beta tumahre Papa ghe hue Doctor seh baat karneh beta plz thoda sa kaloh

Laiba- Nahiye Mama Im not hungary

Just den Angad came

Angad- Mama aap aur Papa ghar jaiyee aur araam kariye mein abhi yahin hoon

Kumkum- Lekin Beta (Interuptted)

Angad- Mama plz aap loge subha seh yahin hai jakar araam kariye

Kumkum- Tike hai beta hum baad mein ajayenghe let us know bout Ammys condition, aur haan beta plz Laiba ko keh woh khaanah kaye she hasnt eaten

Angad- Tike hai Mom dnt wori

Kumkum goes outsyde

Summit- Kumkum did Laiba eat anyfing

Kumkum- Nahiye Summit kuch nahiye kayah auseneh Angad ko batha diya hai he will make her eat, kya kaha doctor neh Ammy keh bareh mein

Summit- Agar raat thak hosh nahiye aiyah toh Ammy keh liye acha nahiye hogha, they ahve assured me saying that he should be awake by den ab chaloh hum ghar chalteh hai tum khud Laiba, Ammy, aur Angad keh liye khannah bananah phir hum hospital ajayenghe

Kumkum- Tike chaliye hum ghar chalteh hai

Summit and Kumkum go home

Nw we c Angad and Laiba in Ammy ward

Angad- Laiba plz dnt cry and eat smefing

Laiba- No Bro I'm not hungary

Just den Angads fone rings itz Ridz he goes outsyde 2 anwser it

Angad- Yh Ridz wah happened

Ridz- Hwz Ammy Angad?

Angad- Hes da same abhi thak hosh nahiye aiyah

Ridz- Oh k wer cmin hospital inabit

Angad- K Bye

Just den we c Ammy and Laiba

Laiba- Plz Ammy get up I promise I will neva fight wid u plz Ammy (she cries more)

The tears fall on Ammys hand he open his eyes

Laiba- Plz Ammy get up

Ammy- Laiba!!!

Laiba- (Happily) Ammy (she hugs him) tumhe hosh agaya thx god tumhe patha hai mein kitni daar gayi thi agar tumhe kuch hojatha toh tumbhinah Ammy bikul apna kyaal nahiye rakthe hai

Ammy- Laiba mera kyaal rakneh keh liye tumho nah

Laiba- I will be right bck I will just call da doc and tell bro

Laiba goes 2 call da doctor and tells Angad

Meanwhile we c Kripa wid da gang in Starbucks Cafe

Kripa- Uno Bro yesterday we went 2 Calgary Park it waz so much fun I wil take u lot der

Rob- Kripa wah bout da clubs ere

Kripa- Yh der r sm clubs ere 2

Sam- Wah bout shoppin centres? I wana get sm new dresses

Lucky- No I h8 SHOPPING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tanz- Shurrup Lucky

Kripa- KK nw dnt start fightin Lucky and Tanz uno wah Bro I fink 4 der last semester u should send dem both 2 different uni rememba we talked bout it b4

Sujal- Yh I agree Im still observing dem both if they dnt stop fighting I will send dem

Lucky/Tanz- NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WER SORI DNT SEND US DIFFERENT UNIS PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!

Sujal- Wel fink bout it nw quit it

Kripa- Ders Shabd (Kripa greets Indrajeet, Monaramah and Balma) Kaise hai aapsab

M/I/B- Hum sab tike hai

M- Tum kaisi ho beti aur yahaan kya karahi ho in logo keh saat, yeb sab toh (Interuptted)

Kripa- Chachiji yeh meri family hai dats my Sujal Bro, dats Sam, Rob, Lucky and Tanz u lot dis Shabds Uncle and Aunty and dats Shabd Auntys Bruva

Da gang meet dem

Shabd- Ab hum ghar chalteh hai wers Alisha?

Sujal- Shes just gne 2 da shop der she is

Balma- Behenah yeh toh Alishi hai hamari Alishi

Manaroma- Chupkar Balma Alishi toh salwaar kameez pehnah karthi thi ise neh toh dress pehenah hua hai ab chal

They all go 2 Kripas Nani house Sengupta Mansion they meet all da family, Alisha is really scared juse den Madan cmz 2 meet Kripa

Madan- Elow Kripa kaisi ho (he hugs her)

Kripa- Im very very happy Madan Sujal Bro has cm 4 da engagement, I waz missing dem all very much

Madan- Dats gr8 der all ere hw r u Sujal Im seeing u all afta a long tyme

Sujal- (Angrily) Wer fine wah u doin ere Madan

Madan- I have cm 2 meet Kripa its been ages since i seen her

Shabd- (Angrily) U just so her yesterday in da Park

Madan- Oh yh buh u no wah i mean wen wer in skewl we use 2 c each oda everydy buh nw we hardly meet

Kripa- Madan u can cm everydy ur always welcm ere

Madan- Thx so much Kripa ur so sweet

Meanwhile we c Summit, Kumkum and Ridz in hospital they bought food 4 Ammy, Laiba and Angad

Kumkum- Ammy beta yeh sab kaise hua

Ammy- Aunty woh dharsal mein drive karaha tha aur ek bacha meri ghari keh samneh agaya aur I couldnt put da breaks so I reversed da car da oda way and den ma accident happened

Kumkum- Beta ab tum rest karoh aur khannah ko

Ammy- Gr8 Aunty mujhe bahuth bhook laghi hai I h8 hospital food, Aunty aapneh zaroor Aloo keh parenthe banaye hai itni achi khushboo arahiye

Laiba- Ammy paranthe tumahre liye nahiye hai tumhare liye vegetable soup hai tike hai ab jaldi seh koh, jab thak tum poori tarah tike nahiye hojathe tum spicy khannah nahiye kasakthe samje

Ammy- Dats nt fair Laiba Angad tell her plz

Angad- Ammy Laiba tike rahiye hai u gta eat healthy especially nw dat ur ill tike hai

Ridz- Yh Angads rite heres da soup

Ammy- EWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ridz can I have coke atleast

Ridz- Sori Ammy u cant only fresh water

Ammy- WAH LAIBA!!!!!!!!!!! u atleast understand me uno hw much I luv coke and (Interuptted)

Laiba- Sori Ammy ur nt well so only fresh water wid ice ok nw eat

Ammy- ANGAD HELP!!!!

Angad- Sori Ammy all dese fings r gd 4 ur health as ur ill so eat

Ammy- Angad wah kinda friend r u ur so mean ur nt lettin me eat ma favourites foods, kya zamana agayah hai dost dost na raha

Angad- Ammy ghanah baand kar aur eat ur food aur phir tumhe medicines bhi leni hai

Summit- Haan medicine bhi lenhi ab jaldi seh koa (fone rings) haan bhaiya hum hospital mein hai tike hai hum abhi athe hai (he disconnects da fone) Kumkum humhe abhi ghar janah pareghe relative aiye hue hai humhe milneh chaleh

Kumkum- Tike hai chaloh Angad beta tum Ridz, Laiba ko lekar baad mein ajanah

Angad- Tike hai Mom

Summit.Kumkum- Ammy beta apna kyal raknah tike hai aur khanaah sab khatham karnah hum kal subha aiyenghe bye beta

Ammy- Thx Uncle, Aunty

S/K- Ur welcm beta

Summit and Kumkum leave

Ridz- Angad mera sare mein dard horaha can we go outsyde

Angad- Tika hai chaloh hum athe hai thodi dher mein

Angad and Ridz leave

Laiba- Ammy eat

Ammy- Laiba itz yuck

Laiba- Ammy eat or I will have 2 feed u

Ammy- No I dnt want it

Laiba- U have 2 eat it I will feed u myself

Ammy- KK in dat case I will feed u dnt wori not soup yummy paranthe tumneh subha seh kuch nahiye khayah

Laiba- Lekin Ammy (Interuptted)

Ammy- No lekin wekin be quiet and eat

Laiba and Ammy feed each oda food

Laiba- K nw have water wers Bro and Ridz they are takin yrz

Ammy- They should be cmin

Laiba- Ammy ab tum araam karoh k mein abhi athi hoon

Ammy grabbed Laibas hand

Ammy- Laiba rokjoa na

Laiba- Ammy Im cmin k just gna c wer bros gne I need 2 tell him smefing k

Ammy- K cm quick

Laiba goes 2 fynd Angad and Ridz

Nw we c Ridz and Angad outsyde talking

Angad- Ridz is ur head beta nw

Ridz- Yh Im perfectly fine Angad I just wanted 2 spend sm tyme wid u, and I wanted Ammy and Laiba 2 spend tyme 2geva uno Angad da only guy dat can keep Laiba happy is Ammy

Angad- U mean u just lied so we can cm ere and they can spend sm tyme 2geva

Ridz- Yh sori buh its da truth dnt u want Ammy and Laiba 2 be 2geva

Angad- I do buh only if Laiba wants 2 nw cm on lets go insyde

Just den Laiba came

Laiba- Bro, Ridz r u lot cmin

Angad- Yh wer cmin

Laiba- Ridz is ur head beta

Ridz- Yh Im fine nw lets go insyde

Nw we c dem in Ammy's ward they all talked loads just den da nurse came

Nurse- Helo Armaan hw r u feeling nw?

Ammy- Im fine thx much beta den b4

Nurse- Dats gr8 can u all wait outsyde Im just goin 2 examine u

Every1 goes outsyde

Nurse- Ok everyfing fine

Ammy- Nurse wen can I be discharged

Nurse- Not yet in bout 2-3days wer gna take ur blood test 2moraw morning and (Interuptted)

Ammy- WAH!!!!!!!!!!! NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MUMMY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nurse- Armaan u r being very childish its very necessary 2 take da blood test I promise it will go fine, k I have cheked ur blood pressure its normal I will call ur friends insyde nw

Ammy- Thx Nurse

Nurse- Ur welcm

Da Nurse leaves every1 cms insyde

Angad/R- Ammy y did u scream

Laiba- Ammy tum tike toh honah I gt so scared

Ammy- Im fine da nurse just told me i gt blood test 2moraw and I h8 needles

Angad started laughin

Ridz- Angad stop laughin dats mean

Angad- Uno yeh Ammy ki poorani aadat hai he is so scared of needles, he shouldnt be scared Ammy it will take less than a minute U will be fine

Ammy- Waheva in dat I'm scared

Laiba- Dnt wori Ammy I will be rite ere wid u I promise

Just den da headnurse came

Headnurse- (Angrily) Visiting hours are finished so u all have 2 leave, only family members are allowed 2 stay u must be Mrs Armaan Malik pointing 2wards Laiba u can stay and u 2 may leave

Laiba- Buh Nurse I (Interuptted)

Ridz- Laiba dnt wori I will send ur clothes and stuff ok tc of Ammy bye

Angad- Buh Ridz (Interuptted)

Ridz- Chaloh Angad we have 2 go home I will explain on da way

Angad/Ridz- Bye Ammy apna kyaal raknah

Ammy- Dnt wori mera kyaal rakneh keh liye Laiba hai bye

Angad and Ridz leave and Laiba stays in da hospital

Nw we c Angad and Ridz in da car

Ridz- Angad I will explain da nurse fought Laiba waz Ammys wife rite so she let her stay, dnt u fink sm1 should stay wid him hes nt well Laiba is da perfect choice he will recover fast as Laiba is der

Angad- I fink ur rite thx Ridz

Ridz- Ur alwayz welcm Angad

PREVIEW- JOSH AND ALIYAH ENGAGEMENT

- SHABD AND MADAN FIGHT

- AMMY DISCHARED FRM HOSPITAL

-ALISHA 2 LEAVE GANG

Edited by Anam Ali - 14 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shafoo

wowowow niceeeeee part

Thx a lot 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
Woah bad precaps!!
Ok the Armaan and needle scene was funni.
I kno u hate needles too!! Which made me laugh harder.
Ur funni.
The water and soup scene was funni as well.
Armaan singing dost dost na raha.
Omg jst crazy!!
Angad is sooooo cute!!!!!!!! I LOVE ANGAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kripa is saying things without realziing which is pretty kool. Plz cont soon di and P me wen u update.
Harji
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Posted: 16 years ago
Woah bad precaps!!
Ok the Armaan and needle scene was funni.
I kno u hate needles too!! Which made me laugh harder.
Ur funni.
The water and soup scene was funni as well.
Armaan singing dost dost na raha.
Omg jst crazy!!
Angad is sooooo cute!!!!!!!! I LOVE ANGAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kripa is saying things without realziing which is pretty kool. Plz cont soon di and Pm me wen u update.
Harji
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Posted: 16 years ago
omg u werent joking.. how mean!llol and to answer ur comment... u think u love imraan more.. my siggy's are OLD not that i dont love them but yeah.. if u didnt put ammy in here i'd support shabd but since ammy-ridz are here i support ak!lol and u no what... u can have lucky but imran's mine....(i like imran more than angad, shabd, and lucky all together!)lol

as for ur fanficc.. loved this part.. so alisha is alishi.. she is related to shabd.. then why doesnt he recognize her or vice versa..? MADAN'S BACK????ughhhh!!!never liked him in here but im thinking he'll play a big role in getting kripa's memory back, even if it's unknowingly..lol

continue sooon!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: -Laiba-

awsome parts, just finished reading whole parts i missed [:p]!
Hope Kripa will get her memory back soon i'm nt happy seeing Angad sad and that Ridz poor herr she is stuck in this shaadi funda with Angad who shes loves but he doesn't! Shabd i wonder whats wrong with him, something iis fishy with him and that girl. Ammy is in hospital so u better get him better or else i'll send u to hospital my pooor baby .
Keep it up and continue soon.
Love, Laiba

Thx a lot Laiba 😃🤗 I missed ur comments
U will fynd out in da nxt part i have updated it already well ur Ammy will be fine dnt send me hospital i h8 it i been twice since da start of da year, i had a blood test 2day as well 4 da 2nd tyme its so annoying😭😡 I will update again soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Angad-Kripa#1

Woah bad precaps!!

Ok the Armaan and needle scene was funni.
I kno u hate needles too!! Which made me laugh harder.
Ur funni.
The water and soup scene was funni as well.
Armaan singing dost dost na raha.
Omg jst crazy!!
Angad is sooooo cute!!!!!!!! I LOVE ANGAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kripa is saying things without realziing which is pretty kool. Plz cont soon di and Pm me wen u update.
Harji

Thx a lot Harji 😃 Yh I gt inspired frm myself I had anova blood test 2dy I waz kinda scared da needle is 2 big its horrible🤢😭 yh da song fitted in well wiv da whole scene yh she is u neva no her memory might cm bck in a few parts 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: brainychild92

omg u werent joking.. how mean!llol and to answer ur comment... u think u love imraan more.. my siggy's are OLD not that i dont love them but yeah.. if u didnt put ammy in here i'd support shabd but since ammy-ridz are here i support ak!lol and u no what... u can have lucky but imran's mine....(i like imran more than angad, shabd, and lucky all together!)lol

as for ur fanficc.. loved this part.. so alisha is alishi.. she is related to shabd.. then why doesnt he recognize her or vice versa..? MADAN'S BACK????ughhhh!!!never liked him in here but im thinking he'll play a big role in getting kripa's memory back, even if it's unknowingly..lol

continue sooon!!!!

Thx a lot 😃 Soz i werent joking had 2 make it abit serious 😆 well I luv Imran more uno nw i gt sm1 2 argue wid 4 Imran ma sistas and cuzins dnt like Imran so its k no1 2 argue wid, i suppose wel have a lot of fights ere 😆😆
Wel Shabd dunno her he only knows her as Alisha he met her in da gangs house u will find out more about her in da nxt part, yh ur rite bout Madan u neva know Kripa memory myte cm bck in da nxt few parts im taking yrz 😆😆
I will update l8ter
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thx a lot 😃

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