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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: brainychild92

hahaha YESS!! lovethe ending nd precap... !but now im thinkin wat if ridzi teams up with somebody and becomes evil!!!imma cryyyy!!! damn memory loss cant be that bad.. even i had it a little bit for a while but i never forgot my family and enemies.. remember, "keep your friends close and enemies even closer!!"(sun-tzu).and im thinkin shabd is enemy somhow!!lol

continue soon!!

Keep reading 2 fynd out wah happens yh dats tru we should always keep our enemies closer u will fynd out in da coming parts if Shabd is evil or not and Kripas memory will be bck soon 😆
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Thx a lot 😃 Nxt Part in about 2-3 hours
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Part 75

Shabd arrives at da Valentines Party and he sees Kripa wiv Angad holding the valentines trophy he gt really angry he threw da teddy bear and gift he had bought 4 Kripa and went outsyde

Ridz so all dis and went 2 talk 2 Kripa

Ridz- Kripa I need 2 talk 2 u cm wid me

Kripa- Ridz wah happen

Kripa- Wahz rong?

Ridz- Dnt get me rong Kripa buh uno u and Angad r gettin 2 close I mean I no ur friends and everyfing buh u c 2days valentines day and he waz meant 2 me wid me buh coz of dat stupid game he had 2 be wid u and u both were very happy Shabd came and he so u guyz 2geva and he went he bought u dis big teddy bear and dese gifts he luvs u and 2day u should be wid him buh u were wid Angad MY ANGAD!!!!!!!!!! I'm saying it very nicely 2 u plz stay away frm Angad and be wid Shabd he luvs u

Kripa- I no Shabd luvs me and I luv him me and Angad r friends nuffin more it waz just a valentines game Ridz I no Angad urz I would neva snatch him of u ur just gettin insecure

Ridz- I'm insecure I luv Angad u should go look 4 Shabd he waz in a very bad mood

Ridz goes insyde

Kripa goes 2 look 4 Shabd she sees him by da bench she goes 2 talk 2 him

Kripa- Shabd!!!

Shabd- (Angrily) GO AWAY KRIPA!!!!!!!!!!! I DNT WANT 2 TALK 2 U

Kripa- Shabd wah did I do it waz just a game listen 2 me plz I went outsyde 2 fone u and u didnt anwsa wen i gt bck da lights went off and den they came on and I waz standing nxt 2 Angad and then (Interuptted)

Shabd- ENOUGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kripa- (Cryingly) Shabd plz meri baat toh suno

Shabd- Kya baat suno Kripa I fought u will be waiting 4 me buh u were wid Angad and u looked very happy nw go I dnt want 2 talk 2 u

Shabd leaves Kripa sits on da bench and cries Josh cmz der

Josh- Kripa y u cryin wah happened

Kripa- (Cryingly) Bro woh Shabd (she tells him wah happened) hes gettin everyfing rong dis waz just a game he left he didnt even listen 2 me

Josh- (He hugged her) Kripa plz dnt cry I will talk 2 Shabd y is he overeacting he wasnt like dis b4

Kripa- Bro he doesnt trust me anymore dunno wahs rong wiv dem

Josh- Kripa lets go insyde u gta have ur medicine as well I will talk 2 him l8ter

Kripa- Bro I wana go home nw

Josh- K I wil just ring Shaz and tell her 2 cm

Kripa- Ok

Josh rings Shaz and she cmz and den they leave they go bck 2 their grandparents house

Shaz- OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BRO!!!!!!!

Josh- Wah happened Shaz y u screamin im rite ere u no Im not in the garden

Shaz- Bro we gta go bck at da party I left ma purse

Josh- Wah Shaz ur so irresponsible and forgetful

Shaz- Sori Bro can we go bck nw plz

Josh- Shaz Mom Dad can bring it 4 u I will just ring dem

Shaz- No I wana go plz Bro lets go

Josh- Ok let me give Kripa medicine 1st den we will go

Shaz- Ok

Josh gives Kripa medicine and then Shaz and Josh leave they go bck 2 da party

Kripa goes 2 her room as soon as she goes in da room da light goes on and all the flowers fall on her theres heart balloons everywhere and flowers, teddy bears, gifts and nw we c Shabd wiv a big teddy bear in his hand

Shabd- HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kripa- Shabd I fought u were angry and (Interuptted)

Shabd- Kripa I wasnt angry or upset wid u dat waz just abit of drama so dat I can make u angry make u go home and den surprise u Im sori 4 shouting I made u cry Kripa ur 2 emotional u should nt cry

Kripa- Dat waz a very mean joke Shabd

Shabd- I no and Im very sori just needed u 2 cm home I no if i just came 2 da party we wouldnt get 2 spend tyme alone so dats y had 2 dis drama nw stop being angry and lets cut da chocolate cake

Kripa- Shabd dis cake is so cute and da teddy bear u bought is gurjus its da best gift (she hugs Shabd)

Shabd- KK I gt anova surprise 4 u nw close ur eyes

Kripa- Shabd hw many surprises u gna give me dis iz more den enough so many gifts teddy bears wah more do I want

Shabd- Plz Kripa close ur eyes

Kripa- KK

Kripa closes her eyes

Shabd- Nw open ur eyes

Kripa- OMG!!!! Shabd itz so beauitful heart pendant

Shabd- It opens as well look its gt 1 pic of u and 1 pic of me

Kripa- Yh it has its da most beauitful gift ever I luv u Shabd

Shabd- I luv u 2 (he hugged her)

Just den da door banged

Josh and Shaz came upstairz

Josh/Shaz- (Angrily) Wah u doin ere SHABD!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Shabd- (Whispers) Kripa ur Bruva and Sista ruined our moment

Josh- (Angrily) WAH R U DOIN ERE? I ASKED U A QUESTION SHABD R YA GNE DEAF OR SMEFING AFTA ALL U SED 2 MA SISTA U CAME ERE GET OUT RITE NW

Shabd- Josh ur gettin everyfing rong it waz all a drama

Josh- DRAMA DO U FINK IM DUMB GET OUT RITE NW

Kripa- Bro he waz joking I will tel u wah happened (she tells him wah happened)

Josh- Shabd all of dis wasnt necessary anywayz I will show u ur room itz quite late

Shabd- Buh Josh (Interuptted)

Josh- Shabd itz 11 o clock its past ur bedtyme so go 2 ur room and Kripa have ur medicine and go 2 sleep, Valentines day is over Shaz show Shabd his room and I will give Kripa medicine

Shaz- K Bro

Shabd- (Whispers) Dats nt fair itz valentines 2dy Shaz I dnt like ur Josh Bro seriously he is hitler he ruined my valentines surprise

Josh- Did u say anyfing Shabd

Shabd- (Scaredly) Nuffin Bro I waz just tellin Shaz dat wers ma room Im really sleepy its past my bedtyme

Josh- Shabd I will personally take u 2 ur room cm on

Shabd- Bro I waz saying (Interuptted)

Josh- U were saying nuffin lets go

Josh drags Shabd out da room Shaz and Kripa couldnt stop laughin

Shaz- Di Shabd gt dne nw Josh Bro gna give him lecture

Kripa- Yh tru buh he dne all dis 4 me

Shaz- Yh Its just so sweet all dese teddy bears, gifts ur so Lucky Di Shabd really luvs u

Kripa- Shaz dnt wori Im sure der wil be sm1 der 4 u 2 and ur prince charming will cm soon and den U will get dese fings 2

Shaz- Yh if im dat Lucky dat stupid idiot Rob iz 2 busy wid his gang

Kripa- U wah u luv Rob

Shaz- 2 be honest Di its nt luv its kinda a crush

Kripa- Shaz dnt wori der will be sm1 nyce der 4 u buh not Rob because hes in ma gang and he luvs Kasturi u c wen Imrans gang came 2 stay he told me he really likes Kasturi

Shaz- Buh Di hw do u rememba al dis

Kripas head started hurtin

Kripa- Dunno Shaz dunno ma head hurts im goin sleep wel talk in da mornin

Shaz- Di r u sure ur ok shall I call da doctor

Kripa- No I'm F9 dnt wori I will go sleep and I feel beta

Shaz- U sure Di I will call Bro

Kripa- No its ok dnt call Bro hes 2 busy wid da deals already he will get worried and dnt call Alisha either ok Im fine ok nw u go 2 sleep k

Shaz- Ok Di nyte

Kripa- Nyte

Shaz- (To herself) Wahs rong wid Di I waz talkin bout Josh Bro not Sujal Bro I fink her memorys cmin bck

Shaz goes in da kitchen Josh waz der makin tea

Josh- Shaz u want tea

Shaz- Bro wahs rong wid u who drinks tea nyte tyme den u cnt go sleep afterwards

Josh- Well Nanima wants tea so I fought I wil make tea for her Moms really tired I cant be asked 2 wake da servants up so I'm makin tea

Shaz- Ok Bro u should of told me I would have made it

Josh- (Laughs) Shaz seriously u making tea have u ever made tea ever da last tyme u entered da kitchen 2 make food u almost burnt da whole kitchen

Shaz- Dat iz so nt funni Bro I accidently put da tissue on da handle instead of da cloth so dats y I nearly burnt da kitchen, anywayz Bro I wanted 2 tell u smefing Kripa Di memory is cmin bck (she tells him wah happened)

Josh- Wah I will call da doctor

Shaz- No Bro shes sleepin rite nw she needs rest

Josh- K

The nxt day we c Angad, Ammy and Ridz talking

Angad- Ammy have u fought of a plan yet wer goin mandir 2 meet panditji inabit can u plz sort dis out

Ammy- Dnt wori I will sort it dnt wori

Ridz- Haan Angad tum chintha maat karoh everyfings gna be ok

Just den Laiba came

Laiba- Wah happen Ridz y u telllin Bro everyfing gna be ok

Ridz- Laiba wer goin 2 panditji 2dy 2 show my kundli Angad waz just gettin worried 4 me

Laiba- Oh k Bro everyfing gna be fine dat reminds me Ammy me and you r goin 2 collect Mayank and Priyanka frm airport and Bro and Ridz u are goin mandir wiv Mom and Dad

Ammy- Laiba i gta go 2 wiv Angad and Ridz they need moral support

Laiba- Dnt fink so on dat Mom and Dad r der ur goin wid me now lets go

Ammy- Laiba plz listen 2 me

Laiba- No ur cming wid me

Angad- Ok Laiba he will go wid u 4 nw can u go and tell Mom wer ready 2 go

Laiba- K Bro

Laiba leaves

Ammy- Angad wah is ur problem I waz gna cm mandir buh nw ur sending me wiv Laiba 2 get ur cuzins dats nt done

Angad- Go wid Laiba she wants u 2 cm wid her and I want ma sista 2 be happy

Ridz- Yh Im sure u must of told her ur feelings yesterday and nw everyfing k

Ammy- Hold on listen yh I havent confessed my feeling 2 her da last tyme i told her she gt angry, uno shes my best friend atleast she talks 2 me as soon as I tell her I luv her more den a friend she doesnt talk 2 me uno we are best friend and I'm happy wiv dat so frm nw on I wont confess my feelings, Laibas happiness is more important 2 me her friendship is important 2 me

Laiba heard everyfing wah Ammy had said

Ridz- Laibas cm Ammy u should be goin

Ammy- Yh k I will c u lot l8ter bye

Angad/Ridz- Bye

Ammy and Laiba leave

Meanwhile we c Kripa, Shaz, Shabd, Josh and der family sitting down in da lounge Aliyah and family had cm 2 meet dem der rishtha waz fixed da engagement will be taking place nxt week every1 waz very happy

Nw we c Manhattan da gangs house we c Sujal talking on da fone 2 Kripa

Sujal- Kripa seriously we cant cm Im 2 busy wid work

Kripa- No Bro u gta cm its Josh Bro engagement I want all of u 2 cm plz if u all r nt ere in 2 days I wont talk 2 u all (she disconnects da fone)

Sujal- Elow Kripa listen 2 me

Rob and Alisha cm

Alisha- Wah happen Sujal?

Rob- Bro waz dat Kripa I wana talk 2 her 2

Sujal- Rob, Alisha Kripa wants all of u 2 cm Calgary in 2 days its Josh engagement shes invited us all buh we cnt go Kripas memory myte cm bck and Ganga Aunty and Dev Uncle wouldnt want dat 2 happen

Just den Sujal fone rang again dis tyme it waz Ganga

Ganga- Hello Sujal Beta kaise ho

Sujal- Jee Aunty mein tike hoon aap kaisi hai aur Uncle kaise hai

Ganga- Beta sab tike hai woh dharsal Kripa neh tumhe fone kiya tha humneh Josh ka rishtha pakha kardiya agleh hafteh engagement tum sab ko do din mein anah hai Kripa wants u all 2 be ere ok toh beta jaldi seh ajoa

Sujal- Lekin Aunty Kripa ki memory I mean humhe dhekhar wapis na ajaye (Interuptted)

Ganga- Beta patha nahiye auseki memory agayi bhi ya nahiye she wants u all ere beta hum sab kuch sambaalenghe tum sab ajoa tike hai ab jaldi seh tickets book karoh aur Calgary ajoa

Sujal- Jee Aunty mein abhi tickets book kartha hoon aap Kripa ko bathadoh hum arahe hai

Ganga- Tike hai beta

Alisha- Sujal we cant go (Interuptted)

Sujal- We have 2 Kripa wants us 2 cm pack ur stuff I will just book da tickets Alisha Im goin ticket office and im gna get sm gifts u cm wid me and Rob tell da odas 2 pack der stuff

Rob- Ok Bro

Sujal and Alisha leave der book da tickets and nw we c dem shoppin

Sujal- Alisha I gta go I will take dese bags ok I ordered sm clothes and jewellery u collect dem and go home by bus ok or shall i call Rob

Alisha- No I will go on bus dnt wori

Sujal- Ok I will c u at home

Sujal leaves

Alisha collects da clothes and jewellery and she decides 2 buy sm more gifts Just den she sees 2 unexpected people she gets scared and runs frm der, she catches da bus and reaches home she locks da door

Alisha- SUJAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ROB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LUCKY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! TANZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Every1 came running

Rob/T/R/S/L- Wah happened Alisha?

Alisha- Lock all da doors, windows, quickly they have cm fone Sujal nw (she started crying badly)

Sam- Ssh Alisha its ok dnt cry wer all ere Rob, Lucky Tanz lock da doors and windows ok c they have gone 2 lock dem I will ring Bro

Sam goes 2 ring Sujal

Rob- Alisha wah happened tell us y u so scared

Alisha cried more

PREVIEW- DA GANG IN MANHATTAN

- DA TRUTH BOUT RIDZ KUNDLI

-A POOJA TAKES PLACE 4 ANGAD AND RIDZ

-MADAN,ARJUN AND SHALINI IN CALGARY

-JOSH AND ALIYAH ENGAGEMENT

Edited by Anam Ali - 14 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Omg di!!
WOW.
I wonder wat Alisha is crying abt.
Hope Sujal gets there first!!
YESS Kripa's memory is cuming back,
Oh tht line, tht line MY ANGAD. HOW CUD U DI!
Angad cannot be Ridhimma's!! He can only be Kripas!!
Besides Me.
LOL
Plz cont soon and dont 4get to PM me and dont be lazy like me.
Harji
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Posted: 16 years ago
wowow coolllllllll part i love it
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Angad-Kripa#1

Omg di!!

WOW.
I wonder wat Alisha is crying abt.
Hope Sujal gets there first!!
YESS Kripa's memory is cuming back,
Oh tht line, tht line MY ANGAD. HOW CUD U DI!
Angad cannot be Ridhimma's!! He can only be Kripas!!
Besides Me.
LOL
Plz cont soon and dont 4get to PM me and dont be lazy like me.
Harji

Thx a lot Harji😃 U will fynd out in da nxt part I had 2 write dat line😆 I will update l8ter or 2moraw dnt wori I will PM u
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shafoo

wowow coolllllllll part i love it

Thx a lot 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
Great part , but angad ko kripa ke paas laao , i dont want to see shabd .
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth

Great part , but angad ko kripa ke paas laao , i dont want to see shabd .

Thx a lot Monika😃 keep reading maybe AK be 2geva😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
I will Update 2moraw =)

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