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Posted: 16 years ago
are alisha's parents there or her care taker person.. or maybe someobe tried to take advantage of her beofre???and now she's freaked out...
and as for ridz, the pooja indicates a dosh in her kundli..is that what they're called?
the three baddies are back.. and HAHA josh yelled at shabd..i still think shabd is too good!! somethings fishy..cant wait for the engagement!!!continue sooon
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Originally posted by: brainychild92

are alisha's parents there or her care taker person.. or maybe someobe tried to take advantage of her beofre???and now she's freaked out...

and as for ridz, the pooja indicates a dosh in her kundli..is that what they're called?
the three baddies are back.. and HAHA josh yelled at shabd..i still think shabd is too good!! somethings fishy..cant wait for the engagement!!!continue sooon

Thx a lot😃 U will fynd out in da nxt Part I will update in da evening Yh well once da pooja is dome dat dosh will be cleared yh da evil people r bck 😆
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Part 76

Nw we c Angad and Ridz in da mandir wiv Summit and Kumkum

Ridz- Angad dnt wori

Angad- I have 2 wori Ridz waheva we told Mom and Dad about ur Kundli der gna fynd out dat we lied becuase ders nuffin rong wid ur Kundli

Ridz- Let Panditji c da Kundli k

Kumkum- Both of u be quiet

Angad- Sori Mom

Ridz- Sori Aunty

Summit- Panditji kya dosh hai Ridhima ki kundli mein

Panditji- Koi chintha walhi baat nahiye hai sirf ek pooja karni pareghi Angad aur Ridhima ko aur agar yeh pooja tike seh hogayi phir in dono ki shaadi hosakthi hai

Summit and Kumkum gt happy

Kumkum- Tike hai Panditji hum kal he pooja karenghe isi mandir mein hai

Panditji- Tike hai beta

Angad wasnt happy buh Ridz waz very happy

Nw we c every1 bck in Summit Bruva Viveks mansion

Renuka- Kumkum kya kaha panditji neh

Kumkum- (she tells her wah happened) Hum sab kal mandir jayenghe pooja keh liye aur phir agar pooja tike seh hoghi toh hum Angad aur Ridhima ki shaadi karsakthe

Renuka- Yeh toh bahuth khushi ki baat hai

Kumkum- Haan mein bahuth he khush hoon ab jald seh jald Ridhima meri bahu banke ajaye hamare ghar mein

Renuka- Waise Kumkum tumneh Laiba ki shaadi keh bareh mein kuch socha hai, meri nazar mein bahuth he acha ladka hai agar tum chaho mein rishthe ki baat karo

B4 Kumkum can say anyfing Summit spoke

Summit- Nahiye Bhabhi hum Laiba ki shaadi nahiye kareghe jab thak woh khud nah chahe, pehele humneh auseki shaadi pakhi kardithi aur woh toot gayi ab woh sirf apna graduation porah kareghi aur hamareh saat company mein kaam kareghi

Renuka- Tike hai Summit jaise tum tike samjoh

Just den Vivek came bck frm Office

Vivek- Renuka bache agaye

Renuka- Jee nahiye Laiba aur Armaan gaye hue uneh leneh unki flight delay hogayi abhi athe hoghe

Vivek- Acha tike meri liye chai lekeh aao

Renuka- Jee abhi lathi hoon

Meanwhile we c Calgary Airport Armaan and Laiba are waiting 4 Priyanka and Mayank 2 cm

Ammy- Da plane has landed its been 1 hour wer r ur cuzins

Laiba- They should be cming oh yh Ammy I 4got 2 tell u Mom foned and she said dat panditji told Bro and Ridz 2 do a pooja 2moraw in Mandir once dats done den they can married wenever they want

Ammy- WAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Laiba- Wah do u mean wat

Ammy- No I meant datz gd news

Laiba- Mayank and Priyanka have cm

Just den we c Priyanka and Mayank

Laiba goes 2 hug dem

Laiba- I missed u guyz loads

Mayank/Priyanka- We did 2 we were cmin last nyte buh der waz no flights

Laiba- Its ok ur ere nw

Priyanka- Laiba huz dis ur boyfriend hez fit

Laiba- (Angrily) Hes nt ma boyfriend hes Ammy my best friend

Priyanka- Hey Ammy nyce 2 meet u well ur name is kinda weird buh its cute just like u

Mayank- Pri quit da flirting and lets go home Im so tired

Ammy- My names Armaan every1 calls me Ammy 4 short yh we should be goin

Nw we c Mayank and Priyanka home Ammy and Laiba r also der, Mayank and Priyanka meet Summit and Kumkum and da rest of da family

Summit- Toh Mayank beta hws ur studies goin? u fought bout joining ur dads business

Mayank- Uncle rite nw Im completing ma post graduation den afta dat I myte be joining da business

Summit- Dats gr8 hw bout u Priyanka?

Priyanka- I'm in ma 3rd year so once dats done will be joining da business

Summit- Dats very gd acha bacho tum dono baatein karoh hum abhi athe hai

Vivek/Renuka- Hum office ja rehay hai I have made da food wen u want it da servants will serve it ok hum abhi athe hai

Mayank- Mom we just came and u r going

Renuka- Beta its an important meeting jaldi ajayenghe

Mayank- Tike hai Mom

Ammy talks 2 Angad and Ridz

Ammy- Angad I cnt believe dis u guyz neva said anyfing in da Mandir

Angad- We couldnt afta da pooja 2moraw Moms gna fix da wedding date and den wer goin bck 2 Manhattan dunno wah 2 do I told u b4 we should have told da truth

Ridz- Im sori Angad yeh sab meri wajah seh

Angad- Ridz dnt blame urself I should of told da truth

Ammy- We onli have 2 options either we tell da truth or either u delay da wedding and if not both of u get married

Angad/Ridz- No we cant get married

Ammy- Well den either tell da truth or delay da weddin I cnt fink of anyfing else

Ridz- Ammy wel delay da wedding fink of a plan

Angad- No we should tell da truth

Meanwhile we c da gangs house in Manhattan

Sam- Alisha I have rang Bro hes cming hes on his way its 2 much traffic wah happened tell us

Tanz- Here have sm water calm dwn

Lucky- Wah exactly happened I've neva seen u like dis

Rob- Yh dnt tell me Madans gang sed smefing I will kill dem

Just den Sujal came Alisha hugged him

Sujal- Alisha wah happened tell me wahs rong

Alisha- Sujal uno I so Buaji and her bruva der gna take me I dnt want 2 go wid dem

Sujal- Buh der wer bck in Cardiff

Alisha- They have cm 4 me

Sujal- Alisha calm dwn they wont cm ere

Rob- Y u scared of ur Bua

Tanz- Yh shes so old y she gna do

Alisha- U dunno I left ma house coz of her wen I waz 16 she ruined ma lyfe she made my life a hell, she made me a slave in my own house I cooked, cleaned dne everyfing becuase of her I left my house my memories she snatched everyfing frm me I left ma house wich waz my parents last memory Sujal and Kripa helped me gave me place 2 stay I went skewl wid dem, 2dy I so Bua and her bruva in da shopping centre she came bck 4 me Sujal I dnt want 2 go bck (she cried more)

Sujal- Ur nt going nower ur gna stay wid us ok wer going Calgary 4 a few weeks pack ur stuff our flights 2moraw

Alisha- Wah if she cms der den

Sujal- She wont I promise im here (he hugged her)

All da gang were shocked at Alishas story

Sujal- Ok u lot go pack ur bags wer leaving 2moraw morning

Every1 went 2 pack der bags

After a while da doorbell rang Alisha gt scared Tanz waz goin 2 open da door buh Alisha stopped her

Alisha- Tanz dnt open da door

Tanz- Alisha chill out plz itz probz Lucky da idiot left his key home hes gne 2 get sm fags and sm chocolates 4 me

Alisha- No Tanz dnt open da door

Just den Sujal came dwnstairz

Tanz- Bro Alisha wont let me open da door

Sujal- I will open it Alisha plz dnt wori y dnt u go 2 ur room and rest Sam take Alisha upstairz Rob u go 2 wah dnt u lot watch a movie

Rob/Sam- Ok Bro

Alisha- Buh Sujal (Interuptted)

Sujal- Alisha plz have sm rest we have long flight 2moraw look its definately gna be Lucky (Sujal opened da door and its Lucky) C I told u itz Lucky nw u lot go upstairz

Alisha,Sam and Rob go upstairz 2 watch a movie

Sujal- Ok Lucky, Tanz Im goin 2 Club just gna attend a deal meeting u lot pack ur bags wer leaveing 2moraw morning and while im gne dnt fight

Lucky/Tanz- Ok Bro

Sujal leaves

Tanz- Lucky wers ma chocolates

Lucky- OMG!!! I'm so sori Tanz I totally 4got

Tanz-(Angrily) U WAH U 4GOT MA CHOCOLATES HW DARE U LUCKY, U REMEMBERED UR FAGS AND 4GOT MA CHOCOLATES

Lucky- I totally 4got man soz I will get dem 2moraw y dnt u have fag instead of chocolates

Tanz- Look I dnt want a fag I want chocolates

Lucky- U c Tanz if u have chocolates u will put on a lot of weight and if u have fags u will lose weight so wah say

Nw Tanz waz very angry

Lucky- Dnt be angry Im saying it 4 ur sake look hw overweight u r already, so have a fag u will lose weight

Tanz- Lucky ur trying 2 say I'm Fat (she started hitting him)

Lucky ran upstairz

Lucky- ALISHA HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lucky went 2 Alisha room and hid behind her

Alisha- Lucky waz rong wid u

Lucky- Tanz iz afta me

Tanz- LUCKY!!!!!! UR SO DEAD

Alisha- Tanz, Lucky plz stop it both of u

Rob- Yh get out wer watchin movie ur disturbing us

Lucky- Tanz Im sori leave me alone nw yh ur not fat ok happy ur very fit, I will go get u ur chocolates and u Rob wen did ya have interest watchin bollywood movies

Tanz- Dats like it nw go quicktyme I'm hungary

Lucky leaves

Just den da fone rings Tanz goes 2 anwser it

Meanwhile we c Angad,Ammy and Ridz still trying 2 fink of a gd plan, just den Mayank, Priyanka and Laiba cm

Mayank- Wah plan r u lot on bout

Angad- Nuffin we were just talking

Ammy- Actually we were finkin we should go out and c Calgary

Laiba- Yh dat will be a gr8 idea so Mayank, Pri uno a gd place

Pri- Calgary Park itz awesome den wel go beach and shopping

Mayank- We gt 1 of da best clubs ere 2

Laiba- K wel go and get ready den wel go

Mayank- K

Nw we c every1 in Calgary Park

Thx 2 Harji 4 da pic

Just den we c Shabd, Kripa, Shaz and Josh in da park as well just den they c Angad,Ridz,Ammy and Laiba

Shaz- Laiba!!! hws ya?

Laiba- Im fine Shaz wah bout u

Shaz- Im ok wah u lot doin ere

Laiba- (She tells her wah happened bout Ridz kundli) so once da pooja is done 2moraw den we will be goin bck 2 Manhattan

Shaz- Ok k hopefully everyfing will be k itz Josh Bros engagement nxt week u gta stay until den

Laiba- Dunno depends on Mom, Dad

Shaz- I will tel Mom, Dad 2 convince dem

Nw Ridz waz angry wah waz Kripa doin ere

Ridz- Angad shall we go nw

Just den Madan and Arjun cm Madan hugs Kripa Angad and Shabd werent happy wid dis

Madan- Hey Kripa tum yahaan wat a pleasant surprise kaisi ho

Kripa- Im fine tum kaise wen did u cm Calgary

Madan- Tumhe yahaan dhekar mein bahuth bahuth khush hoon I came 2 c my uncle and aunty wah u doin ere?

Kripa- We have cm 4 Josh Bros engagement tumbhi anah its gna be a lot of fun

Madan- Congrats Josh I will defo cm

Josh- (Angrily) Thx humhe chalnah chahiye cm on Kripa, Yh Angad wel c u lot l8ter

Angad- Cya

Madan- K Kripa bye

Kripa- Bye

Shabd waz angry just den he recieved a fone call

Shabd- Excuse me mein abhi atha hoon its no reception ere

Shabd goes

Shabd- Y da hell did u fone me Shalini I told u I h8 u (interuptted)

Shalini- Enough Shabd I dnt want 2 hear ur old dialogues again dat u h8 me and luv dat Kripa I just foned 2 let uno dat I have cm in Calgary I can c u

Shabd- (Angrily) Y da hell r u ere

Shalini- 2 seperate u and Kripa dat y Iam ere u just wait and watch ur Kripa has already lost sm of her memory nw watch wah I do by dis she will lose all her memory

Shabd- I will kill u Shalini If u do anyfing 2 ma Kripa

Shalini- Im so scared Shabd NOT!!!!! (she disconnects da fone)

Nw Shabd waz really worried 4 Kripa

Meanwhile we c Mayank and Priyanka showing Angad, Ridz, Ammy and Laiba Calgary Park

Da nxt day we c da gang in Calgary

Tanz- Wow Calgary is a beauitful place I would luv 2 live ere

Lucky- Dats gr8 y dnt u stay ere den Bro can we leave Tanz ere I will be ever so happy 2 get of rid of her

Tanz- U wah u wana get rid of me

Lucky- Yh u annoy me 2 much

Sujal- Quit da fighting ok Kripa and Shabd should be cmin 2 collect us

Tanz/Lucky- Sorri Bro

Just den Kripa and Shabd cm they meet da gang

Kripa- Im so happy 2 c u all ere

Sujal- So r we really missed u

Shabd- Sujal Iz it ok if we wait 4 a while u c my uncle and Aunty are cmin as well der flight will be landing in bout half an hour

Sujal- Dats fine wel just go 2 da cafe and u can wait 4 dem cm on Kripa u cm wid us I gt loads 2 talk bout

Kripa- Me 2 Bro chaleh Shabd u will be ok

Shabd- Yh I will be fine carry on

Da gang and Kripa go 2 da cafe

Meanwhile we c Ridz in da mandir wid Summit and Kumkum,Vivek, Renuka, Laiba and Mayank

Kumkum- Yeh Angad kahaan pooja ka waqt ho raha hai

Laiba- Mom he said he waz gna cm wid Pri and Ammy

Kumkum- Beta go and fone him k

Laiba went 2 fone Angad buh his fone waz switched off and den she foned Ammy

Laiba- Elow Ammy wer r ya Moms waiting ere 4 u all wers Bro hes not pickin da fone up

Pri- Laiba its me Pri

Laiba- Pri buh dis is Ammy's fone hw cm u anwsered it

Pri- Laiba uno wah happened Ammy ka accident hogaya hai me and Angad Bro r in Calgary Hospital

Laiba- WAT!!!!! I'M CMING

Da pooja has begun nw every1 is just waiting 4 Angad Laiba tells every1 bout Ammy accident

Laiba- (Cryingly) Mama, Papa, Ammy ka accident hogaya hes in Calgary Hospital (she cried more)

Kumkum- KYA!!!!!!!! Chaloh beta hum sab chalteh hai

Panditji- Beti agar yeh pooja poori nahiye hui toh inki shaadi ek saal baad hoghi

Kumkum- Panditji humhe janah paregha Angad bhi wahan hai Ammy keh paas

Nw we c every1 in Calgary Hospital Laiba waz crying badly, she hugged Angad

Laiba- Bro yeh sab kaise hua

PREVIEW- ALIYAH AND JOSH ENGAGEMENT

- SHABDS UNCLE AND AUNTY MEET DA GANG

Edited by Anam Ali - 14 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
this is a joke right?? to get laiba to confess and/or stop angad's engagement... its a great part
ccontinue soon!!!!!!
ps.. that siggy with u and imran.. love it..
too i love him..lol!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
wowowow nice part i love it
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Posted: 16 years ago

Really gud!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Omg Tanz and Lucky are so funny. Oh my! poor Alisha ima glad Kripa helped her.
Oh god! Jeez di y cant u bring Kripa's memory back for gods sake?!
U kno wat day by day ur making me hate Ridz even more,
Ridz jst screw urself becuz ur not worth MY Angad.
Then again i might jst make Ridhima miserable in my ff so watch wat u do!
Poor Ammy!!!! Or was it jst there plan??!! Better be!
U kno i was expecting Sujal to have an accident and Madan to be involved in it and Kripa then gets her memory back and she promises to kill Madan.😆
But o well.
How can u be so patient?! I cant! I want her to get her memory back soon!
Anywyz u better cont soon and make Kripz's memory cum back soon!! GOT IT?!!
Harji😈
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: brainychild92

this is a joke right?? to get laiba to confess and/or stop angad's engagement... its a great part

ccontinue soon!!!!!!
ps.. that siggy with u and imran.. love it..
too i love him..lol!!!

Thx a lot 😃 Yh i luv ma siggy 2 and I luv Imran more den u😳😆 by looking at ur siggy u like Shabd and Angad both so who u supporting in da fanfic? and u luv Lucky 2 buh hes myne 😆
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Originally posted by: Shafoo

wowowow nice part i love it

Thx a lot 😃
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Originally posted by: Angad-Kripa#1

Really gud!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Omg Tanz and Lucky are so funny. Oh my! poor Alisha ima glad Kripa helped her.
Oh god! Jeez di y cant u bring Kripa's memory back for gods sake?!
U kno wat day by day ur making me hate Ridz even more,
Ridz jst screw urself becuz ur not worth MY Angad.
Then again i might jst make Ridhima miserable in my ff so watch wat u do!
Poor Ammy!!!! Or was it jst there plan??!! Better be!
U kno i was expecting Sujal to have an accident and Madan to be involved in it and Kripa then gets her memory back and she promises to kill Madan.
But o well.
How can u be so patient?! I cant! I want her to get her memory back soon!
Anywyz u better cont soon and make Kripz's memory cum back soon!! GOT IT?!!
Harji

Thx a lot Harji 😃 well yh me and Lucky were funny although it wasnt 2 hillarious yh dat would have been gd sujals accident and Kripas memory cmin bck, u will fynd out in da nxt part Harji u gta be patient Kripa memory will be bck soon i promise and dnt make Ridz evil in ya fanfic k shes nt evil in my fanfic shes just madly in luv wid Angad 😆
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