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Laiba

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Posted: 16 years ago

#921

OMG rocking part, just loved it😆 i wonder how come Madan is back 😡 kameena can't he stay away from Kripa 😡. I'm dying to read more and thank god my Ammy is fine. Kash i could really stay with him 😆. BTW sista, i have some proposal, let Karan Kundra or Robert Pattinson enter and then make me get married to them [$] i'll be in the 7th heaven 😆.

Continue soon,

Love, Laiba

PS: by the way, how come you got blood tests and all? is evreything fine? 😕 why didn't you tell me anything about it.? i know we hardly talk these days even weeks we can say but still you could let me know na 😕 ?Now do take care of yourself, i'm sure you'll get better but if next time i get to know you were at hos you're really dead from me😡 😆 kiya samjhi? [:p]

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Supernatural_10

@Supernatural_10

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Posted: 16 years ago

#922

Originally posted by: -Laiba-
OMG rocking part, just loved it i wonder how come Madan is back kameena can't he stay away from Kripa . I'm dying to read more and thank god my Ammy is fine. Kash i could really stay with him . BTW sista, i have some proposal, let Karan Kundra or Robert Pattinson enter and then make me get married to them [$] i'll be in the 7th heaven .

Continue soon,

Love, Laiba

PS: by the way, how come you got blood tests and all? is evreything fine? why didn't you tell me anything about it.? i know we hardly talk these days even weeks we can say but still you could let me know na ?Now do take care of yourself, i'm sure you'll get better but if next time i get to know you were at hos you're really dead from me kiya samjhi? [:p]

Thx a lot Laiba😃 yh Madan is bck wel he has 2 cm odawyse ders no fun in da fanfic 😆 yh ur Ammy is fine nw be happy wid him, Laiba da proposals cant be accepted be happy wid Ammy and leave da odas 😆

Yh I waz ill im beta nw they were chekin wahs rong they my bones are weak and i gt less vitamin D in me so they gave tablets, dis part waz insprired by me 😆 im so sori Laiba aint talked 2 u hardly be onli9 cm onli9 soon and PM wen u cm I will update 2moraw

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Supernatural_10

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Posted: 16 years ago

#923

Part 78

Da nxt day we c Mayank and Priyanka in hospital they came 2 c Ammy

Mayank/Pri- Hw r u nw Ammy

Ammy- Iam much beta all thx 2 Laiba I cant wait 2 go home, itz holi 2moraw my favourite festival

Mayank- Yh u will be discharged soon dnt wori dis yr u all r gna celebrate holi wiv us its gna be a blast

Pri- Yh wer gna have a lot of fun dis yr all r cuzins r wid us Sammy aur Diya be arahye aur hamare dost me Gunjan aur Nupur sab arahey hai

Mayank- Yh wer gna have a blast Ammy wers Laiba

Ammy- Laiba gne 2 meet da doctor der she is

Laiba- (Happily) Ammy da doctors dischargin u we can go home in da afternoon

Mayank/Pri- Wow dats gr8

Ammy- Yh I cnt wait 2 go home

Laiba- Ammy I will just get fresh water 4 u

Laiba waz bout 2 fall Mayank caught her

Mayank- Laiba r u k

Laiba- Im fine Bro just felt a bit dizzy

Mayank- U have sm rest Pri go and get da water

Pri- K

Ammy- Im so sori Laiba u have been lookin afta me and u havent eaten properly and (interuptted)

Laiba- Ammy Im fine just felt abit dizzy nuffin serious dnt wori

Ammy- I have 2 wori Laiba u go home and rest Angad and Ridz r cmin inabit I wil cm home wid dem

Laiba- Buh Ammy (Interuptted)

Ammy- I dnt want no 4 a anwser

Laiba- K fine I wil go home wid Bro and Pri

Pri- Ammy heres ur fresh water

Ammy- Thx

Pri- Its k

Mayank- K Ammy u tc I will c u at home l8ter im gna go airport 2 collect ma cuzins and friends der all cmin Massi and Mamu r cmin 2 u cmin Pri

Pri- I will stay wid Ammy Angad Bro and Ridz r cmin l8ter wil cm home wid dem

Mayank- K dats fine bye Ammy

Laiba- Ammy apna kyaal raknah aur haan Pri Ammy ko medicine dena tike hai

Pri- Yh Laiba dnt wori

Ammy- Yh u plz tc of urself

Mayank and Laiba leave

Nw we c Sengupta Mansion every1 talkin bout Josh and Aliyah engagement, its takin place afta holi every1 is very excited

Shaz- Mama uno Laibas family is ere 2 der stayin in Summit Uncles Bruvas house we should go and invite dem

Kripa- Haan Mama we should

Ganga- Haan beta shaam ko chalteh hai

Shaz/Kripa- Tike hai Mom

Just den Kripas Nani cms Veena Sengupta

VS- Kripa beta apne dosto ko neecha ajaye kuch baat karni hai

Kripa- Jee Nani abhi bulathi hoon

Kripa leaves

Ganga- Mama kya baat karni hai aapko unseh woh yahaan sirf Kripa keh liye aiye hai

VS- Haan beta janthi hoon sirf kuch baatein samjaani hai aur haan Shabd keh Chacha Chachi ko bhi maine bhulayah hai

Shaz- Nani akhir baat kya hai

VS- Sabko aneh do bathathi hoon

Just den Madan cmz, Shabd cmz wid his Aunty, Uncle and Balma

Nw we c Kripa talkin 2 gang

Kripa- Bro, Alisha, Nani is callin u all dwnstairz she needs 2 talk 2 u lot

Sujal- K cm on every1 lets go dwn

Nw we c da gang dwnstairz

VS- K mujhe tum sab seh kuch baatien karni thi hum bahuth khush hai hamarah poorah parivaar yahaan hai aur kal holi hai toh mujhe tum sab seh kehna tha kal hamare important guests areheya hai relatives aur business associates toh mein chahathi aap sab tyaar reh aur I dnt want anyfing 2 go rong in da party 2moraw aur haan Josh beta kal Aliyah ka parivaar bhi araha hai aur pharso engagement bhi hai

Madan- Nani aap fikar maat kijiye everyfing will be fine I will personally look at da arrangements

Sujal- Madan tum kyun takleef karoghe arrangements hum sab dheklenghe kyun Shabd

Shabd- Haan Sujals rite Madan tum guest ho tum kaise yeh sab karsakthe ho kyun Nani

VS- Haan tum dono tike keh reha ho Madan tum kuch nahiye karoghe

Madan- Jee Nanijee jaise aap tike samjeh waise Kripa mein soch raha tha hum thodi dher Calgary Park chaleh mera bahuth maan karaha hai wahaan janeh ka

Kripa- Haan Madan hum chalenghe mein apna purse lekar athi hoon

Shabd- Kripa mein bhi chalogha

Madan- Shabd tum kaise jasakthe ho tumhe toh arrnagements dhekni hai

Lucky/Rob- Dnt wori Madan we wil c da arrangements

Tanz- Yh u dnt need 2 bother bout dem u go wid Shabd and Kripa and enjoy yaself

Madan waz really angry nw

Kripa- Chaleh i gt ma purse

Shabd,Madan and Kripa leave

Manorama Shabds Aunty waz lookin at Alisha she waz wearin asian clothes

Manoroma- Balma maine thari baat nahiye mani tu tike keh raha tha yeh hamari Alishi hai itneh saloh baad milee hai ab mein aise hamare saat lekar joanghi

Balma- Haan Behenah

Meanwhile we c Angad and Ridz in hospital wid Ammy

Angad- Ammy wer goin home nw I gt ya medicines just gna sign da discharge papers

Ammy- Cant wait 2 go home

Ridz- Ammy uno wah we gt a surprise 4 u

Ammy- Wah surprise tell me

Angad/Ridz- No Sori wen u cm home u will fynd out

Angad- I gta sign da papers Ridz u get da luggage and Pri tum Ammy keh pass raho

Pri- Dnt wori Bro mein Ammy keh paas he hoon hes such a hottie

Angad/Ridz- Quit flirting Pri

TO BE CONTINUED.......................................

Edited by Anam Ali - 14 years ago

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Harjot.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#924

WOW. Di u said it was crap.

Its gud!!

Arrmaan.....surprise cute!! Cant wait.

Cont soon and PM me

Harji

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monika

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Posted: 16 years ago

#925

wowowoow awesome thank you for pm and this part.

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Supernatural_10

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Posted: 16 years ago

#926

Originally posted by: Angad-Kripa#1
WOW. Di u said it was crap.
Its gud!!

Arrmaan.....surprise cute!! Cant wait.

Cont soon and PM me

Harji

Thx a lot Harji 😃 yh im gna write da rest and i myte post it l8ter if not 2moraw yh i will pm u

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Supernatural_10

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Posted: 16 years ago

#927

Originally posted by: Shafoo
wowwwwwww coolllllllllllllll

Thx a lot 😃

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Supernatural_10

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Posted: 16 years ago

#928

Originally posted by: monikaseth
wowowoow awesome thank you for pm and this part.

Thx a lot 😃

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Laiba

@-Laiba-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#929

oh no 😔 suspense will kill me know as i'm leavi ng tomorow for ski and you have not continued yet 😭 my luck! anyways awsome part, keep it up lloved it [:d], dying to read more and want to know more about the alisha thingy 😕.

Love, Laiba

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Supernatural_10

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Posted: 16 years ago

#930

Originally posted by: -Laiba-
oh no suspense will kill me know as i'm leavi ng tomorow for ski and you have not continued yet my luck! anyways awsome part, keep it up lloved it [:d], dying to read more and want to know more about the alisha thingy .

Love, Laiba

Thx a lot Laiba 😃 U will find out in da next part Im gna update inabit