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Posted: 16 years ago
cool ff cont soon😊 ::)
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Originally posted by: -abhi-

cool ff cont soon ::)

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Thx a lot 😃
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continue soon.. just got free..lol

im more excited about the alishi/a thing more than anything.lol

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Part 79

Nw we c Ammy at home he is very happy 2 c his parents Shubankar and Kirti

Ammy- Mom, Dad (he hugs dem) aap loge yaha

S/K- Haan beta hum aaj he aiye hai hum hospital aneh waleh teh lekin Laiba told us u gt dischared aur tum Angad aur Ridhima keh saat ghar arahey ho beta tumahre Shashank Uncle aur Padma Aunty be aiye hue hai

Ammy- KYA UNCLE AUR AUNTY

S/K- Haan kya hua beta

Ammy- Kuch nahiye Mom, Dad woh aise he I gt shocked aap sab agaye mere liye im really sori meri wajah seh aap loge ko anah parah

Just den Shashank and Padma cm

S/P- Ammy beta humneh soacha hum paditji seh milkeh Angad aur Ridhima ki shaadi ki date pakhi kardeh aur tumseh bhi milenghe akhir tumneh he in dono ko milwayah hai ab kaise ho beta

Ammy- Jee mein tike hoon

Kirti- Ammy beta ab tum araam karoh hum abhi athe hai hum sab paditji seh milneh jarehay aur hum tumhaari kundli bhi saat lehjarehay hai

Ammy- Meri kundli kyun Mom

Kirti- Beta aise he apna kyaal raknah

Shubankar, Kirti, Summit, Kumkum, Shashank and Padma leave

Nw we c Angad, Ridz, Laiba in Ammy's room

Ammy- Laiba can u get me smefing 2 eat I'm really hungary

Laiba- Yh sure Ammy I will just go and get it

Laiba leaves

Angad- Ammy dis is 2 much nw

Ammy- I no nw stop shoutin at me we have 2 sort dis mess out look y dnt u 2 agree 2 get married

A/R- WAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO WAYZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ammy- Listen just agree 2 everyfing they are sayin den once da weddin date cmz u lot do1

Angad- No wayz r u mad Dads gna kill me

Ridz- Ammy u dunno my Dad hes very strict fink of smefing else

Ammy- Uno u can tell da truth buh both families will be very hurt uno den it wont be good y dnt u 2 pretend 2 break up

Laiba heard of everyfing

Laiba- OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so u both were liein all along Bro how could u

Angad- Sori Laiba I will tell u wah happened (he tells all da stori) da fing is Ammy doesnt want 2 marry Ridz coz he dnt luv her u cant marry sm1 who u dnt luv so Ridz told her Dad she dnt wana marry him he started shoutin and everyfing and den i so her in da park and i hugged her 2 console her and den Ridz parents so us 2geva and they fought we were goin out all diz happened on da day i took Yuvika park

Laiba- Listen Bro i get ya point u c its no point marrying sm1 who u luv either hw do u no they wont betray u afta, its beta 2 do an arrange marriage I fink Ammy u should of agreed 2 marry Ridz nw u lot have caused dis big mess

Ammy- Laiba ur sayin I should marry Ridz even though i dnt luv her in dat wont be fair 2 her she deserves sm1 who luvs her bck unlike me who luvs sm1 else, would u marry sm1 who u dnt luv

Laiba- Yh I would marry sm1 who I dnt luv atleast I will know der a gd person and der frm a gd family because Mom and Dad chose dem 4 me der choice cnt be rong they want da best 4 me

Angad- Ammy dats enough Laiba we will solve da mess I promise dnt wori no1 will be hurt

Laiba- I hope so Bro

Laiba goes 2 her room

Ammy- (Angrily) Angad wahs rong wid ur sista she dnt understand me she waz sayin al dat like she waz all serious, shes da 1 who always sed dat u should always marry sm1 who u luv

Angad- Ammy she is serious afta all dat Aryan done ma sista doesnt want 2 believe in luv

Ridz- Angad and Ammy stop argueing I have plan look Angad will tell Kumkum Aunty and Summit Uncle he wants Laiba 2 get married 1st b4 our weddin takes place rite so Uncle and Aunty will look 4 a guy 4 Laiba and den I will suggest ur name and den da rishtha can be fixed u c like Laiba sed she gna do an arrange marriage so by dis our weddin can be delayed and u and Laiba can be 2geva

Angad- Excellent Plan Ridz 😃

Ridz- Thx Angad 😃

Ammy- No its nt 😡

Meanwhile we c Kripa, Madan and Shabd in Calgary park Shabd waz really angry Madan wouldnt leave Kripa alone even for 1 second

Madan- Kripa we should go and play pool wah say in da arcade

Kripa- Yh sure Madan cm on Shabd

Shabd- Buh Kripa I h8 pool can we go home u h8 pool 2 wahs rong wid u Kripa

Kripa- Shabd I luv pool cm on lets go

They go 2 da Arcade Madan and Kripa were playin pool and Shabd waz sitting der he waz very angry wid Madan just den Shalini came

Shalini- Hw r u Shabd

Shabd- (Angrily) Shalini wah r u doin ere dis must be all ur plan u and Madan are here on purpose so u could seperate me and Kripa

Shalini- Ur very clever Shabd ur absoloutely correct wah did u fink ur gna leave me der and cm here and be wid dis stupid Kripa look at her shes wid Madan shes enjoyin herself

Shabd- Just shurrup Shalini and get lost

Nw we c Madan and Kripa talkin

Kripa- I will just be bck im gna get a drink 4 maslef frm da bar

Madan- Kripa I wil cm 2

Kripa- Ok

Shabd didnt realize dat Kripa and Madan had gone 2 da bar, he waz 2 busy wid argueing wid Shalini

Shabd- Shalini just go away yh and stop being a phyco I told u a million tymes I luv Kripa

Shalini- Really Shabd wer iz she I dnt fink shes bothered bout u

Shabd- Just shurrup shes over der (He realized Kripa werent der) Im gna kill Madan

Shabd goes 2 look 4 Kripa nw we c Madan and Kripa in da bar

Madan- Kripa dats enough nw u will get drunk

Kripa- No I wont Im use 2 all dis 1 more drink

Just den Shabd cmz he punched Madan

Shabd- Hw dare u Madan u mde Kripa drunk uno she neva drinks

Madan- Just shurrup Shabd, Kripa tell him ur use 2 all dis u smoke, drink, do drugs

Kripa- Listen u whoeva u are I smoke, drink and do drugs and u waheva ya name is DO1 AND U MADAN DO1 AS WELL ODAWYSE IT WONT BE GD 4 YA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO1 STOPS KRIPA GAREWAL 1 MORE DRINK!!!!!!!!!

Shabd- Kripa chaloh yaha seh

Kripa- I SED LEAVE MA HAND WHO DA HELL R U

Shabd- I'm Shabd

Kripa started laughin like a mentle person

Kripa- UR SAYIN UR SHABD HES DEAD UNO DEAD

Madan waz laughin

Madan- Shabd her memory is bck (he laughs)

Shabd- Just shurrup Madan it cant be Kripa chaloh

Kripa- I SAID LEAVE ME (she faints)

Shabd takes Kripa home da family is worried they call da doctor

Ganga- Doctor hws ma daughter nw

Doctor- She fine nw she gt drunk so dats y she fainted I have looked at her file, I dnt fink her memory is bck buh we neva no buh like I said she myte just rememba sm fings bout her lyfe buh yes ders a possibility 4 her memory 2 cm bck very soon

Ganga- Doctor is it anyway we can avoid dat

Doctor- No we cant amnesia is only for a limited period of tyme its nt 4ever u should be happy her memoey is cmin bck, heres da medicine I will be leaving nw

Do doctor leaves

Every1 is very worried 4 Kripa afta a few hours Kripa wakes up and she is normal her memory hasnt cm bck just den Shaz cmz

Shaz- Di hw r u feeling nw I bought ur dinner upstairs

Kripa- Im fine Shaz wers Shabd

Shaz- Hes gne out smwer he wil be bck soon itz holi 2moraw Nani waz sayin she myte cancel da party coz ur nt well

Kripa- No wayz Shaz tell Nani dnt cancel it I luv holi ma favourite festival rememba last yrz holi we had so much fun

Just den Veena came

Veena- Kaisi ho beta

Kripa- Im fine Nani plz dnt cancel da party

Veena- Tike hai beta I wont I will just invite all da guests

Veena goes dwnstairz and tells every1 2 carry on wid da party preparation

Shaz cms dwnstairz

Shaz- Mom we should go and invite Laiba and family der all ere as well der stayin at Vivek Uncles house

Ganga- Yh wel go nw u wana cm Shaz

Shaz- Yes Mom den on da way we can go shopping I wil call Di as well

Ganga- Shaz let Kripa rest

Just den Kripa cmz dwn

Kripa- Mama Im fine I want 2 cm

Ganga- Tike hai chaloh Mama hum abhi athe hai Aliyah ki family kab arahahiye hai

Veena- Beta woh loge 8 baje aiyghe

Ganga- Tike hai hum thodi der mein ajayenghe

Ganga, Shaz and Kripa go 2 Viveks house 2 invite dem 4 da Holi Party, Nw we c every1 talking

Ganga- Kumkum, Mama neh Holi ki bahuth barhi party rakhi hai tum sab anah kal

Kumkum- Hum zaroor aiyghe aur haan Ganga humneh Angad aur Ridhima ki shaadi ki tarik pakhi kardi hai jab hum Manhattan jaiyenghe dono ki shaadi kardenghe agleh hafteh

Ganga- Yeh toh bahuth khushi ki baat hai kahaan hai Angad aur Ridhima

Kumkum- Laiba go and call dem

Laiba- K

Laiba goes 2 Ammys room 2 call Angad and Ridz they were all talking

Laiba- Bro, Ridz, Moms calling u lot dwn Ganga Aunty has cm she wants 2 congratulate u 2 ur wedding date has been fixed 4 nxt week

A/R/AM- WAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Laiba- (Angrily) U lot coming or not

A/R- Wer cmin

Laiba, Angad and Ridz go dwnstairz

Ganga hugs dem both

Ganga- Congrats Beta

A/R- Thx Aunty

Kripa waz very happy 4 dem so waz Shaz they both hugged dem

Kripa- Congrats Angad and Ridz Im so happy 4 u 2

R- Thx Kripa

Angad gt upset

Kripa- Wahs rong Angad

Angad- Nuffin I just remembered i gta go get smefing b4 Mayank kills me bye

Kripa- K Angad mke sure u cm 2 da holi party

Angad- Yh i wil cm

Angad leaves

Shaz- Laiba u wana cm shoppin im goin wid Mom and Di

Laiba- No Shaz nt 2dy im not in da mood

Shaz- Y wahs rong Ammy fine nw

Laiba- Yh i no hes fine just dnt feel like it

Shaz- Ayt make sure u cm 2moraw 4 da party its gna be so much fun and yh bring ya cuzins as well

Laiba- K I will

Meanwhile we c da gang talking upstairz in Tanz room

Tanz- Uno Lucky der smefign rong wid Alisha shes being so scared around Shabd Uncle and Aunty and dat joker wahs his name oh yh Balma

Lucky- Yh ino they must have sed smefing

Sam- Duno man maybe

Rob- U lot if der waz smefing she would have told us u lot quit it k

Tanz- Rob I aint joking uno ders smefing rong big tyme

Nw we c Alisha in da garden just den Manorama cms and twists her arm

Alisha- Ahh Buaji choriyeh dard horaha

Monorama- Chordoon thareh ko Alishi tujhe kya lagah mein tumhe doond nahiye paonghi aaj he sabko bathathi hoon tum ab hamare saat rahoghi

Balma- Behna chordeh iska haat bechaari ka haat tootjayegha aur agar ause gundeh Sujal neh dhekliya tu humhe choregha nahiye

Monorama- Gundah hogha woh apne ghar mein auseh chooroonghee nahiye, aur tu Alishi sun apna samaan bandoh jab hum loge jayenghe tumbhi hamareh saat joanghi agar nahiye gayi toh woh haal karoonghi jo tum apni poori zindagi yaad rakhoonghi kehdethi hoon mein samji ab ja

Alisha runs insyde crying

PREVIEW- HOLI PARTY

SOMEFING UNEXPECTED HAPPENS?????????????????

Edited by Anam Ali - 14 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: brainychild92

continue soon.. just got free..lol

im more excited about the alishi/a thing more than anything.lol

continue sooon

I just updated 😊 yh u will fynd out about dat
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Posted: 16 years ago
wowowow cool part i love it
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Originally posted by: Shafoo

wowowow cool part i love it

Thx a lot 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome part yeh alisha ko kya hua ??????????? holi mein asli dil mil jayenge kya ???????????Thank you for pm I am waiting for holi .
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Originally posted by: monikaseth

awesome part yeh alisha ko kya hua ??????????? holi mein asli dil mil jayenge kya ???????????Thank you for pm I am waiting for holi .

Thx a lot😃 u will fynd out in da nxt part
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Posted: 16 years ago

read the whole ff rite nw. its jus awesome, waiting for nxt part

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