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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth

Is int kripa acting little bit , awesome part .

I think she rember shabd and his nautankii but she is not saying now ???????????????? Jaldi likhoooo thx for pm.

Thx a lot 😃 Gd prediction lets c if ur rite I will update wen I'm beta
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thx a lot 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
WOW DI!! Srry for the late reply u see i tried logging on but it wudnt work.
So i made another account on my comp and tried going to IF on it.
It worked so i tried logging on wth my new account and it it worked so im back!!
There is sumthing wrong with my old account. Not my IF account my comp account.
Anywayz i am still sad. Plz stop Ridz and Angad frm getting together.
Luv u!!!!!!
Harji
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Angad-Kripa#1

WOW DI!! Srry for the late reply u see i tried logging on but it wudnt work.

So i made another account on my comp and tried going to IF on it.
It worked so i tried logging on wth my new account and it it worked so im back!!
There is sumthing wrong with my old account. Not my IF account my comp account.
Anywayz i am still sad. Plz stop Ridz and Angad frm getting together.
Luv u!!!!!!
Harji

Itz k Harji dnt wori bout it I aint been well didnt update inshallah myte write a short part inabit
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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG IT WUD BE so gud if Kripa is actually pretending and shes talking on the phone with sum1 and she says she got her memory back and shes jst pretending but then her gang [ONLY HER GANG]
listen to her convo and are shocked but keep the secret,
Tht wud be awesome.
Jst wanted to write more because the other one was jst mostly y i didnt cum on for so long, LOL
LUV U DI!!
DI can u for sum wierd reason bring Laksh in. I dont know y but.....JST DO IT!!
Harji
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Angad-Kripa#1

OMG IT WUD BE so gud if Kripa is actually pretending and shes talking on the phone with sum1 and she says she got her memory back and shes jst pretending but then her gang [ONLY HER GANG]

listen to her convo and are shocked but keep the secret,
Tht wud be awesome.
Jst wanted to write more because the other one was jst mostly y i didnt cum on for so long, LOL
LUV U DI!!
DI can u for sum wierd reason bring Laksh in. I dont know y but.....JST DO IT!!
Harji

Gd idea Harji I will update soon Im stil not well gt da bug been vomiting I aint gettin beta at all 😭🤢 waz gna update yetserdy buh vomited hopefully will update l8ter wen Im beta yh I wll include more parts of Lucky he is in da fanfic
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part 72

Nxt day in Malhotra we c every1 argueing, every1 is der besides Kripa she has gone shopping wid Shabd

Anjali- Mama, aap Kripa ko Canada nahiye lejsakthi hum sabseh dhoor, she needs us we got da best doctors ere

Shaz- Yh Mom, Di is rite Kripa Di will neva agree 2 go even though all of us go she luvs it ere in Manhattan

KB- Haan Ganga Beta apni zid chordoh yahaan hum sab hai Kripa keh paas, beta Canada mein auseh kuch acha nahiye laghegah

Dev- Haan Ganga dekho iss baat ki koi gurantee nahiye hai keh wahaan Canada mein hamaari beti tike hojayghi tum zid chordoh

Ganga- (Angrily) Bas kijiye its enough nw yeh meri beti ki zindagi ka sawaal hai Dev agar aapko nahiye anah toh mein khud apni beti ko lekar joanghi Canada Kripa will go wid me

Josh- Mama aap tike keh rahiye hai mein aapke saat hoon, hum Kripa ko manahlenghe Papa gurantee toh yahaan ki bhi nahiye hai wahaan jakar mahaul badlegha we should go 4 a few months Kripa will feel beta

Every1 was argueing more

Dev- Tike hai hum sab chalenghe agar Kripa chaheh toh

Ganga- Dekho Dev Kripa hamaari beti hum jo faisala karenghe auseki balaai keh kareghe she wil cm wid us tum tickets book karoh sabkeh

Dev- Tike hai Ganga agar tumhe yakeen hai Kripa chaleghi toh tike hai mein tickets book kardetha hoon sabke hum pehli flight seh Canada chaleghe Kavya beta tum mujhe apna, Anjali aur Raj ka passport dehdoh mein tickets book kardetha hoon aur Josh, Shaz, Kanta behen aap sab packing kariye

Josh, Shaz and KB go upstairz 2 pack der stuff

Kavya- Papa mein hamare tickets kardoongha aap fikar maat kijiye aap loge Kripa seh baat kariye hum ghar chalteh hai packing karni hai

Kavya, Anjali and Raj leave

Dev- Acha Beta mein ticket office fone kardetha hoon Ganga passports kahaan rakhe teh mujhe yaad nahiye araha

Ganga- Dev cupboard mein hai mein jakar Mama ko fone karthi hoon hum calgary arahey hai kuch din wahaan rehenghe phir wahaan apna ghar lehlenghe

Dev- Tike hai

After a while Shabd and Kripa cm bck and Kripas in a very bad mood and she goes upstairs

Shabd- Kripa meri baaat toh sano I'm sori its nt my fault (Interuptted)

Kripa- Its all ur fault pehele jab hum bahar jathe teh der use 2 be no1 2 disturb us nw wenever we go ur crazy fans be der and u talk 2 dem and I just stand der like a idiot y is everyfing so changed dats it I dnt want 2 talk 2 u

Kripa goes 2 her room

Ganga- Mein Kripa ko dhekthi hoon

Shabd- Nahiye Aunty mein jatha hoon

Shaz- I will go its beta if u dnt go Jeejs uno Di is in a bad mood

Ganga- Haan Shabd Shaz tike keh rahiye hai tum betho Shaz will go aur batoa beta kya hua tha

Shabd- Woh kya hai Aunty kal concert hua aur aaj hum shoppin ghe teh woh mere fans agaye autograpghs keh liye aur photograpghs aur Kripa ko burah lag gaya woh kya giving autograpghs aur mere fans seh baatien karnah its gd 4 ma Rockstar Image mein Kripa ko manologha Kanta Maasi aap chaliye mera saat kitchen mein mein Kripa ka favourite chocolate cake ausekeh liye banogha I'm sure she will 4give me

Ganga- Acha beta joa Im sure she will 4give u woh tumseh zydah dher tak naraaz nahiye resakthi

KB- Chaloh beta

KB and Shabd go kitchen

Nw we c Shaz talking to Kripa

Shaz- Di calm down (Interuptted)

Kripa- Calm down Shaz u dunno dis Shabd I'm so angry wid him he sed me and him will spend da whole day 2geva uno wah happened his crazy fans came stupid girlz he gave dem autograpghs and took pictures he 4got bout me I'm not talking 2 him

Shaz- Di u goto live wid dat u c hes a rockstar

Kripa- I dont care if hes a Rockstar I cm 1st den his stupid Rockstar image

Shaz- Di stop being stubborn lets go downstairz plz mere liye chaliye

Kripa- Anyfing 4 u Shaz chaloh lets go downstairs buh I aint talkin 2 dat idiot rockstar Shabd i h8 ROCKSTARS!!!!!!!!!!!!

Shaz- Tike hai Di lets go

Shaz and Kripa go downstairz

Shaz- Di I 4got ma fone I will just get it

Kripa- K

Shaz goes upstairz and Kripa goes in da garden she hears Lucky and Tanz fighting

Lucky- Gimme bck da fags

Tanz- No do1 der mynes

Lucky- Dats it I'm tellin Bro of u already Alisha took all da fags out left onli 4

Tanz- Tell Bro hes gna shout at u

Lucky- I h8 u Tanz

Tanz- Wen did I say I luv u nw do1

Lucky- No u do1

They were fightin like idiots

Kripa- Shurrup u retards nw both of u go 2 ur rooms b4 I (Interuptted)

Lucky/Tanz-(Scaredly) Sori Kripa wer goin

Kripa- (To herself) Y am I shouting at dem and y der so scared of me it looks like I no dese lot very well its like I have lived in dat house (her head started hurting)

She went insyde

Meanwhile we c Shabd makin Chocolate Cake in da kitchen

KB- Shabd beta itneh saloh baad bhi tumhe sab yaad hai Kripa ki pasand

Shabd- Haan Maasi mujhe sab yaad hai ab aap dheknah mein Kripa ko kaise manatha hoon

KB- Acha beta tum banoa mein andhar ja rahiye hoon mera favourite serial anehwalah

Shabd- Tike hai Maasi

KB goes insyde and Shabd carries on cooking

Nw we c Ganga talking to her Mom Veena

Ganga- Mama hum sab arahey hai Calgary bahuth he jald Dev tickets book kareneh ghe hai

Veena- Beta yeh toh bahuth khushi ki baat hai itneh saloh baad tum sabko dhekonghi mein tumhare Papa ko batha doonghi aur haan Ganga Beta maine Josh keh liye bahuth he achi ladki dheki hai Sunitha ki Beti Aliyah jab tum loge aoghe tum auseh mileneh aur agar Josh ko Aliyah pasand aiyi toh hum rishtha paka kardenghe

Ganga- Jee tike hai Mama yeh toh bahuth he achi baat hai mein aap ko baad mein fone karkeh flight keh bareh mein bathdoonghi

Veena- Tike hai beta

Ganga disconnected da fone

Meanwhile in Khanna Mansion every1 is talking about Angad and Ridz wedding

Angad- Mom hum shaadi kuch saal baad karenghe

Summit- No wayz Angad

Angad- Lekin Dad woh (Interuptted)

Kumkum- Beta agleh mahineh ka mahuruth bahuth he shub hai paditji batha rehey teh

Angad- Lekin Mom agleh mahine mere concert hai

Kumkum- Beta concert keh baad shaadi kardenghe phir toh tumhe koi problem nahiye

Angad waz running out of excuses 4 da past 1 hour he waz giving dem excuses 2 delay da weddin buh each time Summit and Kumkum had a solution 4 it

Just den Ammy and Ridz came

Ammy- Problem hai

TO BE CONTINUED.......................................

Part 73

Nxt day in Malhotra we c every1 argueing, every1 is der besides Kripa she has gone shopping wid Shabd

Anjali- Mama, aap Kripa ko Canada nahiye lejsakthi hum sabseh dhoor, she needs us we got da best doctors ere

Shaz- Yh Mom, Di is rite Kripa Di will neva agree 2 go even though all of us go she luvs it ere in Manhattan

KB- Haan Ganga Beta apni zid chordoh yahaan hum sab hai Kripa keh paas, beta Canada mein auseh kuch acha nahiye laghegah

Dev- Haan Ganga dekho iss baat ki koi gurantee nahiye hai keh wahaan Canada mein hamaari beti tike hojayghi tum zid chordoh

Ganga- (Angrily) Bas kijiye its enough nw yeh meri beti ki zindagi ka sawaal hai Dev agar aapko nahiye anah toh mein khud apni beti ko lekar joanghi Canada Kripa will go wid me

Josh- Mama aap tike keh rahiye hai mein aapke saat hoon, hum Kripa ko manahlenghe Papa gurantee toh yahaan ki bhi nahiye hai wahaan jakar mahaul badlegha we should go 4 a few months Kripa will feel beta

Every1 was argueing more

Dev- Tike hai hum sab chalenghe agar Kripa chaheh toh

Ganga- Dekho Dev Kripa hamaari beti hum jo faisala karenghe auseki balaai keh kareghe she wil cm wid us tum tickets book karoh sabkeh

Dev- Tike hai Ganga agar tumhe yakeen hai Kripa chaleghi toh tike hai mein tickets book kardetha hoon sabke hum pehli flight seh Canada chaleghe Kavya beta tum mujhe apna, Anjali aur Raj ka passport dehdoh mein tickets book kardetha hoon aur Josh, Shaz, Kanta behen aap sab packing kariye

Josh, Shaz and KB go upstairz 2 pack der stuff

Kavya- Papa mein hamare tickets kardoongha aap fikar maat kijiye aap loge Kripa seh baat kariye hum ghar chalteh hai packing karni hai

Kavya, Anjali and Raj leave

Dev- Acha Beta mein ticket office fone kardetha hoon Ganga passports kahaan rakhe teh mujhe yaad nahiye araha

Ganga- Dev cupboard mein hai mein jakar Mama ko fone karthi hoon hum calgary arahey hai kuch din wahaan rehenghe phir wahaan apna ghar lehlenghe

Dev- Tike hai

After a while Shabd and Kripa cm bck and Kripas in a very bad mood and she goes upstairs

Shabd- Kripa meri baaat toh sano I'm sori its nt my fault (Interuptted)

Kripa- Its all ur fault pehele jab hum bahar jathe teh der use 2 be no1 2 disturb us nw wenever we go ur crazy fans be der and u talk 2 dem and I just stand der like a idiot y is everyfing so changed dats it I dnt want 2 talk 2 u

Kripa goes 2 her room

Ganga- Mein Kripa ko dhekthi hoon

Shabd- Nahiye Aunty mein jatha hoon

Shaz- I will go its beta if u dnt go Jeejs uno Di is in a bad mood

Ganga- Haan Shabd Shaz tike keh rahiye hai tum betho Shaz will go aur batoa beta kya hua tha

Shabd- Woh kya hai Aunty kal concert hua aur aaj hum shoppin ghe teh woh mere fans agaye autograpghs keh liye aur photograpghs aur Kripa ko burah lag gaya woh kya giving autograpghs aur mere fans seh baatien karnah its gd 4 ma Rockstar Image mein Kripa ko manologha Kanta Maasi aap chaliye mera saat kitchen mein mein Kripa ka favourite chocolate cake ausekeh liye banogha I'm sure she will 4give me

Ganga- Acha beta joa Im sure she will 4give u woh tumseh zydah dher tak naraaz nahiye resakthi

KB- Chaloh beta

KB and Shabd go kitchen

Nw we c Shaz talking to Kripa

Shaz- Di calm down (Interuptted)

Kripa- Calm down Shaz u dunno dis Shabd I'm so angry wid him he sed me and him will spend da whole day 2geva uno wah happened his crazy fans came stupid girlz he gave dem autograpghs and took pictures he 4got bout me I'm not talking 2 him

Shaz- Di u goto live wid dat u c hes a rockstar

Kripa- I dont care if hes a Rockstar I cm 1st den his stupid Rockstar image

Shaz- Di stop being stubborn lets go downstairz plz mere liye chaliye

Kripa- Anyfing 4 u Shaz chaloh lets go downstairs buh I aint talkin 2 dat idiot rockstar Shabd i h8 ROCKSTARS!!!!!!!!!!!!

Shaz- Tike hai Di lets go

Shaz and Kripa go downstairz

Shaz- Di I 4got ma fone I will just get it

Kripa- K

Shaz goes upstairz and Kripa goes in da garden she hears Lucky and Tanz fighting

Lucky- Gimme bck da fags

Tanz- No do1 der mynes

Lucky- Dats it I'm tellin Bro of u already Alisha took all da fags out left onli 4

Tanz- Tell Bro hes gna shout at u

Lucky- I h8 u Tanz

Tanz- Wen did I say I luv u nw do1

Lucky- No u do1

They were fightin like idiots

Kripa- Shurrup u retards nw both of u go 2 ur rooms b4 I (Interuptted)

Lucky/Tanz-(Scaredly) Sori Kripa wer goin

Kripa- (To herself) Y am I shouting at dem and y der so scared of me it looks like I no dese lot very well its like I have lived in dat house (her head started hurting)

She went insyde

Meanwhile we c Shabd makin Chocolate Cake in da kitchen

KB- Shabd beta itneh saloh baad bhi tumhe sab yaad hai Kripa ki pasand

Shabd- Haan Maasi mujhe sab yaad hai ab aap dheknah mein Kripa ko kaise manatha hoon

KB- Acha beta tum banoa mein andhar ja rahiye hoon mera favourite serial anehwalah

Shabd- Tike hai Maasi

KB goes insyde and Shabd carries on cooking

Nw we c Ganga talking to her Mom Veena

Ganga- Mama hum sab arahey hai Calgary bahuth he jald Dev tickets book kareneh ghe hai

Veena- Beta yeh toh bahuth khushi ki baat hai itneh saloh baad tum sabko dhekonghi mein tumhare Papa ko batha doonghi aur haan Ganga Beta maine Josh keh liye bahuth he achi ladki dheki hai Sunitha ki Beti Aliyah jab tum loge aoghe tum auseh mileneh aur agar Josh ko Aliyah pasand aiyi toh hum rishtha paka kardenghe

Ganga- Jee tike hai Mama yeh toh bahuth he achi baat hai mein aap ko baad mein fone karkeh flight keh bareh mein bathdoonghi

Veena- Tike hai beta

Ganga disconnected da fone

Meanwhile in Khanna Mansion every1 is talking about Angad and Ridz wedding

Angad- Mom hum shaadi kuch saal baad karenghe

Summit- No wayz Angad

Angad- Lekin Dad woh (Interuptted)

Kumkum- Beta agleh mahineh ka mahuruth bahuth he shub hai paditji batha rehey teh

Angad- Lekin Mom agleh mahine mere concert hai

Kumkum- Beta concert keh baad shaadi kardenghe phir toh tumhe koi problem nahiye

Angad waz running out of excuses 4 da past 1 hour he waz giving dem excuses 2 delay da weddin buh each time Summit and Kumkum had a solution 4 it

Just den Ammy and Ridz came

Ammy- Problem hai

TO BE CONTINUED.......................................

Edited by Anam Ali - 14 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Di im gonna go watch Rab ne bana di jodi so ill read it later.
Harji
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Posted: 16 years ago
u posted it twice but very nice.. ab kya bahana doonda hai ammy ne? lol

continue vvv soon and plz knock some sense into kripa!!!!! i mean her memory..lol
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shafoo

wowowow tht was cool

Thx a lot😃

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