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Posted: 16 years ago
😲 Aryan u kameeena 😡 grrrr i would love to cut u into pieces and give them to my dog grrrrrr u sooo mean 😔 on my b-day u betrayed me 😔 kameena lol just kidding awsome part loved it! i prefefr angad and ridz coupe lmao its soo cute and dying to read more! i wonder why didn't yuvi tell the truth to laiba 😆 waiting to read more [:d]

Love, Laiba
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome part again so sk going to enge its great waiting to see what is gona next.thx for pm.
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Originally posted by: -Laiba-

Aryan u kameeena grrrr i would love to cut u into pieces and give them to my dog grrrrrr u sooo mean on my b-day u betrayed me kameena lol just kidding awsome part loved it! i prefefr angad and ridz coupe lmao its soo cute and dying to read more! i wonder why didn't yuvi tell the truth to laiba waiting to read more [:d]

Love, Laiba

Thx a lot Laiba😃 Yh Aryans a idiot u will find out in da nxt part I will update l8ter
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth

awesome part again so sk going to enge its great waiting to see what is gona next.thx for pm.

Thx a lot Monika😃 I will update l8ter
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thx a lot 😃
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wowoww tht was shokinggggg part
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Originally posted by: Shafoo

wowoww tht was shokinggggg part

Thx a lot 😃 I will update 2moraw nw
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Part 66

Laiba- U wah? Aryan wah iz dis ur joking rite

Ammy- Itz a very sik joke if u r I dnt fynd it funny

Girl- Nah we aint joking ma names Riya I'm Aryans girlfriend I met him in London nd (Interuptted)

Laiba- Ur joking Im Aryans Fiance he luvs me I no he would never betray me

Riya- Well he has unfortunately u goto live wiv it nw we just came 2 tell u nd I want da engagement ring dat Aryan gave u

Laiba- (Cryingly) Aryan y aint u sayin anyfing u cnt do dis 2 me

Ammy was very angry

Aryan- Dis iz true Laiba I luv Riya nd I wana marry her so I'm breaking da engagement wiv u

Ammy- (Angrily) Uno wah Aryan itz nt a game uno fallin in luv again nd again wah do u fink of urself

Aryan- Y u gettin so angry its ma lyfe k nd I wana be wid Riya nt Laiba, I no u luv Laiba y dnt u marry her

Ammy- (Angrily) I WILL I LUV LAIBA MORE DEN U I WOULD NEVA HURT HER

Aryan- Atleast u admitted it dat u luv her nw can I have ma ring bck Laiba

Laiba was very hurt hearin everyfing Aryan sed nd on top of dat Ammy confessed wich made her more upset he was her best friend hw could he say dat. She threw da ring on da floor nd ran outsyde

Ammy went afta Laiba, Aryan picked da ring nd put it on Riya, nd they went

Meanwhile we c Shabd nd Kripa watchin Rab Neh Bana Di Jodi in Cineworld, Shabd throwed popcorn on Kripa

Kripa- Shabd wah u doin stop throwin popcorn nd watch da movie

Shabd- I'am watchin da movie it wasnt me y would I throw popcorn on u

Kripa- Shabd stop bein silly well if it wasnt u waz it da old man behind u, I dnt fink so nw stop behavin like a kid nd watch da movie

Kripa watched da movie Shabd throwed popcorn on her, Kripa gt sm of da popcorn nd threw it on Shabd head

Shabd- Kripa (interuptted)

Kripa- It wasnt me uno

Shabd- I so u

Nw Shabd threw Popcorn on Kripa they were havin a lot of fun

Nw we c Ammy lookin 4 Laiba he cnt fynd her nower hes really worried, he rings Angad who was sleeping got up

Angad- Ammy wahs rong? Y u foned so late everyfing ayt

Ammy- No Angad nuffins ayt uno Aryan came (he tells him wah happened) I cnt fynd Laiba anywer im in da hall car park cm quick

Angad- Im cmin

Nw we c Angad in da car park

Angad- Ammy lets chek da cliff point at da beach Laiba luvs dat place she always goes der wen shes upset

Ammy- Lets go I hope Laibas ok I should'nt have sed all dat buh (Interuptted)

Angad- Ammy u should of fought bout dat b4 if anything happens 2 ma sista im gna kill Aryan

They go 2 da beach they c Laiba by da cliffpoint they both go der

Angad- Laiba thx god ur ere lets go home dnt cry hes nt worth it, dnt waste ur tears on him (he hugs her)

Laiba- (Cryingly) I luved him hw could he do dat Bro I was so stupid 4 belivein in Luv u wer so rite Luv nuffin (she cries)

Angad- Laiba dnt cry lets go home ma sista strong u shouldn't cry 4 people who arent worth it

Ammy- Im sori Laiba I just (Interuptted)

Laiba- Ammy I cnt believe u waheva he sed bout me nd u agreed 2 it, I'm neva gna talk 2 u again

Ammy- Buh Laiba plz listen 2 me (Interuptted)

Angad- Ammy wel talk 2moraw lets go home cm on Laiba lets go

Ammy goes 2 Malik House nd Angad nd Laiba go home 2 Khanna house

Nxt day we c every1 in Khanna house havin breakfast besides Laiba who isnt eatin, Summit nd Kumkum see dis

Summit- Laiba Beta wahs rong have ur breakfast

Kumkum- Beta its ur favourite aloo ka parantha

Laiba- I'm nt hungry

Just den Shaz cmz

Shaz- Elow every1

Kumkum- Shaz beta cm on have breakfast

Summit- Haan aao beta sit dwn sagaai ki tayaariyaan kaisi chal rahiye hai just 3 days left

Shaz- Thx Uncle, Aunty, I had breakfast Uncle sab tayaariyaan achi chal rahiye I'm goin shoppin nd Laiba is cmin wid me finish ur breakfast fast we goto go I got so many fings 2 buy

Laiba- Shaz I'm nt in da mood 2 go shoppin

Shaz- Plz Laiba chaloh wah happened y u nt in da mood

Laiba- Nuffin chaloh lets go

Summit- Beta breakfast

Laiba- Papa I'm nt hungry

Shaz nd Laiba leave

After a couple of minutes Ammy cmz

Kumkum- Ammy beta u just missed Laiba shes gne shoppin wid Shaz betho nashtha karloh

Ammy- No thx I've eaten wers Angad

Kumkum- Office mein hai he had 2 sign sm docuements

Ammy- Ok Aunty I will go 2 office

Ammy leaves

Summit- Kumkum ders smefing rong wid Laiba lets her cm bck we will talk 2 her

Kumkum- Yh i fink so 2

Nw we c Shabd nd Kripa wiv Dev nd Ganga choosing jewellery 4 da engagement

Dev- Kripa Beta wah bout dis set

Ganga- Dev dats not traditional enough hw bout dis 1

Kripa- Mama, Papa der both 2 heavy

Ganga- Beta der meant 2 be heavy its ur engagement end of da day

Dev- So beta u should have da best

Shabd- Kripa I like dis 1 its beauitful nd modern nd its not dat heavy wah say

Kripa- Yh I like dis 1 to it matches my lengha

Ganga- Ok wel buy u dat 1 nd wel buy dese as well 1 for u nd shaz nd 4 Anjali

Shabd- Aunty I wana buy dat 4 Kripa if u dnt mynd

Ganga- Buh Shabd (Interuptted)

Shabd- Plz Aunty

Ganga- Tike hai beta

Dev- I will pay 4 these Beta tum dono shoppin karoh heres ma card Kripa jo pasand lageh buy it ok humhe office janah hai

Ganga- Haan aur catering waleh ko fone bhi karnah hai wel c u lot at home

Kripa/Shabd- K

Dev pays 4 da jewellery nd goes 2 office wid Ganga

Nw we c Sujal, Alisha nd da rest of da gang shoppin

Sujal- Alisha its Kripa engagement so I'm gna buy her a lot of fings, wel buy her a diamond set, nd sm suits nd (Interuptted)

Tanz- Yo Bro wah bout me

Lucky- Wah do u want itz nt ya engagement I dnt fink it wil ever happen either (he laughs)

Tanz- Shurrup Lucky

Alisha- Dats it both of u shurrup waheva u lot want we wil buy u buh 4 nw we r onli shoppin 4 da engagement Sujal will buy u lot clothes 4 da engagement k nd if I c u lot argue again Rob will take u both home

Rob- Yh u guyz r so annoyin atleast dnt fite ere

Tanz- Itz his fault

Lucky- No its not its her fault

Sujal- Dats it shurrup k me nd Alisha r goin 2 buy smefings 4 Kripa ayt u lot choose wah u like nd den call me I wil cm der nd pay 4 it

Alisha- Yh nd da clothes have 2 be asian ayt Sam, Tanz no mini skirts, no dresses ok, so u 2 choose lenghas 4 urselves nd Rob nd Lucky choose shervanis ok nw go Rob if dese 2 fite just ring me ok nd I will sort dem out

Rob- Ayt

Every1 is in Blue Water Shoppin Centre der all go different shops 2 buy clothes, nw we c Shaz nd Laiba in Asiana Bride store

Shaz- I cnt believe Aryan hes such a jerk, idiot hw could he coz of him ur so upset Laiba u deserve way beta dun wori der will be sm1 4 u 2 smefings arent meant 2 be itz all destiny k

Laiba- Shaz i really luved him hw could he nd Ammy I cnt believe him he agreed 2 everyfing

Shaz- Laiba hes ur best friend was defendin u he probz sed everyfing in anger its nt Ammys fault its all Aryans fault anyway 4get da idiot lets just buy clothes 4 da engagement nd cheer up k

Laiba- Yh

Shaz- Hw bout dis Lilac lengha it will suit u

Laiba- Yh itz nyce u take da Pink lengha

Shaz- Ayt

Just den Tanz nd Lucky cm in da same shop

Tanz- Lucky Im cmin ayt I'm just gna try dis Blue lengha on k wait here

Lucky- Dnt be scared Tanz im rite ere (he laughed)

Tanz- Shurrup I'm nt scared k

Lucky- Ayt Ayt go nw

Tanz- Im goin

Tanz goes insyde da changin room

Just den Lucky sees Laiba

Lucky- Laiba!!!!!!!!!!!

Laiba was really angry nw she went nd slapped Lucky across da face she fought he was Aryan, as der both Twins she didnt recongnise dat it was Lucky

Shaz- U jerk wah u doin followin Laiba security security

Lucky was shocked Tanz came out da changin room dressed in blue lengha

Tanz- Lucky hw do I look? Hey Laiba, Shaz u lot ayt

Laiba- OMG!!! ur Lucky I'm so sori I fought u wer Aryan

Shaz- Soz Lucky I fought da same

Security Guard- Yes can I help u

Shaz- Sorri Itz ok

Security Guard- K

Security Guard leaves

Tanz- Wahs goin on?

Lucky- Tanz Laiba slapped me finkin I was Aryan OMG just coz I look decent 2dy aint wearin ma chains they fought I was Aryan Bro

Laiba/Shaz- It waz all a big misunderstandin wer sori

Lucky- Ayt dnt do dat again Laiba u have a heavy hand my whole cheek has gne red

Tanz- Ma poor Lucky (she touches his cheek) aww u will feel beta (she laughed)

Lucky- Diz is so nt funni by da way u look like a witch in dis lengha

Tanz- Wah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lucky- U look horrible

They started fightin like idiots again

Nw we c Shaz, Laiba, Lucky nd Tanz in da cafe talkin

Lucky- I cnt believe Bro Im really sori on his behalf hw could he do dat, I wil talk 2 him

Laiba- U dnt need 2 say sori itz nt ur fault Itz all finished Lucky I dnt want us 2 eva talk bout dis again

Lucky- Ayt buh I'm still gna shout at him

Tanz- Anyways Laiba dats wah u get in Luv no 1 can be trusted dese days dats y I dnt believe in luv nd itz gr8 dats y im so happy anyways try nd 4get everyfing nd be happy we beta go nw I still goto buy a lengha 4 maself c u inabit

Lucky- Bye

Shaz/Laiba- Bye

Meanwhile we c Ammy in Khanna Industries talkin 2 Angad

Ammy- Angad u goto help me k in talkin 2 Laiba she wont even listen 2 me I foned her bout 10 times nd she didnt anwser ma call, I confessed on da rong tyme buh I do luv her nd uno dat 2

Angad- Look Ammy its up 2 Laiba who she luvs nd who she doesnt I will talk 2 her ok dun wori she wil 4give u ur her best friend

Ammy- Yh buh I want u 2 sort all dis out nw 4get dese files u can sort dem out afta u've signed da contract so da manager will handle da rest lets leave Aunty sed Laibas gne shoppin wiv Shaz in Blue Water Shoppin Centre

Angad- Ayt Ammy calm dwn lets go

Just den Ammy fone rang it was Kirti

Ammy- Hey Mom

Kirti- Wer r u Ammy beta Ridhima is at home bored mein aur tumhareh Papa office ja rehay hai toh beta can u cm home nd take Ridhima out show her Manhattan just coz she isnt sayin anyfin doesnt mean we ignore her beta shes our guest

Ammy- Mom I understand rite nw I'm at Khanna Industries I goto sort smefing out I will send Angad 2 collect Ridhima nd den we all go shopping Laiba nd Shaz r in Blue Water Shoppin Centre so wel show Ridhima around

Kirti- Ok Beta make sure u do I will c u in da evenin jaldi ghar ajanah

Ammy- Tike hai Mom bye

Kirti- Bye

Angad- AMMY!!! y cnt u go 2 collect Ridhima y me

Ammy- Angad i'm goin Blue Water Shoppin Centre 1st gta fynd Laiba 1st den u nd Ridhima cm der I will txt u ok beta be der nw go nd collect her bye

B4 Angad can say anyfing Ammy goes

Angad goes 2 Malik house

Angad- Hey Ridhima u ayt

Ridz- Yh im ayt I fought Armaan was cmin

Angad- Ammy hes gone 2 Blue Water Shoppin Centre wer goin der 2

Ridz- Ayt I will just get ma bag

Angad- Ok I will wait in da car 4 u

After 5 minz Ridhima cms nw we c Angad nd Ridz in da car talkin

Ridz- Manhattans a really nyce place its da 1st tyme Im visitin ere

Angad- Really I've lived all ma lyfe ere

Ridz- I was brought up in London we never really moved out of UK, Papas moving our business ere so he told me 2 stay a few days wiv Kirti Aunty nd Shubankar Uncle, until Papa cmz

Angad- Oh k dats nyce Blue Water Shoppin Centre is da biggest shoppin centre ere in Manhattan it has Asiana Bride shop ere all designer clothes

Ridz- Yh dats nyce I'm not really into designer clothes I prefer wearin clothes dat i feel comfortable in nd not 4 da designer label

Angad- Yh tru

Angad nd Ridz talked a lot they became gd friends nd nw Angad put da radio on nd was listenin 2 sports

Ridz- Angad erm (Interuptted)

Angad- Wah happen Ridhima?

Ridz- Its ok

Angad- No tell me wer friends nw wahs rong

Ridz- I'm gettin bored listenin 2 sports can u put ur song on da Kaisa Yeh Pyaar Hai 1 its ma favourite I've gt all a collection of all ur CDS

Angad- Yh sure

Angad put da song on

Nw we c Angad nd Ridz in Blue Water Shoppin Centre

PREVIEW- AMMY APOLOGISES 2 LAIBA

-SHABD ND KRIPAS ENGAGEMENT

-KIRTI ND SHUBANKAR ANNOUNCE RIDHIMA ND ARMAANS ENGAGEMENT

-INTRODUCTION OF 2 NEW CHARACTERS

Edited by Anam Ali - 14 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO 😲😲 Ammey and Ridz engagement 😲 you better not let that happen 😡😔 ammeyy is mine😔 and anywes a nice but sad part lol! the SK scene was soo cute do continue sooon =)
Love, Laiba
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: -Laiba-

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Ammey and Ridz engagement you better not let that happen ammeyy is mine and anywes a nice but sad part lol! the SK scene was soo cute do continue sooon =)
Love, Laiba

Thx a lot Laiba😃 I will update 2moraw wel letc if da engagement happens 😆

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