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Posted: 18 years ago
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do cont soon.....its wonderful 👏
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Part 5:-

"Sir, The accused i.e. Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat oops, I apologize, the ex- Captain Shekhawat… has drifted away a few years ago from the path of a true soldier when he had lost control over his heart."

Her words were artistically being cut out by Naina when she objected. Standing up she said, - "Mr. Shekhawat in all respects is a paragon of selflessness, chivalry, courage and patriotism and he has proved his loyalty countless number of times. The court previously has overlooked all his accomplishments and I would request and hope that it would not be oblivious to this fact any longer. If the judgment is based on the fact that he is an emotional fool and would murder his senior to win thy fair lady's hand then I'd beg to differ. I have mighty confidence that the accused has hardly even lost his temper or should I say has risen his voice in front of his head who ever it might be."

She was rudely being cut off..

"But your honor my good colleague is just trying to convolute a simple case by her so called debates and I sincerely hope that you ignore her shifty approach to the matter. She's just wasting time."

Naina looked at the judge for his say in the matter and was pleased when the judge called out for an objection overruled. With a placid expression and utter ignorance to the hateful overlooks which she had been showered by her 'so called good colleague' she continued, "Thank you your honor and in order to convince my opponent I have proof to support my confidence. I would also like to turn the spotlight on the spot that before being terminated Major Nair had dropped hints of Mr.Shekhawat's innocence. If it be your permission I would like to call upon Major General Chandok to attest my opinion."

Rajveer was shocked to see the same person who had in passionately stripped him from an army captain to a commoner now speaking in favor of him. In his heart blazed a new hope.

Having taken his position, Naina asked him, "Sir, Do you agree with my statement and do what's your personal say in my matter?"
In his reply, he stated, "Rajveer has been a an accomplished pass out of KMA second only to the best – Navin Singh Ahluwalia who had been accused of turning out to be a traitor, but the matter has been in the grey light in the past four years since Rajveer's arrest has pointed of him being innocent and the substantial proof of the red box that he was being poisoned. Anyways sticking on to the topic I do not recall Rajveer of ever being impolite. He has been the most courteous of officers and I also would like to add that in those days, Rajveer has taken up punishments for no fault of his and has yet proved to be the most vigilant of officers when he had stopped the weapons from being smuggled out of the academy while being under solitary confinement."

At this point Captain Salve stood up and walked over to her senior and said, "Sir, I recall that the ex-Captain had been punished for holding an illegal secret meeting without the consent of KMA's Vice Principal and also not divulging the details for which the convention was held. Also I would like to add that at Rajveer's mere order his entire favorite batch of students among whom, five of them have assembled here including my good associate had created chaos just to sanitize a person's ego and teach that person a lesson as to bow down before a raw batch of uncivilized cadets."


( to be cont.)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I will better murder this salve.......
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
update soon.. loved it.. n missing it...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
plz continue......
Just a guess.....is Naina married???
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 5 - (b)

(cont.)


"Thereby if Captain Shekhawat is cunning enough to brainwash a batch of uncultured cadets then he must be proficient enough to formulate his evil plans of murdering his much respected senior in cold-blood just to achieve his selfish target. He had endangered KMA's reputation of one of the finest army training institution of the country."

"I object your honor", broke in Naina. "My patron had in fact in a cumulative effect, all noble intentions. He has always prioritized and kept the welfare and reputation of the academy as the most important in his life. But I would once again like to stress upon the fact that the occupation of Major Nair as the Principal had the negative impact on the repute. In this case I would like to call upon Mr.Gehlot, the mentor of the accused and have his say in the matter."

If Naina and all the cadets had caught Raj's expression at that time they would have been stupefied. His eyes were ferociously aghast with a strange deathly fire. He was stumped at the reason of Naina wanting this person to speak in the court. He would obviously speak against him. Had she gone insane?

Naina felt a chilly tremor when she finished. She was aware of the piercing- bone-creeping gawk. She had to do this. She had decided upon using the enemies themselves as a witness Raj's of innocence. Alekh had also agreed to her this strategy. She hoped that he was fine and had escaped.

Gehlot and Salve were shocked. This was the last thing they had expected. Unenthusiastically he came up onto the platform. His main plan was to stay behind the curtains and mastermind the entire operation. But he didn't like the mannerism in which Captain Ahluwalia was dealing with the case. It had started to unnerve him. He decided to use the situation to his maximum capability. But unfortunately for him, Naina wasn't going to let him talk. He was going to be in for a tough interrogation.

Curtly, she started, "For how long have you known Mr. Shekhawat?

"Since quite some time."

"The court doesn't require vague answers, Sir. I want to know the exact crisp date."
Her cold, chilly tone had not gone unnoticed.

"From the time he had joined KMA."

"It is quite popularly believed that you are quite picky about your choices. Then how come you'd struck a very deep rapport with Mr. Shekhawat in such a short span of time. You're trust in him is to be believed has no bounds."

"Yes. He's one of the most sincere soldiers that I have ever seen. He has never disrespected anyone and was one of the best soldiers the country could ever have. I am proud to have been his mentor."

"Was? Do you think he murdered Colonel Shakti or was there a spam to frame him and Colonel Shakti had died due to a scuffle?"

"Evidences point out to the latter."

"What if the evidences are false? What if there was a genuine reason for the then incident to take place?

"I don't know. But The evidences force me to believe that my protge is guilty."

"Is your choice so abstract and random that you'd just choose any cadet as your protge?"


( to be cont)


I noe this is a very short part. n I was plannin to write a long one. But Im going out right now. So Ill update the next part tomorrow and its going to be a very long one.
😉 Once again for your encouragin and beloved comments.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
hey too good dear

pl continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
hey too good dear

pl continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
Yeah last 3 parts were very much short..but were excellent ...waiting for d longer one...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
very, very interestin!! 👏 👏 👏
though short but enjoyed it!!
ll be waiting for a huge update
so continue soon!!

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