FASLY AUR CHAHTEN [SK]new promo - Page 3

Hi ppl hwz going!I'm writing more n more but just wanna knw tht is my fanfiction going good or not caz i'm reciveing no comts so i tel u which was disturbing me in my mind for long time but i still hapy to see herez ppl viewing my fan fic hope thy r liking.As far as i knw herez only 2 or 3 mem were comtng.Aleez

Aur haan jate jate mai ap ko bta du don't worry ab mery next part Mey SUJAL any wala hai so keep comtng meri fan fic t u mai hud hi chala rahe ho no 1 suporting me[i mean no comts frm u guys]ok CU

[now sujal's home in uk] Servant::sahab jee barey sahab(Lalit)app ko nichey table pye breakfast kye liye bula rahey hain &n bsp; sujal gets up susti sye rubs his eyes Sujal::papa bula rahey hain?[oos ki ankhey khul gai papa kye nam sye hehe] Servant::jee sir! Sujal::ohh un sye kahu mai baas abi aya &nb sp; sujal servant kye jatey hi allmost jump laga kye bed sye nichey aur juldi juldi kaprey change kar kye goes downstairs table pye vasu n lalit r there on the table sujal reaches the table fast fast(hehe) &n bsp; Sujal::hi..Good morning every1!   ; Mom Dad::Good morning! &nbs p; Lalit::sujal beta lagta hai ap sari raat sueye nahe! & nbsp; Sujal::nahi papa mai tu juldi su gaya thaa. Lalit::beta mai ap ka baap ho ap merye nai suba mai ne suba 5 bajey ap ki garie ghar mey dahel hotey dekhe hai [sujal become sharminda pani pani papa kahne ka andaz he kuch isa thaa] Sujal::wo..Papa..Wo merey dost ki tarf party thi ptaa hi nae lagaa kub time guzara[sar pye hath phertey hoy] Lalit::beta yee ap ka golden time hai agar ap ne abi sye mehnat kar kye business mey apna nam na bnaya tu mery badh ap ka kya ho ga!Issi liye abb mai chahta ho kye tum SHADIE kar lu ta kye tum ko apne zemey-dari ka ehsaas ho (sujal looks at vasu for help) Vasu::oh stop it lalit!Mery betey ki umaar hi kya hai aur itni juldi shadi ye hi tu din hotey hai azadi kye enjoy kye phir badh mey bchye aur masrufiyat huh [i ll back after few minutes so keep readng aleeza]

Lalit::bohot ho gai masti ab jo bi ho sujal tum next week PAKISTAN jaa rahey ho waha pye mera eak dost hai DARIN tum un kye ghar tehru geye mera irada Pakistan mey sugar mill laganey ka hai Darin kye sath!Tum tayari kar lu aur haan un ki eak beti hai"KASHISH" mai chahta ho kye tum osey bi DEKH lu mai issy bohot phle dekha thaa agar tumey passand aie tu hum "TUMHARI AUR KASHISH" ki baat agey badhaye gyee Vasu::kya!!Kya matlub hai tumhara kye mai apne bahu waha sye nahi mai apne bahu isi lana chahti ho ju merye betey kye sath kadam sye kadam mila kye chal sakey. Sujal::papa mama theak keh rahen hai mujh pye kuch tu reham karey! Lalit::mai ne ye nahi kaha kye harr surat KASHISH sy SHADI karu abi sirf Osy dekhna hai baas samjhey! [lalit goes 4m table] Sujal::mama ap lukey papa ko please mujey abi shadi nai karni! Vasu::mai ho na!Tum pareeshan maat ho aur jau yaha mai hudd dekh lu ge tumary papa ko,Aur wapis aa kye keh dena kye wo achi nahi ye hai,wo hai.Ab tumary papa zaburdasti tu nahe kar saktey.Teak hai na! &nb sp; Sujal:: hoon ye bi hai thank u mama[both r smiling] .....@@@.....

Raat kye khany k badh kashish upar chatt pye tehalti thi ye os ki hamesha ki addat thi wo eak ghanta zarur chahal-qadmi karti thi sath mei mehak hoti thi donu tehalty hoye duniya jahan ki batey karin...Aj raat kashish akeli thi mehak kye saar mey dard tha iss wo khana khaney k badh ja kar su gai thi aur kashish upar akeli tehal rahi thi aj # kash... Sara din busy rahe thi kyu k aj ka...Ka last exam tha aur phir exam khata hone ki khushi mey apni dost ayesha k sath bazar ki haqq chantey hoye os ki tangey jawab dye gain thin,sham ko wapsi hoi tu khana kha k maze sye soti rahi # Kashish ne khuley asman paar nigha dali hazaru sitarye dhamak rahey thye aur taru k darmiya chandni bekherta chand ab kas...Tehltey tehaltey thakk gai tu nichye jany ka socha nichey jatey hoe rastey mey rishi ka room ata tha kash.. Ne rishi kye room mey jhanka.Rishi balcony ki taraf easy chair pye jhol raha thaa

Thank u ashwaria for ur comment.Aj bohot dinu badh time mila likhny kye liye actually bohot busy ho is liye online hona mushkil hota hai abi mai likh rahe ho pls baki loog bi comments karna okay!CU

Rishi ko dekhtey hi kashish ki rage-intiqam padki K::[apne ap sy] hmmm tu muhtarum aram ke mood mey hai.Dosru ko tang karney wala khud sakun mey hai nahi mery hotey hoe rishi tum sakun sye nahi rahu gye ye mai honey nahi du ge [k ne kasuti zindage ki KAMULIKA Ki tarah muu teda meyda kar k soch] wo dabey pauu khamoshi sye room mey aa gaee idhar udhar dekha tu side table paar alarm wala timepiece nazar aa gaya kashish ne time piece uthaya alarm bhara aur bile ki tarah chalti hue belkul rishi ke pichey ja ke khadi ho gai aur dosrey hi lamhey kashish ne timepiece rishi k kaan sye laga kar alarm khol diya alarm ki awaz itne unche thi ke qabaar mey sue hoe murdey jagh uthtey tu pher easychair pye jholta hoa wajod kyu na hadh-bhadha uthta iss achanak aafat pye phle tu os ne kaan ke pechy hath mara,jub hi os ki garift mey kashish ki delicate kalai aa gaie aur iss ke sath hi os ne uth kar gardan gumai muskurati kashish ki nazrey jaab samney padi tu yakdam hi os ki muskurahat udhan chu ho gai kashish ke chehrey paar bokhlahat ke asara namudar hoe "WO RISHI NAHI THAA" & nbsp; .....@@@.....

Hey dostu!Kya baat hai app koi react nai kar rahe matlub comments nahi dye rahey kya baat hai?Kuch pasand nahe aa raha na agar kuch acha nahe lagg raha tu mujey btau na!Mai ap sub ki baat suno ge mai ne bhala kabi app sye kaha hai ke sirf achey achey com...Dena meri fan fiction pye sub ko khuli chut hai ap sub yaha dil khol ke boraiyan karu balke mujey tu bohot khushi ho ge ke agar ap ko kuch acha nahe laga tu ap ne mujey btaya par pls kashish ki tarah chop tu maat rahu chahye kuch bora hi bolu paar bolu tu sahi.Ok CU

Hey Aleeza kya karoon time nahin milta acomment karne ka great parts keep up the good work 👏 👏

Thanx aishwaria again for comments mery paas time nai tha iss liye update nai kar pai really mai ap ko sirf msg dyne ai thi ke meri tabiyat kharab hai abi update nahi kar pau ge sorry pls app com... Karu geye tu mai utney lambey aur intreasting parts du ge ok takecare CU soon