'DARD ka rishta' KYPH ff END pg 35 - Page 28

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Gr8 FF di sooooo dis was ur first medical FF which every1 at TCC was raving on about i finally got a chance to read it (all in one n'll) whoooooooooohoooooooooooo

i think dilip had Schizophrenia thats why throughout the whole FF he was paranoid by people finding out bout mishti's condition, always thought he knew wots best for mishti even after her marriage when she was angads responsiblity, actually thought angad loves mishti, i think he should'v had a relapse n spent his final days in rehab coz dats what he deserves😆

i think the only FF i havent had a chance to read is "The first Kiss" 😍 otherwise im pretty much up2d8 with all ur FF's

this FF reminded me of ER in the the george clooney n dr Carter days 😍😍😍

thanks shelly......loved ur comments

Schizophrenia is a familial disease...u may be right, Dilip probably had it too 😆

just finished reading this one--
was kinda discouraged by the title at first but then my curiousity got the better of me and i continued to read it--
i liked the fact that it was short but yet had a strong story and good parts --
gr8 work !! 😃
p.s.-- u seem to really like doctor-based stories (i noticed another one of ur ffs was based on the medical scene as well)-- are u a doctor by any chance ?? 😊

Originally posted by: sweetaddiction

just finished reading this one--
was kinda discouraged by the title at first but then my curiousity got the better of me and i continued to read it--
i liked the fact that it was short but yet had a strong story and good parts --
gr8 work !! 😃
p.s.-- u seem to really like doctor-based stories (i noticed another one of ur ffs was based on the medical scene as well)-- are u a doctor by any chance ?? 😊

thanks sweetaddiction. This was my first ff i wrote that is why it was short and not descriptive but to date is the closest to my heart 😊

really ?!-- it definitely did not seem like it was ur first !!

heyy i just read ur ff.. it was a nice story XD 👏

Originally posted by: ssh57

Hi Sangeeta, I read all your ffs except this. As I've told u earlier, TMR is my fav., so I've read it many times over. I thought this story being in medical line will be more apt on AR. Hence did not read this. But today I'm glad to have read it as AK also suit it very well and it was as beautiful as TMR. All the song u have used r beautiful ones especially the one by Mehndi Hasan. Just loved it👏

thanks ssh....ur really fan # 1 now😆 I never though at AR fan would read this one as this has been re written as TMR for AR fans. As this was my first ff, even if it had a good story, it's full of grammatical and spelling mistakes i bet😆 thanks sshh...BTW i have updated pehchan😊