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Posted: 18 years ago
loved the part 😛 and the best scene was that where ali called arzoo downstairs and arzoo said she will complain to bade chacha and he run inside scared and the way he asked her whether she really going to complain that part was so nice i could not hold my laughter 😃 i felt as if i am watching the scene. also the way they both confused shiza. didn't like the way zohaib was thinking 😕 he is such frustated i guess he was never ignored before or may be i was always respected by all for his cool behaivior so this was the reason for his behaviour as he never expected this. oh god u again made us think about wht will happen next or why zohaib behaved like this 😡 ur so bad. i think u were a brain eater in privious birth 😉 continue sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooon i cant wait 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey ania its really a nice part and thanks for showing more cute scenes bet ali and arzoo. zohaib attitude was disappointing i felt bad when arzoo didnt forgive him but today i was angry with zohaib 😡 how he could thought such a thing for arzoo. WHATEVER the reason behind it he was bad today for thinking such a stupid thing. He completely knows what is condition of arzoo. On one side where ali is trying to cheer her up he was feeling bad. I guess arzoo chacha chachi must have told bade pa abt her father when she was under shock.or may be he had heard lawyer adeel and arzoo talk. In a letter i think all the details how she should handle the things and may be some lovely father talks are there. i hope so.
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Posted: 18 years ago
amazing part i thought u said zohaib was the more mature of all or that whenever someone needs advice they would come to him so where are his brains now i felt like laughing and pitying his thoughts that was something well it seems a cold war sort of thing has began now zohaib would again hurt aarzo in someway i guess really cute part pls con soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
really a very intersting part cant wait for next part continue soon. & dont worry i will read ur ff and keep commenting as i really like this ff.
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Posted: 18 years ago
very intersting part really loving the naughty, sweet, inocent ali's character, also arzoo's character, afia was very cute wow having pillow fight with ali, shiza was annoyed. Liked zohaib's character also but not the negetivity he showed in end. cont soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sharma.nat

loved the part 😛 and the best scene was that where ali called arzoo downstairs and arzoo said she will complain to bade chacha and he run inside scared and the way he asked her whether she really going to complain that part was so nice i could not hold my laughter 😃 i felt as if i am watching the scene. also the way they both confused shiza. didn't like the way zohaib was thinking 😕 he is such frustated i guess he was never ignored before or may be i was always respected by all for his cool behaivior so this was the reason for his behaviour as he never expected this. oh god u again made us think about wht will happen next or why zohaib behaved like this 😡 ur so bad. i think u were a brain eater in privious birth 😉 continue sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooon i cant wait 😳 😳

wow sharma ji!! the biggest comment i have got until now. thanksssssssss!!!!!!!!! u know i read it two times. i was so happy that i couldn't control myself from reading it again. 😳 i liked the scenes b/w arzo and ali too.😉 i want to answer ur questions about zohaib but i can't open my mouth now. but don't worry it will be answered in the next chapter. 😃 and yup i again made u thinkkkkk. lol 😆 brain eater in the previous birth?? 😆 God I couldn't control my laughter while reading this. Where did the brain eater come from? 😛 u continue commenting like this. i like the big big comments. 😃 i will continue as sooooooooon as i can.😳 Keep reading and Commenting. 😊

tc.

ania 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: nature099

hey ania its really a nice part and thanks for showing more cute scenes bet ali and arzoo. zohaib attitude was disappointing i felt bad when arzoo didnt forgive him but today i was angry with zohaib 😡 how he could thought such a thing for arzoo. WHATEVER the reason behind it he was bad today for thinking such a stupid thing. He completely knows what is condition of arzoo. On one side where ali is trying to cheer her up he was feeling bad. I guess arzoo chacha chachi must have told bade pa abt her father when she was under shock.or may be he had heard lawyer adeel and arzoo talk. In a letter i think all the details how she should handle the things and may be some lovely father talks are there. i hope so.

yay!! another big comment. thanks so much nature for liking the part. i like the scenes b/w ali and arzo too. they are cute and naughty at the same time. even i am angry at zohaib for thinking like this. but there is a reason behind it which will be revealed in the next part, hopefully 😳 nice predictions.😃 i loved reading ur comment. 😃 Keep reading and commenting like this. 😛

tc.

ania. 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: armaghan0

amazing part i thought u said zohaib was the more mature of all or that whenever someone needs advice they would come to him so where are his brains now i felt like laughing and pitying his thoughts that was something well it seems a cold war sort of thing has began now zohaib would again hurt aarzo in someway i guess really cute part pls con soon

hey armaghan! thanks for the comments. i know it's so unlike Zohaib as the way he is thinking now. he is being silly and nothing else. 😆 i will try to fix him in the next part 😆 lol just kidding. 😛 In the next part you might pity him more.😉 Well, i would say it's not completely his fault either. It's just the circumstances and some misinterpretions. Keep reading and commenting. 😳

tc.

ania 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: kaa_san

really a very intersting part cant wait for next part continue soon. & dont worry i will read ur ff and keep commenting as i really like this ff.

hey kaa_san! thanks so much for the comments and ofcourse for liking the part. i know that you all will comment and thats the only reason i am continuing this story as i know the regular readers WILL comment. 😳

thank you for the support. i really appreciate it. will cont. asap.

tc.

ania 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: lrstsk

very intersting part really loving the naughty, sweet, inocent ali's character, also arzoo's character, afia was very cute wow having pillow fight with ali, shiza was annoyed. Liked zohaib's character also but not the negetivity he showed in end. cont soon 👏

thanks for the comments irstsk and for liking each and every character of the fic. you will know the reason for the negativity showed by zohaib, in the next part. will continue as soon as i can. Keep reading and commenting like this. 😳

tc

ania 😊

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