*~KANCH KYE RISHTY~*[SK Last part] - Page 57

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Posted: 17 years ago
interesting..cooll...good going...bohat hii dilchasp... 👏 do post the next part soon..me waiting for the next part.... 😊 😛 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
😭 mare pyare kashish ka sath sujal kitna bura salook kar raha hai main nahi choron gi sujal ko i hate sujal asay order deta hai jaise kashish us ki servent hai itni nazook se larki bhala kaise itna zayada kam kar sakhti hai us ko kam ki waja itna teez bukhar ho gaya bachare na sara din itna kam kiya us ki ankh lag gaye to sujal us ko dantna lag gaya sujal na mare kashish ko taphar mara us ki itni himat aik bar maray samna aa jae ya sujal mar mar ker sedha kae don jalabi ki taran 😆 😆 😆 kashish is pregnent lakin sujal ko us ki koi parwa nahi hai agar kashish ka bachay ko khuch howa na phir dakhna sujal ka main kiya hal karte hoon amazing part continue soon janu
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Posted: 17 years ago
Oh 12:00am meri janu rabi ki birthday start hogai my janu this part iz completely urs..

***HAPPY BIRTHDAY RABI MANY MANY HAPPY RETURNS OF THE DAY***

I'M GOING 2 DEDICATE THIS PART 2 MY JANU PART OF MY HEART MY SWEETU,BUBBLU,SONU "RABI" [kashish_80]

SHONA I LOVE U ALOO00000000000000000T

MUAHHHHH...


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Kas:-hmm wo mai thek hon..
[thodi ghabrai si hai]

S:jau tum ja ky sou jau buhar uthar jay ga aur kam maat karna..

Ab zara narmi sy kehta hai..
Ka khamushi sy chali jati hai..Aur ja ky sofe py sou jati hai..

Nxt day..
Ka ki ankh khulti hai shez feeling really unwell
wo bed ki tarf dykhti hai jahan s nai yani wo ja chuka hai ka time dykhti hai tu 10am hoty hai..

Ka uthne ki koshish karti hai but b/c of weakness shez unable..

Osy bohot teez buhar hai aur bar bar ankhin bandh ho rahe hai..

Ka bohot mushkil sy uthti hai aur apny ap ko ghasetti hoi bed tak jati hai n bed py geer jati hai..

Sara din un hi guzar gaya buhar mei madhoshi mei as u know ky bohoot teez bohar ho jaye na tu bohoott kam nazar anye lagta hai n patient madhosh ho jata hai..

Kuch esa hi ka ky sath bi hota hai..

Sham mei os ki halat zara behtar hoti hai tu wo uthti hai n kitchen mei ja kar apny liye juice bnati hai..

Juice ly ky wo hall mei beth jati hai aur juice pine ky badh wahin sofe sy take laga kar ankhin bandh kar leti hai..

Thodi dyr badh bell bajti hai kas ankhin kholti hai aur bohot ahista ahista chal ky darwaza kholti hai jahan s khada hai..

Es sy pehly ky koi kuch bolta s ko call aajati hai..

S steps in n picks up hez cell phone..

S:dykheye mr.Mehta ap ko mai sary details bta chuka hon agay ap khud handle karin gye..

S:what rabish ap ko 1 bar samaj nai ati mai kisi meeting weeting ky liye nai aa raha pehle hi aj sara din mai meetings mei tha now i'm tired..Sara kaam ap dykhe gye..

Disconnets the call..

Pichy mudhta hai jaha ka door ky pas khadi hai..

S:khana bnaya?Aur ghar saf kiya?

Ka dar jati hai os ki tabiyat thek na hony ki waja sy wo kuch nai kar pai thi..Aur ab s pho..Py bat karny ky badh bohot hi gusy mei tha

Ka:na.. Nahe! Wo..muje buh...

Es sy pehle ky wo bechari kuch bolti..

TISHHHHH...!!!
TISHHHHH...!!!

Ka ko 2 thapad padhty hai su sy ka tu shocked hai..

S osy balun sy pakad ky nichy gerata hai n marny lagta hai...

S:kuch nai kiya kyu mai ne kya kaha tha Han..Yaha tumy aram karwane nai laya souna tum ne..Itni jurat ky mera kehna nai mana SUJAL GAREWAL ka..

Chela raha hai os bechari par os mar raha hai tangun sy..

Aur ka wo bechari tadap rahe hai aur apne pait ko su ki mar sy bachane ki koshish mei apne donu hath apni tummy py zor sy wrap kar rakhy hai..

S osy bina dykhy bina sochy ky wo pregnant hai marey ja raha hai..

K:ahhh sujal plz..

Rou rahe hai aur s sy reham ki begh mang rahe hai...Osy khud ki nai apny bachy ki parwah hai jesy wo bchany ki koshish kar rahe hai..

Par os bereham py koi asar nai ho raha wo ka ko os ki pait ky pas tangun sy mar raha hai..Bohot hi gusy mei..

K:sujal plzzz... mera bacha ...

Bachy ka naam sou kar s 1 dum sy rok jata hai aur gusy mei upar apne room mei chala jata hai..

N ka wahin zameen py gerie hai osy s ne bohot bydardi sy mara hai ky os ky sary jisam mei takleef ho rahe hai wahan sy uthne ky kabil nahi hai wo..

Aur pher wo wahin padi rehti hai sari raat su ko os ka khayal tak nai osy room mei bolane ki zehmat nai ki..

Nxt day..

Kas wahin zameen py bethei 1 hath sofe py rakhy aur sofe sy take lagay bethi hai..

Raat bhar wo roti rahe aur najane kab sou gai..

Ab jab os ki ankh kholti hai tu bi es qabil nahe ky uth paye..

Upar room ki tarf dykhti hai aur pher apni tummy ki taraf..

Put her hand on her stomach

her baby..lol

K:tu kya mai ne tum bcha liya..Janty ho tumhare papa esa kyun karty hai kyu ky wo bohot dard seh chuky hai mai janti ho tumhary papa dil ky bohot achy hai ab ye hum donu janty hai na..Un ka gusa bohot juld khatam ho jaye ga tum bilkul pareshan maat hona..Ok..😆

Ankhun sy anso jari hai..

Bechari ka buhar ab bi nai utra hai..
Ab s nichy ata hai..

S:yahan kyun bethi ho chalo utho mai office ja raha hon sara kaam kar lena..

Chala jata hai..

Aur ka bohot mushkil sy uthti hai os ki delicate body py neel padhy hai s ky marne sy..


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rabi sorry yaar bohot bakwas taren prt tumy dedicate kiya ab kya karu itny sad track py ja rahe hai na fiction es liye..

plz do comment..
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anu
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanx nikki,surya n rabi...


Nikki u r right lekin ab pichy kashish ky ghar waley os ka bhai bi bugat raha hai filhal osy maru goli...Aur han sujal acha nai kar raha magar fikar maat karu osy bi ehsas ho jaye ga..Thanx 4 the comments..😊


Surya thanx 4 the comments n liking keep commenting😊


rabi my janu looking very angry hehe sujal tu nai bachy ga tumhary hathu lekin osy marna hai tu muje apni fiction ka hero dye du ab tumy hero leny sy tu rahe.Hehe hai jalebi ki tarah sida omg omg ye tum ne jalebiyun ki dukan khol li aur muje btaya tak nai hmm u silly girl..hehe tum ulti sidi btay karti rehti ho aj ka kis ky sath rehti ho...Allah miya ki gaye..hehehe Oyi janu thanx 4 the comments..
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anu
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Posted: 17 years ago
okkkkkkkkkk that's itttttttt noooooo nooooo more plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz................anam 😭 .i can't see that bloody sujal any more 😡 .i hateeeeeeeeee himmmm.....nafrat hai sakt nafrat 😡 .pehele kashish ka rape karvwaya, phir usse pregnant kiya and now in that delicate situation sujal is hitting her sooo badly 😵 . kitne beherehmi se maar raha tha usse 😡 .he was hitting her in fact killing her,stabbing her with his legs .aik baar bhi bache ka khayal nahi aaya 😡 .has he lost his mind........what the hell he thinks of himself 🤬 .kashish ke chilane paar usse ehsaas hua that kashish is preganant 😭 .leki uske baad bhi he didn't bother pick her up and take her to the room for the rest 😭 .uppar se kaam karne ko kaha 😡 .insaan hai ya pathar 😡 .khud dukh sahe hai toh iska matlab yeh nahi ki woh purre duniyan ko dukh aur dard de woh bhi bewajah 🤬 .aisa rawaiyan dekhkar i really think joh sujal ke saath hua na achi hi hua 😡 .well he deserves it . aik aurat ko maara hai usne aur woh woh bhi woh aurat joh uski patni hai aur usike bache ki maa banne wali hai,joh usse itna pyaar karti hai ki uske liye yeh saare dard sehene keliye tayar hai,jis ki koi galti tak nahi hai.sujal uss aurat ko takleef deraha hai 😭 . he is commiting a sin 😡 .bohot bhugatna padega sujal ko baad mein 🤬 . paap kar raha hai woh yeh saab karke 😡 .i really hate the people who don't respest a woman and her the situation she is in.aise logon ka iss duniyan mein naa rehena hi acha hai 😵 .aur pata nahi yeh kashish kiss sadi ki aurat hai .this is totally unbelivable ki sujal uske saath yeh saab karr raha hai aur woh uss bache ko keheti hai that everything will get back to normal .huh........lekin mujhe yeh samaj nahi aaraha ki woh yeh saab kyun sehe rahi hai jabki uski koi galti nahi hai 😭 .hamesha aik aurat hi kyun jhuke.why.......balki usne sujal ke khilaf jakar sujal ko yeh ehsaas karvana chahiye that he is wrong,what all he is doing is wrong, uski soch,tarike,aur aadatein saab galat hai 😭 .she doesn't deserve all this 😭 .waise the part was rocking anam ⭐️ .sach yaar tumne waqai mein story really interesting bana di hai 😉 .adding emotions to it of gried,pain,hatred,revenge,passion,obsession and loveee....amazingggggggg....... 🤗 .the part was great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzzzzz.........can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
fravashi: sweetheart bohot gussy mei dikh rahe ho cool down.Hmm sujal ko bi bhugatna padhy gai don't worry waqai mei wo acha nai kar raha kashish bechari ka kya qasur hai 😔 thanx 4 the comments😊
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anu
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Posted: 17 years ago
Plz comments..
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Ka bohot mushkil se uthti hai aur kaamry mei jati hai..

Abi ka room mei se chezin utha hi rahe hoti hai ky phone ki bell hoti hai..

Wo pho. Uthati hai dusri tarf veena hoti hai..

Ve:kashish beta kesi hai tu?

K:mumma mai bilkul thek ho ap sab kesy hai?

Ve:hum bi theek hai tu bta sujal kesa hai?Tuje zayada satata tu nahi??Aur tera khayal tu rakhta hai na?

K:jee muma wo theek hai aur mera bohot khayal rakhta hai..

Ye kehte hoye os ki ankhun mei anso aa jaty hai..

Ve:thek se khana beta acha aur zayada kaam maat karna acha..

K:jee mumma..

Ankhun sy anso gerny shuru ho jaty hai jine wo hath sy saf kar leti hai..

Ve:le chal visal sy baat kar..Bohot juldi padi hai esy tuj sy baat karne ke liye..

Visal pho. Pakad leti hai..

Vi:hi bhabi kesy ho ap?

[aray ye tu kashish sy ap py aa gai..lol]

K:mai thek hon aur tum?

Vi:1 dum fit fat..Sujal bhaiya kesy hai aur mera bhatija kesa hai??

K:duno theek hai.papa,angad,kripa aur sneha kesy hai?

Vi:sab theek hai aur hum sab ap donu ko bohot miss karty hai..

K:muje bi tum sab bohot yadh atay ho..

Vi:bhabi Bhaiya kaha hai?

K:wo tu office mei hai..

Vi:ok!Aur bhabi ap apna khayal rakhna khub khana pina mera bhatija bohot healthy hona chaheye..

K:acha meri maa..
[smiles]

Vi:ok bhabi bye takecare..

K:bye..


Pho. Bandh hota hai..

Ka ko khayal atta hai ky vis sahi keh rahe thi osy kuch khana chaheye kal sy kuch khaya bi nai tha os ne aur ab tu jisum mei sari taqat khatam ho rahe thi..

Ka kitchen mei ati hai..Aur apne liye sandwich bna leti hai sath mei juice lene lagti hai..

Lekin pher osy wo pal yadh atay hai jab honeymoon py su ne osy doodh pilaya tha zabardasti..

Ka ko wo sab yadh ata hai tu wo muskurati hai pher jab achanak apne khayalun sy bahir ati hai tu os ki ankhun mei anso aa jate hai..

Wo chup chap apni sandwich ki plate uthati hai aur sath mei 1 doodh ka glass le kar dining table py aa jati hai..

Os ka kuch khane ka dil nahe lekin es khayal sy ky os ka baby bhoka hai wo khana shuru karti hai aur mushkil sy 1 sandwich aur half doodh ka glass pi ky chod dyti hai..

Pher uth ky kaam mei lag jati hai..

2 members ka kaam hi kitna hota hai ghar ko safai ki zarurt nahi magar ka sara kaam dubara karti hai s ky dar sy ky agar osy dubara gussa aya tu wo khud ko kesy bacha paye ge..


Pher sham hoti hai aur as usual ka s ka w8 kar rahe hai aj osy s sy kuch zaruri baat karni hai..


Sham ky 7 bajy s atta hai aur hal mei match [ju muje zehar lagta hai..lol] laga ky beth jata hai..


Ka ati hai aur wahin s jes ne abi kapdy tak change nai kiye ky pas aa ky bethti hai qaribi sofe par..


Ka darty darty os sy puchti hai..

K:khana lagau?

S:nai abi bokh nai..

K:sujal..wo..wo muje tum sy kuch baat karni hai..

S:bolo..
Match dykhte dykhte

K:wo sujal muje doctor ky paas jana tha check up ky liye..

S:abi nai mery paas time nai..


{match dykhne ka time hai..lol}


K:lekin sujal muj..


S cuts in btwn..

S:kaha na time nahi..Mera dimag maat chatu jau yahan sy..

K ki ankhun mei anso aa jate hai aur wo khamoshi sy uth ky room mei aa jati hai..

Window ky pas khadi ho kar bahir sky ko dykhne lagti hai..

THINKS

K:kyun mai apni zindagi mei jin jin logo sy pyar karti hon bhagwan uny mujh sy chen lety ho..,pehle mery bachpan mei meri maa,pher mery parivar ka pyar un ka sath aur ab sujal bi...

Ankhun mei anso liye bhagwan se shekwa kar rahe hai..


K:harr bar mai hi kyun..Kyun bhagwan sehna muje hota hai harr koi mery kandy [shoulder] py sarr rakh ky rota aya kabi nai toti mai kisi ky samne ky kahin os ka dokh aur na bhady magar jab muje sahary ki zarurt hai tu KOI MERY SATH NAHI kyu....Mai ne kya begada tha kisi ka itni tadap muje sehni hai..1 ladki chahti hi kya hai pati ka pyar os ki zara si tawaja..
Zindagi itne gham kyu dyti hai kya karu kisy kahon mai duniya ju kisi ky jazbat nai samjti duniya tu duniya aj tu mery apne mery sath nahe mera sujal mery sath nahi...
[weeping]

phir osy su ky kahy wo sab lafz yadh atay hai ju wo pho. Py baat kar raha tha ky os ne hi ka ka rape karwaya tha aur abi ju os ne nichy kaha ye batin yadh arahi hai..

K aur zayada ro rahi hai tadap ky sath..

K:kyu kyu kiya mery sath esa kyu sujal..Kya begada tha mai ne tumhara..Mera na sahi par es masom ka tu khayal karu kya begada hai es ne tumhara...

Aur roti hai..

Todi dyr badh wahan sofe pe ja ky beth jati hai jaha wo soti hai aur kuch dyr badh wo sou jati hai..Roty roty..,

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S:Kashish utho..

Kas nai uthti..

S: KASHISHHHH

zor sy chekha


K:hmm kak..kya hoa..??

Hadhbada ky uthti hai..


S:uthu khana du muje..

Ka time dykhti hai 12am hai..

Ka khud ko sametti hai aur uthti hai..

S:kis ki ejazut sy sui thi..

Ka khamosh hai kyu ky wo janti hai ky agar boli tu su danty ga..

S:khabar dar ju ainda esy sui mai office sy thaka ata hon tum roz muje duba ky soya karu ge kan khol ky soun lu..


{Oh God utha le aray es sujal ko utha le warna tapke ga mery readers ky hathu...lol}

kas bas sar helati hai..

Ab osy khana khelati hai aur wapis atay hai room mei donu..

Su bed py laitta hai..
Aur ka haye bechari os ki tangy dubati hai khud bi thaki hai..

Ka ko bohot thakawat hai aur neend bi aa rahe hai lekin wo s ko duba rahe hai magar thek sy nai duba pa rahi..

S:Theek sy dubau..

Kadakdar awaz mei..

Ka dubane lagti hai..Osy neend ka jhonka ata hai aur wo su py gerne lagti hai..

Aur s jesy esi intzar mei tha..

Os bechari ko itni zor sy apni leg sy hit karta hai..
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Posted: 17 years ago
Ok kuch kaam hai adha prt hai baki thodi dyr mei aa ky likhun ge..
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anu
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Posted: 17 years ago
Ok i'm back baki half prt bas thodi hi dyr mei plz do comment.
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anu
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Posted: 17 years ago
Ok i'm back baki half prt bas thodi hi dyr mei plz do comment.
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anu

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