*~KANCH KYE RISHTY~*[SK Last part] - Page 58

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Posted: 17 years ago
Ok i'm back baki half prt bas thodi hi dyr mei plz do comment.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Haye mera prt itna lamba likha sara zaya ho gaya ehhh muje bohot gusa aa raha hai kal milty hai till then do comment.
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Posted: 17 years ago
arrrrrrrrgggggggggggggg wapis mara kashish ko 😡 . u know u r right sabse pehele sujal mere hatton hi marega 😡 . i won't leave him at all 😡 .kitni takleef de raha hai woh kashish ko iss halat mein . aur abb toh hadh se bhi zyada hadh hogayi . kiske izzazat se soyi thi 😭 . how dare he asks her this question 😡 . arre thodi dair ke liye so kya gayi sujal ne ite berehemi se usse uthaya aur itna kuch sunaya 😲 .hey waise yeh sujal ko kab pata chalega that what he is doing is wrong and horrible 😭 .anam usse jaldi ehsaas karva do na plzzzz......it's request yaar 😭 .aur nahi dekh paugi kashish ko iss halat mein 😵 .waise kahin kashish ka bacha toh nahi marr jayega na iss saab ki wajah se 😲 . i mean you know sujal is like hitting her really badly harr jagah aur phir thik se khana taak nahi khati kashish also he refuses to take her to the doctor for her regular check up 😭 . i think ki agar yeh saab ho toh bache paar bohot assar hota hai aur iss hitting ki wajah se kashish ko itni takleef aur dard hota hai toh naturally bache ko bhi andar chot aati hi hogi ,so i guess ki shayad kashish ka bacha iss duniya mein aane se pehele hi chala jayega aur shayad uss waqt sujal ko ehsaas hoga ki woh kashish ke saath kuch zyada hi sakt pesh aaya and he has commited a severe mistake jis wajah se abb uska aur kashish ka bacha chala gaya 😭 .and maybe then kashish ko itni nafrat hone lagegi sujal se because she lost her child and then she won't be with sujal and will then start hating him 😭 . nowwww....this can also be wrong and they might get together again 😳 . but i think ki aisa hi kuch shayad hoga 😉 .the part was great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzz.......can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Goshhhhh!!! I'm really shocked after reading the parts its too much.Wo kese maarr saktta hai kashish ko aur wo bi taab jaab wo maa banay wali hai ketni taklleef hoti ho gi na kashish aur oos ke bache ko sujal ki maarr se kitna berehamm hai wo.Aur oos ne kashish ko niche girra kaar maarra wo bi oos ke peett ke paas apne bache taak ka tu ehsas nahi bhala koi maarta hai apne wift ko jaab wo pregnant ho i really hate him ab kashish na kuch katte peti hai baas rooti rehti hai kya asar padhta hoo ga oos nani se jaan paar jiss ka kaasoor sirf itna hai ke wo kashish ke womb se peeda hoo raha hai God pls help my kashish.Well i must say this sujal is not a normal human being,how could he do all that i will not let him go first i'll definetly shoot him he slaped kashish how dare him to touched her atleast untill her delivery he must take good care of her.Really nice part Plsssssssssssssssssss cont.soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
Yaar only 2 comments 😭 😔 ye kya mai itni mehnat kar ky likh rahe hoon aur sab comments mei kanjosi karte ho😔 i'm really unhappy..😭 Anywaz thanx sweet nikki n aliza.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Ok Herz the Nxt prt goes..
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Wo leg ja ky lagti hai ka ky pait ky bohooot paas right side py..


Ka dard se tadap jati hai..

K:aaahhhhh..

S:roki kyu dubau..

Par ka nai dubati..
Su sidha hota hai wo ulta laita hai apne stomach py..

Ka ko dykhta hai to shocked reh jata hai..


Ka apne pait ko pakday dard sy tadap rahe hai..

K:aaahhh mummaaa..

Dard ki waja sy ankhun sy anso gerny lag gaye hai..

S:kashish r u all right?

K:su..sujal...Ahh maa..bohot dard ho raha hai..

S ka hath pakad leti hai zor sy..


[uff ye mai kya kar rahe hon..lol]

su foran ka ko apni godh mei utha leta hai aur os car mei bethata hai ja ky..

N bohot teez drive karta hai..

Ka osi tarah chela rahe hai..

Aur kuch dyr badh wo behosh ho jati hai dard sy..

In hospital..

S:doctor plz dykheye esy shez pregnant plzz..

D:plz ap yahan rokiye..

Ye keh kar doc andar room mei chali jati hai..

S wahin bahir w8 kar raha hai..

Kuch dyr badh 1 nurse ati hai..

S:kya hoa?

Thoda pareshan laag raha hai..

N:dykheye abi kuch kaha nai ja sakta ap plz ye kuch medicines le aye jaldi..

Su ko wo paper dyti hai
Su paper pakadta hai aur foran hospital sy nikal jata hai..

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kuch dyr badh wo wapis atta hai

aur nurse ko wo sari medicines dyta hai..

S:ye lijeye! Ab kesi hai wo?

N:ap ko doctor ne apne cabin mei bulaya hai uny ap sy kuch baat karni hai..

S:thanx


doc ky cabin mei jata hai

D:aye mr.Grewal..


Su aa ky bethta hai..

S:kya baat hai doctor??Sab thek tu hai na?

D:nahe mr.Grewal kuch bi theek nahi kashish ki pregnancy ka 3rd month chal raha hai..Aur pehle 3 months mei bohot zayada care ki zarurt hoti hai ye bohot nazuk waqt hota hai..
{i think 1st 3 hi hoty hai agar nai bi tu samajh lu..lol}

S:es ka kya matlub hai doctor?

D:matlab ye ky kashish ka blood presure bohot zayada hai osy bohot teez fever hai aur check up ky duran mai ne un ki body py bohot sy nishan dykhe hai jesy uny mara gaya ho dykhiye ye ap ka apis ka mamla hai mera kehna thek tu nahe lekin esa lagta hai osy bohot mara gaya ho..


S apni nazrin chura leta hai..


D:uny pait par kuch laga hai dykhie esi halat mei esa hona baby ky liye acha nahi ose koi chot aa jaye tu normal delivery mumkin nai..


{muje thek sy nai pta es liye ju likh rahe ho padhte jau..lol}

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ok kafi hai long prts ky liye plzz do comment..
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anu
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey anam !!!....caught up with all the recent part's yaar 😊 !!!...i thought that know that kashish has fever n she's not feelling well at all 😭, he will change 😊, but he didn't cared abt her health n his baby's 😭 😭 😭...he hit her badly 😡 😭 😡, didn't even remmember that she's pregnant 😭......poor kashish she can't even tell veena n the other's about what's happening with her 😭 😕 😭.....sujal ki himat kese hui kashish ko marne ne ki 😡, he was to see kashish holding her tummy n screaming wt pain 😲 😕 😭 😕.....he take's her to the hospital!!!!!! where the doctor tell sujal that kashish condition is bad n it's her 3 month!!!......yaar plz sujal ek dimagh dei do bohat zarurat hai usko is waqt ek ki 😉!!!!!!!!.........continue soon plzzzzzzzz......can't wait to read the next part 😭 😭 😭.......i feel so bad for kashish !!!!!!!!!!!!.......plzzzzzzzz do something 😊 😭 😊!!! .......great work !!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Nxt prt..
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S:doctor ap kehna kya chahti hai plz saff saff kahiye..


D:dekheye mr.Grewal mai ap ko kisi dhoky mei nai rakhna chahti lekin agar ap chahte hai ky ap ki patni aur baby theek rahin tu os ky liye ap ko inn donu ki bohot care karni hogi kyun ky agar ap ne inn ki care na ki tu case bighadhne ka darr hai filhal tu wo donu theek hai kyu ky chot sidi pait py nai lage warna kuch bi ho sakta tha..


D:aur wo bohot zayada weak ho gai hai shayad khana theek sy nai khati jis sy un ki sehat kharab ho sakti hai ap ko un ky khane pine ka khas khayal rakhna hai..



S:jee doctor mai khayal rakhun ga, kya mai kashish ko kab tak ghar le ja sakta hon?

D:abi tu wo behosh hai magar ap uny kal se pehle nai le ja sakty wesy uney kuch dyrr mei hosh aa jaye ga pareshni wali koi baat nahi hai..

S:thanx doctor..

D:anytime.



Su doc ky cabin sy bahir atta hai..



Aur k ky room ke bahir os ky hosh mei any ka w8 karta hai..


Phir andar chala jata hai jahan ka ko abi tak hosh nai aya..


Andar ja ky window ky paas khada ho jata hai..



Kuch dyrr badh..



S ko kisi ki awaz sonai dyti hai

"Pa..Pani"

su pichy mudhta hai..Tu dykhta hai..


Ky ka neem behoshi mei pani mangh rahe hai..


S os ky paas jata hai aur pani ka glass pakadhta hai lekin samajh nai pa raha kesy pilaye...


Pher su ka ki neck ki back side py hath rakh ky thoda upar kar ky osy sahara dye ky pani pilata hai..

Abi bi ka ko puri tarah hosh nai aya..


S osy pani pila kar pher litata hai aur jany ky liye mudhta hai ky pichy sy ka os ka hath tham leti hai..


[PLZ NOTE: ka ko abi puri tarah sy hosh nahi aya hai..]


S ka ki tarf mudhta hai..


K:sujal.....Maat jau mam...Muje bohot dar lag raha hai mery paas rahu..


S wahin beth jata hai..


S:han kashish mai yahin ho tumhary paas...

Ka ky sar ky paas beth jata hai..

Ka ko hosh aa chuka hai magar abi bi apni ankhin nai kholi os ne aur esy hi su ky lap py sar rakh ky lait jati hai...


K:mery paas raho muje chod ky maat jana..


S:hmm mai yahin hon..

Ka ky balon mei hath pherty hoye kehta hai..


Ka khud ko bohot mehfoz mehsus karti hai aur pher sy sou ky lap py hi sou jati hai..


Aur su bi wahin bethy bethy sou jata hai...

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NXT DAY

su uthta hai aur dykhta hai ky ka abi bi osy ky lap py sui hai su najany kyu ka ky masoom chehry mei kho gaya hai..


su nichy jhok ky ka ky forehead py kiss karta hai..


S:Good morning Bewi..


Phir ka ki tummy py kiss karta hai..


S:hi my chah..


[es ne name bi decied kar liya...lol]

ka abi bi gehri neend mei hai su ky chomny py side leti hai aur su ka bazu pakadh ky sou jati hai..Abi tak wo jagi nai..


phir 1 dum sy su ki ankhun ky samny wo hadsa aa jata hai apni behan aur baap ki dead bodies..

Su 1 dum sy apna bazu ka sy chudhata hai..

[Thinks]

S:nai ye mai kya karne ja raha tha,mai apny maqsad sy kesy pichy haat sakta hon apny baap apni behan ky khoni ki behan ky sath nahi kabi nahi...Abi mera badla baki hai..


Aur su ka ky paas sy uth jata hai..




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kya sujal ab bi kashish sy badla le ga ya phir apny erady badal ky 1 nai zindagi shoru kary ga..???




Jany ky liye padhte rahiye KKR n Do Comment..
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anu
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanx alot zaira 😊 mily ga sujal ko bi dimag filhal mera dimag tu thek ho le ju kharab hone lagta hai "no comments" dykh kar😔
thank u plzz keep commenting..
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anu
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Posted: 17 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was a real turning point 😲 . aik taraf se acha hi hua ki kashish hospital mein aayi 😉 . kyunki issi ke karaan sujal aur kashish aik doosre ke kareeb toh aaye 😳 . kaam se kaam sujal kashish ke paas toh tha aur issi wajah se usne kashish ko kiss kiya aur apne hone wale bache ko bhi kiss kiya joh kashish ke kokh mein paal raha hai 😳 . howwwwwwww sweeeeeettttt 🤗 .....paar yaar woh woh hadsa bhul kyun nahi jata 😡 .i mean manti hu ki bhulna namumkin hai magar kashish ki kya galti hai 😭 . aur phir uss bache ki bhi koyi galti nahi hai na .he shouldn't do anything now 😭 .bohot bura bangaya sujal abb lekin abb aur nahi plzzzzzzzzzzz........ 😭 i want them to be together now 😉 . wapis aik ho jane chahiye dono 😳 . hey anam kuch aise situation create kar do ki sujal kashish wapis aik doosre ke kareeb aajaye aur aik doosre mein samajaye sab kuch bhul kaar wapas nayi zindagi shuru kare 😳 .the part was great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzzzz........can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊

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