*~KANCH KYE RISHTY~*[SK Last part] - Page 56

Created

Last reply

Replies

885

Views

79.9k

Users

17

Likes

2

Frequent Posters

anni_23 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
le_me_star: thanx alotttt 4 the comments😊
ok mai saab points nxt prt mei clear kar du ge..
Kya karu karna padha es sy story lambi ho jaye ge thodi par koi baat nahe..
Ok mai apna 1st idea bi btau ge ju pehle mai ne soch rakha tha fic ky liye par abi nahe..😉
thanx 4 the lovely comments..😊
keep comments😉
...
anu
kashish_80 thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
ufff Allah anam itnay shock mat do yaar mujhay kashish ka liye bohat bura lag raha hai kitna pyar karte hai sujal se or sujal na kashish ka sath itna bura kiya kashish ka kiya kasoor hai wo to hamashan sirf dosron ki khushi chahti hai apna liye jeena to usa aata hi nahi hai sujal na acha nahi kiya sujal ko kashish ka bhai se badla lena chahiya tha kashish se nahi or jab sujal na kaha ya bacha humare pyar ki nahi balka mare hawas ki nishani hai ya sun kar to mera dil kar raha tha agar sujal mare samna aa jae to main us ko goli mar doon i know kashish khabhi bhi sujal sa nafrat nahi kare ge sujal kashish ko kitni bhi takleefan de lakin phir bhi kashish sujal se pyar karte rahe ge kyunki jab kise se pyar karte to us insaan ko takleef main nahi dakh sakhte or kashish bhi sujal se bohat pyar karte hai continue soon
anni_23 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
Thanx alot 4 the comments..😊

keep commenting..

Herez the nxt prt..

...
***FLASHBACK***
Su:-kahan jana hai tume es time khushi..

[khushi su ki choti behan 10 years old n su umm wo 15 years old hai yahan]

Khushi:- Sujal bhaiya ap bi na aj new year hai aur muje ap ky aur papa ky liye cards leny hai chaliye na market..

Su:-acha mery maa chalty hai baba ko kehta hon mai..

[Baba sujal's father]

In Market..

Baba:-aray beta yahan tu bohot rush hai..New year shoru hony mei zayada time nahe chalu jaldi sy cards lu pher ghar chalin..

Khushi:-ok baba

[khushi waz so happy n starts selecting cards]

khushi:-dykheye bhaiya kitny beautiful cards hai na ye ap ka hai aur ye baba ka..

[shows him 2 b'ful cards su smiles]

Su:-han bohot pyary hai chalu chalin..

Teenu shop sy baher atay hai road py bohot rush hai..

Khushi bohot khush hai aur apny baba aur bhaiya sy batin karti hui ja rahe hai ky achanak os ko dhaka lagta hai aur os ky hath sy cards gerr jaty hai aur hawa sy udh kar road ky pas ja gerty hai..

Khushi un ki tarf bhagti hai pichy sy osy os ky papa awaz dyte hai.. Aur os ky pichy bhagty hai..

Baba:-khushi beta rok jau wahan rush hai gariyan hai roku..

Magar tab tak khushi road tak puhanch chuki thi baba os ky pechy bhagye aur sujal osy tu kuch samjh nai aya howa kya hai..Wo bi pichy jata hai un duno ky..

Magar tab tak..




1 gari sy khushi ka accident ho chuka hai..


B:-khushiiii..

Khu ko ja ky pakadhty hai magar tab tak os ki sansin khatam ho chuki thi..

Su os car ki tarf dykhta hai jis sy khushi ka accident howa tha aur os ka number su ky zehan mei beth gaya tha..

Su bhagta howa khushi aur apny baba ky pas puhanchta hai os ky baba ne apne dil ko tham rakha hai uny heart-atack aya aur wo bi chal basy..

Su akela rota reh gaya..

Os ky badh su grewals ko mila ab kesy mela 4get it just concentrate on main points..Hehe



**FLASHBACK OVER**

Su ki ankhun mei anso hai..
Aur kas wo tu shock mei hai..

Su:-jana chahti ho jes ki car sy khushi ka accident hoa tha wo kon tha wo tumhara apna bhai Sharb tha os raat wo sharab ky nashy mei car chala raha tha aur os ne rok kar dykhne ki koshish nai ki ky meri duniya lut chuki hai meri duniya mei baba aur khushi ky siwa tha hi kon..Lekin uny bi tumhary bhai ne cheen liya..Os ky badh muje mumma papa [lalit veena] mile aur enu ne muje pala..Mai london chala gaya aur khud ko padhai mei busy kar liya ta ky apni takleef sy bhag sakun magar tumhary ghar walu ki muje pal pal ki khabar rehti thi..Mai ne sab pta lagwa liya tha tumhare bary mei..

Su:-tum sy pehle mai sidi tarah shadi kar ky badla lena chahta tha magar tumhary ghar waly bohot zidi nikle aur pher muje ye tareka istemal karna padha..Tum soch rahe ho ge ky mai tumhary bhai ko aur tarah sy nuksan puhncha ky apna badla pura kar sakta tha magar tum sy shadi ki ta ky tumy takleef mei dykh kar tumhara bhai tadhpy jes tarah mai apni behan ky liye tardpa tha ap mai tum logun ko tadpau ga..

DUZ
DUz

kas iz shocked n weeping..

Kas:-sujal tumhari saza sar ankhun par tum muje ju saza du gye muje qabul hai..Mai janti hon ky bhaiya ne bohot bura kiya aur agar muje takleef dye ka tumy sakun mile tu mai ye saza bi khushi khushi kabol karti..

Su kuch kahy bina apny room mei chala jata hai aur kas wahan beth kar rony lagti hai..

______

plzzz do comment..
...
anu
anni_23 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
kashish: hi my janu khau thody shock tum bi muje badha tang karti ho 2 saal ky bachun ki tarah..Hehe
han pta hai sujal ko tum nai chodu ge chalu gun pakdu aur apna kam kar du hehehe agar meri fic ky hero ko kuch hoa tu kya tum hero banu ge hehe gun ky sath sath 1 hero bi le ana karaye par hehe..
Thanx my januuu..
...
anu
Kashish_my_love thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
OMG!!! What the hell is this i'm shocked after reading the all parts jus awesome everything was just fantastic and what sujal said "ye mere pyaar nahi hawas ke neshani hai" at that line i want to kill him how dare him to tell sach thing. Very well parts plzzzzzz continue soon can't wait for the next part
anni_23 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
Ok 1 more prt 4 tonight.
...
Kas iz still sitting there n craying..

**song time**

jaab rulana hi tha tuje tu pher hansaya kyun,

sath reh kar bi hai juda tu pas aya kyun..

[3 times]

kyun yaqii uth gaya dil sy kahin wafaun ka,
pyar mehsus kyun hony laga gunahun sa...
[2 times]

pyar mehsus kyun hony laga gunahun saaaaa...

Aya apny beech mei kisi ka saya kyun..
Jab rulana hi tha tuje tu pher hansaya kyun..

Sath reh kar bi hai juda tu paas aya kyun,


kyun ajnabi ki tarah hum sy peash ata hai,
chand lamhe bi hamy tu na dy pata hai
[2 times]

chand lamhy bi hamy tu na dye pata haiiiii...

Esi kya hum ne ki khata hamy sataya kyun..

Jab rulana hi tha tuje tu pher hasaya kyun,
sath reh kar bi hai juda tu paas aya kyun..

*Song ends*

kas iz crying even more...lolzz

kas apne ap ko sambhalti hai n goes upstairs..

Khamushi sy room ka darwaza kholti hai n steps inside silently without making any type of noice..

Whr su iz sleeping on the bed..

Kas goes 2 washroom..

After sum fresh-up she cums outside the wash..

Kas bed py laitne lagti hai then suddenlly su ki ankh khulti hai n he stops her in midway by raising his hand infron of her..lolzz

kas iz full hairanu pareshan..

S:-aj sy tum sofe py soya karu ge..Samjhe..

Kas just nods in yes while her eyes were num..

She takes her pillow frm the bed n slowly moves frm there..

Su takes other side n now hez back iz facing kas...lolz

kas completely heart broken
lys on sofa feeling very uncomfortable but sumhow magane herself n after so much affort she goes off 2 sleep ofcourse after silently weeping..

Its a new bright morning..

When the raisers of sunshine touches her face she wake up slowly open her eyes..

Then recall all the moments were heppen with her at last night n her eyes gets teary again..

She want 2 gets up when she feels pain in her backbone she falls on sofa..

Achanak she hears su's kadak-dar awaz who was actually searching 4 hez footwear..

S:-uthu abi tak sou rahe ho muje office sy dyer ho rahe hai ye koi tuhary baap ka ghar nai ju maze sy sou rahe thi yaha mera huqam chalata hai jes ky mutabik tumy suba ky 6 bajey uthna hoga mery uthne sy pehle..Aur meri sari chezu ka dehan tum rakhu ge aur 1 baat sara kaam tum khud karu ge mai koi naukar [servant] nahe rakhna chahta samjhe..

Kas khadi ho chuki hai aur apna sar juka ky bus han mei helati hai..

Su:-shoes kahan hai mery?Ainda sy ye roz ki khich khici nai chahye muje mery kapdy tum raat hi mei iron kar ky rakhu ge aur shoe bi raat ko polish karu ge ab jaldi dhondh ky du mery shoes..

Kas khaoshi sy os ky shoes doondh ky osy dyti hai..

S:thek hai mai ja raha hon aur aj manu mei palak paneer,masala paav,bindian aur dhokla bi..
[jan bojh ky itna lamba menu btata hai]
[i think yahe saab kuch hota hai..lol]

Kas:hmm

S:ghar bi saaf aur chamakta howa hona chahiye muje kahin kuch gandh nazar aya tu tumhari khair nahe..understand..

K:hmm[scared]

su chala jata hai n kas bechari sara din kaam karti rehti hai..Ghar saf karti hai n khana taiyar karti hai..

*NIGHT*
kas bohot thak chuki hai aur wo kam khatam kar ky sofe py bethi su ky anye ka w8 kar rahe hai na os ne suba sy kuch khaya hai kam sy fursat nai mili khud ky liye..

*11:30pm*
kas ki ankh kholti hai wo bethy bethy hi sou gai thi su ka w8 karty hoye..Os ki ankh door bell ki awaz sy kholti hai ju najane kab sy bajh rahe hai..

Kas bhag kar darwaza kholti hai samny su fully gusy mei os ghor [stare] raha hai..

S:kahan mar gai thi mai kab sy bell bja raha ho sounai nahe dyta kya?

K:nai wo..wo mai thak gai thi tumhara w8 karty karty ankh la gai..

TISHHHHHHH


su osy thapad marta hai very hard..

Kas iz shocked

S:khabardar ju mery agay zuban ladai khana lagau muje bhok lage hai

kas ki ankhu mei anso hai wo chup chap khana lagati hai

su khana khany lagta hai

Su:khana khaya tum ne?

K:nahe

S:chalu bethu khau.

Kas khamushi sy beth jati hai abi 2,3 niwale hi leti hai ky os kuch feel hota hai she runs 4rm there n ofcourse vomit karti hai su ko pta chal jata hai..Kas wapis ati hai..

S:kya hoa?

K:kuch nai wo bas vomit..[very weak voice]

S:bethu yaha

kas ka hath pakadh ky bethany lagta hai jab os ka hath pakadhta hai tu bohot garam feel hota hai..

S:aray tumy tu bohot teez buhar hai..


_______
Phewww 2 bar likha ye prt lekin donu bar spoil ho gaya ab tesri bar likha hai sari raat lag gai i'm soooo tired plzzzzzz do comment..
...
anu
anni_23 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
Thanx alot Kashish_my_love 4 the comments😊
keep commenting..
...
anu
anni_23 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
Plzzzz do comment..😭
...
anu
Anna_luvs_rabi thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
I'm so sorry agar prt mei mistakes hai even mai ne edit nai kaya i'm so tired so i'm going
...
anu
beauty_niki thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
argggggggggg 😡 kitna kamina hai sujal 😡 . kuch akal hai ya nahi 🤬 .kya karr raha hai yeh . jaanwar se bhi bhatar pesh aaraha hai apne hi patni ke saath 😡 .and kashish has she lost it.................... kya kaha usne ki woh harr saza bhugat ne ke liye tayar hai 😭 .nooooooooo wayyyyy.......pagal hai kya .arre uske peth mein bacha hai,she is pregnant aur iss halat mein yeh saab sehena aur karna uske liye kitna harmful hai 😭 .yeh sujal ko toh main marr dugi 😡 agar kashish ko iss fever mein kuch hua toh 😡 .what all he is doing is completely wrong and not at all fair . shoes polish karo,ghar clean rakho warna usse bura koi nahi hoga(ho bhi nahi sakta u idiot.) 🤬 , khane ke itni badi list de gaya, aur subah itne jaldi uthne ko kaha.how caould he do like this .i hate him........he is so bitter now 😡 .harr cheez ki hadh hoti hai yaar 😵 .janti hu ki joh uske saath hua woh galat tha magar kashish ne thodi maara hai sujal ke parivaar ko 😭 .woh toh aaj takk yeh saab janti taak nahi thi aur jab usse pata chala toh usse bhi bohot bura laga 😭 .why the hell he doesn't undrstand 😡 .he is mad yaar . and what did he say ki woh agar kashish ko takleef dega toh uska bhai tadpega .lekin jaha takk mujhe yaad hai toh kashish ke gharwalo ne saare rishte usse tod diye hai yaha taak usse apne beti ka darja bhi nahi derahe hai 😭 . so i think for what he is all doing won't work 😉 . i think na ki sujal yeh sirf apne dil ko satisfy karne ke liye karr raha hai ki usne apne behen aur papa ke mout ka badla uss parivaar ke aik sadasya se yane ke kashish se le liya hai 😭 😭 .lekin sahi mayno mein i know ki usse andar se bohot dard ho raha hai aur takleef ho rahi hai that he is hurting kashish 😉 . you know lekin shayad joh woh karaha hai acha hi hai 😉 .kyunki ho sakta hai ki uski nafrat,gussa sab dil se bahar aane ke baad woh rukh jaye aur shant ho jaye .sur shayad kashish ko bhi ye baat pata chal gayi hai ki itne saalon se sujal ke dil mein yeh nafrat aur dard tiss bann kar chub raha tha kyunki usne yeh kisike saath share nahi kiya and now as he is married to her to take revenge woh dard wapis bahar aagaya hai and now he is sharing with her in the form of his revenge 😭 . waise the part was wowwwwwwwwww........... 👏 it rocked just like you do ⭐️ . the part was great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzzzzzzz................can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington · 1 years ago

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: dellzcreationz · 4 months ago

COVER BY AISHWARYA (Mystic_Muse) SUMMARY Suzanne Miller , an Indian Origin Canadian Citizen adopted by the Miller family, who goes on a quest to...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: dellzcreationz · 9 months ago

In Your Memories Book 1 (Last Chap Pg 12+ Imp Note Bk 2)

Siggi by Sandhya (@sevenstreaks) (P.S this was my pitching picture to the production houses - which Sandy had done for me a couple of years...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: goodkashish · 6 years ago

Kassir Extremes Intro 9pm - London Airport - Christmas Day It was a cold chilly night in the beautiful city of London. We arrive at Heathrow...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".