*~KANCH KYE RISHTY~*[SK Last part] - Page 55

Han je me know ap ky pas time nai hota sheela sis..
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anu

Thanx to all of u 4 the comments..
Keep commemting😊...

Nxt Day

at breakfast table..

Sab breakfast kar rahy hai..
Suddenly..


Su:-muje ap sab ko kuch btana hai..

Ve:-han bolu beta..

Su:-mumma muje shimla jana hoga..

Ve:-kis liye?

Su:-mumma wahan py ju hamara kam delay padha hai osy pura karny..

Ve:-kesa kam?

Su:-mumma wahan py ju hamari factory hai os ka sara kaam pending padha hai osy pura karwane..

Ve:-lekin sujal koi aur chala jaye ga kashish ko teri zarurt hai..

Su:-nai mumma jana zaruri hai,yahan papa dykh len gy angad ko london wapis jana hai.


[Ok Garewal cast hoti hai na es liye ab name change kar k lalit garewal kar rahe hon]


Lalit:-han vena sujal ka jana zaruri hai..


Ve:-theek hai lekin kitny din lagy gy?

Su:-din nahe shayad maheny lag jaye..

Ve n kas 1 dum sy su ki tarf dykhti hai..

Ve:-Maheny ye kya bol raha hai?Kashish kesy rahy ge..

Su:-mumma kafi lamba kaam hai majbori hai aur ap ko kis ne kaha mai kashish ko chod ky ja raha ho ofcourse wo mery sath jaye ge.

Ve:-lekin mai osy itni dyr tak es halat mei bahir nai jany dy sakti..

Su:-muma ap ko kis ne kaha hum bahir rahy gye hamara ghar hai na shimla mei..Pher su kafi time laga kar ve sy kas ko sath le jane ki ejazat leta hai..Su ko koi call ati hai tu wo excuse kar ky bahir garden mei ata hai..

Su on mobile..


Su:-han mai bi tume call kar ky btany wala tha ky plan successful raha..

Su:-haan haan mai ne sab ko mana liya hai kashish ko apny sath shimla le jane ky liye kaam tu bas 1 bahana hai mera asal Maqsad tu Kashish sy BADLA leny ka hai dykhna ab osy kesy tadpau ga..


Disconnect the call wid evil smIle on his face..


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wo person kon hai jis sy sujal ne baat ki?? Sujal kashish sy badla kyun lena chahta hai??

Kya sujal kashish ko shimla le jany mei kamyab hoga??
Jany ky liye..
PLZZZ DO COM..
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anu

yaar yeh kya hogaya maine aik din story padhi nahi aur comment kiya nahi toh story ka pura rukh hi badal dala anam tumne.i am shockeddddddddd........ completely...........sujal is betraying kashish. i mean he toh loves her soooooooo much. kuch bhi kar sakta hai na woh kashish ke liye. and now kashish is preganent. has he gone nuts. pagal ho chuka hai woh.badla..... what badla huh.......kuch samaj hai ki nahi usse. kashish ka sabh luth chuka hai, yahan taak ki uske bhai,papa aur bahabhi bhi uske saath nahi hai.abb uske duniyan mein koi nahi hai siwaye sujal ke aur uske parivaar ke. parivaar ki toh baat alag hai but sujal, kashish toh sujal ko hi apni duniyan manti hai,apna sabh kuch manti hai aur abb yeh hi aisa ho gaya. you know anam mujhe toh lagg raha hai that shayad na robbie ne kashish ke saath kuch nahi kiya hai. i think ki uss raat kashish kuch zyada hi nashe mein thi na toh baas robbie ne sirf aisa scene create kiya ki sach much kashish ko aisa lage that she has been raped aur sujal waha aake aisa bataye that though everything happened with her but still he will always accept her because he love her al lot. haan sujal kashish se sach much pyaar karta hoga aur aaj bhi woh karta hai magar shayad joh kashish ke gharwalon ne sujal ke parivaar ke sath joh kiya and also sujal ki badnami ki toh sujal ka sarr ghum gaya hoga and that's why shanti se pyaar se woh kashish ke kareeb aaya and know is going to betray her.but i didn't expected this form him. he is soooo mean. kashish ne joh bhi sujal ke saath pehele kiya ya uske parivaar ne joh bhi uske saath kiya maana ki woh galat tha lekin kashish ko ehsaas hua na that she loves him and he too loves her aur abb toh kashish sirf sujal ki hai aur uski hi rahegi then whyyyyyyyyy...... why is he doing like this and that too is this situation jab kashish ke andar uski hi nishani saans lerahi hai. jab kashish ko pata chalega na woh toh puri ki puri tutt jayegi, pata nahi what will happen that time. i wish ki kuch bura aur galat na ho uske saath. uske pehele hi sujal ko pata chal jaye that what he is doing is absolutely wrong.i am sure ki jisse sujal phone pe baat karr raha tha na he is robbie.kyunki kashish ke kidnapping mein sirf robbie hi aik aisa dost tha sujal ka ki jisne sujal ko yeh saab karne mein madat ki thi.ya toh sujal robbie ke kehene paar kashish se badla leraha hai ya phir kashish ne joh pehele uske saath kiya aur joh uske parivaar ne sujal ke saath kiya uss wajah se he is taking revenge from kashish. no matter what but i am from kashish's side. abb iske badh agar kashish ko pata chalega na that sujal did this aur woh usse maaf nahi karegi, trust nahi karegi aur nafrat karegi toh main uska saath hi dunge. because after what sujal will do with her none of the woman can digest ki uska pati itni ghinoni harkat karr sakta hai aur iss samai jab woh uske bache ki maa banne wali hai tab uske saath badla lene ki koshish kar sakta hai. i am with her and will always be with her. sujal should better understand ki joh woh karraha hai is completely wrong and against the world i guess. anam yeh part padke i am feeling scared and i am on a verge of crying kiyeh saab kya horaha hai. the part was very well written. lekin padh ke i am sad and upset ki sujal aisa nikla.the part was great!!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzzz.......................can't wait any longer.bye.takecare.

oh my god anam ya tum na kiya kar diya wo sujal jo kashish ki khoshi ke liye khuch bhi ker sakhta tha us ka chahre per aik muskurahat deakhna ka liye apni jaan bhi da sakhta tha wo sujal itna badal jae ga maina khabhi nahi socha tha kashish ka kiya hoga us ka to is dunya main koi nahi hai sujal hi sab khuch hai us ka liye us ka sab khuch lut chuka hai kashish is pregnent jab us ko ya pata chalay ga ka sujal us sa badla lena chahta hai to wo ya sadma bardast nahi ker pae gi kia hoga kashish ka i am very sad about kashish continue soon

Nxt Day

su n kas ko saab airport chodny jaty hai..

Ve:-beta apna dyhan rakhna aur kashish ka bi..

Su:-jee mumma rakhu ga ap rasty mei koi 100 bar keh chuki hai..

Lalit:-chalu flight ka time ho chuka hai juldi karu..


Su kas sab sy milty hai n leaves 4 shimla..


**Shimla**

Kas:-shukar hai hum puhanch gaye mai tu soney ja rahe hon i'm feeling so tired..

Su:-han theek hai jau tum aram karu muje koi important call karni hai mai abi atta ho..

Kas:-theek hai juldi aa jana..

Kas room mei chali jati hai n su wahin hall mei betha rehta hai..

After sum time
su kisi ko call karta hai..

Su:-han mai kashish ko yahan le aya hon..

Person:-good ab tum janty ho na tume kya karna hai..

Su:-haan wesy mana padhy ga pehle mai ne kashish ka Rape khud hi karwaya ta ky os ky ghar waley os py yaqin na karin aur mai acha ban jau os ki nazar mei aur wo mujh py yaqeen kar ky mujh sy shadi ky liye taiyar ho jaye aur wo itni bewaquf nikli os ne mujh py bharosa kar liya ky mai os sy pyaar karta hoon..Hahaha ab osy pta chaly ga ky ye Sujal Garewal kya chez hai..

Person:-hmm janta hon ab osy maza chakhana hi hai..

Su:-rakhta hon bedroom mei bechari mera intzar kar rahe ho ge hahaha wesy hai bohot dil-lubhany wali cheez apne tu maze ho rahy hai..Theek hai bye..

Idhar Su phone bandh karta hai aur es ky sath hi zor dar awaz ati hai kisi chez ky gerny ki..

CHANNNNNNNNN!!!!

Su turns around
n see kas iz stand behind him with hell shock..

***Kas bedroom mei su ka w8 kar rahe thi pher osy yadh aya ky su ko gharam doodh [hot milk] dye aye ta ky os ki thakan dor ho jaye kas abi kas doodh ka glass le kar hall mei enter hui thi ky su ki baty soun ky rok gai n os ne su ki sari batin soun li ju wo phone py kar raha tha aur kas ky hath sy milk ka glass hi gera chan kar ky***

kas ko yaqeen nai aa raha tha ju os ne suna shez completely shocked..

Kas:-su..Su..Su..sujal tat..Tum ye..Ye kya bol rahy thy..
[fully shocked voice mei su sy puchti hai]

Su:-huh acha hoa ju tum ne soun liya warna tume btana padhta..

Kas:-es..es ka matlub ky wo pyaar sab natak tha..
[shocked]

Su:-han natak tha nahe tha muje tum sy pyar suna tum ne aur ye bi soun lu mai tume yahan sirf apna badla leny laya hon nafrat hai muje tum sy ghar mei reh kar mai tum sy badla na le pata sab ky darmiyan magar ab yahan mai aram sy apna badla le sakta hon esi maqsad ky liye mai tumy yahan laya hon..

Kas:-aur ye ba..Bacha ye kya hamary pyar ki nishani nahe hai..

Su:-NAHI ye sirf mery hawas ki nishani hai muje ye nahi chaheye tha souna tum ne..

DUZZ
DUZZ
DUZZ
Dhamaky kas ky chehry par lolzzz

Kas:-itni saza tu dye hi chuky tu ab mera qasur bi bta du..

Su:-qasur jana chahti ho tum tu sonu Qatil ki behan ho tum os qatil ki jis ne Mery PITA je Meri BEHAN ka khon kiya tum os Qatil ki behan ho aur mai ne tum sy shadi sirf Tumhary parivar sy badla leny ky liye ki hai..

DUZZ
DUZZ
DUZZ
pher dhamaky kas ky face par os lag raha hai jesy wo abi ger jaye ge..

Kas:-ta tum ye..Ye kya keh rahy ho..Sharb bhaiya QATIL...

Su:-han tumhara sharb bhaiya qatil hai..
Os Raat..

***FLASHBACK***




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Ok i hope ap saab ne enjny ki kafi lamba ho gaya ab Kahin to hoga lagny laga hai warna agay bi likhti aur sujal ky past ky barey mei bi btau ge nxt prt mei..>>>>>

plzzzzzz do comment..

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anu

fravashi: maza aya na nikki muje sach mei bohooot maza aya kafi din sy story boring chal rahe thi es liye..
Abi tu aur bohot kuch hai..Thanks 4 the huge comment..😊
So keep commenting..
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anu

kashish_80: han janu dykh lu kya ho gaya lol hehehe acha hai na thody shock bi tu lagny chaheye na..
Rabi janu thanku 4 the comments 😊
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anu

arrreeee yaar tumne toh mujhe pura hila kar rakh diya hai.u won't imagine but seriously main yaha aone maathe pe haath rakh ke bethi huyo hu.you know jab sujal ne kashish se kaha that woh bacha uske 'hawas' ki nishani hai,my body was shivering with anger and i mean it. that all wa sreally happening to me right now too. yeh toh puri kahani hi badal gayi. i mean i never expected sujal to be like this at all.ohhhhhhhh soooooo sujal kashish ke bhai ke wajah se usse badla le raha hai but this is not fair. how can he do that. kasoor kashish ke bhai ka hai kashish ka nahi. infact usse toh yeh bhi pata nahi chalta tha ki uske baap aur bhai ghar ke bahar kya gull khilarahe hai. she is innocent and i think ki sujal is totally wrong and mean to her. agar badla lena hi hai toh siddhe kashish ke bhai se le.maybe like destroying him in his buisness and his social,professional life too. but what he is doing with kashish is bad. kashish doesn't deserve this at all. woh toh ktne pyaari,masoom aur inn sab chizo se anjaan hai woh ladki toh sujal usse iss sab mein kyun laaraha hai.yeah!!! i mean ki woh kashish ko sirf yehkehe sakta tha na that hemarried her for taking revenge from her brother and then woh sab batata tha that how her bhai is bad and evil.lekin yeh sab kya batane ki zarurat thi that he hates her aur woh yaha kashish ko usse badla lene ke liye laya hai,tadpaneke liye laya hai aur woh bacha unke pyaar ki nahi balki uske hawas ki nishani hai. ewwwwwwwwww..............that language and word is sooo cheap and vulgur. i never expected him to be like that in my wildest dream. but yaar tumne sab kuch kitne ache se likha hai. it's really good. matlab iss tarah aikdum se story ka track change karna is not easy and you did that by applying so much thinking and skills in your writing. tarife kabil hai anam. really awesomw,superb and terrific part. mujhe tumhari story bohot pasand aayi hai, pehele toh thi hi bacause it had all passion and obsession in it lekin abb shocks, nafrat,gussa, aur dard bhi hai.cooooolllllll.......u know lekin i mujhe aisa lagg raha hai that afterlistening to sujal's past kashish will get angry with him aur durr bhi rahegi lekin woh sujal se nafrat nahi karre gi cause i think ki she will understand ki joh uske bhai ne sujal ke behen ke saath kiya aur uske papa ke saath kiya galat kiya aur iss wajah se sujal aisa hua hai. maybe she will try and support him, she will also care for him lekin woh zyada dikhaye gi nahi.also sujal usse bohot nafrat karega lekin i guess ki jabhi woh dard mein hoga ya phir tutte ga woh kashish ke paas hi aayega to gain peace of mind and some love which only kashish can give him and noone else.hey everything is going fabulous in ths story. the part was great!!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzzz..............can't wait any longer.bye.takecare.

fravashi: Hehehe kya shock laga hai tume i think kashish sy bi zayada lag gaya..😃 kya karu shock dyne mei maza hi itna hai shukar hai meri tension khatam hui ky meri fic boring nahi hai ab..
Btw thanx choooo much 4 encourage me by giving shocku shocku comments..Hehehe
sach btau ye last prt mei mai ne bohot enjoy kiya aj tak itna maza nai aya likhne mei jitna ye last prt likhne mei aya..😃
hmm actually saab kashish ko bura banaty hai na sweetheart meri janu bi yahi kehti hai esi liye mai ne sujal ko bna diya..eheheh
han bhadi cheap language use ki na es ne meri janu[rabi] ki janu [kashish] ky liye esy tu meri janu nai chody ge..
Oyi yaar sweethear honsla rakhu abi tu agay tumhara dil kary ga ky sujal ko marr dalu..hehehe
Btw u intelligent girl bohot achey guess karti ho zayada theek hi hoty hai good..😊
thanx 4 the comments..😊
keep commenting..
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anu