HAMARI ADHURI KAHAANI-sk fanfic { updated - Page 9

thanxs a lot all readers 4 comments,paar mujhe ek shikayat hai kuch readers hain jo silent readers hain they dont comment,aur kuch hain jo meri teeno fic mein se kisi ek paar hi comment karte hain so i request those ppl plz 2 comment all on the fics & the ppl who dont comment 2 do comment

aur ek aur baad all those readers who r my new readers a special thanxs 2 them & keep on commentin,ur words really encourage me

Very very well.Bohot ache ff hai par i am very sad for kashish os bechari k sath bora hi hota hai phle bi kismat sy hum mely meh bi wo cheap arche hai kashish k liye eak musibat & yaha py wo cheap lardkiya & wo bodhi sadhi mirch.I am waitn plz wrote soon.

Very very well.Bohot ache ff hai par i am very sad for kashish os bechari k sath bora hi hota hai phle bi kismat sy hum mely meh bi wo cheap arche hai kashish k liye eak musibat & yaha py wo cheap lardkiya & wo bodhi sadhi mirch.I am waitn plz wrote soon.

Ur ff is 2 good keep it up.I respect ur ideas which u writes.I know ur mind is buzy for searching new ideas of ff.U r handling 3 ff & its not so easy huge difficulties u r facing.We r with u dont worry.U can easly write dont keep tention in ur mind.Wish u all the BEST

aur samne botlle thi woho kholke peene lag gaya lookin outside frm the window

aur k bhi karti to kya karti wo chup chap bass bed pe baithi hui hai thodi sehmi si

kuch waqt aise hi beet jaate hain

k bed paar baithe baithe bore ho rahi hai

aur s wahin window ko face karke drink kie jaa raha hai

at last k himmat karke bol padti hai

k-emm..err..Mr..Mr garewal!

s looks twrds k with his broodin eyes

s-sujal! sujal naam hai mera! sujal keh sakti ho!

k-sujal!,nahi..nahi..main..aapko aapke naam se..nahi..achcha nahi lagta naa!..

s-mujhe Mr garewal sunna achcha nahi lagta!

k-oh,thik hai! s..sujal! main..ek..sawaal poochun?

s-hmm

k-pata nahi mujhe..emm..puchna chahie ya nahi!...aap bura to nahi manenge naa! bura lage to jawab dene ki zarurat nahi!

k-pucho!


k-emm..wo..emm..main puch rahi thi ki..app kya karte hain?..emm..i mean kya kaam karte hain!

s looks twrds a 4 a whole minute

k ko lagta hai ki shayad bura laga hai

k nazre jhuka leti hai

s-business hai! industrialist hoon1 gareal grp og companies ka MD!

k-oh![k is astonished] isile saab neeche keh rahe the ki aapke pass bohot paisa hai!

s-paisa! [smirks]haan bohot paisa hai! bass paisa hai! [says witha lot of thoughtfulness,but yet has sarcasm in his words]

neelu main yahan bhi tapak pari 😆 😆 anyways great part lovely 👏 👏 hoe Sujal and Kashish become friends

Originally posted by: aishwaria

neelu main yahan bhi tapak pari 😆 😆 anyways great part lovely 👏 👏 hoe Sujal and Kashish become friends

darlin main chahti hoon tum harr baar har jagah aise tapak pado

Originally posted by: belanila

darlin main chahti hoon tum harr baar har jagah aise tapak pado

ab tum ne keh diya na to main tumhaara peecha nahin chodoon ge har FF mein comment karoon gi😆😆

Originally posted by: aishwaria

ab tum ne keh diya na to main tumhaara peecha nahin chodoon ge har FF mein comment karoon gi😆😆

wohi to main chati hoon

atleast both r on talking terms.......sujal's character sounds kinda tanhai mein dooba hua....kash ki "kash" us tanhai ko mitaade.....continue soon neelu 😊