HAMARI ADHURI KAHAANI-sk fanfic { updated - Page 11

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey great part yaar..plz continue soon 😛 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
i hope he does something to save kashish.... 😭 😭

cont soon! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey nice part neelu 👏 . abb bole bhi toh kya bolenge bechare 😕 . poor kashish i wish ki uske paas paise hote the toh woh atleast bhaag toh sakti thi aur kaise bhi ho apne education ka istemalkarke kahi bhi chota sa job kar leti thi 😉 . really kya life hai yaar uski!!! woh achi kuch bana chahati hai paar halat saath nahi de rahe 😭 . really waiting for when this night will turn into morning and what will happen next ? continue soon yaar plz.....can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
abb subah ho jaati hai

s ki neend khulti hai

he gets up

uthke dekhta hai ki k abhi bhi bed paar so rahi hai

he looks at his watch & realises he shld be leavin now

warna he wld be late 4 his work

so he decides 2 wake her up

s-aaye suno! utho!

k is sleepin

s-aaye ! subah ho gai!uth jao!

then he decides on shakin her usse uthane ke lie

he goes 2 touch 2 shake her

then thinks somethin & decides against it

wo ladki hai,kya usse usko chunna chahie

so s uske kaan ke pass jaakar claps few times usse uthane ke lie

s-aye uth jao!

k gets up

bachchon ki tarah angdai leti hai

k-huh?hmm?kya? 🥱 [lik a cute kid]

s-uth jao sunah ho gai

she realises uske saamne s hai

ghabrake hadbada ke uth jaati hai

k-jii?jii kahie?

s-mujhe abhi jaana hoga!tum bhi uth jao!

k-oh,achcha!thik hai!

k gets up!

abb k uthke door kholne jaati hai

s-ek min!ruko!

k is confused looks at s questioningly

s goes 2 her

aur uske chehre pe dheere se haath rakhke uske baal thode bikher deta hai

uski kaano ki baali thodi hila deta hai

k ko kuch samaj nahi aa raha hai

phir s apne baal bhi bikher leta hai

aur shirt ke upar ke apne do button khol leta hai

s realises her confusion

s-warna unhe shak ho jaega..ki hamre beech....



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Posted: 18 years ago
awww it time for sujal to leave... 😭 anywayz good part!!!!!!! continue soon!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Kuch nai hoa hai na sujal!Bechari kashish bora hi hoa hai os k sath any ways nice part continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 parts 👏 i hope sujal will help her to get rid of that lady and lead a peaceful life keep posting 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
abb dono bahar aate hain

s goes 2 the brothel lady 2 pay

& k follows

all the nautch gals

stndin out there r laughin,goglin & makin comments among themselves

k is feelin a bit uncomfy

k jaake door ke pass stnds

ab s goes 2 tht lady

s-kitne paise?

k is lookin st s,feelin a bit bad also

wo aise uske paise pooch raha hai,jaise wo koi saamaan ho

lady-arre paise to thik hai saab!kaho ladki kaisi lagi!naya maal tha saab aapke lie!raat kaise kati!koi shikayat nahi hai!

k is lookin at s scared,kahin wo bata naa de ki unke beech kuch nahi hua

s-nahi,saab thik tha!ye lijie!

s pays the lady bohot saare paise & goes

lady-phir se aana sahab!

& s passes k,stps there 4 a sec,but doesnt look at her

aur k to bass s ki taraf hi dekh rahi hai

abb s walks away frm there

abb baaki gals k se pooch rahi hain

kaisi kaati raat?

kaisa tha wo?

kya kya kia?

mazza aaya?

maara pita to nahi?

k doesnt reply

as she knws s neeche gaya hoga

she goes 2 balcony

2 get a last look of s

uss admi ko akhri baar dekhna chahti thi

kyunki usse pata nahi wo aaj ke baad kabhi milenge ya nahi

uss admi ko dekhna chahti thi jo itna sharif tha ki usko uske ek baar maana karne paar koi zabardasti nahi ki

chua taak nahi


abb k goes 2 balcony

she can see s ki badi si car

s neeche aata hai

stps 4 a moment

uske dimag mein mude dekhne ka khayal aata hai

ki kahin wo ladki jiske saath wo kal tha,kahin usse dekh to nahi rahi

phir sochta hai kyun uske lie itna lagaav ho raha hai usse

so he sits in the car & zooms away

aur k wahin akhri baar s ko jaata hua dekhti reh jaati hai

uski ankhon se ek asoo naajaane kyun girta hai

naajaane kyun usse aisa lagta hai ki kuch apnaa sa kho dia usne

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Posted: 18 years ago
amazing, excellent, outstanding 👏 👏 seriously it was 2 good 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
abb waise dono ke lie bhi baaki ka din normal day jaisa hi hai

paar kuch alag hai

s jo office mein kaam kar raha hai

pata nahi kyun kaam karte karte uska dhyaan uss ladki ki baaton pe ja araha hai

kyun uske baare mein soch raha hai wo

aur kyun bahi taak naam yaad hai uska

haan,kashish sinha,usse yaad hai,usse to hardly pehli mulakat mein kisi bhi ladki ka naam yaad rehta hai,to phir kyun

abb idhar k bhi apne kitaabon mein phir se kho gai

paar phir bhi pata nahi kyun ye jaante hue bhi ki wo unn dono ki pehli aur akhri mulakaat thi wo apne aapko usske baare mein sochne se rok hi nahi paa rahi

kya ho raha hai ye usse?

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