HAMARI ADHURI KAHAANI-sk fanfic { updated - Page 13

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Posted: 18 years ago
wow! caught up 4rm da starting!!
its a very diff concept!!
uff i jus ended at da twist!
can't w8..plzz continue soon !!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey me jst caught up wid all pages finally 😃 ...when i read abt kashish as prost lolz i got a shock i almost fall frm mah sit...but srsly its differnt nd nice concept...keep it up 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
hi just caught up wid last few parts...i luvd it

sujal is a gr8 guy....he does loves kashish!
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Posted: 18 years ago
yay go sujal go...thnk god wo tym pe aa gaya warna poor kash!!! and dat cheap lady aur wo devil jaisa aadami...i was feeling lyk killing dem off...cont soon neel...cnt wait!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
abb k goes in room

she is thinkin wo yahan kyun aur ksilie aaya

kya wo aaj mere saath zabardasti karega

oh nahi!

k issi soch mein khud ko pareshaan kar rahi hai

tabhi s enters in the room

aur locks the door

k is lookin at him

uski ankhen saawalon se bhari hai

s galnces twrds her 4 a sec

aur usse pass karke saamne sharaab ki bottle rakhi hui thi

wahan chala jaa tahi

aur window face kake strts sippin drinks

s ko khud ko samaj nahi aa raha wo yahan kyun aaya

there is no logcal reason 2 it

k is surprised ki aaj bhi s ne usse chua taak nahi

to kya maksad hai iska

s khud ko tatol raha hai peete hue,4 possible reason y he came

2 this badnaam jagah

kya uss ladki ke lie jisse wo bass kal hi mila

ais akya hai usmein

jo aaj pure din bass uske zehen mein wo aur uski baatein,aur haan uski masumiyat muskaan wo haya saab kuch bassi hui thi

kyun uske dil ko uske ye shabd cheer rahe the ki

aaj sujal ne usse kuch nahi kia paar kal wo aurat usse phir se iss dakdak mein phek degi,taab wo kya karegi

uska wo mayus chehra wo kyun nahi dekha

aur uske asoo

paar sujal ne itne paise kuch naa karne ke lie kislie barbaad kie

wo ek businessman hai paisa handle karna jaanta hai

phir kyun?

kya ho gaya hai usko?



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Posted: 18 years ago
😳 suju again saved kash......mujhe pata tha......aur ye dono kitne ajeeb hai......ek kamre mein band hai par abhi tak ek doosre se baat nahi ki.......come on guys....kuch to bolo....post the next prt jaldi jaldi 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
k bhi aab kya kare

bed pe baith gai hai chaukri maar ke

she is lookin twrds the peculiar character in frnt of her

yaane ke sujal jo peeye hi jaa raha hai

naa ek baar bhi k ki taraf dekhta,naa kuch baat karta hai

ajjeb insaan hai,

k is thinkin koi bina bole itni der kaise reh sakta hai,kaisa boring hai

she is expectin abb kuch bole kuch to bole

kyun aaya,kya chahta hai,kyun laaya kuch to kahe

paar janab to bass khidki ki tarah face karke peeye hi jaa rahe hain

abb kaafi der ho jaati hai,k bed pe baith baithke bore ho gai hai

to samne tv hota hai

k onns the tv aur tv dekhne baith jaati hai

s kuch nahi keh raha,ya kar raha hai as usual bass khada hai

abb k tv dekhke kuch der mein thak ke bed pe so jaati hai

aur s pee peeke wahin floor pe diwaar se tek lagake so jata hai


Edited by belanila - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
yaar neelu....how can these 2 manage to stay silent the whole night....main hoti to i would've gone crazy ........chatterbox jo thehri 😳 .....ek aur raat aisi hi beet gayi....agar suju ke paas itne paise hai ki aise hi kharch karde to plz use kaho ki mujhe thore de de... 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
abb subah ho jaati hai

k gets up

she doesnt knw the time room mein ghadi nahi hai naa

abb she sees ki s ke hath mein wrist watch hai

she thinks ki wahan jaake dekhe ya nahi

s is sleepin paar uth gaya to

paar phir bhi k sochti hai

ki kahin late ho gaya,aur inko office mein late ho gaya to

to islie k himmat karke goes near where s is sittin & sleepin

s sits near him

aur dheere se s ka haath uthati hai

k has 2 lift his wrist with both hands as its heavy 4 her

dheere se caution se haath uthati hai

& sees the time

& realises ki abhi ussse s ko utha dena chahie

abb k thoda darr rahi hai

ki s kaise react karega

k-emm..excuse me..emm...suniye...

s is sleepin

k-emm..suniye..uthiye naa..subah ho gai

s is still not gettin up

k himmat karke touches him a bit,on his arm

she nudges him halka sa

k-suniye..app..uth jaiye

s ki neend khulti hai

s-huh?haan?

k-subah ho gai uth jaiye!

s looks at k 4 while

phir uthke apna samaan leke

without even utterin a word 2 k

moves out of the room

pays the lady

& drives of in his car


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Posted: 18 years ago
arre ye kya????bina bye shye aise hi chala gaya ......kash is already worried abt his schedule 😳 .....kya baat hai 😉 ...aise hi chalta raha to this place will bcum suju's second home 😳 ....continue soon neelu 👏 👏 👏

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