RN's Love Station Revisited...... C Pg-73 - Page 55

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Posted: 17 years ago
too good yaar plzzzzz continue soon and
plzz this time as soon as possible
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏 soo coool sanya.......mera pc kharab tha itne dino se but i guess i hvent missed ne thing 😉 😆
n mez sooo happy to read this part, bahut mazedar!!! truly R-N types 😳 😃 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
sanya dear dekho main phir aagayi apne comments lekar.. aur is baar maine delay nahii kiya comment karne mein.. hope you like the comment... 😊 😛 😃 tho abhi navin aur neeti wahaan aa tho gaye hai lekin unhe yeh khabar milthi hai kii raj aur naina have left... hahaha... aur ab yeh navin aur neeti ke pass koi bhii option nahii hai they decide to stay for the day & leave the next day... well yeh dono sachchi bechare hai... lekin raj aur naina tho shaitaani karne mein mahiir hai.. & no doubt navin aur neeti can never ever match upto them... then navin ko woh raj kii chitti ka milna... agar koi woh letter pade tho unko lagega kii raj kitna sweet hai... kii usne apne dost aur biwi ke liye itna achcha honeymoon suite book kiya hai.. lekin mere hisaab se tho raj has done that only for one reason kyunke he at any cost does not want to spoil his honeymoon & he does not want to get disturbed in the private sweet moments he is enjoying with naina.. aur phir letter ke end mein being written love rajveer & Mrs.rajveer.. haha... i could just imagine navin's face when he read that mr.rajveer..he must have got high-time irritated seeing raj aur naina kii chaal aur phir unki naughty chalakiyaan... hahahaha... ab the receptionist calling raj.. aur yahaan raj being busy with naina romancing..hyee..hyee...is baare mein main kya kahoon... bas tooo dhassuu.... un dono ka romance is always so well written..ek dum perfect.. ab raj answering the call.. aur phir the receptionist ka raj se kehna kii navin & neeti have checked-in aur usne unse wahii kaha joh raj ne kehne ko kaha...yeh baat padne ke baad tho i was like... oh my God... raj ka dimaak is full of shaitaani... raj & naina are very much there in the hotel... i was happily shocked after reading this... raj & naina are proving to navin & neeti kii tum sher tho main sava-sher... hehehe... ab phir raj aur naina ke beech kii baatein... & raj ka sulking & telling kii she still owes him his birthday gift.. phir un dono ka sab kuch bhula kar again continuing with their romance... waahh..waahh... ek dum zabardast... mujhe ek taraf navin , neeti ko dekh kar lag raha kii woh dono bechare... they are in no competition with raj and naina in shaitaani... aur raj aur naina kii soch aur unke pranks ko main dhaat dethi hoon.. they are too brainy....on one side thinking about raj ,naina kii shaitaani , navin , neeti kii haalat , unka mann ka doubt kii shayad ab bhi naina aur raj wahiin hai... hahaha... me unable to control my laugh.. aur doosri taraf raj naina ka romance is amazing... me getting sharam reading that... the part had all the spice to it.. fun , mazaak & then romance to make the part more fulltoo spicy... just awesome.... keep up the good work going....☺️ab dear next part ke liye mera guess yeh hoga kii i think raj aur naina ka romance aur bhii chalega.. navin aur neeti ko tab thak patah nahii chalega kii raj & naina wahaan hai jab thak kii woh dono wahaan khud unke saamne nahii aathe.. naina and raj will enjoy their honeymoon khoob achchi tarah se.. aur navin & neeti will not be able to pull-up & play any pranks on them... raj , naina har baar navin aur neeti ko maat de hii denge in any trick they try & play.. me sure haar navin aur neeti kii hi hogi.. aur raj aur naina aaraam se unke har prank se bach kar nikal jaayenge.. waise kyun nahii niklenge after all naina aur raj shaitaani mein ustaad joh hai..hahaha... ab sanya yeh hai mera guess for the next part.. you tell me kii kya main sahii hoon ya phir ghalat.. 😉 sanya next part jaldi se post karna.. me waiting for it eagerly... 😊 😛 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey too good

kya pyaar hai?


well jaldi update karo

waiting for the next...............................
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi sanya.. thanks for the welcome back.. i really missed u n ur fic.. nice update sanya.. lekin yaar.. i ws really hoping for some more of those pranks.. but no revenge for navin n neeti.. damn yaar.. bechare.. i hope they catch the lie abt RN checkin out.. phir mazaa aayega.. raj seems to eb enjoying his bday gift a lot.. but 24hrs.. thoda zyaada nahin hai kya?? lol.. khair chodo.. i know ur busy with college.. but thoda sa regularly update kar diya kar yaar.. waise aur kitne parts bache hain is fic mein.. reply soon.. tc..
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Posted: 17 years ago
where are u?

dear pl continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
It's really romantic love story...
please update soon...
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Posted: 17 years ago
sanya continue soon na...kahaan ho.. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

EPISODE – 62

He opened his eyes to find his beloved sleeping peacefully in his arms. After a day full of shocks and surprises the honeymoon sweet and the love filled night was the best part of the last day.

He kissed on her eyelids gently. She opened her eyes.

"Good morning sweetheart." He smiled.

"Good morning."

He planted a peck at her lips. She got up from his arms and went to washroom tro freshen up while Navin called up room service for his cup of coffee.

A bell boy appeared in his room in 5 minutes. He kept the tray on the side table and looked at him. Somehow his looks made him feel uncomfortable. His hands were a bit shaky. He wished him a good morning and quickly ran out of the room.

"Ise kya hua?" He asked Neeti, amused.

"Weird tha thoda sa.... Haina?"

"Whatever..... Waise bhi kal se bahut kuch weird hua hai hamare saath."

He sipped his coffee and the very next moment spilled it out.

"Kya kar rahe ho?" Neetika shrieked.

He looked at her. His face gave a disgusted look but within no time his expressions were those of annoyance.

"Navin??" Neetka was badly confused as to what was happening.

"NAINA!" He shouted at the top of his lungs and that very moment the door opened.

The room was filled with the tinkling sound of laughter.

"Naina... Raj??? Didn't you guys check out?"

"Kaisi baatein kar rahi ho Neeti. Tum dono ka welcome kiye bina hum log kahin kaise jaa sakte hain." Rajveer joined Naina who was still into splits.

"Yeh kyun hase jaa rahi hai?" Neeti was getting a little out of patience seeing Naina laughing uncontrollably without any evident reason.

Rajveer didn't reply. He just looked at Navin as if waiting for him to answer and after a while, he did.

"Yeh coffee Naina special thi.... With lots of namak!"

"What?"

Naina laughed all the more louder as Navin gave a defeated look. She hugged Neetika and planted a kiss on her cheek.

"Second honeymoon ki first night kaisi rahi?" She finally got a grip over herself.

Neetika slapped slightly on her head.

"Tum dono ko pranks mein koi hara nahin sakta. I give up."

"In that case I am hoping ki tum logon ko yeh bata ke ki hum log yahin hain humnein koi galti nahin ki hai." Rajveer glared at two of them.

"Relax!" Navin got up fem the bed finally. He continued.

"Mujhe tera yeh hamara second aur tera first honeymoon waala idea zyaada achcha laga. But the bills are on you."

"Chal woh bhi sahi. Ab apni biwi ko pata ke rakhne ke liye thoda to uske bhai ko bhi maska lagana hi padega na." Rajveer answered him hugging Naina from behind.

But Navin took Naina's hand and pulled her out of his arms and hugged her.

"Ab kya plan hai tum dono ka." He asked her.

"Plan kya hai bas apne room ke bahar DO NOT DISTURB ka board laga ke rakhna hai aur tum dono to already honeymoon suite mein ho hi." Rajveer replied for her and she blushed.

"Oh my God! Someone is blushing hard. Aur kya baat hai Naina... Kafi glow kar rahi ho.... Lagta hai kafi masti chal rahi hai yahan pe." Neetika taunted her poking her elbow slightly into her ribs.

Naina blushed again and gave Neetika a tight hug.

"Waise Raj, Mainaa ki news nahin poochega?" Navin tried to tease him.

"Mainaa ko kya hua hai?" He sounded concerned.

"Don't be silly yaar. Usko kuch kyun hoga. Woh bilkul theek hai. Aur honi hi chahiye... Alekh jo hai uske saath."

"Yeah right." He was visibly annoyed. But the next moment his naughty smirk was back in place and he took Naina in his arms.

"Chalo humnein tumhein sharafat se bata diya na ki hum log yahin hain. Ab hamara kaam yahan pe khatam. Tum dono yahaan pe have fun aur main aur meri dear wife nikalte hain.... I hope we are not meeting hereafter for a few days. ENJOY! Bye."

"Lekin Raj..." Naina tried to say something but he covered her mouth with his hands and dragged her out.

******

It was raining heavily as the two of them came out of the furniture showroom and ran towards his car.

"Ufff... Yeh baarish bhi abhi hi honi thi." He complained.

"Don't tell me tumhein baarish pasand nahin."

"Tumhein pasand hai?"

"Of course! It's so Romantic!"

"Romantic? Not bad! To tum romantic bhi ho?"

"You doubt it?"

"How can I? Jo ladki pehli mulaqat mein ek ladke se uske naam se pehle marital status pooch sakti hai uske romantic hone pe doubts main kaise kar sakta hoon."

"Shut Up Alekh!"

He laughed and turned to her for the first time after getting inside the car. The sight left her spellbound. Her wet hair was sticking to her cheeks as she tried to adjust her wet clothes that were also sticking to her skin. It had become transparent after getting wet. She was feeling a bit awkward because of that. He took out his coat and gave it to her.

"Thanks." She accepted it hesitatingly.

As she turned to him after putting on his clothes she was amused by his reaction.

"Aise kyun dekh rahe ho?"

He was looking at her unblinkingly.

"You are very beautiful!" His voice had certain level of intensity to it that was unknown to her.

"Iraade to nek hain na tumhare."

"Abhi tak to hain par kab tak rahenge guarantee nahin de sakta hoon."

"Aur kya hain tumhare nek iraade?"

She asked him trying to sound absolutely normal. But only she knew that her heartbeat was racing faster than it had when she saw him for the first time and fell for him instantly. There was only one answer she wanted him to give and deep inside she was praying for that.

They both were looking into each other's eyes.

"Tum kya sunna chahti ho?"

"Wahi jo tum bol nahin rahe ho."

"You know something... Raj is going to kill me for this."

He chuckled and pressed her mouth hard with his own. He took her lips inside into a passionate kiss. She immediately responded and cupped his face with her hands while he ran his hand on her waist caressing it. Their sealed lips had bound them into a beautiful relationship that both of them wanted. Their love for the first time found a direct expression in their intimacy that had to grow every moment after this kiss.

******

"Mujhe to samajh hi nahin aata ki yeh dono kab kya kar jayenge." Neetika said to Navin as they retired to their suite at the end of the day.

"Tumhein abhi bhi un dono ki yaad aa rahi hai.... Please let them stay away from our honeymoon atleast this time."

Saying this he pulled her into his arms and forced her on the bed. He kissed her on her cheeks and bit her ear lobes. She unbuttoned his shirt as his lips caressed her neck.

Slowly his lips shifted downwards to caress, bite and kiss the bare skin as his hands were busy undressing her. Soon they were lost in each other completely as they relished the joy of their second honeymoon and their proximity without any disturbance or apprehension of a nuisance cropping up at the most incorrect moment. The nuisances of their lives at this moment were busy within themselves and apparently mischieves were nowhere there in their agenda.

******

The entire room was filled with the sweet fragrance of the Rose. Rajveer was sprinkling the room freshner everywhere around.

"Raj kyun time waste kar rahe ho?"

Naina cried. She was lying on the bed in a white satin extremely short negligee with a see through upper half.

"And I thought someone here loves the fragrance of rose." He retorted.

"Arrey Baba to main kab mana kar rahi hoon." Saying this she got up and rode on his back and wrapped her legs around his waist. She planted a kiss on his cheek and continued.

"Main to sirf itna keh rahi hoon ki I do love Rose ki fragrance but not more than that of my man."
"Thank you Darling! But ek baat main bhi kahon."

"Kya?"

"Can you please get down? You haven't realized it yet but I just now found out ki tumne kafi weight put on kar liya hai. Just get down."

She jumped down and looked at him angrily.

"Maine koi weight put on nahin kiya hai."

"Tunmne kiya hai jaan."

"Nahin kiya." She shouted.

"Kiya hai. Yeh dekho."

He squeezed her waist.

"See your extra flab."

"There isn't any."

"Hai baba. Main dikhata hoon na... Detail mein."

He took her closer in his arms and ran his hands on her thighs.

"See. Yahan pe bhi hai."

His hands gradually started moving upwards under her clothes. His hands pressing and caressing her flesh.

She kept her hands on his shoulders and looked into his eyes. He could not comprehend her expressions and thought her to be playing along. He increased the pace of his hands rubbing her skin from her wait to her thighs. Her hands were gradually coming closer to his neck, caressing his shoulder until she started strangling his neck.

"I HAVE NOT PUT UP WEIGHT. SAMJHE?"

He removed her hands and took them behing her back while she stood there with a long face.

"Ab tum itna insist karrahi ho to, may be you have not.Bt I think I will have to chk. Kehte hain na suni sunayi baaton per aankh band kar ke yakeen nahin karna chahiye. So lemme just check."

Saying this he removed her negligee and adored her wonderful curves.

"See. I was right!"

"Zara paas se check kar loon phir batata hoon if you actually were right."

He sat down on his knees and planted a kiss on her bellybutton. He started kissing her belly incessantly until he could feel a heat being generated in her. She was getting aroused. His kisses were moving upwards through every body part. His hands were firmly on her waist. He was about to take her lips inside his mouth whenshe suddenly retreated.

"Kya hua?" He asked.

"Pehle batao... Nahin pehle bolo that I have not put up weight."

He smiled and shook his head.

"You don't have to worry about that. Even if you put up lots of weight and double up in size, my wife will be the sexiest women in this world.... Always!"

She blushed.

He carried her in his arms and kept her down on the bed. He planted a kiss on her forehead.

"Tum har baar bhool jaate ho Raj."

"Kya?"

"Yehi ki tumne kaha tha ki we have had many yrs of kises on cheeks and forehead. Ab especially shaadi ke baad, it's not applicable."

He smiled and lowered his face closer to her and with full force and passion and covered her mouth with his own for a deep kiss. The night had just begun and it was also a mere beginning of a beautiful blissful and perfectly HAPPY MARRIED LIFE!

~~~~~~~~~THE END~~~~~~~~~

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Posted: 17 years ago
oKAY GUYS... I think this was a big jhatka indeed.."The End" ka board lagane ke liye mere paas isse achchi jagah nhin thi na hi is story ko continue karne ke liye ideas aur time tha.


I m sorry bcoz I know I hve broken a few hearts bt story mujhe laga offtrack jaa rahi thi...I donno y I felt that bt this was going as a story so not my style.

Bt this one is my longest fic.THis was d 50th bonafide part of this fic & half century ke shubh uplakshyamein d story is over. I guess this update is looong enuf.

Bt maine pehle nhin bola ki i m ending this fic kyunki I wanted to avoid discussions & arguments. Most of d time main answer bhi nhin kar paati hoon & I really feel sry abt dat. this time na to main yeh story continue karungi na hi new fic start karungi. Bothd things rite now is practically impossible for me. I hve my end sem xms coming up in a month & before that v hve 2 major events coming up & I m partoicipating in both uske alawa some 4-5 pathetic kinda projects & presentations. So basically no time left for writing.I QUIT!!!

Bt Thank u soooo much for revisting RN's Lovestation wid me. Luuuuv u all for being here wid me for so long.



BTW I wud like to know which one did u guys prefer:

RN's Love Station

OR

RN's Love Station Revisited.



luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuv,
Sanya..

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