RN's Love Station Revisited...... C Pg-73 - Page 54

hey too good

excellent RN romamce and chemistry

keep gooin g

sanyaaaa that was superr cooll.. I mean super hott😉 misisng u too.. kab ayegi YM pe..?

superrrrrrrrrrrrbbbbbbbbbb!!!!!!!!!!!!!as usual....ab navin neetika ki badmaashi dekhne ko milegi 👏

hi sanya.. i'm back after a long time.. had gone for a vacation.. abhi abhi padhe saare parts.. awesome yaar.. really lovely story u hv goin on.. n i must say that the hot scenes r really passionate.. kya romance hai!! i'm happy alekh has also found someone.. pehle i thot maina kitna funny naam hai.. naina-maina.. u know.. anyways.. apart from that.. i had an evil grin when i read mr and mrs navin singh ahluwalia.. i was like hehehe.. ab aayega mazaa.. jaldi update karna sanya..

hey pl continue
dear

mising your regular updates

sanya dear pehli baat main apne kaan pakadthi hoon... dear really damn sorry kii itne dino baad me commenting.. yaar darasal i was out of station aur aane ke baad apni fic likhne mein lag gayi... really sorry dear..ab se pukka regularly comment karoongi... 😊 😛 😃 dear pichle kuch parts are absolutely mind blowing... seriously me telling this from the bottom of my heart... har part bowled me over... kya chauke-chakke maare yaar parts ke saath.. main tho saare parts padkar hairaan , bouraan aur pareshaan ho gayi... i was simply dumb-struck... awe-struck... mujhe samaj nahii aa raha hai kii koi har baar itne achche se kaise likh saktha hai... sachchi sanya each & every time you write it simply leaves the readers in awe... isse achcha tho kuch ho hii nahii saktha... your writing creates magic.. it is pure magic... kya rocking , mast, zabardast,bindaas,jhakaas,dhassu,raaochik parts likhe hai tumne.. it is totally rocking.. hat's off to you dear... each & every time i wonder how you write so well.. it is just so awesome,amazing,excellent,par excellence,fantastic, wonderful,brilliant,outstanding,superb,beautiful,
mind blasting..extremelly well written parts.. i love your story , your writing from the bottom depths of my heart... mere pass tho shabd bhii nahii hai jisse kii main tumhari tareef karoon... mere pass ke adjectives kum ho jaayenge lekin tab bhii tumhari tareef mein woh sab kum hii hoga... aur dear tumhari story mein romance ka kya kehna..ek dum lajawaab.. bilkul bemisaal.. tumhare romantic writing padkar i blush so hard... main tho sharam se paani paani hui jaathi hoon... i absolutely get red like a riped tomato..... all the parts jahaan se naina & raj ke baare mein navin ko patah chala... then raj ka sweetly calling his father & bol dena directly kii he is in love... wah jii kya baat hai...then palke japakthe hii raj , naina kii shaddi.. all this for them must have surely been like living a dream.. then naina aur raj ke beech ke romantic scenes.. hye..hye..balle..balle...main mar jawa gudh khake... woh romance ne tho meri jaan hii le lii... ufffff.. main tho gayi kaam se... seriously tumhare story ka romantic parts padkar mere haath mein goose-bumps aane lagthe hai... i'am seriously literally shocked..you write so damn well.. great... tussi tho great ho.. ek dum chah gaye tum... aur tumhare story ka nasha tho mujh par khoob chada hai.. loved the romantic scenes... you have projected them so well.. ek dum perfect..your story has all the spice in it fun , aasoo , work , dosti , pyaar , romance... all are first class... keep up the good work going dear... you completely rock.. you are a rock star... ☺️ waise me happy for alekh usko saanjh ke roop mei apna khoya hua pyaar mil gaya... raj trying to be the typical brother to saanjh & navin ka usko chidana... this was really funny... navin ka mocking him like ab patah chala koi tere behen ke kareeb aaye tho kaise lagtha hai.. too good... nevin ne mouka ka khoob fayada utaya hai... then naina ka darrna kii kahiin neeti aur navin bhii unhe tang na kare jaise unhone kiya tha neeti aur navin ko unke honeymoon par... well naina ka darr bohat hii jayaz hai waise hai bhii tho navin naina ka hii bada bhai na tho usmein bhii tho shararat ke andaaz koot-koot kar bhare honge... ab raj , naina phas gaye.. ab in the end navin aur neeti ne entry maar hii dii raj aur naina ke honeymoon ko thoda aur mazadaar banane ke liye.. ab aayega asli mazaa.. me just too eager to read kii navin aur neeti raj , naina se badla kaise lenge... mazaa aayega... me sure me will laugh like hell.. ab bhi has rahii hoon.. un chaaro mein kahiin na kahiin bachpana hai.. woh chaaro jis tarah kii harkatein karthe hai they seem like kids.... too hillarious all their masti , mazaak is... 🤣 ab sanya dear my guess for the next part would be kii raj , naina will be happily enjoying their honeymoon in their own lovey-dovey mood... lekin ab unko jhatka lagna shuru hoga... navin aur neeti us ek ek baat ka hisaab lenge keeping in mind kii kiss tarah raj aur naina ne un dono ko tang kiya tha unke honeymoon ke time par.. raj aur naina khoob pareshaan honge.. navin aur neeti ek bhii mouka nahii chodenge unko tang karne mein.. lekin kyunke raj & naina ke dimaak is too shararathi hai.. so i think they will also figure out kii saari karistani navin aur neeti kii kartoot hai.. & they will play along with them & enjoy every bit of it.... this is my guess for the next part... ab bolo sanya kya mera yeh guess sahii hai ya phir ghalat i want to know.. 😉 ab dear next part jaldi se post karna..me waiting for the next part very very very very damn eagerly.... 😊 😛 😃

EPISODE – 62

She looked up at his face helplessly.

"Alekh can you please stop smiling. Pichle aadhe ghante se..... Can you believe it....for last half an hour main non-stop bole jaa rahi hoon aur tum bas smile kiye jaa rahe ho. "

"See how patient listener I m."

"Shut up for heaven's sake."

"But I think that is what exactly I have been doing."

"Mera matlab.... Arggghhhhh... Alekh please it's work and it's serious."

"I know but kya yeh zaroori hai ki hum hamesha sirf kaam ki hi baatein karein."

"Abhi ke liye haan... And don't forget tumne mujhe tumhare kaam ke liye hi hire kiya hai."

"Ab isko kaise samjhaun ki kaun se kaam ke liye ise hire kiya tha." He murmured under his breathe.

"What?"

"Amm... Nothing. Nothing at all."

"No... Tumne kuch kaha."

"Maine kaha.... Haan kaha na.... Work is work and it's very important aur tum ho ki topic se bhatka rahi ho hum dono ko. Chalo get down to work. Quick." He quickly shifted the topic a bit stuttering.

He picked up her file from the table and started turning the pages hurriedly.

******

"Yes sir. There is a room available on the fourth floor. Your name please."

"Mrs. and Mr. Navin Singh Ahluwalia."

"Mrs. and Mr. Navin Singh Ahluwalia... Of course Sir.... We already have an advance booking on your name."

"What? A booking... On my name. May I know who booked it for me?"

"Sir that gentleman was a guest in our hotel... Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat."

"Rajveer? Wait a minute. What do you mean by 'was a guest'?" He was taken aback.

"Yes sir. Captain Rajveer. He asked us for a booking on your name. He was expecting you and your wife here. But for some reasons he checked out this morning."

"And I know his reasons very well." There was a disappointment in his voice along with some degree of shock.

"Maine kaha tha don't try their trick on them. They are way too smart to fall for it."

"You bet."

"But ab kya karein?"

"Ab booking hai to atleast kal subah tak ruk jaate hain. uske baad Delhi wapas chalein jaayenge. Ab to there is no way to find out ki yeh dono gaye kahan hain yahan se."

"Okay."

The receptionist signaled the porter and instructed him about the room.

As they opened the door of the room booked for them, they found another big surprise waiting for them and thankfully it atleast looked like a pleasant one.

"Yeh sab kya hai?" Neetika was quite surprised.

"I wish I knew what all they are upto this time."

The entire room was decorated with flowers. The bedsheet almost had a complete layer of rose petals evenly spread out. The cushions were heart shaped and the entire room was done with a white and red combination as the theme. It looked not just beautiful but..... Romantic!

"Sir yeh is hotel ka sabse behtareen Honeymoon suite hai."

The porter told him.

"Honeymoon suite!" There was no end to his shocks and surprises and Neetika called him to show yet another. She was holding a piece of paper. She handed it over to him and gave a 100 rupee note to the porter who was still standing there. He left.

'Hey Navin!

I hope you liked the arrangements. Waise fridge ke ander ek chilled champagne ki bottle bhi rakhwa di hai maine. Aapke aur aapki khubsurat wife ke happy stay ka saara bandobast kar diyaa hai maine. Last time tumhara honeymoon hum logon ki wajah se thoda sa ruin ho gaya tha na to humnein socha ki apni shaadi pe lets make up for that. Nahin to tum hamara honeymoon bigaad doge (and see you proved me right) and tujhe to pata hi haina ki mera dil itna bada nahin hai ki apna honeymoon spoil karne waalon ko main free goa ki trip doon.

So now tum apna second Honeymoon enjoy karo(Without any disturbance) aur humein hamara enjoy karne do. Waise bhi you are not left with many choices. Haina? Aapke iraadon aur badla lene ke armaanon par paani pherne ke liye WE are really sorry!

Hope you have a good time.

Happy Honeymooning (I am having one)

Take care.

Have fun.

Love,

Rajveer and Mrs. Rajveer!'

"Mrs Rajveer? Naina nahin likh sakta tha kya yahan pe?"

"Likhta to tum aise react kaise karte?"

"Yeah right! Aur jaise ki woh dono yahaan pe ruke hue hain mere reactions dekhne ke liye?"

Suddenly both of them grew silent. After a pause Navin continued,

"Tumhein kya lagta hai... Sachmuch nahin ruke hain woh yahan pe?"

And the silence preavailed. They were not sure of they answer. Can they be right? Even after the receptionist having confirmed them their exit..... Quite Possible!

******

The phone was ringing.

His lips were sealed with her and their bodies were entwined with each other. Their passion knew only how to mount but neither was their any end nor did they allowed their passion level to drop. They were still making love for even they didn't remember how many times since the last night. She had promised him a day.... Full 24 hours drowned in the pleasure of her love. And she was keeping her word. They have hardly stopped. But the ring of the phone was disturbing them now. They finally separated.

"Hello."

"Hello Sir. This is from the reception. Sorry to disturb you but I just wanted to inform you that Mrs. And Mr. Navin Singh Ahluwalia had checked in."

"Oh Good! Aapne use bataya..."

"Sir I told him as you instructed me to. I have told him that you checked out of the hotel this morning."

"Thank you so much!" His happiness was very much there in his voice.

"Anytime sir. It's our policy to respect our guest's privacy."

"But still... Thank you very much."

He hung up.

"Kya hua? Itne khush kyun ho." Naina said irritably for being disturbed like this.

"Aapke Bhai Sahab ne check in kar liya hai. You were right. They had their plans."

"I don't believe this. Bhaiyya sach much yahan aa gaye."

"Sirf Bhaiyya nahin... Bhaiyya aur Bhabhi. Bechara!"

"To itne khush kyun ho rahe ho? Bhaiyya kitne dissapointed honge."

"To ek kaam karte hain jaa lke unko bata dete hain ki hum log yahin hain aur woh jitna chahe humein disturb kar sakte hain." He said sarcastically.

"Maine aisa to nahin kaha."

"Keh sakti bhi nahin ho. You still owe me my birth day gift. Abhi 24 hrs poore nahin hue hain. And I still want more."

He removed the receiver of the phone from the cradle. He pulled her into his arms agian crushing her body against his and bit on her neck. A moan escaped her lips and in an instant she returned to the beautiful world of their divine love forgetting everything else. It didn't take them anytime for getting into yet another session of love making.

Oops! Looks like I broke a few hearts who were expecting a tit for tat bt logically it didnt make sense to me ki RN were expecting them to appear in d scene aur unhone uske liye kuch kiya nhin. Bt on a more truthful note. I m blank wen it comes to those prank type ke ideas....hehe....

No clue abt d nt update.
Luuuv u all.

too good!!!!!ek baat kahun....aap jismein khud ko achchi nahin kehti ho...usi mein khud ko best prove karti ho.....!!!!!!!! pehle kaha tha ..ki u r not good in romance..everybody knows now how u r ... 👏 ...plzz dii wait mat karwaao ..jaldi jaldi post karoo...me eagerly wating!!