**Dosti Mein Pyaar** #2 The End pg.29 - Page 11

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Posted: 18 years ago
grt part ater a long time lolz cang wait for the next bit
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow wonderful part hun, angad kripa, neev prachi, kavya anjali, are so busy these days, but angad and kriipa part was so cute....and kavya n anjalis part was dam hilarious...please update soon cant wait 😉 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
hate 2 use maddie's excuse for not commenting this second: but i gotta do it....

reserved...i know itz da most annoying word on i-f but sry, ill edit asap....

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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part

u've cotinued after long time but it was an amazing part



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Posted: 18 years ago
like i said before.... the part was worth waiting for..... please do continue soon is all i can say... eagerly waiting 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Rabiah

thanks so much for updating
its been a long time ive been waitin n it was worth the wait
ill b looking frwd. to the next part
thnks
countinue soon
ur awesome n so are ur creative ff(s)


luv,
rabiah


thanks soo much! and im really sorry for making you guys wait!

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

yay. u finally cont. gr8 part.


haha yea sorry bout that! thanks!

Originally posted by: subhag

yay u finallyy updated!! 😃 😃 ...great job!! i luved how we got to see a typical dayy from each couple! 😃 ..plzz cont soon! 😉


thanks soo much!

Originally posted by: sabzz

wow !! 😛
awesome part !!
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continue soon


thanks soo much!

Originally posted by: *Ejaz4Hinna*

yayyyy u finally updated
lol the couples r really really cute! cnt wait for da next part!:P


aww thanks!!

Originally posted by: eijaz_lover

aaww it was beautiful numera 👏
i enjoyed each and every part of it 😃
thank god this was not the last part... it really seemed to me it was but now im glad there's more parts coming 😃 😃
6 parts sound sufiicient to me 😳 😳


thank you!! lol darn i should have made it the last part lol jk!

Originally posted by: sahr_8

aww that was a cute part
yaii ull b updating regularly...
cnt soon


thanks!! yup i will!

Originally posted by: za7n4b

grt part ater a long time lolz cang wait for the next bit


thanks soo much!


thanks!

Originally posted by: Mimi_Rani

wow wonderful part hun, angad kripa, neev prachi, kavya anjali, are so busy these days, but angad and kriipa part was so cute....and kavya n anjalis part was dam hilarious...please update soon cant wait 😉 😛


thanks soo much!! yeah they are all pretty busy!

Originally posted by: iamsmart

awesome part

u've cotinued after long time but it was an amazing part


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thanks!


thanks!

Originally posted by: laksh_ktfan

like i said before.... the part was worth waiting for..... please do continue soon is all i can say... eagerly waiting 😊 😊


thank you!!

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Thanks for the comments guys! im a little dissappointed there are so few but it's okay i wont hold it against those who did! next part is up in a few minutes!

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Posted: 18 years ago
Chapter 56

Life has been going great for the three couples. Usually after a hard day at work, they would come home and have nice romantic dinners. Romance is definitely in the air. However, recently Anjali and Kripa have been feeling rather sick.

On this particular day, Kripa can barely make it out of bed. Angad suggests, "Krips how about you stay home and I'll have Kavya help me out for today since he is off today…" All Kripa can get out is a weak, "Mhmm" Angad kisses her forhead and leaves to call Kavya. Kavya picks up the phone, "Hey what's up man?" Angad replies, "Hey I need a favor, can you help me out at the office because Kripa isn't feeling too well…" Kavya agrees, "Of course I'll see you in your office! I'll get Anjali to take care of Kripa." Angad says, "Thanks man! And thank Anju for me! meet me outside in a few alright!"

Kavya and Angad go to the office while, Anjali comes over to the Khanna House to take care of Kripa. Anjali soon gets a telephone call from Mukti. Meanhwhile Kripa gets a call from Aaliya. In the middle of both their conversations Kripa and Anjali both start screaming, "OH MY GOD NO FREAKING WAY!! CONGRATULATIONS!" They both hang up and tell each other at the same time, "SHE IS PREGNANT!" The girls get a silly smile on their face. Kripa laughs, "You know Aaliya's been pregnant since they got drunk and married." Anjali gasps, "NO WAY, that's when Mukti got pregnant too!" Kripa laughs then starts to feel dizzy again so Anjali tells her to rest a bit.

After a lot of persistence from Anjali's side, she is able to get Kripa in a car long enough to go drive down to Prachi's office. Prachi walks into the room surprised to see Anjali and Kripa in the room. Prachi says, "Hey kya hua? Anything happen at home?" Anjali says, "No Prachi, Kripa isn't feeling well so I thought you could check her out." Prachi nods and heads to Kripa, "Di what happened?" Kripa says slowly, "Umm well I've been getting really tired, fraustrated, and really stressed at work. I've been getting headaches a lot because of it. Oh and last night Angad and I went out to eat at a restaurant and when I came home I threw up everything and then again this morning." Anjali nods her head and says to Prachi, "You know I've been like that lately too" Kripa nods and then continues, "Right now I feel so dizzy and I feel like I'm gonna throw up… and I uhh I haven't had my umm monthly visitor yet…"

Prachi gasps while Anjali nervously looks to her feet saying, "I haven't either…" Prachi quickly dashes to the cabinet and pulls out two test sticks. Kripa and Anjali gasp as they see what Prachi has given them. Kripa asks, "You think we are pregnant?" Prachi slowly says, "Only one way to find out…" Anjali and Kripa turn to Prachi saying, "Fine if we have to check then we want you to check yourself too!" Prachi laughs, "Guys I think me being a gynecologist that I would know if I'm pregnant or not…" Kripa and Anjali don't look convinced so Prachi grabs a stick for herself and they head towards the bathroom. Soon after they get out from their bathroom stall, they all put their sticks aside to wait for the results. Meanwhile Prachi suggests they get some blood drawn to be completely sure if they are pregnant or not.

Fifteen minutes later, the girls stand around holding the sticks in hand yelling, "OH MY GOD! We are all… we are all pregnant…" Kripa smiles quite widely, while all Prachi can say is, "How… How did I not notice… I'm…I'm a gynecologist… y-you would think I'm an expert at detecting this… I CAN'T EVEN DO MY OWN JOB RIGHT!" Prachi starts crying while Kripa holds her whispering, "Prachi you're a great doctor, maybe you just didn't want to believe it yet…" Kripa looks over at Anjali for some support however Anjali is completely frozen in place. All Anjali can think about is what is going to happen to her modeling career. Sure Anjali loves children, but this is going to strongly affect her career. She wanted to be happy, but she just wasn't sure about the future. The girls all decide they need to go home, rest, and figure out how to tell their husbands.

Prachi sits in her room thinking about the baby growing inside of her. She can't help, but feel excited about her own child being brought into the world. Suddenly anxiety fills her as she thinks, "What if Neev doesn't want a child right now?" She certainly did not think it would happen so soon, but it had. Sure they had talked about having children in the future, but they had never planned for it this soon. Prachi nearly jumps as she hears the door open and in walks a very agigtated Neev. He yells, "Prachi you never told me you left the hospital! How could you leave without telling me?" Prachi doesn't understand why he is so mad, but can't hold back her own tears. She starts crying violently while Neev panics. He sits on the bed and pulls her into his arms letting her head rest against his chest. He runs his hands through her hair and whispers, "I'm sorry for yelling jaan, I was just really worried about you! Shhh don't cry, I'm sorry... Aacha batao aise kyun chor ke aagaye wapas ghar? Kya tum mujse naaraz ho?" Prachi wipes her tears and shakes her head 'no'. Neev lifts her chin and says, "Toh phir kya hua?" Prachi says softly, "Woh Kripa aur Anjali office mein aaye the, isliye…" Neev nods, "Anything else?" Prachi nods while Neev asks, "Kya?"

Prachi readjusts herself in his lap so she can look into his eyes and says, "Tum papa bane wale ho!" Neev laughs, "Prachi dekho mujhe aisa maazak bilkul pasand nahin hain, phir aisa mat karna!" Prachi pushes him away annoyed and says, "Neev mein maazak nahin kari... kya sooch rahe ho?" Neev gets up and turns to face Prachi yelling, "Prachi we aren't ready to have a baby! I'm not ready to be a father! We aren't mature enough! We act like four year olds, we can't raise a child!" Prachi looks at him hurt and tears well up in her eyes. Neev's eyes grow wide as he sees her about to burst into tears. He jumps on the bed pinning Prachi underneath him and he begs, "Oh God Prachi please don't cry mein toh sirf maazak kara ha! I swear I was only joking!" Prachi looks at Neev and asks through her tears, "Maazak tha?" Neev nods as if trying to convince himself and Prachi. Prachi cries into his arms, "Phir aisa mat karna! Tum saach mein khush ho na?" Neev nods, "Bahut!" He manages to convince Prachi he is happy, now only if he could convince himself.

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Anjali paces around her room thinking about how this will change her life forever. She feels like her life is going in the opposite direction of what she really wants. She always wanted to be a famous model, but now she isn't sure if she will be able to ever look the same, not the mention it would take a lot of effort to try to get back into shape. She won't be able to take care of a baby and concentrate on getting her figure back. There is just so much to deal with, but she doesn't know whether she is actually happy or if she is sad. Anjali's thoughts are interrupted when a very tired Kavya walks through the doors. Anjali is standing in front of her window when she feels Kavya's arm wrap around her, landing on top of her stomach—where ironically enough their child is growing. Anjali leans back against Kavya and feels his lips drag over her neck. Anjali turns around and kisses Kavya gently on the lips. She puts her arms around his neck and begins, "Kavya I have something to tell you…" Kavya guesses, "That you love me? That you can't live without me? …No? Umm that you uhhh… Okay I'm out of guesses, tell me."

Anjali says slowly, "Kavya I'm… I'm pregnant" His eyes grow wide along with the smile on his face. He falls to his knees screaming and punching the air above, "YES!!!! I'm gonna be a father!! Anjali I love you soooooo… What's wrong?" Noticing Anjali's emotionless face, worry takes over him. He asks, "Anjali what's wrong? Aren't you happy?" Anjali bursts, "No I'm not happy Kavya! I didn't want a child this early, I have barely begun my career and it's already over!" Kavya looks taken back and a little hurt, "So what are you saying…" Anjali says, "Look Kavya I love you very much, but I mean we can start a family later so what's the rush?" Kavya looks shocked and angered, "Are you suggesting an abortion?" Anjali slowly replies, "I don't know…" Kavya roars, "Are you out of your mind? How can you even think about killing your own child? THIS IS OUR CHILD ANJALI—MINE AND YOURS! I… I can't even look at you right now! I-I need some air…" Kavya leaves through the door ignoring all of Anjali's protests.

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Kripa stands in front of the mirror staring at her reflection, well more so her stomach. She couldn't help but wonder what she would look like fully pregnant. She is so enthralled about her pregnancy that she fails to notice Angad enter the room. He smirks as he watchs his beautiful wife checking herself out. He slowly creeps behind her and picks her up in his arms. Kripa lets out a loud squeal of excitement as she throws her arms around Angad, giving him a heartwarming kiss. He gently places her on the bed and hovers over body. She looks into those passionate eyes and said, "I have a surprise for you" Angad grins, "Can it wait because I'm kind of in the middle of something?" Kripa smacks his arm and he laughs. He then sighs and collapases beside her, asking, "So what's the surprise? Are you gonna model lingerie for me? Because that would be HOT!" Kripa frowns thinking, "He has such a one track mind!"

Kripa rolls her eyes in attempts to dismiss his question and sits up facing Angad. He props himself on his elbows and raises his eyebrow as if asking her to explain for the interruption of his little agenda. Kripa sits there silently trying to find the right words to say. Angad gets annoyed and pulls Kripa back on top of him. He asks, "You were saying baby?" Kripa gives him a light kiss and murmurs against his lips, "We're having a baby…" Angad whispers, "That's nice…" He starts kissing her neck, not processing what she just said. As soon as he figures out what his wife told him, he asks, "Wait what did you say?" Kripa tries to hide her amusement at her husband's cluelessness. She takes his hand and places it on her stomach. Angad smiles widely and softly kisses her stomach, trying to show his little one a bit of affection for coming into their lives.

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Hey guys yes so i decided to put some drama in there as you must have realized by now! Hope you guys liked the part-- don't worry about the current probs they will be resolved soon and i mean VERY SOON! There are now 5 parts left of the story. I still have to write the last two and when i write those i can start on SR. As for a preview well i think its better just to wait til tomorrow to c what happens lol there is no point to give it away when its the end now is there lol! LEAVE COMMENTS GUYS!

Check out my new ff if you haven't already! It's called Sweet Revenge (click the link)



Edited by Numera* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 part

hmm...so they r having a baby. gosh they all have different perspectives.





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Posted: 18 years ago
wow amazing and really cute parts oh a bit of misunderstanding between kavya and anjali its amazing all of them got pregnant at the same timme well all the couples were really cute we get to see so much flair and flavours in ur fic
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Posted: 18 years ago
hi numera.nice part.i really forgot about this ff and when i read today i had to read one complete month.but it was damn gud.

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