**Dosti Mein Pyaar** #2 The End pg.29 - Page 10

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Posted: 18 years ago
#91
Awesome Part very cute and funny
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Originally posted by: pmrockz

Yay me first! 😆 😆

had beem waiting, its awesome and i loved the MUSH DOGGY part! 😆

Your writing in incridible! 😳
cont soon 👏


lol thanks hun!!

Originally posted by: Mimi_Rani

aww hun that was very cute...i loved it and i cant wait for you to update...dont take too long...im just kidding lots of love and best wishes for your next ff...and this one..sukhi 😳


thanks you soo much! sorry bout the delay-- it was a really huge delay on my part!

Originally posted by: Gaurav''s Love

hey thats ok....theres only so much u can write about honeymoons 😆 😆 😆 now they're home and no more romance and masti lol 😆 😆 will b waiting 4 the next part 😃 😃 so do continue soooon


thanks soo much!! yup exactly!

Originally posted by: *Ejaz4Hinna*

yep my questionz were cleared thnx alot numeraaaa :D
awwww d honeymoon finished! dis part was wiked i cud imagine d whole place lol sooo much fun wish i woz dere
n da scene i loved most woz anjali saying "cute doggy" 2 kavya 😆 man i cracked up soooo much
thanks god im at home by myself i cna laugh as loud as i want without ppl thinking im crazy 😃 well the neighblurs mite but i dnt care

xx hin xx 😛


thanks soo much!!! ur tooo sweet! thanks!


thanks!

Originally posted by: sabzz

nice and lovely part
continue soon !! 👏


thanks!

Originally posted by: iamsmart

fab part

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sana


thanks!

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

great part. u have aweswome ideas that make ur fan fic soooo interesting n funny. cont soon. 😃


thanks so much!

Originally posted by: tsamhita

AMAZING....thats all i can say 😊 😊 lol...really good 😊


thanks a lot!

Originally posted by: sweetmittal

hey dear what nice and lovely part. but i think the honeymoon is over. well i liked to see more romantic part.

cotninue soon

mittal


thanks soo much!!

Originally posted by: Khushi3e

hey what can i say ive jus finised reading it from the beginning - its jus brilliant supereb 👏 👏so pls continue soon 😊


thanks soo much!! glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: angelic shaz

i jus catched wid ur ff agen
its realli gd
continue soon 😃


thanks soo much!

Originally posted by: eijaz_lover

that was a gr8 part 👏
the doggy scene was really cute 😆


thanks soo much hun!

Originally posted by: subhag

great part..as usual 😉 ..lol neev is too cute on how he teased prachi about her bathing suit..it could have been much worse like a TWO PIECE!!! 😆 😆 haha i was laughing soo much at this part!! too bad the honeymoon is over..it was soo funny and romantic 😉 😆
plzz cont soon 😃


thank you!! lol glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: armaghan0

amazing loved wow ur neev and prachi r so cute but in the serial they suck now adays


thanks soo much! yea i heard it sucks now-- too much drama with ayesha and all! i stopped watching it like when her dad died but yea most dramas turn out like that eventually lol!

Originally posted by: za7n4b

cant wait for u to coninue


thanks and sorry for delay!

Originally posted by: ix iishiqaa xo

no problem take your time...it's def. worth the wait 😊


thanks for understanding!

Originally posted by: kIrAn...E>GA<3

dont wry hun we understand completely....dont worry bout it. ur story is ALWAYS worth the wait.

bug the crap outa ur cuzin so u can cont soon! im waitin.

btw, check out me and maddie's ff dhamaka contest. it wud be REALLY nyce if u participated.

please and thank you. cont soon!

<3 kiran
E> GA <3


lol the prob was that my dad doesnt like it when i let ppl borrow my stuff so he didnt know bout it and all last week my dad had vacation so i couldnt go pickup the harddrive with him there lol! aww i wanted to participate but i was soo busy and now that i got my harddrive im trying to finish up writing for dmp so i can start sr soon!

Originally posted by: laksh_ktfan

dont worry...... we understand.. continue whenever you can 😊 😊 i'll be waiting as the parts are worth waiting for 😊 😊


thanks soo much!! sorry bout delay!

Originally posted by: cutie13

u can continue whenever u want


thanks! sorry bout delay

Originally posted by: Rabiah

no prob.. i can understand just do when u can... its worth the wait..
<<<rabiah


thanks hun! sorry bout delay

Originally posted by: *Ejaz4Hinna*

go say to ur cuz i said its abt high time he guivez it back 😆


lol my cousin wasnt so much the problem as my day cuz he doesnt like me letting others borrow stuff so my dad was on vacation and i couldnt pick it up but yea... lol!

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Awesome Part very cute and funny


thanks!


thanks

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Okay guys and REALLY REALLY sorry about the delay! enjoy the part!
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Chapter 55

A couple weeks later, everyone became fully engrossed into their new careers. Giving Surya and Dilip a break, Angad and Kripa have taken up high positions in the family business-- the fashion house, Khash Corporations. Anjali and Kavya have thoroughly taken advantage of the fact that their parents own a fashion house and have started to model for the collections from Khash. Neev and Prachi have started working down at the hospital, saving and bringing lives into the world is no easy task. Now let's see what a usual day for each pair entails…

Kripa wakes up noticing the alarm clock reads 8 o'clock. She pulls herself out of Angad's arms and begins the weary process of waking him up to get ready for work or else they will both be late. Angad groans tossing and turning, not to mention trying to drag Kripa back into bed. He completely disregards the fact they need to get ready for work. Kripa shakes her head and then throws herself on him, making him wince in pain. Angad groans, "Owww geez Krips all you had to do was ask…" Kripa rolls her eyes and makes her way into the bathroom, whereas Angad grins watching her leave and decides to tags along.

Half an hour later, they both come down the stairs in formal clothing. Angad wears a black suit with a black and white button up shirt, while Kripa wears a black executive style knee high skirt with a white button up shirt. They both look sophisticated yet stylish which is just the look for a fashion house owner. Kripa and Angad race out the house shouting their love to Naina and Dilip along the way and drive off towards the corporation.

When they enter they see that everyone is present, which infuriates Kripa. When they step into the vacant elevator Kripa angrily yells, "CRAP! We are so late! We were suppose to be here an hour ago! We are supposed to be incharge now Angad and we are the ones late… and it's ALL YOUR FAULT!" Angad just stares at Kripa until she cools down and starts to get fidgety and conscious. She snaps, "What is the matter with you? Quit staring at me!" He smirks and starts walking towards her, then trapping her against the wall of the elevator. Kripa becomes at a loss of words and loses herself in his eyes. He slowly brushes his lips against hers making sure she won't yell any further. Just then the elevator door pulls open and a bunch of workers shout, "Uhhh… SORRY BAD TIMING! CARRY ON!" They whip their heads away from the elevator causing Angad to smirk at their obedience and Kripa to blush in embaressment.

They both make their way to their joint cabin, which used to be both their fathers' cabin. Angad plops down onto the chair and lets out an exhausted sigh. Kripa throws a file infront of Angad saying, "Read it, we have a meeting this afternoon with Singhania from the marketing department… he wants to try a new strategy." Angad nods and begins to overview a file while Kripa checks some designs downstairs with Anjali and Kavya. Angad eventually gets hungry since Kripa made him run out the door to prevent being late and well not only were they late, but also hungry as well. Soon Angad orders foor and begins to chow down while Kripa comes in the office looking quite exhausted herself. She sees Angad had the decency to order food and starts to look around for her own meal. Kripa makes her way towards him saying, "Angad where is my food?" As soon as Kripa comes close enough, he pulls her into his lap. Kripa struggles, "Angad let go! What if someone comes in?" Angad retorts, "What if someone doesn't! Now shut up and eat!" Angad feeds Kripa while she continues to struggle and be paranoid that someone will show up.

Kripa's attention is caught by the clock and quickly gets out of Angad's grasp to stand up. Angad looks at her annoyed and asks questioningly, "Now what's the problem?" Kripa shakes her head and points to the clock, then drags Angad to the board meeting. When they enter, the conversations all stop and everyone gives Angad and Kripa their full attention. Kripa sits down so that she can watch Angad describe the plan for future shows. Angad then takes his seat to watch Rahul Singhania take over and share his ideas with the group. Kripa watches out of the corner of her eye that Angad looks rather annoyed with her squirmy behavior. Since he is sitting next to her, she starts to play footsie with him, which doesn't seem to cheer him up one bit. Kripa frowns and then grins as she thinks up other ways to gain his attention. Under the table, Kripa draws circles on Angad's shirt with her finger in attempts to get a response out of him. He glares at her briefly, which seems to encourage her further. She starts running her hand up and down his thigh sending chills down his spine.

He stops her hand, from causing further havoc with his brain functioning and whispers, "What?" Kripa sends him a seductive smile, to which causes Angad to bit back a smile. After the meeting is said and done, Angad and Kripa make their way back towards their cabin. Before Kripa can even turn on the light, she is suddenly pushed up against the wall. Before Kripa can protest, Angad lays his lips on hers. He pries himself away as he hears the door opening. Their secretary arrives with some paperwork and hands it to Angad. He notices Kripa is at her desk already trying to look like she is writing something, only Angad notices she is holding the pen upside down. He laughs and gets to work. Eventually when they get tired from all the work and head home to get some rest to tackle a new day in their new life together.


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Anjali and Kavya wish each other a quick good morning before getting ready to go to the Khash fashion house. Anjali quickly takes a shower and changes into a light green skirt with a white blouse. Kavya does the same, only he changes into dress pants and a red button up shirt. Anjali goes downstairs to help Gayatri while Kavya continues to style his hair like an obsessive freak. Soon after breakfast, they both dash out the door and towards the fashion house.

Kavya and Anjali are responsible to choose the designs for the new line, while Angad and Kripa manage the business aspect of the fashion house. When they arrive, they meet with a couple designers to check out the new designs they have created. Kavya goes over the men fashion line, while Anjali looks over the womens clothing. Anjali helps the designers come up with better designs. Anjali had been showing a lot of interest in designing clothing, which Kavya seems to encourage. When the two have agreed on the designs for the new line, they have Kripa overlook the designs and finalize the details.

Kavya and Anjali then head for their shooting for the advertisement for the Khash collections. The ad is to be made featuring both Kavya and Anjali in their designer clothing. The director calls for Kavya and Anjali, who come wearing expensive embroidered clothing. Anjali wears a black sari with lots of heavy white gold embroidery, while Kavya wears a beige sherwani with a border of black along with white gold embroidery. They both not only match, but look completely made for each other. Kavya pauses to watch Anjali enter the set with a proudly displaying her fancy clothes and Kavya can't help, but let a little drool escape the sides of his mouth. The director yells, "Kavya… Kavya!!! You fool get over here and make-up come here and wipe the drool off Kavya's face! Anjali watch your husband, it's like he needs another honeymoon! UGHH!" Anjali's cheeks flush, yet she breaks into fits of laughter as she watches Kavya become completely embarrassed. Kavya raises his hand to check and see if there is really drool on the side of his mouth. He turns completely red as he feels the wetness and soon enough finds a makeup artist in front of him to do some touchups.

After the shoot, they both have to take some pictures for advertisements. The director decides to switch up the models. Kavya stands off to the side and watches and Anjali takes some pictures with another male model. As soon as the model puts his hands anywhere on Anjali, Kavya's knuckles turn white from fisting his hands. Anjali watches Kavya struggling to keep his cool and silently laughs at his overprotective/jealous state. Anjali snuggles closer to the guy, while fuels Kavya's anger even more. The model catches sight of Kavya's death glare and whispers to Anjali laughing, "Anjali you're husband looks ready to beat the crap outta me, stop playing around or else he's going to mess up my face!" Anjali laughs, "Party pooper!" As soon as the shoot is done, it's Kavya's turn with another female model.

Anjali watches as Kavya deliberately places his hands on the woman's hips. Anjali gives Kavya an evil death glare as if saying 'I'll see you when we get home'. Kavya gulps and decides to not test Anjali on her threat because she would definitely come through. Kavya finishes his shoot and then finds that Anjali is no longer standing there. He groans, but decides to let her come to him. He walks around until he suddenly gets pulled into a dark room. He is not able to recognize the woman, who has thrown him against the wall and has pressed herself up against him. He can feel her breath coming closer, so Kavya turns his face yelling, "Whoa look lady, chill out I'm already married so GET OFF ME!" The woman laughs and turns on the lights, revealing herself as Anjali. Kavya sighs in relief, "God Anju, you scared the crap outta me!" Anjali laughs, "Sorry, but it was too perfect an opportunity to pass up! Plus I got to test you!" Kavya pouts, "You don't think I'm faithful?" Anjali kisses his cheek, "Of course you are, it's just fun to test you once in a while!" Kavya groans, "Well then maybe I should try that on you and see how …" Anjali cuts him off with her lips and then breaks apart whispering, "Sorry about what I did before, but you look so cute when your mad!" Kavya distractedly says, "Yea sure you're forgiven…" Kavya continues to kiss his wife, eventually deciding that it was time to head back home. Their new life happens to be a glamourous one, but their momentary insecurities could no way harm their absolute trust that they had instilled in each other.


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Neev and Prachi start their morning earlier than the others. They quickly dart towards the bathroom for showers and then change into their clothes for work. Prachi wears jeans and a pink shirt underneath her doctors coat, while Neev wears light blue scrubs underneath his doctors coat. They both make their way downstairs and quickly grab some snacks to eat on the way to the hospital.

When they arrived at the hospital Prachi and Neev head to the elevators. Prachi's gynecologist clinic is in the third floor, whereas the operating rooms for surgery are on the second floor. They both stand in an empty elevator and as soon as the elevator hits the second floor, Prachi leans in to give Neev a quick kiss on the cheek before departing. Neev blushes and gets off the elevator to start his day. He enters his clinic and meets with his patients who are to go through a kidney transplant. Neev quickly consols both patients and finishes up in a matter of two hours. The nurse comes towards Neev and throws her arms around him screaming, "Good Job doctor, you did amazingly well!" Neev awkwardly taps her back, not knowing what else to do. Neev replies, "Uhh thanks… now if you will excuse me… please? You can let go now…uhhh"He forcefully pries the woman off him and decides to take his lunch break.

He sets off to find Prachi, and sees that she is still in the delivery room. Neev decides to wait outside until she is free and then he hears a little cry erupting from inside the delivery room. Neev smiles, knowing that Prachi brought another child into this world. He couldn't help but wonder what it would be like when he and Prachi would bring their child into this world and whether he would be capable of raising a child. The thought itself sent Neev in a daze with a wide smile on his face. He hoped he would be a good father. He soon finds an exhausted Prachi coming out the door and pulls her into his arms. Prachi lets out a yelp and then smiles seeing Neev's happy face. He throws an arm around her shoulder while walking, "Ladka tha ya ladki?" Prachi smiles, "Ladki aur bahut cute thi!" Neev whispers, "Ours will be cuter!" Prachi can't help but blush, "Umm tumhari surgery kaisi gayi?" Neev nods, "It went well and everything seems fine with both patients. Oh and the nurse was so hot! She was totally all over me!" Prachi's mouth drops open, "WHAT? NEEV! Ughh mujhe chordo and uske paas jao!" Prachi crosses her arms and looks away, while Neev wraps his arms around her whispering, "Jaan mein toh maazak karah tha… Okay ab aisa maazak nahin karonga!" Prachi rolls her eyes, "Fine chalo, waise bhi mujhe bahut bhook lagi hain!" Neev laughs, "God tum kitna ka…" Prachi raises her finger and says, "Aage nahin bhool na, nahin toh main tumhe zinda nahin chorongi!" Neev steps back with his hands in the air, "Okay just relax, calm down, breathe…" Neev sees her threathening eyes and decides to shut up and just follow her.

As soon as Prachi spots food, her mood completely changes and she becomes the nice and approachable Prachi she always was. Neev quickly gets them food and sits down to have lunch with his wife. They talk about their day, their patients, their parents, their siblings, their future, and just like that the time went by. Neev and Prachi make their way back upstairs to finish up the day. Their new life was a hectic one, but with great family, great friends, and a great life partner they both managed to make time for everything.

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I'm soo totally sorry about the delay! it wasnt until i lent my harddrive that i realized that both my stories were on there-- plus my dad had vacation all last week and he hates me lending out stuff so i couldnt go get it, but now i finally got i-- THANK GOD! i'll be updating this ff regularly until it ends which is in 6 more parts! I'm almost done writing them all so I decided to hold off writing for SR until im done with DMP which should be in one or two days! thanks for being so patient and understanding! Next part is gonna be up tomorrow! LEAVE COMMENTS!

Check out my new ff if you haven't already! It's called Sweet Revenge (click the link)


Edited by Numera* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome parts!! they were all very cute!! continue soon!!
Edited by erier101 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks so much for updating
its been a long time ive been waitin n it was worth the wait
ill b looking frwd. to the next part
thnks
countinue soon
ur awesome n so are ur creative ff(s)


luv,
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yay u finallyy updated!! 😃 😃 ...great job!! i luved how we got to see a typical dayy from each couple! 😃 ..plzz cont soon! 😉
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wow !! 😛
awesome part !!
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continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yayyyy u finally updated
lol the couples r really really cute! cnt wait for da next part!:P
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aaww it was beautiful numera 👏
i enjoyed each and every part of it 😃
thank god this was not the last part... it really seemed to me it was but now im glad there's more parts coming 😃 😃
6 parts sound sufiicient to me 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
aww that was a cute part
yaii ull b updating regularly...
cnt soon

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