My Version Of KYPH- LAST PART PG 40 - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
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THANKYOU TO THE FOLLOWING PEOPLE FOR COMMENTING TO PART 6

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Edited by imdudehead - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi i was just wonderin can any1 telll me hw i can add image that i saved on to the computer i m not very creative so i cant figure it out myself
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Posted: 18 years ago
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go on image shack.us and upload ur pivcs and put it on
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i cant wait for u to conitnue lol
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
great part. i juss started reading dis ff so lemme tell u its great!!!!! im technologically advanced so i cant help u wit ur pic loading issues but here's wat i can do... 👏 yeah, i dont usually give more dan one but urs is DAT good. awwww kripa's a fan of angad's how cute... 😳

ur ff is really cute, please continue soon!

<3 kiran
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Posted: 18 years ago
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THankyou to the following people for commenting for part 7 and tellin me how to put photo's on..

za7n4b 😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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PArt 8- Kripa at home

Kripa felt as if she was on top of the world. She swirled around like a mad woman. She opened her suitcase and took out her poster of him. She would be performing with him the thought made her crazy.

Kripa would start her rehearsals the next day Kripa was too excited.

***

Anita had heard the news and was enraged she wouldn't let Kripa perform with Angad. Angad was her cousin and she had at least some rights on him and Kripa had made her boyfriend breakup with her.

Anita had, had a crush on Prithvi since forever and the day Anita had asked him out he said "No" all because of Kripa. She decided she would do something to Kripa to get her back.

****Next Day Rehearsals****

The Rehearsals had already started. Everyone was there but Kripa's co-star Angad. Kripa was really getting impatient.

No one else seemed to notice because it was ordinary for Angad to be late. Kripa had been told that they would be performing to this song

"Rabba mere rabba rabba iss pyar ko main kya naam du"-


Kripa had memorized her lines now but she needed Angad to arrive so they could practice the moves. Kripa loved Angad a lot but he was getting annoying now.
After 2 hours Angad finally arrived!!!!! Angad smiled at Kripa and they started practicing. Kripa was very uncomfortable due to Angad touching her everywhere. She consoled herself by telling herself it was for the show.


After the show Angad offered Kripa to drop her home as he was going there to meet Dadi anyways. Kripa agrees.


***In the Car*******

Angad was bored, he decided to have a conversation with Kripa he pathetically said "ugh Kripa that umm…suit really suits you"

Kripa gave him a pathetic smile and said "thank you…um….you look really good too"

Kripa closed her eyes wishing this car ride would end soon. Or at least before she jumped on him.

Angad had never had such difficulty seducing a girl by now any girl would have already been on him. He decided to start another conversation.

"So Kripa…. What's up??" Angad said

A confused Kripa replied "nothing much you"

Angad and Kripa felt very awkward. Angad forced a smile and said "same…so you probably have a msn messenger account"

Kripa was a bit annoyed but said in the nicest voice she could "I hardly know anyone who doesn't"
Angad laughed, he felt very stupid for the last 20 years of his life he had thought people from small cities like Nanital didn't have computers. Now that Angad thought about it he had thought that people from small cities like Nanital were illiterate.

Angad and Kripa both wanted to jump in joy as they reached Dadi's house.

Kripa and Angad went in without a word. Angad and Dadi talked for a while than Angad left

Kripa and Dadi went to sleep


********Angad's point of View******** (in the car going home)


Angad hated Anita. 😡 Why? Because she got him into this trouble.

Flashback



Angad is about to go to the rehearsals when he hears someone crying Angad decides to go check what happened.

Anita, Angad's cousin was crying loudly. Angad asked her what happened. Anita started badmouthing Kripa and told Angad that Kripa made her breakup with her boyfriend by lying to him that she was cheating on him.

Angad felt sorry for Anita and asked her if there was anything he could do to help.

Anita told him there was one thing.



END OF FLASHBBACK
Edited by imdudehead - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
gasp! he wouldn't, he's trying to seduce kripa 2 get revenge for anita!!!?!?!! dats terrible...and genius! 😉

watch me be wrong, 😆 haha. but u write amazing darling....cont soon please!

<3 kiran
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
gr8 part
anita ugghhh 😡


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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
kk im caught up!! great part!! stupid anitaaaaa!! i wonder what she told him to do cont soon!!

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