My Version Of KYPH- LAST PART PG 40 - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey. just started reading ur fan fic. great job. cont soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
hi thanku for all the comments i cant continue todaii cause i have gusets over and i havae to play with them 🤢
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: imdudehead

hi thanku for all the comments i cant continue todaii cause i have gusets over and i havae to play with them 🤢

never mind take ur time

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome parts i really like it and keep up the good work.

Love,

Saniya
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanku everyone for the comments 😳 herez the next part



RECAP-Anita's flashback and blames Kripa for her breakup -the flashback was Anita's point of view…Kripa didn't see who she crashed into cause she was in a hurry.-



PART 5

Kripa was introduced to the class. Anita hated her already. Professor Satyam asked the class if anyone wanted to volunteer to show Kripa around. This was a job hardly no one wanted to do, and Anita gave a look of terror to anyone who even thought of putting there hand up.


Prithvi noticed that Anita didn't want anyone to put up there hand. That was basically the reason Prithvi volunteered to show Kripa around. Professor Satyam smiled at his favorite student and got Kripa to sit beside him



After class everyone went home. Kripa went to Dadi's place. Dadi wasn't home so she quietly went to her room to change.


After she changed into her night suit, she laid on her bed thinking about him

Kripa heard the doorbell ring she went to open it thinking it was Dadi. A man fell on her shoulders. Kripa could tell he was drunk due to the smell coming out of his mouth.


She carefully took the man to her room and carefully dropped him on her bed. She was about to leave when he (in a drunk state) pulled her on top of her and than flipped himself on top of her. He fell unconscious. Kripa tried to take in what had just happened.


She breathe in and out a couple of times. Kripa looked and the man who had been on top of her a couple of seconds ago it was him

Kripa came out of her dream world when she heard Dadi's voice. "Kripa, why was the door open oh my goodness" Dadi looked at her unconscious grandson and went to him. Kripa explained to Dadi what had happened. She skipped the part of him pulling her on him than him getting on her.


Dadi sighed "his friends may have dropped him here I am so happy you were home at that time Kripa or else he would have been left outside for god knows how long" Dadi put the blanket over her grandson and Kripa and Dadi left the room.


Kripa was with Dadi that night because he was in Kripa's room. Kripa couldn't sleep. The scene of himbeing on top of her kept on replaying in her mind. Kripa was blushing like crazy.

Next Day (Sunday)
Kripa woke up at 6 am due to habit she walked into the kitchen and saw him there. He was looking for something and it seemed like he was having trouble finding it. Kripa walked towards him before she could ask him if he needed something he ordered her to make coffee for him without even looking at her.

Kripa was taken aback by the rudeness he had spoken to her with but made him coffee anyways. He was sitting at the dinning table. Kripa sat beside him. He scanned her and finally spoke in a-mater- of -fact -tone "you're not Janki??"

Kripa nodded "umm….I know"

TO BE CONTINUED
hi i know this part is very confusing but i will clairify it in the next part 😃
Edited by imdudehead - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 part
lolz he thought that she's his maid 😆


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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: iamsmart

gr8 part
lolz he thought that she's his maid 😆


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😳yepp itz cause of his hangover

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi since I am not replying to every comment individually 4 part 4 I am thanking them in this post.

Thank you to the following people for commenting

Happiness**
Huntor
Iamsmart
angullgrl91
dhabi_84
Fashion101

These are for the comments after part 4 I have individually thanked people(quoted them) before but now I will thank them in one post unless you have asked a question which will be quoted and replied to
if i forgot some one who commented for part 4 than please tell me cause i am very sorry...and i will add them😳
Edited by imdudehead - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thankyou iamsmart and angullgrl91 for ur wonderful comments 4 part 5


RECAP- Kripa was taken aback by the rudeness he had spoken to her with but made him coffee anyways. He was sitting at the dinning table. Kripa sat beside him. He scanned her and finally spoke in a-mater- of -fact -tone "you're not Janki??"

Kripa nodded "umm….I know"



Part 6

Dadi laughed loudly "no Angad she isn't my maid, Janki, she is Kripa a family friend and you better behave with her or else." Angad sipped his coffee and put it on the table and hugged his Dadi.


"Hey Dadi sorry my head is just killing me" Dadi smiled at him and told him to finish his coffee while she made breakfast for him and Kripa.



Kripa and Angad were left alone. Angad apologized to her for talking rudely to her. Kripa smiled at him and told him its okay.



Kripa looked away; she knew if she talked to him for more than a minute she would go crazy. She had admired Angad and his singing since he was struggling to become a rock star.


She had even written him anonymous letters praising his singing. She remembered the letters he had sent her back. She still had them.



When he became a big star he stopped replying to her letters and she stopped sending them. She had consoled herself by saying that Angad probably got millions of letters now and was to busy to answer hers


Kripa was pulled out of her thoughts when Dadi came with the breakfast. Dadi was laughing "you two were sitting here like you were at a funeral". Kripa smiled at Dadi and helped her organize the breakfast.


After breakfast Dadi asked Kripa if she had to go to the music academy today. Kripa kindly reminded Dadi that the music academy is closed on Sundays.


Dadi laughed at her own memory. Kripa smiled and excused herself. After Kripa was gone Dadi talked to Angad "Angad ….how many times have I told you not to drink so much" Angad smiled at Dadi and apologized.


Meanwhile Kripa was in her room she touched the bed Angad had been on a while ago. She smiled to herself and fantasized her and Angad together. His voice kept ringing in her ears.

Angad's voice in Kripa's ears was interrupted by a phone call. Kripa sighed and picked up the phone. Here is the conversation.

Kripa-hello
Person who phoned- hey Kripa its Prithvi here
Kripa- Prithvi??
Prithvi –hey did you forget me already
Kripa- oh no of course not I just…forget it so why did you call.
Prithvi- I Prithvi Bose invite you Kripa Sharma to my house for dinner
Kripa- why??
Prithvi- my mom wants to meet you she has an proposal for you details when you come
Kripa- umm…okay what time
Prithvi- at 8pm I will pick you up kk
Kripa –I guess
Edited by imdudehead - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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RECAP-Kripa-hello
Person who phoned- hey Kripa its Prithvi here
Kripa- Prithvi??
Prithvi –hey did you forget me already
Kripa- oh no of course not I just…forget it so why did you call.
Prithvi- I Prithvi Bose invite you Kripa Sharma to my house for dinner
Kripa- why??
Prithvi- my mom wants to meet you she has a proposal for you details when you come
Kripa- umm…okay what time
Prithvi- at 8pm I will pick you up kk
Kripa –I guess

Part 7

Kripa bit her lips. How could she forget who Prithvi was even for a second? He had helped a lot since she had been here. Kripa smacked her head as a way of punishing herself.

Kripa informed Dadi that she going to Prithvi's house for dinner.

7:59

Kripa was ready. She had worn this.If you cant see it.It is a black kameez red salwaar and slim duppata



Prithvi came to pick her up. He smiled at her and brought her to his house. Kripa stared at it. It was twice as big as the Khanna Mansion. Kripa looked at it for a while than kindly questioned Prithvi "Prithvi who else lives here" Prithvi told her his mother and sister lived here.

Kripa was introduced to Mrs. Damini Bose, Prithvi's mother. Kripa touched her feet which impressed Damini a lot. Kripa and Damini got to know each other. Damini was impressed a LOT by Kripa.


After dinner Kripa was told the real reason she invited to have dinner. Damini Bose organized concerts and needed a NEW voice to perform at Angad's next concert and Prithvi had praised her voice a lot so they wanted Kripa to perform.


Kripa was dumbfounded by their offer she reluctantly agreed.
(imagine she had worn the red siut just look at her expression)

***


Kripa went home and told Dadi the good news.


To be continued TODAy
Edited by imdudehead - 18 years ago

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