My Version Of KYPH- LAST PART PG 40 - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: monikaseth

👏 great dear just read it 👏 👏

thx😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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NOTE-I just realized in the last part I wrote that she sang tinka tinka she hasn't sang the son yet she has been given the lyrics and she has to perform in this part. And in the first part I would like to clarify that the girl in the beginning who's skirt had coke thrown on it was NOT kripa
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Recap-kripa is given lyrics of Tinka Tinka to sing…

Part 3

Kripa scanned at the lyrics she had been given. Professor Satyam had given her 60 seconds to memorize the lines and sing it all perfectly. After the 60 seconds were over she gave the sheet with the lyrics to Professor Satyam.

Kripa closed her eyes and sighed. She began to sing.


"Tinka Tinka jara jara
hai roshni se jaise bhara
hai roshni se jaise bhara
Har dil main armaan hote to hai
Har dil main armaan hote to hai
bas koi samjhe jara)
bas koi samjhe jara) & amp; nbsp;

kripa hears a noise indicating someone has entered the room
D-Dil pe ek naya sa nasha cha gaya
kho raha tha jo khwaab vo laut aa gaya)
Yeh jo ehsaas hai jo karaar hai
kya issi ka hi naam pyaar hai) &a mp;n bsp;
k-k- kya issi ka hi naam pyaar hai)
pootche dil thumke jara
Tinka Tinka jara jara
hai roshni se jaise bhara
Har dil main armaan hote to hai
Har dil main armaan hote to hai
bas koi samjhe jara
Tinka Tinka Tinka Tinka

Kripa knew she had messed up big time. She gently opened her eyes to see a man staring back at her ;( he wasn't the professor) he had a big smile on his face which scared Kripa. She looked around to find Professor Satyam who was writing something on a piece of paper. She went up to him hoping he would say something like "I will inform you later' so she wouldn't fall apart on the spot when he told her that she would have to go back to Nainatal cause she couldn't sing.

Professor Satyam smiled at her and applauded "kripa that was a wonderful performance…I agree that you made many mistakes….for heavens sake you skipped a whole line". Kripa looked down and whispered more to herself than him "so I can't join". Professor Satyam laughed "of course you can… I was about to quit teaching here due to all the talent less people here…but you have talent…you just need to improve not getting distracted…you got very nervous when Prithvi came in" Kripa blushed and looked back and saw the man who had been smiling at her and realized he was Prithvi.

Dadi and Teddy congratulated kripa and left. Prithvi was told to show Kripa around the Academy. Soon Kripa and Prithvi became good friends and they even went out to a restaurant for a while.

***
Dadi was happy for Kripa when she realized that Kripa was the Sharma's daughter. She called Dilip and told him the good news. She was very depressed when she heard that Dillip didn't want Kripa to live with his family and that was when she decided she would let Kripa stay with her. She had informed Prithvi to drop Kripa off and her house after they were done eating

Authors note---hi all i know this part is really short so i am gonna make tommarows part extra long or post another part today 😃 If you are confused about anything feel free to ask and pls tell me how many of you thought that guy who was smiling😃 was Angad😉 and Angad is gonna be intriduced next part😆

Edited by imdudehead - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 awesome dear i love it 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: monikaseth

👏 awesome dear i love it 👏 👏

😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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haha i thought tht the guy smiling was angad 😛 too bad tho.. 😭 haha can't wait until the next part!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: iluvpulkit

haha i thought tht the guy smiling was angad 😛 too bad tho.. 😭 haha can't wait until the next part!

lol actually i want Angad to have a seriously shocking entry so...i didnt inroduce him yet the next part is coming soon itz short but i mite write another part 2daii 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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RECAP- DADI DECIDES TO LET KRIPA LIVE WITH HER &nb sp;

Part 4


Kripa and Prithvi didn't have much in common but still talked a lot about everything, and anything.
***Authors note—I am sure you all are not interested with what Kripa and Prithvi talked about so I am going to skip their conversation****

At 6pm Prithvi dropped Kripa at Dadi's house. Dadi welcomed Kripa and showed her, her room. Kripa and Dadi got along. Kripa called her house to tell them she was fine and got accepted to the academy.

It was dinner time Kripa helped Dadi make the food, at the dinner table they were talking, after talking about everything; Kripa asked Dadi where she had gone after her admission test, Dadi didn't say anything for a while than quietly replied "it was my daughter-in-laws surprise birthday party so I went there." Kripa sensed anger in Dadi's when she said "daughter-in-law" but decided it would be better not to ask.

Khanna Mansion
A lady is screaming "ugh where are you low-class servants….what do you think I am …a….Where is my food….I want it NOW…if this was MY New York I would've had been sleeping in peace right now on a full stomach but NO you people have no respect for me" the lady kept on complaining until another lady who is way younger than the first lady comes "ugh mother ….I feel your pain…but I am going to The music academy now so Tata" The younger lady is leaving, the older lady says bye to her "bye Anita and come early today I want you home by 3 am okay" Anita makes a face and thinks to herself
"these Indian mother's don't understand us …home by 3 how ridiculous"


****


Soul Music Academy

Anita is gossiping with her friends in class when Professor Satyam comes in and introduces the new student Kripa Sharma.

Anita stares at the girl who was wearing a salwar kameez and her hair was in a ponytail.

Flashback- Coffee shop
Anita talking on phone with her boyfriend.Kripa comes rushing by and spills coffee on her. Anita swears at her. The phone is still on! Her Boyfriend hears and thinks she is swearing at him and that she is planning on dumping him. So he dumps her first and Anita blames kripa for her breakup!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i knoe it is really short but it is the continuition if part 3 so srry 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
hahaha anita was dumped by her bf coz she was swearing on kripa
can't wait till ak meet 😳
amazing part


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sana

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