My Version Of KYPH- LAST PART PG 40 - Page 6

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Posted: 18 years ago
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šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘ great dear anita ki bachhi 😔
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Posted: 18 years ago
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RECAP-Angad hated Anita. Why? Because she got him into this trouble.

Flashback



Angad is about to go to the rehearsals when he hears someone crying Angad decides to go check what happened.

Anita, Angad's cousin was crying loudly. Angad asked her what happened. Anita started badmouthing Kripa and told Angad that Kripa made her breakup with her boyfriend by lying to him that she was cheating on him.

Angad felt sorry for Anita and asked her if there was anything he could do to help.

Anita told him there was one thing.


END OF FLASHBBACK

Part 9 – this is what is going on in Angad mind

As Angad drove home he thought about Kripa. She didn't seem like a person who would do such a mean thing to Anita. Angad couldn't think of any motive Kripa could have for making Anita have a breakup with her boyfriend. Except Anita might have been the conceited freak she is….Angad stopped that thought he had promised his mom that he would not harass Anita but give her whatever she wanted or else he would ….Angad pushed the thought out of his mind as he reached home.


Anita greeted him inside everyone was obviously asleep. Anita asked him what happened. Angad pushed her aside and said in the kindest voice he could use "Nothing yet I may be a handsome hunk but it will take me some time to seduce her ever heard the saying the higher you go the more you suffer when you fall or something"


Anita rolled her eyes and went to her room. Angad went to his.


ANITA'S POINT OF VIEW

Anita went to her room and stared at her self in the mirror. She smirked as she remembered the lie she had told her Naina Masi about how she was getting ragged at school by Angad's friends and Angad never helped her but instead laughed at her.


Angad had gotten in a lot of trouble and he had no idea why. All he knew was because he had been mean to Anita. This was true.

This incident had happened 2 years ago. Now Anita had used it to get revenge on Kripa.
She had told Angad to make Kripa fall in love with him for him to sleep with her than ditch her it was that simple, and yet Angad told her he wouldn't to it. Anita had to remind him what Naina had said about him disobeying her.


If Angad disobeyed Anita, he would have to get married to Mishti and if he disobeyed again he would be disowned (I think that's the word for being kicked out of the house and the will).

Anita loved having Angad do her bidding. It even made her more popular at the music academy because Angad would drop her off there and she would show off to everyone that she is related to THE ANGAD KHANNA.



With that thought Anita went to sleep.




***Next day at rehearsals***

After a long day of rehearsing, everyone was tired. Angad had surprised everyone by coming only 30 minutes and 56 seconds late for Angad that was a record. They had finished early and everything was perfect they just practiced again and again for the sake of doing something.




They finished early so Angad took Kripa to lunch. This time they didn't have an awkward conversation. Angad and Kripa talked, got to know each other, Angad even made Kripa laugh a couple of times.



Angad could see it in her eyes she was falling for him. Angad was unaware that Kripa had, had a crush on him for god-knows-how-long.



Angad had decided that he would put the break-kripas-heart-to-make-evil-cousin-happy plan on number one position on his things-to-do list. So he could do more important things later. Angad had also made a mental note to never go to Anita when she was crying.



After a while Angad and Kripa went to Dadi's house. Dadi insisted on them having dinner with her. While they were eating Angad made his feet touch Kripa's foot under the table which made her almost choke due to the surprise. Dadi gave Kripa a worried look


Kripa smiled to tell her she was fine. Angad winked at Kripa making her blush like crazy.
The only reason Angad had done that was to see what effect he had on Kripa; Angad smiled thinking this is going to be too easy

*****NIGHT TIME******

Angad is staying at Dadi's house as it was very late. Angad goes to an extra room because Kripa was occupying the room he usually stays in.


At about 2 am Angad goes to the kitchen for a drink of water. Angad is very tired and goes to his room and falls on his bed, he is asleep.

***Morning **** 6 am

Kripa heard her alarm clock ring. She tried to get up (her eyes were closed) but was unable to due to some pressure pushing her down. She opened her eyes and screamed.
Edited by imdudehead - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thank you to the following people for commenting, though there aren't many comments the few that are there are very encouraging

kIrAn...E>GA<3 –lol yes you were right


iamsmart -lol there are gonna be lots of eveil people in this ff &nbs p;


erier101 –now you know what she told him

monikaseth –thx lol
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 part

i think angad slept on kripa by mistake


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Posted: 18 years ago
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i love wen im rite.

haha dat happened in my novel. angad deff fell asleep on her. my guess is: he was asleep and either sleep waled there, or wen he got up to get water, he went back to HIS room and slept there. great part. i h8 anita already.

cont soon!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey 😃
i just read your ff...
and it was great, mind blowing, awsome 😃
cant wait till the next part...
Love
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG too good, ur tooooo gooood angad prob. fell asleep with her! šŸ˜† poor kripa she has a hunk in her i...mean his bed!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😳 thankyou everyone for your comments I am probably going to continue on tues/wednesday
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Posted: 18 years ago
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WATTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😭 😔 😭 k fine
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi i really dislike this part but i couldnt think of better i 😭

Recap- Kripa screams

Part 10- REVENGE

Angad wakes up hearing the scream and realizes that he is on Kripa. Angad jumps off. Dadi runs in the room after hearing Kripa's scream.



Dadi's eyes were wide opened as she saw the scene. Kripa was shivering on the bed and Angad was shirtless and he was sitting on the bed trying to console Kripa. Angad's shoulders had a lipstick smudge mark on them.



Dadi went to Kripa and asked her what happened. Kripa was still shivering. "D-d- Dadi-I eh-he (pointing at Angad) was oh-n t-t-top of m-he w-w-hen I woke uh-up and-d" Kripa started crying thinking that Angad had done something to her last night.



Dadi consoles Kripa and tells Angad to wait for her outside. Angad tries to defend himself but Dadi gives him a stern look.


Angad leaves trying to figure out why he was on Kripa. Kripa is crying Dadi is consoling Kripa and gets her to lie on the bed and rest.



Dadi lectures Angad on how disappointed she is and she never expected him to do something so low. Angad tries to interrupt but Dadi slaps him.



Angad is trying to explain. When Dadi finally gives him a chance to talk Angad sighs and begins talking "Dadi, you know whenever I have stayed here it was in that room here so last night I got a drink and forgot that I was in the other room and went into the other room without looking and fell asleep instantly."


Dadi is repenting slapping Angad she apologizes and takes him to tell Kripa the truth Kripa repents suspecting him to and apologized. Angad forgives and leaves.


I know what all you are thinking Angad forgave her now everything is alright!!! Not!!! Angad now is going to follow Anita's plan for his own sake more than Anita's!!!WHY???Because it's Kripa's fault Dadi slapped Angad.

Angad had everything planned out he would break her heart so badly that…she would never be …able to trust anyone again…..


****NEXT MORNING****

Angad called Kripa and asked her out on a date. Kripa was a bit shocked but she agreed as she felt guilty of accusing him of something so dirty.

****DATE***

Angad smiled at Kripa as she came. He opened the car door for her to sit down inside. IT was a very old fashioned date. They went to a fancy restaurant; Angad even pulled the chair out for her.



After they ate, they left the restaurant. Angad drove them to a deserted area; Kripa was a bit frightened by this unexpected visit to this area.




Before Kripa was able to question Angad, he pushed her closer to him. Kripa was scared. Angad looked at her for a while. Than he looked down shut his eyes and faced her again "Kripa I love you".

TO BE CONTINUED

Hi i really dislike this part as you know so i apoligize for this rotten part

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