My Version Of KYPH- LAST PART PG 40

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😃Hi Everybody...my name is Sakshi...i read many fanfics here so I decided to make my own so here it is...this is my first Fan-Fic so i apoligize if i make any mistakes😭

it is about Ak...practically the same except itz my version!!!not ektaz

so here is the 1st part hope you enjoy it (i know itz really confusing so feel free to ask quetionz i will try my best to awnser them

PART 1

Nainital

In a small caf in a small town a group of teenagers were having random discussions when a young 17 years old girl walked in. She was wearing a seriously small skirt that hardly covered her at all and a pink blouse.

One of the teenagers got up and headed towards her with an open coke a cola can, he was 18 years old and had many attractive features (that I will mention later) the girl smiled at him, as he walked towards her and "accidentally" spilled the coke on her skirt. The girl shrieked as the boy gave her a fake "I am sorry" look.

While the group of teenagers laughed. The girl ran out of the room with tears in her eyes. The boy returned to the group and bowed. There were 6(3 girls, 3 boys) teenagers (including the guy who spilled the coke). They were all in the age range of 17-18.

One of the girls, (who was 17 years old) gave him a "that was not funny" look. The boy looked at her and said "ugh Chaiya ….you know she was asking for that….you can't blame me" Chaiya rolled her eyes and replied "I cant??? And you don't even know that girl…Raj…you know that what you did was mean!"

Another teenager, a 17 years old boy cut in their argument "Common Chaiya….Raj stop arguing we are here to say bye to Chai she is leaving Nainital and going to Mumbai to join that music academy there"

Chaiya gave him a big smile and sarcastically said "thanks Rahul atleast you remember why we are meeting here" Raj snorted. They continued talking for a while and later on left.

***

A girl entered her house with a big smile on her face. She saw her father seated on the sofa watching a cricket match. She went up to him and gave him a hug. "hi papa…sorry I am kind of late today actually me and my friends were saying good byes to each other at the caf and' her father cut her off " its okay KRIPA I understand, but I need to talk to you"

Kripa went in front of her father and sat on the carpet and waited for him to speak like a kindergartener waiting to hear a story from her teacher. He smiled at her "Kripa I know that your mother and I promised you that if you get an average above 80% in school this year you get to join a music academy in Mumbai….but"

Kripa cut in "but for some twisted reason I can't go and I …." Before Kripa finished she burst into tears and ran into her room.

When Kripa reached her room she saw Bobby, her 13 year old brother, sitting on her bed drawing random pictures. She picked him up and dropped him outside her room without saying a word.

Her parents knocked on her door. No response. They opened her door and went inside. Kripa was crying on her bed. They sat on her bed; they were quiet for a while.

Then Kripa's Mother, Gayatri, spoke "Kripa…listen to me…your father and I know you want to go to Mumbai and join the music academy there but the problem is….we cant afford you to go there and live peacefully…I mean …Kripa you know we aren't very rich…if you go there you have to live in a hotel…and pay the fees of the school and….I hope you understand…even if we are able to give you enough money to go there , pay the fees of your school, and live in a hotel…what about your daily expenses Kripa?? I hope you understand…if you stay in a hotel for one day they will take 1000 rupees…and you will be there for god knows how long an-"

Kripa interrupted "Mom I know that….but what about dad's friend there …I am going to his academy so why cant I live there please….I am sure they wont mind plus Mr.Khanna has come and lived with us whenever he is here for business" Kripa pleaded and being there only daughter she got what she wanted.

***

Suryaban (Kripa's father) called his old friend Dillip Khanna

(Here is there conversation)

Suryaban —hi Dillip this is Subranyam here

Dillip—Oh hi Subranyam…you remembered me after a long time

Suryaban - yeah…um…the thing is my daughter Kripa is going to join your music academy and I was wondering if she could stay with you while she was there"

Dillip-…..ugh…stay here….of course she could I mean she is like my daughter… but my music academy it isn't taking any more admissions the only way she could join now is if our head teacher accepts her… and he only accepts students that are REALLY GOOD!!

So if she gets accepted of course she can join.

Suryaban -thanks Dillip she will be there tomorrow

Suryaban hung up and helped Kripa pack and told Kripa what Dillip had told him.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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INDEX

PART 1 -page 1

Part 2- page 2

Page 4-note

page 4- part3

page 5 - part 4

page 6- part 5

Page 7- part 6

Page 8- part 7

Page 9-part 8

Page 9-part 9

Page 10-part 10(revenge)

promo-page 11

Part 11- page 12 (PLan)

part 12-page 13

part 13-page 14

part 14-page 16

page 17-note

Part 15-page 18

Part 16- page 21

Part 17 (Journal)- page 23

part 18- page 25

part 19- MIshti confronts- page 27

part 20-pg.28

Part 20 (2nd part)pg 30

Part 21- page 32(funeral)

Part 22- page 33

part 23- pg.36

part 24- p.37

Part 25-38

Last Part page 40

Edited by imdudehead - 17 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: iamsmart

awesome part


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sana

thanku😳
Edited by imdudehead - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great part and you spell-Subranyam- like this- Suryaban

xxAnuxx
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anu1993

Great part and you spell-Subranyam- like this- Suryaban

xxAnuxx

oh thanku that way is way easier than the way i was spellin it😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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great start!! cnt wait till they meet! cont soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: erier101

great start!! cnt wait till they meet! cont soon!

thanku 😳 and i will try to post the next part 2daii

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Posted: 18 years ago
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heyy..great start!! i cant wait for ur next part 😃 😃 plzz cont soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome FF can't wait for next update.

Love,

Saniya
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: subhag

heyy..great start!! i cant wait for ur next part 😃 😃 plzz cont soon 😃

thanku,and my next part will cum in a while 😊

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