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Posted: 18 years ago
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~:PART 6:~

Raj hugges Naina..

after a while Raj realizes that he is huggin naina so he moves back.

naina is also embarassed and so was raj.

RAJ: naina i am sorry i got carried out.

NAINA: its okay SIR, you have supported me many times.

after saying this naina waks out of tent..leaving raj with a cute smile on his face.

Naina walks out and goes and sits by bonfire and started thinking about what just happend in tent.

she thought that how storng raj seems to be he isn't that strong. The rajveer sir that she knew was
always strong never gives up but today seeing her rajveer sir like that she feels like she was wrong.

today she saw that how a person looks from outside isn't always that fro inside.

The things that raj said inside were humming in her brain.

she as in deep thougth when she feels somebodys hand on her shoulder, she turns and finds alekh their smiling at her.

Alekh: tu indar kya kar rahi hain?

naina: kuch nahin bas kuch soch rahi thi..aare khada(stand) kyun hain sit(sorry i dont know how to write sit in hindi) na.

alekh sits beside her.

Alekh: naina jab tu woh letter padh(reading) rahi to ro kyun rahi thi.

Naina: you know whose letter was that.

Alekh: no..but i would like to know who wrote that b/c u never cry unless....

Naina: unless it is about my brother. ya u r right it was navin bhaiya's letter.

Alekh: but..(naina stopped him and continued)

Naina: but he wrote it before he died (with tears in her eye)

Alekh: par aisa kya tha jo tu ro padi.

Naina: it was my only brothers letter and he told me who was behind all this.

Alekh: who? 😕

Naina: DR, RITU MISHRA (she had anger in her eyes) a spy

Alekh had a big shock. 😕

Alekh:she was a spy? but how....why....how can she do that? 😕

Naina: i will tell u...(and tells him the whole story)

(she knew that she can trust alekh) 😊

and by listening to the story naina just told he was just shocked.( too many dhamakas at one time)

Alekh: i cant belive that she can do that.

he continued..
but i am happy that you forgived rajveer sir. 😛

Naina just smiled.. 😊
Alekh: chal abb so ja yahan bahut thand ho rahi hain.

Naina obeyed him and went to her tent and alekh to his.

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SORRY for delaying this long....i promise i wont do it again..
and thank you for ur wonderful comments. if any of you have a intresting idea plz PM me...

THANKS..

Edited by ami_princess - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
Hey
good ...I liked it,...cont soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww that was soo cute!! i'll PM you if i get any ideas... just gotta get ideas for mine first!! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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too good

plm continue with a long upate

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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
hey dont b sry its ok ...
next time do update soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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~:PART 7:~

The sun rose brighter than any other morning. it seemed like today is special. The cripping birds started morning as a new year....

(now lets see wat our dearly cadets are doing)

cadet huda is sleeping peacefully with a cute smile in his face(seems like he is having sweet dream)he turned other side facing alekh who is sleeping beside him sharing balnket. he came near alekh's cheek and kissed it. alekh jumped put of bed and pushed huda hardly..huda woke up(still sleepy)

H: oye kadi, why did you pushed me.

A: oh shanna neend main chuma(kiss) kyun de raha tha..

H: maine kab chuma diya?

A: to kya main jooth(lie) bol raha hoon..

H: kya pata...koi sabut(proof) hain

A: oye agar mera pass camera hota to bata deta..

H: so bat khatam ab mujhe sonial kay pass jana de.

A: oye natunki ab sonia kaun hain?

H: teri bhabi...and slept.

alekh to slept...

NOW LETS SEE WAT CADET SINGH IS DOING...

naina is not in her tent. she is standign by a tree with her back toward tent. her hair are open and are flying due to strong wind. she was in deep thought when she heard somebody calling her name..she turned around and found raveer sir...

raj saw lost in her beaty. he thinks that i have never seen this beautiful girl in my life..simple yet beautiful.. hearing his name from naina's mouth he came out from his thought....

R: cadet singh wat r u doing here..it quite early..

N: i was disturbed by mosquitos...and then they didnt let me sleep.

R: laughed..by her innocence.

N: but why are you awake...it quite early..she said with the same tone in which raj said.

R: well cadent "ah" singh it is not good for a soldier to sleep more.

N: that true.

R: want to come for a walk cadet.

N: hmmmm okay.

they both started walking, their was total silence b/w them raj couldn't took more so he said-

R: naina i am sorry for yesterday.

N: its okay sir i know that you were been carried out-

R: still..(naina interrupted)

N: sir it happens...when somebody who is near your hearth goes away from you, you end up breaking yourself(she said in a sad tone)

raj was silent for a while.

N: sir how are we going to prove bhaiya innocent, i mean if we had make ritu mishra could accept that she made all this plane to prove that bhaiya was traitor in front of whole world
then bhaiya would be proved innocent but...

R(continued) but she is dead now, but i have investigated about her and she is known by other name called NAAZ FARIDA in her group. she had not only did all this to navin but she had so many other bad things that i have never even though that she can do.

she was the one behind the bomb blast in kashmir(3 yrs ago), she use to give all detail information about indian emabassy to pakistan terriorist and many other things. i dont know who helped her with gaining all this information but i dont think that she is alone.

naina was totally shocked after hearing this. she would never though that a lady like ritu can do all that.

N: so everybody is mixed in this plan .u never know kab koi peechay say vaar kar jayea. so if i want to trust anybody i cant trust.

R: you can always trust me, cant you?

both N&R looked at each other for a while. (the song started playing)

[(dekhoon tujhe toh pyaar aaye
sine se dil chala jaaye) - 2
tere aane se pehle, tere jaane ke baad
aati hai aati hai teri hi teri yaad
teri hi yaad sataaye] - 2
dekhoon tujhe toh pyaar aaye
sine se dil chala jaaye

after a while naina realized wat she is doing go she looked down..raj looked down too.

R: niana u didnt answered my question.

N: sir i think we should go before huda and alekh comes here findindg us
and she turned to go..

R (to himself)naina you didnt answerd my question today but soon you will give my answer. that RAJVEER SINGH SHEKHAWAT'S promise.
and he followed her..

they headed toward camp and saw alekh near bonfire.raj and naina went to him and sat beside him.

N: alekh where is huda?

A: is went in jungle to take sticks for burning fire, but where were you guys.

R: we went for a walk.

N: anybody for tea.

R&A: tea?

N: ya tea...tea black color tea...(talking about black tea) it is watery.

R: naina wat r u saying.

N: i asked if you guys want tea and you guys acted like you dint know wat tea is so...i started explaing simple.

A: okay meri maa but where is tea we dont have dries tea(powder) to make one.

N: dont worry i will make one.

R: but how?

N: wait and watch...

she got up and went toward jungle, she came to same place where raj and she were standing and she took some herbs from their.(different types of herbs) she went little but ahead and she started picking up herbs.

while coming back to tent she was walking backwards and she got crashed with somebody...she turned and that guy turned too and he started yelling as if he saw tiger and seeing him yelling naina too started yelling....(without seeing each other)

hearing yelling of naina raj, alekh and huda(he was back by this time) got up immediately and looked at each other with shocked expression..

precap: who was that guy.....y is naina yelling...

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thansk for comments... 😛


Edited by ami_princess - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey too good

interesting

pl continue and dont take so long to write dear
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey
I m desperate to know who tht guy is???...plz cont soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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please continue soon.......... It's really great story and I am eager to know who that person is. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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AWESOME!! seriously... who is he???? dying to know!!!!!! update ASAP!

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