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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
hey ami

great FF

pl continue dying to read what was in the letter

cant wait

pl continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
really gud
continue soon please 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
hye bhumi really nice ff plz continue i thought i'm not reading a ff but i'm actually watching ur ff left right left its mind blowing keep it up 👏 n plz continue wer waiting
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
sounds quite interesting! 😃 continue soon.. would love to keep reading it 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35

hey guys sorry for denial but i was busy..but now i am back 😛

RECAP: huda and alekh meet raj and naina in jungle and alekh gives a letter to naina.

~:PART 5:~


raj was shocked to see that without turning how did she know that he was their..

RAJ: naina how did u know that i was behind u?

NIANA: i know u that you.

that line touched raj's heart..

but hearing naina's sobbing he came to reality...

RAJ: naina y r u crying? wat is in this letter.

naina gave the letter to raj to read.

raj read the letter and was shocked...

RAJ: navin!(and he had tears in his eyes)

NAIAN looked back and saw raj had tears in his eyes.
(she too had tears in her eyes)

Naina: sir bhaiya knew that ritu did all this and b/c of her he accepted this death...(and started to cry)

(NOW WE SEE WATS WRITTEN IN TEH LETTER)

Dear, nain
i am sorry that i am not with you anymore..but i am always with you as raj. yeah raj my best buddy who is now helping you to get to the right person who did this to your brother. i told raj to help you b/c i knew that you. you would never let anybody say against your brother. naina i am proud of you. &n bsp;

Raj was closest person after you to my heart. i knew that ritu was spy before they arrested me but it was my love who wholed me back. i wanted to tell raj but be went to some mission and by the time he came back i was arrested and i did't got to tell him about ritu. raj i am sorry.

LOVE
NAVIN...

(letter ends)

(this letter is written before navin died)

(guys this letter was with NAIR...but this was posted to naina long time ago but niar got the letter and didn't gave it to naina)

(navin told raj to take care after naina)
_____________________

naina looked at raj who fell on floor and was crying a lol. naina went to hima and puts her hand on his shoulder. raj looks up and says
naina b/c of me navin died 😭

NAINA: no sir bhaiya told you that it was not b/c of you. 😭

RAJ: no naina navin wanted to tell me but i went to that stupid mission. 😭 😭

NAINA: no, sir it was not your fault. it ws your job to go to that mission.

by this time raj ws crying bitterly.

RAJ: i was navin bestest buddy but i could't do anything for him.

NAINA: no sir you did everything possible, dont blame your self and if bhaiya would ne here he could't see his besest friend cry

COULD HE?(asled naina to raj)

RAJ: nodded his head as saying NO.

NAINA: then plz dint hurt ur friend by this (she took the tear from raj cheek)

raj looked at her for a second and hugged her...naina responsed him.

(and the song started playing)

[(dekhoon tujhe toh pyaar aaye
sine se dil chala jaaye) - 2
tere aane se pehle, tere jaane ke baad
aati hai aati hai teri hi teri yaad
teri hi yaad sataaye] - 2
dekhoon tujhe toh pyaar aaye
sine se dil chala jaaye

aankhon mein tera hi chehra rehta hai
yaadon pe tera hi pehra rehta hai
nindon mein tere hi sapne sajate hai
honton pe tere hi nagame bajate hai
o mere rehnuma tujhse hai har daastaan
tu hi hai manjil meri, tu hi hai mera jahaan
tu hi mera jahaan
tere aane se pehle, tere jaane ke baad
aati hai aati hai teri hi teri yaad
teri hi yaad sataaye
dekhoon tujhe toh pyaar aaye
sine se dil chala jaaye

mujhpe jo chhaaya hai tera junoon hai
tu meri bechaini mera sukuun hai
tera pyaar hai sawaar mujhpe toh iss kadar
ik siva tere na aaye koyi nazar
aur gehri huyi dil ki gehraayiya
abb toh ?? nahi mujhko tanahaayiya, mujhko tanahaayiya
tere aane se pehle, tere jaane ke baad
aati hai aati hai teri hi teri yaad
teri hi yaad sataaye
(dekhoon tujhe toh pyaar aaye
sine se dil chala jaaye) - 2

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THATS IT FOR TODAY AND I HOPE YOU LIKE IT.....and thanks for ur wonderful comments... 😛



Edited by ami_princess - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
really sweet... but one thing, how did naveen write the letter abt his death?? cuz i thought he died right wen raj/ritu shot him... 😕 anyway i'm waiting for the next part!! (hoping for more RN cuteness lol)
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
Hey I only just started reading your fic now, please update soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
Hey...sorry for not commenting since long...both parts were great...cont soon... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
please continue soon......... eagerly waiting for next part.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
hey bhumi c'mon continue soon!! the story's too good to stop now!!

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