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Posted: 17 years ago
R: oh to yeh tum dono ki shararat thi...naina tumhe to main dekh lunga..
N: for sure mr. rajveer singh shekhwat.
K: naina i will be seeing you right
N: of course...here is my address...
K: thanks...i am here for a month so i will be coming to see my mamni, if jeejaji(teases him) doesn't mind
R: of course not...salla
N: hey dont give my bro gali.
R: i am not giving him gali he is really my salla...(saying this he winked at her and he shied)
K: okay guys see you later i need to go and see somebody....bye honey(he said to naina)
he went outside leaving raj-naina alone..
R: honey..hmm..
N: somebody is jealous...
R: who me..no way...but you never told me that you had a cousin
N: karan was my neighbour and his family and my family use to be friends but one day his parents died in a car accident so my parents bought him at our place .at that time karna was very sad, he want talking to anybody and never use to come out of his room. my parents were worried about him. they tried to talk to him but he refused. on day when i was playing with my ball(i was like 5yrs) it went inside karans room. i went inside and saw my ball by his bed so i went and picked up the ball but i saw other thing too, i saw a boy. he was sittin in a corner and sobbing. i went near him and touched his face. he looked up and saw me with num eyes. i went forward and wipped his tears. he hugged me and i hugged him back after that time karan use to talk to everyone. i was like little sister to him and he was my brother. then we grew up and he went to UK for studies and i and navin bhaiya stayed her. he was very close to me. he also joined army but he is an under cover detective for special missions. so he usually live their but now he came back.
R: he is very nice person
N: yes indeed, i told you everything about karan but what about nandani maan. you never told me about her.
Raj's face changed color....
R: woh main bhul gaya tha.....woh mera aur navin saath academy mein thi, brig. chandok was her uncle, we(raj-navin)were best friends...but soon after graduation she left and now after 4 years we are meeting...
N: really...well thats cool you must be exicted to meet her..
R: sorta but why are we talking about her lets talk about something new...
N: like..
R: like where are cadets....
N: i dont know lets go and fins them...(they both went to find the gang and they found alekh was by lake, pooja-ali were beside the tree talking(more romancing) and huda trying to flirt with girls and yudi and shalani glancing over each other and neelu sitting alone by a bench. naina looked at raj who signed here to go their. they both went their
Neelu: are tum log yahan, mujhe laga ki tum bhi pooja-ali jaise romance kar rahe hoge..(saying this she winked at them and they blushed) awww you two are blushing..
N: stop it neelu....but i am upset with you..
Neelu: and why is that
N: you didnt gave us our engagement gift...
Neelu: ohh sorry but tell me what do you want..
N: well you have to give me whatever i say. promise
Neelu: promise anything for couple.
N: (in a serious tone) i want my old neelu back.
neelu was shocked, she didnt knew that naina was going to ask her that. she knew what happend b/w her-alekh....but she had nothing to say...she blinked twice but naina was still their waiting for her reply....
N: dogi mujhe mera gift..
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey too good


pl continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
which is ur new fic

is it based on lrl??
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Posted: 17 years ago
Darling don't play games with me.I know very well Nandini will be paired with Karan.

Arre Ekta Maiya ne hamesha unhe saath mein pair kiya.

Huh admit it.I have way too much experience.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: tina_twinkling_

which is ur new fic

is it based on lrl??

yes it is kinnda not fully based on lrl i have changed my story line a bit...

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Darling don't play games with me.I know very well Nandini will be paired with Karan.

Arre Ekta Maiya ne hamesha unhe saath mein pair kiya.

Huh admit it.I have way too much experience.

well lets see what future stores...and i hope you are right too 😃

Edited by ami_princess - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: yoginisahakari

hey too good


pl continue soon

i will😛 maybe today if i got time..

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Posted: 17 years ago
N: dogi mujhe mera gift?
N: (in a serious tone) I want my old neelu back.
neelu was shocked, she didn't knew that naina was going to ask her that. she knew what happened b/w her-alekh....but she had nothing to say...she blinked twice but naina was still their waiting for her reply....
N: dogi mujhe mera gift..
Neelu: naina..i will try..
N: thanks..
Neelu: hmmm (she went from their)
raj sat beside and naina and said: naina I didn't knew that you gonna ask her that by this way.
N: raj sometime you have to try something with different ways, and you have taught me that.
R: me.... how?
N: well it's was long time ago...but lets do something else...what about...
R: romancing...
N: no, why do you also think about romance, lets see what about racing
R: with you (started laughing) you gonna lose...Lt. Naina ahh singh alluwalia..
N: me and lose lets see...
R: seriously naina....i dont want you to cry after losing...(hahahahhahaha)(suddenly naina's eyes dropped down, she saw a frog and smiled)
N: we will see that captain...but just a sec...she bent down as showing to tie her lace but she slowly took frog and got up.....raj pointed her the direction where to stop and naina slowly slips the frog in his shirt. naina yelled ON THE MARK GET GET GO....she ran but raj was dancing/hoping as the frog was hoping inside his shirt. naina looked at raj who was hoping and yelled CAPTAIN LOOKS LIKE YOU ARE LOSING THE MATCH.
R: nainaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa you are dead and raj ran....naina too ran faster seeing raj running, raj ran faster and finally he was near but raj caught her and both rolled and rolled and finally landed by a tree. raj was on top was naina. He saw naina had her eyes closed and her few strands of hair are coming on her face. He slowly moved those strands and kissed her eyes. naina opened her eyes and saw raj looking at her. she pulled him closer and more closer, raj thought that she was going to kiss her so he closed his eyes. niana pulled him more closer and moves his ear closer to her mouth and and......................................................... ..........................................yelled RAJ TUM HAAR GAYE......raj suddenly opened her eyes and saw naina trying to get up but he was quick for her, he pulled her closer to him and held her hand tightly. He said...
R: wat did you say...
N: i said that you lose...Mr. shekhawat ahhhhhhhhhhhh (raj pressed her hand tighter)
R: kya kaha...ek bar phir se kaho to..
N: maine kaha ki you losssssseeeeee AHHHHHHHHH MUMMMAAAAAAAAAAA(he pressed tighter)
R: ek bar phir.
N: nahin nahin you won and I lose.... now....
R: that's better but say sorry
N: me sorry...no way AHHHHHHHHH
R: wat did I hear
N: okay! okay I am sorry....
R: that's better...
After a while they realize that how close they are. Both were looking in each other's eye. raj moved closer to her, he was still looking at her shy full eye, he asked for the permission her one blink gave him permission, he again moved forward and was about to kiss but.....but....but...but
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey too goodd


pl continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
but kya hua mujhe bhi batao 😆 😆 aisay secrets rakhna acchi baat nahin be a good girl and tell me 😆 😆

The part was simply superb really liked it continue soooooon 😊 😊

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