Do Pal Ek Dashtan (12/29) Twist-*Note - Page 18

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Posted: 17 years ago

After a while they realize that how close they are. Both were looking in each other's eye. raj moved closer to her, he was still looking at her shy full eye, he asked for the permission her one blink gave him permission, he again moved forward and was about to kiss but.....but....but...but raj's cell phone rings.....raj and naina both jerked out of their dream world, naina pushed raj and ran toward academy. Raj got up and run his hand through his hair and picked up phone.
Their naina ran toward the academy but suddenly stopped as she heard raj's name, she came toward the door and saw nandani talking with somebody on phone...(nandani continued)
Nandani: aaj maine apna raj kho(lost)diya (naina was shocked)..
Nandani: haan main sahi keh rahi hoon..Captain rajveer singh shekhwat meri zindagi se chala gaya hain....
Nandani: KAISE BHUL SHAKTI HOON MAIN WOH WADE JO HUMNE LIYE THE JAB HUM ACADEMY MAIN THE, HOW CAN I FORGET THAT ONCE WE LOVED EACH OTHER (BIJLI GIRTI HAIN) KAISE, HOW CAN I FORGET THAT ONCE WE WERE TOGETHER, HOW CAN I FORGET THAT I LOVE HIM, HE IS MY LIFE, HOW CAN I FORGET THAT I WAS THE MOST IMPORTANT PERSON IN HIS LIFE (AGAIN BIJLI GIRTI HAIN) HOW CAN I FORGET THAT HE WAS MY FIANCEE (SABSE BADI BIJLI GIRTI HAIN)
itne main usne glass tutne ki awaz aaye, woh peeche mud kar dekhati hian...woh bilkul shocked naina ko dekhati hain...uske haath se cell phone gir jata hain...naina kay kadam uske saath nahin de rahe thi, woh bus wahi ke wahi khadi thi...uske aakho se aaso the😭
Nandani: naina!!!!!!!!! (in horror)😲
(Before she could say anything naina ran, she ran after her, naina was running in full speed and nandani was running after her and calling her name but naina was not listening to her, she ran and came outside and everybody watched them. they were shocked 😲to see tears in naina's eyes and nandani running after her. raj was also shocked 😲 seeing this, he saw naina talking a car and driving off, he ran to catch on her but she drove off. nandani too reached their including karan (as he was passing by)
Nandani: raj, naina...
R: nandani naina ko kya huva? woh aise kahan gavi...aur tum uske piche aise...
Nandu: raj naina ko rako use humare bara main sab pata chal gaya hain(raj pe bijli girti hain).. 😲
R: what!..par .. 😲😲
Nandani: woh jab main phone main (she told him whole scene)
R: (was now very angry...) why the hell did you have to talk, but of anything happens to naina then i will not forgive you captain nanadi virani...(saying this he left to find naina)

(nandani was also shocked because raj have never told her captain nandani virani)

Edited by ami_princess - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Its very gud 👏 👏 👏 but oh god wht will happen next? suspense again. when will u update next yaar
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Posted: 17 years ago
wohhh yeh tha kya???

jaldi se prob solve karo
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Posted: 17 years ago
dnt let anytyn happn 2 naina........plzz cont
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sherlock_holmes

Its very gud 👏 👏 👏 but oh god wht will happen next? suspense again. when will u update next yaar

well you have to read next part to get to know what will happen next!😛

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: tina_twinkling_

wohhh yeh tha kya???

jaldi se prob solve karo

problem is going to be sloved very very...😉

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: yoginisahakari

hey too good pl conrinue soon

i will....😛

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: vritika

I LOVE UR FF U HAD WRITTEN PLZ UPDATE IT SOON I CANT WAIT. 😊

THANKS a lol.....i love your comment. i am glad that you lile my ff....keep reading a lot will happen in future..😉😉

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: vritika

dont say thanks to me u deserve it. there r so many ff but ilike ur ff most bcoz u write ff with all of urs feelings and i love that but why u take so much time plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update it soon. 😊 👏

Thanks again....this comment is very touchy yaar...thanks, i do write with lits of feeling and i am glad that you figured it out.😛😛😛 i take long time to post parts beacuse i am not getting enough comments😭

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: guddi29

dnt let anytyn happn 2 naina........plzz cont

well i dont know if anything happen to naina but i will try to keep her safe for you....TRY..but you never now😆

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