HOT OR NOT? (AK)Important note pg.18 - Page 2

lol they are like describing themselves... anywayss awesomee part... so there goes how,where,why now lets see what happens when they do meet!

hey. just started to read ur fan fic. the first two parts are really good. cont soon.

heyy
glad to see u started another one.
nice parts.
i love how u answered when were ect.
but i have one question-
i get how angad can be a playboy,
but is Kripa a slu*? {exuse my language}.
Like taking everyone to the hotels ect.
Wats her background like?

Anywho, cont soon

look the way you are taking it its wrong. well like you guys think they go to the hotels and you know what. Thats not right. keep reading and you will find out what happens in the hotel. ok

any guesses?

love ur ff 😃

continue soon 😊

nice ff sounds interesting 👏 😃

kimi gurl, i finally read urs! wat do u mean 'all she does is take guys to hotels?' does dat mean she sleeps around, cuz kripa aint a slut is she? 😆

jk ur ff is really interestin but i think ur really fixated on one topic. its good to be focused, but try and put sum detail in it, and instead of getting ppl to state things lyke 'he's so hot.' try and make him SOUND hot...wait, this is 3rd person rite?

nvm im lost, i updated mine so dont 4get 2 comment! but ur REALLY good so far, keep going im hooked!

<3 kiran
E> GA <3

bad angad and kripa sleepn around, u can get aids...anyways update soon, cant wait for the next part.. 😉

I am horribly sorry guys!~!!
after my school closed, and summer holidays started i was and am very buzy!!! thats why i havent replied, i know i should of not started the ff yet but i will try my hardest to find time to reply and update!!!

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Angad and kripa got ready to meet and then the actual meeting was about to happen.

angad on one side of the hall and kripa on the other side.
and now FACE TO FACE!!!!!!!

kripa:hi
angad:(ignorant) hey
kripa:my friend thinks you are really hot!! but me..
angad:you , your what?
kripa: I DO NOT THINK YOU ARE HOT!!! you are a big loser!
angad:first of all you have no reason to call me a looser.you are the looser if you call me a looser!!!!
kripa: just get lost!!!
angad:you know what i would be a looser if i called you hot so if i ever think you are hot then yes i will be a looser!!
kripa:i will make you a looser!!

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wow what a first face to face meeting!!
well right not they surly think they are NOT HOT!

lets see what happens laTER THAT DAY!

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kripa's friend runs to her when she comes back!
friend: what happen you came back this fast , oh maybe because he was so hot that you couldnt stand the heat right????

kripa is quiet

friend: wasnt he Hot????

KRIPA:HOT??????????? HE WS NOT HOT AT ALLLLLL!!!!!!1

friend: what happen kripa???

kripa:he is so dammn stupid.i told u i would never go with him.

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same thing happens with angad
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kripa's plan was to make angad think she was hot so he could be proved a looser!!!!

THE END

comments?guesses??

luv this fanfic
plszzzz cont soon
wow Angad nd Kripa sound like big snobs lol
jksz

i soooooo luv reading this fic lol

<3
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