HOT OR NOT? (AK)Important note pg.18 - Page 3

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sabrinaa. thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
nice update..cant waitt to see what kripa does.
but angad is soo dam hot!! haha, kripa's crazyy.
continue soon!!!! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
grt fanfic so far llz keep on continuing
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
Recap:
friend: wasnt he Hot????

KRIPA:HOT??????????? HE WS NOT HOT AT ALLLLLL!!!!!!1

friend: what happen kripa???

kripa:he is so dammn stupid.i told u i would never go with him.
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Starts now!!!!!!

Angad:look irfan , tu mera dost hai aur tumne mujhe IS JAISI LARKI KE PAAS BEJDIYA!!!!

irfan: look angad i think shes very hot

angad:phir tu uske paas jaa na

irfan: no no

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kripa: look main uske saat itna baara khel kheloongi ke usko kehna parega ke YOU ARE HOT!! and im sure he will

friend: but why ?

kripa: now my goal is to make him say YOU ARE HOT KRIPA. since he called me a looser!

friend: i am always with you!!

kripa: main bahut short kapre pehn kar uske paas jaoon gi aur pretend romance karoongi then he will say you are hot. ohir mera khel katham,

friend: okay, but what you wanna wear?

kripa: i am going shopping!!

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and now after the shopping mall its hard to picture her in this but she is gonna wear it. actually she is wearing it already!!



friend: wow you are looking great.

kripa: part 1 is done lets move to part 2!!!!

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angad's cell rings!!

angad:yes

kripa:hi

angad: who is this?

kripa:kripa, the hot one!!

angad: how did u get my number?

kripa: kripa can do anything. and she also wants to meet you tonight

angad:whatever

kripa: are you chicked or scared that you will loose and you will have to call me hot?

angad:never. im not scaRED come over and see!!!

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kripa and angad meet at a room in a hotel!

angad:what do u want??

kripa: how do i look?

angad:you look aa....aww..AWFUL

kripa: whatever

kripa goes around angad then pushes him to the wall

kripa: you have to belive im hot!!

angad:.....

kripa: angad, i i think uare hot (crossing her fingers)

angad's face turns red. he goes closer to her while kripa's head is on the wall and angad is right infront of her..

kripa: angad you are so hot, dont you think i am, i cant live without telling you that i ..( crossing fingers)

angad:yes you are you are the hottest girl ever. angad kisses kripa neck and then goes on her arm when he sees her fingers crossed!

angad:what kind of joke is this?

kripa:haha i made you say i am hot. i was crossing my fingers all this time and i think you are THE BIGGEST LOOSER EVERRRRRRRRRRRRRR

angad: (shamed)

kripa: hahahahhahahahah, you called me hot

angad: just leave!!!!!!!1

kripa left laughing while angad was shamed

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the end

comments/suggestions/predictions please!!!
sabrinaa. thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
haha..that was good..poor sngad?? lol, continue sooooom
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
awww poor angad got all worked up for no darn reason. teenage boiiz need to keep their emotions in check.

gosh, kripa's mean. she called him a loser. i think she shud feel REALLY guitly and go to say sorry and he shud be REALLY mean to her and then she shud REALLY fall in luv wit him and then she'd have to 'pataa' him.

dat would be SO cool! cont soon, dat part was great!!!

<3 kiran
E> GA <3
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Posted: 18 years ago
#26
Recap:
angad: (shamed)

kripa: hahahahhahahahah, you called me hot


angad: just leave!!!!!!!1

kripa left laughing while angad was shamed

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Kripa walks to her room when her friend is there,
friend: WHAT HAPPENED?????!!!!!!!!

kripa:hahha, that looser said "u are so hot too" what a big dumby

friend: i dont know about you kripa but dont you think this plan was a bit tooo harsh , like oviously i will always stay on your side but the way you are explaning he said that to u i feel a bit...(cuts off)

kripa:WHAT?? u feel bad, but why

friend: like look maybe he really likes u or started liking you and u made a fool of him, i think u should say sorry!

kripa: Sorry my foot

friend: come on kripa

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at night when kripa is sleeping

kripa thinking while she is in bed.

**(*** kya maine itna hura kiya uske saat?, nayi nayi, kripa what are you saying, i wanted that right? actually why am i caring, forget angad**********

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angad while he is sleeping

*******that kripa, i hate her, how can she do that, and DAMN ME WHY DID I EVER SAY SHE IS HOT, whats gotton into you angad, forget kripa, actually i should make her say im hot. YEAH ,i will, you can do it angad**********

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next day angad calls kripa's cell

kripa**thinks***ANGADS CELL

kripa:yes, what now looser?

angad: dekho kripa, please meet me, i cant wait to tell you something, plzzzz u have to come to that same room, promise

kripa:why,

angad"just come baby,i love you

kripa: (stuned) WHAT

*****ANGAD PUTS DOWN THE PHONE AND LAUGHS***********

kripa comes to the same hotel when angad is in the bathroom in the hotel, kripa knocks the bathroom door,

kripa: angad....

angad"wait kripa im coming,

angad now walks out with his shorts and no shirt.

kripa is totally shocked and thinks,***what the hell , what is he thinking****


THE END

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sabrinaa. thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#27
haha..love what angad's doing!!!!
lol, itll hopefully set kripa straight. llol
continue sooon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
hahahahahahaha, she's thinkin wat the hell, wat is he thinking....? lmfao. 😆

she's gonna say hes hot within three seconds...u kno y? cuz he is damn hot!!!!! 😳

newayz, im glad kripa is feelin bad bout it and it waz rotfl wen he said please come i love you baby. hahaha...but now he wants vengeance! 😡

great part, too short. cont soon!

<3 kiran
E> GA <3
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
Recap:
kripa: angad....

angad"wait kripa im coming,

angad now walks out with his shorts and no shirt.

kripa is totally shocked and thinks,***what the hell , what is he thinking****

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kripa has a breathless expression and has only three words in her head.

angad:hey!

kripa:ANGAD YOU ARE SOO HOT (she says extremly fast)

angad laughs real hard.

kripa is confused

angad:the funny thing is that u made me say hot to you since u came real close to me and stuff but i am standing like i 1 metre away from u and you said ur so hot!! that means i must be hot, wow, i feel proud of my self. and if u want u can give me a hug, hahahhahahehee

kripa:damn you!!!

kripa turns and leaves when angad grabs her arms and spins her close to him.

angad: remember kripa, dont try anything else with me, because there could be another way that i can make u say im hot. but i dont want to okay!!!

the end

sorry i will update very fast very soon but i have to go to get a present for my mom's bday!!
kIrAn...E&gt;GA&lt;3 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
dude, dat waz lyke...super easy.

cont soon! the part waz short but as always, mad good!

<3 kiran
E> GA <3

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