HOT OR NOT? (AK)Important note pg.18 - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
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lol..............that was cute......kripa cant resist anymore.....who wouldn't ..........lol......great part
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
cool....i liked the last bit most 😊 ...continue soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Recap: (sorry guys for the delay but i am buzy since we only have 2 more week till school and im going out lots )

kripa:damn you!!!

kripa turns and leaves when angad grabs her arms and spins her close to him.

angad: remember kripa, dont try anything else with me, because there could be another way that i can make u say im hot. but i dont want to okay!!!

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Kripa takes herself off of angad and runs out.

Angad: Wow im cool!!! 😉 😎

Kripa is in real anger..

and rushes to her friend that lives with her. (i forgot the friends name, i will just make it up again LOL)

Shalani--Kya hua kripa

Kripa:Woh ANGAD!!!!!

Shalani--Kya??

Kripa: when i went to him he had no shirt on and i dont know why, and how i siad...

Shalani: said what?

Kripa: I SAID YOU ARE SO HOT ANGAD.(she said quickly)

Shalani couldnt help but to laugh--haha

Kripa: what the hell your laughing at me!!

Shalani: sorry but its a bit funny that U said that to angad, see when u made angad say that he was blasting mad and now look at you , you are mad too.

Kripa: yeah whatever,

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One day in class(i make random class days)

Professer-- Class today in drama class i will give you a part and u and your partner have to act in the part.

Class mate: Hey, professer will we make our own partners?

Professer--NO

class:MANNNNNNNNNNNNNNN, whyyyyyyyyyy

Professer, last time u all picked your own and u all picked ur own gender, as now u will have parts where there will be one boy and one girl....

the groups are:
Raj, and sonia
Shalani and Sohit
....... and ......
...... and .....
.......and........
.........and......
..and .........
......and........
........and....
.......and......
.......and......
....and....
....and....
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Raja and Jassi
and lastly

***angad thinks*** im the only boy left
***kripa thinks****im the only girl left

Professer--lastly angad and kripa

angad and kripa look at wach other with a mean glare

Professer--- our theme will be about LOVE

he explains everyones parts and now angad and kripa's part

Professer---Angad, Kripa your both part is about a boy who is obssed with a girl and then the girl finally notices how much the boy loves her and she runs to him and says i love you. you both have to make your own scripts.

angad and kripa are totally quiet .

Professer: do you both understand?? HELOOOOOO, ANGAD , KRIPA

angad: oh, alright sir.

Profeser--Please everyone go to your own spots and your own scripts and then practice, you have one hour. and i made a cover sheet around your spot ( so there were tent like things to practice in so no one can bother you.)

Kripa: whats in our script?
Angad: dont know?
Kripa: you write a scrpit and i will write one to. okay!
Angad: ok

After half an hour they both share their idea;s and their script is done. they go and practice.

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The Next day is Presentation day!! (the presentations are for 3 hours after school)

Everyone is presenting and is doing real good, and angad and kripa are frightened.

Professer gives comments on ppl: i want your plays to be longer then that. but good so far.

there are 4 people till angad and kripa's turn, now 3 more people before AK.

now 2 more.
Now 1 more!!

NOW ITS ANGAD AND KRIPA'S TURN.

Professer--Angad n kripa your turn

they both are like scared to death.

The end!!!!!!

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Edited by kyph great fan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
dat was NOT long..i wanna see wat they come up with lol...theyll prolly snap back to their normal selves mid-performance and cuss each other out.... 😆 i can totally imagine that.

sry, random. i <3 dis ff...cont soon!

<3 kiran
E> GA <3
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
haha that wasnt long..i also wanna see what happens..nice part continue soon!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
wonderful job on this ff, continue soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
lol, i know it wasnt long!! 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Recap:
NOW ITS ANGAD AND KRIPA'S TURN.

Professer--Angad n kripa your turn

they both are like scared to death.
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Professer: angad kripa go

angad realized that this presentation could turn out to be a fun thing to bother kripa, since our topics was love and we can do anything in it!!1 😉 angad smikered!!

Kripa: Starting NOW

Play!!
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Angad: kripa why dont you understand that i cant live without you??
Kripa: look angad main tumhe pyaar nahin karti

angad pulls kripa to the wall,

angad: par tum toh janti ho ke main tumhe kitna pyaar karta hoon, aaggar tum mujhko chorke chal bhi jati ho toh main tumhe pakar rahoon ga

kripa pulles off him and runs back

Angad now pulles a sign out that says **NEXT MORNING **

kripa is walking out when she sees pics of kripa on her front door saying kripa i love you,

kripa: yeh kaisa pagal pan hai?? Main angad se pyaar nahin karti.

now angad comes behind her and says But i love you kripa,

kripa was confused because this part wasnt in the script.

angad then kisses kripa's neck!!

kripa is annoyed and pushes angad off,

kripa: WHAT THE HELL ANGAD, WHAT ARE YOU DOING

the professer is surprised on their acting skills since he thinks the acting is part of the play

kripa: Do you think you can just touch me with out my will!!!!! Get off!!!! kripa gets off the stage and the professer thinks its done!!

professer: wow what great acting i was like you both were really fighting!! but you get marks off since the ending wasnt about love and you didnt obey my ending.

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After class--
Angad: you ruined our marks, all cause of you we got 70%
Kripa: WHAT, CAUSE OF MEEE!!!
Angad: yes cause of you.
kripa: first of all why did you...you..
angad: you what?? looks at her naughtyly
kripa: why did u kiss my neck (she said quickly)
angad:just wanted to bother you, i know u enjoyed it!
kripa: oh godddd angad

kripa leaves from there

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Later on at night angad comes to kripa's room beacuse he saw that her bag was left out of class.

angad went to her room and kripa opened it!

angad:hi
kripa:what are you doing here?
angad: here you bag
kripa: oh yeah ur paper of someones number came out of your pocket when you were talking to me and i saw it when u left. here .

kripa puts the bag beside the bed and goes to gert the paper
angad follows kripa to get the paper.

kripa:here

then angad triped on the bag and both fall on the bag with their lips on each others.

they both wait for 5 seconds then get off the bed.
they both look at each other for about 10 seconds then angad takes the papers an leaves the room quickly.

kripa is left in her room alone and wondering about the past moment 😳

THE END
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39

*does random happy dance* i got the first comment, i t the first comment! na na na na.... *ahem* so my suggestion was right....lol.

angad made them get a 70...kissing her neck?! lmfao. hilarous.

im not sure how they "landed" on each other's lips but i imagined it and i kno its supposed to be serious and romantic but i CANNOT stop laughing.

dat part was way too short!!! but it was MAD good... *sigh* kiran want more....cont soon!!!!

<3 kiran
E> GA <3

Edited by kIrAn...E>GA<3 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
Ok kiran i will think of more and post it soon as possible ok!!

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