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Posted: 17 years ago
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Yeah, my comments got to page 17... i will update realllll soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG! I am soooo srry everyone. Its just that because of school i have been overly buzy!! we got our report cards and now we are getting lots of work!! arggg...realli frusterated!! Alll i want to say is that i am gonna reply today probably and maybe tommorow because i finally have a P.A. DAY tommorw!! yahoooo! So i probably gonna get time to update...please guys dont loose interest in my fanfic since i dont reply much..sorri again! 😊

So i will update today and to make it up again tommorow 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Recap:Angad: what realtion kripa??? close realtion???

Pritvi: yes me and kripa had a close..(before he could contiue)

angad holded his collars: what close relation!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kripa was shocked!!!!!

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Kripa: angad wait....PRITVI please go we will talk tommrow..angads just a bit mad...pplzz

Pritvi leaves

Angad: what is this kripa?

Kirpa: angad...what????

Angad: close..r?

kirpa: look angad pritvi is rite...once we shared a close relation...i wanted to tell u soon but u know i got carried away

Angad: come on kripa...this is just nonsense..

Kripa: nonsense? angad i thought that after clearing up that mess we had we would become best friends and realli good buddies!! What happened now?

Angad's blood pressure hahha lowered a bit and thought fine i shopuld play cool

Kripa: angad look i think we need to talk tommrow becuase i really need to tell you a bunch and give u something too...again i know...but its important..u can ask questions tommrow

Angad: fine...

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Once again angad brings a good mood to kripa to another fresh start..

ngad enters kripa's room and kripa is standing there....

Angad: yeah, what do u have to say? and give?? its probably a kiss...hahah jokes

Kripa: angad i guess wanted to tell you something....angad i have notcied that ur really close to me these days and i think that u are like my bestest buddy or friend everrrr..

Angad: (a bit confused and upset)

Kripa: Look im not saying that im in love, meaning in deep love or anything...but i am starting to like someone again and i dont really dont want to but i cant help myself..

Angad: are u saying that i like me huh??

Kripa: angad no...im talking about.....pritvi

Angad: (angads face expression drop reallu low:( )
What?

Kripa: look angad..domt get mad...ur the only one i can talk to this about..plz angad:(

Angad: so this is what u wanted to tell me?

Kripa: well i guess soo...pretty much..

Angad: but what about the giving part of it?

Kripa: umm..angad i have never gotton a hug from anyone for a long time now...and i thought u would give me a hug that would make me happy for a while...

Angad: yeha why not..

Kripa hugs angad..angad feels a bit depressed and kripa feels comforted..

Angad: kripa can i ask what the problem is??like why are you so sad??and kripa what was that kiss about then?

Kripa: i dont think he likes me..and angad sorry i didnt really do that cause i love u or soemthing i just gor carried away like u

Angad:what? how do u know that? didnt he just say u both have a close relatonship? :(

Kripa: umm cause i saw him with some other girl...he was standing with her


Angad: how do u know he likes her?? and not to be rude kripa but i dont like that guy..

Kripa: why angad

Angad: hes not rite 4 u

Kripa: then who deserves me?

Angad: First of al he should be handome..then he should be with u alot, he should be like ur best friend and buddy and umm he should love you..

Kripa: do u know anyone like this? because finding someone who loves me and is my buddy is hard

Angad: so tell me about ur friends and best buddies~~

Kripa: well i have all girl friends and i guess only u..(slient)

Angad:... me?....im ur best friend..buddy...i am with u always,,

Kripa:you have to be handsome and love me?? i dont get it angad/...

Angad: nevermind kripa....

angad is about to leave out of the room and he says i was talking about myself.......


Kripa is left thinking alone

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Angad goes to his roomm.....**thinking**i should of not said that to her...but i dont love her? or do i? arggg im getting frusterated....Well oh god dont tell me she is gonna end up with that freak.,..that Prit guy..godd...

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Kripa..***thinking***Angad is such a big lier!! godd..he's probably just pulling my leg agian..whatever...but i have to talk to pritvi.."

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Kripa calls pritvi's cell phone after classes.

Pritvi: yeah kripa talk

Kripa: pritvi i wanted to talk

Pritvi: yeah i just said talk..haha..joking and dont tell me that angad is there...why does he care about u anyway??

Kirpa: pritvi look, angad is really nice

(Angad was gonna enter the room whe he heard kripa talk so he just waited at the door as the door was opened..haha)

Pritvi: yeh yeah..okay what

Kripa: so who was that girl that day beside u with a purple top??

Pritvi: oh shes like my friend just like u and angad

Kirpa: oh ok..

Pritvi: why?

Kripa: pritvi..ur really nice and i know we had that close relation and because of a small fight we seperated...but i think we should forget that??what ya say??

Pritvi: what? are u saying u want me back?

Kripa: ..ummm yea

Pritvi: i will have to think about that

Kripa: so are u saying u dont like me anymore?? (gets a bit teary)

Pritvi: look i know in front of angad i said u were my GF but i was saying that to see who that guy was...but i dont know..

Kripa:pritvi but.. i ..(cries)

Angad gets pissed again and goes into the room, leaving kripa shocked..he grabs the phone

Angad: u know what pritvi..u should of been so happy when kripa said that she wants u backk. i dont know how u siad no, But u cant see how hurt kripa is right now. All i want to say is that u are the biggest loser and idiot i saw in my life. Kripa doesnt deserve u at all, i dont know why she wants u back buit i cant read her mind so i guess i would want her to be with u so she cna be happy..so i think u shoud have talked about that..

Kripa: Angaddddddddd

ANgad hung up his phone....

Angad: he deserved it kripa

Kripa: Angad..why do u care so much? (she hugs angad tight) (cried)

Angad: kripa dont cry

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How did ya like it!!
Comments plzz...


26javey thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#94
angand is so sweet
great part
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Posted: 17 years ago
#95
sweet part; pri5vis out of the way for now
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Posted: 17 years ago
#96
nice part. i hope that gets prithvi out of the way. if only kripa would realize that angad is "the guy". anyways continue soon 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sorri guys....but ive been realli buzy cause as i was sick for a week, i missed 1 week of skool too so im realli sorri i needed to catch up on soooooo much work. So guys i will update probably tomrow or sunday...or least on next friday cause im off!!!lol but hopefully tomrow
monikaseth thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#98
take your time and please take care of yourself tooo . 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#99
loved it!!!
take ur time.....

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