Mr. Loney *note: pg. 33* - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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great character intro and your fanfic sounds really intresting
cant wait 2 read the first part
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
fantastics character sketch and awesomes title please be continuing sooooonnnn

same to same

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( i hope you have seen tara rum pum because im copying harry the team manager 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks all of you guys. ill post the Chapter 1A tonight.
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oye hurry up and post first part...i cant wait to read.... 😆
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Chapter 1A – Lives

As the black, leather chair wheeled around hearing the doorknob crinkle. Eve look ahead, there sat a man in a coal black Armani suit reading a file. He had a perfect figure, with the perfect nose, perfect shaped lips that tempted woman. Eve sighed, he was her BOSS she reminded her self as she took steps toward him. Her boss was perfect, his eyes scared the crude out of Eve, and his eyes were grayish-brown, empty and cold. Angad was mesmerized in the file, he look so handsome with a dedicated look.

She sighed, "Mr. Khanna, an ambassador from the Sharma Company is here to see you. I have seated him in the conference room." She looked to see him studying the file. She paused, waiting for a hint that he had heard her.

"Hmm... Go on," muttered Angad. He didn't even bother to look up at Eve. Eve face fell, she had spent 4 hours getting ready of HIM and he didn't even bother to look at her. Ugh. Eve went on to recite his plans and meetings today.

Angad put the file down and stood, even though Eve controlled her self to not gap, her lips parted in awe. This man sure did know how to hold him self in grace. No wonder why women fainted after seeing him. What this man didn't understand was that any lady that he pointed his finger at would be blessed to be in bed with him. He was one heck of a hunk and at the age of 25 he was well accomplished rich man. He stood in front of his cherry wood desk and indicated for Eve to lead the way to the conference room.

As Angad and Eve walked through the halls staff members gave a standing ovation as he walked past them. Eve held the door open for Angad stepped inside the conference room and regained his composure of a strong, demanding, leader.

The went ahead nodding his head towards his CEO and Vice President. Once seated, Angad looked at this "ambassador" from the Sharma Company. This girl he noticed and estimated that the lady could be no older that 19. He knew for a fact that she was in her teens.

The nurse smiled as she saw bunch of balloons in the kids' room. She looked around to see the doctor who was creating smiles on this angels faces. She looked around to see any lady in a white doctor's coat. She could tell, some kids were jumping, some were pigging out on chocolate, others were tossing a footfall around, and some kids were bouncing off the walls. This was horrific scene for a nurse and yet a blessed sight. The smile on these children meant so much to Rosy.

As she turned to flicker the lights there she saw a young lady in a light pink churidar, spinning a little 3 year old, with her dark, warm hair, and flying out like a peace flag. The lady giggled, and smiled, her smile was innocent. Her smile that hid the grieving death of a wonderful child who could not be saved by medicine. Placed the little girl back on her feet, she looked at the little girl and handed her a Hersey's bar.

As Kripa shook her hair and stood up. He gave a smile that instantly melted Rosy little anger that Rosy held. Boy, didn't this girl know how to play her cards right. Rosy smiled back and flickered the lights.

"Oh okay, kids back in your beds. Its time for the regular check-up." Proclaimed Rosy.

"Aww man. Come on. Rosy we just started play football." Groaned the group of boys who were tossing the football around a minute later when the room was in an uproar.

"Hey, kiddos, don't man at me. I am WO-man," replied Rosy in a thrust voice at the mischievous children as she wrinkled her nose. The group of boys frowned and headed toward their beddings. They looked at the lady who was wearing her white coat. She gave a wink and the boys flopped on to their beddings with out an argument.

Rosy looked at the lady in warmth and said, "Kripa, quit spoiling this kids their getting wilder day by day."

"Rosy, their kids if they don't act like maniacs and run around tripping and breaking things, then who will?," Kripa went on, "Plus, I am going back to the United States tomorrow. Let me and the kids enjoy, plus I promised the kids if all of their health reports were good I would toss them I little party of my own. And you said you self last week the are good, angelic children who need to keep smiling." Kripa sounded ever convincing.

"Kripa, I agree, after you leave, these kids will have a hard time managing with their other not-so-nice-doctors. Leave and impact, just make sure they will be able to handle their health with out you. And don't forget to break the news your are leaving. I won't be able to bear having to break their hearts by telling them. "said Rosy, sternly with a hint of sadness.

"Hey, don't worry, ill handle that. Is the equipment ready?" asked Kripa professionally.

The young teenage girl had just now ended her lecture of the commemoration and benefits both the Khanna and Sharma Companies would receive if they were to unite. She sounded convincing and cunning. Angad decided to push her wit a bit father.

"Mrs. Where have you received your Business degree from?" asked the CEO of the Khanna Empire.

"It's Ms. Simran Sharma. I hold no degrees." Replied Simran once seated. Angad was not surprised, after all she did seem like she was a teen. But then again make-up made some woman look too young.

"I know this is rude Ms. Sharma but you look pretty young. How old are you?" asked the CEO once again. Angad watched her while she played up a professional smile.

"I think we are here to finalize the deal. Not finalize my age. Shall we move on with the dealership if Mr. Khanna permits." Replied Simran wistfully in a cool voice.

"Yes, of course, Ms. Sharma. I am impressed with the way your company has presented its self. Very well done." Angad picked up his pen and signed it the file which held the contract. Once it was signed Simran took the file and stood up and turned to leave and before leaving she stopped and turned to look at the CEO.

Simran gave a breath-taking smile. She looked at the CEO square in the eyes and said, "Seventeen." As she was to open the door, leaving the employers and owner of the Khanna Empire baffled, the Vice President questioned, "Seventeen what?"

Smiran's smile became more gorgeous. "My age is seventeen, sir and I am the younger daughter of Soham Sharma. I am still in high school." With these words she left the conference room. All of the employers and Angad looked dumbfounded. At the fact, that a 17 year old girl, she made a 5.7 million dollar deal all on her own without any help.

After adjourning employers in the conference room, Angad went to his cabin to prepare for the next meeting. He had four hours to go. He thought of Simran and called Eve and told her to get a copy of Simran Sharma's High School transcript and to not disturb him. This girl sure had left him impressed.

Angad was tired; he had spent all night and yesterday preparing for the deal in the next up coming four hours. He was exhausted. He put his head down on top of a file.

The song Make You Mine by Vanessa Hudgens was soaring. Kids were throwing pillows around, chasing each other. The movie Fantastic Four and the Rise of the Sliver Surfer was on the T.V. with few kids watching while others goofed off, or pigged out. Kripa was reading Twilight by Stephanie Meyer. Letting the kids roam and do whatever the wished to do in the room. She heard the kids gasp. She looked up from her book to see an actor and actress kiss. She smiled, kids, pretty soon they will be kissing once they met their love of their lives.

Kripa had told them once the movie was over and party would also be over. As Kripa was reading, she kept hearing the actor repeat the same scene over and over again. She looked at the DVD player, and then kids. Well the kids aren't doing anything. She reasoned. She looked at the DVD player and rememberized the numbers on the timer screen. And she looked continued reading. She noticed someone had got up from in front of the T.V. screen to rewind the scene back.

She felt stupid. These kids were making her feel stupid. She gave a soft smile and locked the buttons from the DVD player. She thought, kids these days. Uff. These children range form ages 6-10 and their so cunning. 'Kids!' she thought. She thought she'd play along with the game after all there was only 1 hour and 15 minutes left of the movie and continued reading her book.

'Angad. I love you.' said the girl. The girl was gorgeous with light blue eyes, thin lips that curled into a heart taking smile that was his sunshine. She was wearing a light yellow churidar with silver earrings. She ran down the hallway barefoot, turning and jumping on to the stairs rails. The house was so familiar and yet so distant. She flew like and angel, lightly and gracefully. Angad chase her before she got hurt. She slid down the rail Angad called for her. Why isn't she jumping off? 'Pooja!' he called out. She didn't turn back. 'Pooja!' he called. Why? He watched as he stood from the top stairs as she flew in elegantly into a man's arm. What was Pooja doing? How could she? They had promised to be with each other and to support each other forever. They renewed their vows every year. He stood there and watched her leave.

"Pooja!" he shrieked. Angad's head shot up off the desk. He thought of his dream. He hated recalling her. As much as he loved, no loves her it hurt too much to remember her. He shook his head and fell back into the black leather chair. He closed his eyes and pressed his lips together. He missed her to the limit that it hurt his soul and his reason of existence. He missed not having some one to share his thoughts with, not having someone to love him, to hold him, to spoil him. He breathed in and out calming himself. He had promised her to keep the Empire live and well going. He promised her to make sure that the Khanna Empire had an heir and that the Empire traveled down into the hands of the next male Khanna down the bloodline.

He sighed there was 30 minutes left till the meeting he picked up the file and read the notes. He hoped that the Khanna Empire received the cooperation of the Switzerland bank.

Edited by ishu124 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yeah i'm the first one to comment...great job...i love the way you write, Simran is very convincing, cont. soon... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
awesome part
i guess angad had a past


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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
amazing part...that sounded so perfect for your first part...i love kripa...she is so sweet...and those kids are mischievious...plz update soon...cant wait... 😳 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks guys. ohh kay i need 5 more comments and ill continue with part 1B.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
nice part.kripa is so sweet but the kids are too cute!

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