Mr. Loney *note: pg. 33* - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: ishu124

ill post the next part today... so be ready.

girl u have got to write ur next updates faster...we are all dying to read the next part...it better be long and i mean very long please😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Chapter 1B- Home Sweet Home

"Hey! Kiddos! Party time is over! GET BACK IN BED!" commanded Kripa as soon as the Fantastic Four and the Rise of the Sliver Surfer was over. Rosy watched in envy and happiness, it wasn't really a wonder how the kids answered to Kripa's commands. She was like the general trainee training the kids to prepare for war. They were so obedient towards her. That wasn't truly really surprising after all she did spoil them.

Kripa went around and made sure all the kids were tucked in. She smiled at each on of them and gave them a sweet peck on their cheeks and wished them sweet dreams.

"Children, I am leaving tomorrow morning to go back to Untied States. I will really truly miss you guys and I pray we will meet again in the near future." Kripa felt so guilty after seeing the glum faces of these angels in her life. She felt evil and like a disgrace to her degree in which she promised to put her patients' before her needs.

Kripa glanced at the kids and she felt a lump in her throat. She didn't know what more to say. She looked back once more before leaving and said, "Good-bye." She took a deep breath and turned back towards the door.

Right before Kripa could step out of the room she felt a tug at her light pink dupatta. She turned to see a pretty face of a 6 year old. She gave a weak, small smile. The little girl was the same one that Kripa in the morning was spinning around. "Apa, are you going to come back? My mommy said she'd come back and she never came back," questioned the little innocent princess. Kripa felt hot, metal knives stabbing into her heart. "I'll try to come back soon. I promise." Kripa gave a convincing grin and put a hand out. The child took her hand willingly. Kripa walked her back to her bed and kissed her on her forehead and promised, "I'll come back soon."

Seven hours later…

"Please buckle your seat belts we are landing in New York City in 10 minutes." Kripa buckled her belt and beamed and thought 'home sweet home, here I come!'

Kripa had her luggage and was looking for her little sister. Kripa thought, 'This girl is never on time. I am going to have to teach her that on time is late and before time is on time.' She smiled at that thought and instantly regretted it as she saw gorgeous teenage girl checking her out. Kripa looked square into that teen's eyes and asked, "Excuse me, Miss, are you lesbian?"

"Hope to see you soon Mr. Widen," Said politely as he walked the manger of the Switzerland Bank out of the conference room.

Angad merely looked out the window. It was the glass wall behind his black leather chair that was gorgeous. He could look down to see the bustling streets of New York. He noticed how the streets were clean shops along side looked sophisticated with Nissan's and BMW's gliding on the roads. This was the rich side of New York.

He heard a knock on the door breaking his train of thoughts. "Come in," he answered absent mindedly.

"Good afternoon, sir." greeted Eve with a shy smile. "These are the transcripts of Ms. Simran Sharma." With these words she handed Angad, Smiran's transcript and turned on her heel and left.

Angad opened the file and read though the transcript. He knew he shouldn't have been surprised but heck wasn't she smart. He knew at once he had to know this girl. She had something. So he casually picked up the phone and told Eve to invite the Sharma Family for dinner at his house tomorrow night. Eve was surprised just as much as Angad was. He was shocked at him self. He hadn't even gone to parties ever since….well he quickly dismissed that thought and got started with the pending work.

Writer's Note:

I know this is a short part. i was actually away from home and i was busy due to special occasions. i am working on part two. and ill post that ASAP. thanks for the patience.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
gr8 part 👍🏼
is angad getting attracted toward simran umm.. hope not 😕
coz ak r ment to be togeather 😉


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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
awww i loved it, that little girl she was so cute...i feel sad for kripa..giving love to kids and then having to leave them...update soon plz hun i want to read more 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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this was a cute part.......but like u said short.....anyways i just hope angad doesnt end up falling in love with simran and then move on to kripa...........but the story is interesting
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great update...it was sad when kripa had to leave the kids ... but i was laughing when she arrived at the airport and was looking for her sis.. she saw gorgeous teenage girl checking her out. Kripa looked square into that teen's eyes and asked, "Excuse me, Miss, are you lesbian?" 😆 😆
plzz cont soon 😃 😃 ...i hope angad doesnt fall for simran
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow beautiful start... absolutely stunning... keep it up.. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: iamsmart

gr8 part 👍🏼
is angad getting attracted toward simran umm.. hope not 😕
coz ak r ment to be togeather 😉


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sana

Nah...Angad isn't that wild because he is Mr. Lonely. Remember that angad is 26 and simran is 17. That would be sick. Don't worry Angad is attacted to Simran but just not in that way.

Edited by ishu124 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: ishu124

Nah...Angad isn't that wild because he is Mr. Lonely. Remember that angad is 26 and simran is 17. That would be sick. Don't worry Angad is attacted to Simran but just not in that way.

lolz thanks now i'm relieved 😆

i know the age difference but i was still kind of worried 😆 but now i dont have any worries 😆

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Sana

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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
when are you going to continue?? 😭

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