Mr. Loney *note: pg. 33* - Page 19

Hey!

Lovely part and you HAVE to continue! Don't kill Simran! Don't you dare wipe her out off this or I'll kill you! Is that understood? I swear to God I will chop you up into so many pieces then burn those pieces, than chop your ashes then burn those, then chop those burnt ashes than burn those. And I will continue doing so for eternity! 😆 Lovely part! Is Raul Prithvi? Is that what it means?

fab part
but at the same time it is confusing...
what is going on???? & what changes r these 2 talking about?????
& continue soon or i will kill u 😡

yay!!!! finally u continued it had been a long time since u last updated and i almost gave up hope that u'll ever update
loved the part!! it was awesome very well written!
i hope u won't kill simran now would u?
aww kripa is so protective of her sister, there relationship is adorable 😳
kripa and angad both want the same thing, now the question is who is going to initiate?
this time please update soon

Originally posted by: Mimi_Rani

ahahah lol great part ishu..but hun you have got to update faster...i missed this ff..and you better not kill simran....better not...anyways update soon cant wait to read what happens to simran, simran and raul, and kripa and angad

Ha-ha. Thanks, I am very, very aware of the being lazy issue, I have.

Keep reading. And you will find out what will happen.

And I'm abouslotly loving the threats I receive! Lol.

Thanks again.

Originally posted by: desiqt8806

u updated!! very very happy!!
kripa wants to be a khanna and angad wants kripa to be a khanna!! how sweet and cute!!!
i am feeling really sad for simran!!

and wat is this! a leap!! u can't take a leap...u just started this story..no...noo...lol that was my tantrum

but i like the way the story is progressing but ur the writer so u can do watever you want

great part!! continue whenever u can!

I'm glad you're happy!

I know its so cute, I simply adore them both, too.

Ah, nice tantrum! J About the leap, I'm stilling debating, and it isn't deiced that I will or I will not take a leap. I just need to figure some things out, and I'm trying my best to not break your hearts.

Take care.

Originally posted by: Smileyface

hey good job...finally u updated...awww kripa is soo protective..lol...buh i dont get this one part

"Thanks, for the attempt of changes. Kripa." Angad loved the way her name sounded, and the way the breath released tingled upon his lips, urging towards a kiss.

"You knew?"

"It was oblivious. Doctor."

"Oh..Well…that…I"

...........what are they talking about...what changes????...but good job...and this time continue faster!!

Oh okay, confused ducky! Lol.

That part was referring to when Kripa was at angad's house for the dinner and where she was trying to get him to open up, and earns the respect of raul. Um, that was part was on page 25 if you want to check it out. Pretty much, her attempt in getting in to laugh, and smile after such a long time.

I will! Countinue faster! Thanks!

Haha. Stay confused! ;) jk.

Originally posted by: sna004

Hey!

Lovely part and you HAVE to continue! Don't kill Simran! Don't you dare wipe her out off this or I'll kill you! Is that understood? I swear to God I will chop you up into so many pieces then burn those pieces, than chop your ashes then burn those, then chop those burnt ashes than burn those. And I will continue doing so for eternity! Lovely part! Is Raul Prithvi? Is that what it means?

Thank you!

I love the reaction you have given, ah, that was exactly why Simran was such a big part. And, wait, young lady! What about all that you give me when I'm the reader and your the writer? Huh? Haha.

Hahaha. I don't think you can chop me and then burn, you'd have to know where I am for that! Lol.

Thanks again!

Raul Prithiv is just a name, I just wanted a middle name for Raul so I put Prithiv in. It holds no particular meaning.

Ishu.

Originally posted by: sujalangad_rock

fab part
but at the same time it is confusing...
what is going on???? & what changes r these 2 talking about?????
& continue soon or i will kill u

Here's my confused duckling number two! Lol. Jk.

The changes was referring to when Kripa was at angad's house for the dinner and where she was trying to get him to open up, and earns the respect of raul. Um, that was part was on page 25 if you want to check it out. Pretty much, her attempt in getting in to laugh, and smile after such a long time.

Acha baba, chill, I get the point, I have to continue or else you all are going to hunt me down to my grave!

I am working on it the next part.

Originally posted by: jiya imdad

yay!!!! finally u continued it had been a long time since u last updated and i almost gave up hope that u'll ever update
loved the part!! it was awesome very well written!
i hope u won't kill simran now would u?
aww kripa is so protective of her sister, there relationship is adorable
kripa and angad both want the same thing, now the question is who is going to initiate?
this time please update soon

I'm sorry. That I did not continue, I do dearly take all the blame of my laziness.

Thanks!

I don't know! Would I or would I not?

Ah, your right, the sister and sister thing is adorable. I wish I had a sister, but no, I have a younger brother.

Yes. Both Angad and Kripa think they want the same thing.

I will continue faster this time. I have been inspired by the comments you all have given me. Thank you all!

Originally posted by: proud_2_b_mysel

awesome, loved it, i love the way you write what they think, it's amusing

I'm glad. I think the same of your fan fics.

Thank you, and keep reading!

Ishu.

Thank you all!

I love the comments I have recieved. They are all wonderful! and because you all have left such long comments. i think i must too give you all a long part! what say?

ishu.

i say definetly and im not a confused ducky okay...itz ur fault u updated after such a long time i forgot...so now u shud continue faster!!!...lol...

Originally posted by: Smileyface

i say definetly and im not a confused ducky okay...itz ur fault u updated after such a long time i forgot...so now u shud continue faster!!!...lol...

you do know im just joking, right?

sorry, once again.

chillax, yaar. im countinuing.

😆 I guess we're both good at giving each other when reading each other's fanfics! Heheh, but I realy really like your fanfic and try to continue soon especially if your only reason for not continuing is your laziness. 😆

lol im joking tooo...cant wait for u too continue!!

Originally posted by: ishu124

you do know im just joking, right?

sorry, once again.

chillax, yaar. im countinuing.

HAPPY BIRTHDAYY ISHUUU!!

great part, a bit short.. but i can deal with it! 😆 Loved the sister-sister relattionship.. a lot! Oh, and yeaa feel the same like you- i wanted a sister but ended up with a younger brother. 😆 Well, i wanted a sister and a big brother. 😳 😃

Anywaysss, Continue sooooon! 😳

Originally posted by: sna004

😆 I guess we're both good at giving each other when reading each other's fanfics! Heheh, but I realy really like your fanfic and try to continue soon especially if your only reason for not continuing is your laziness. 😆

i am contining. the next part is going to be long! and its going to before or on saturday!

haha. i have a complain for you too, CONTINUE! your killing me.